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I hava a comment....I'm sick and tired of habing to look at Dark Avatar threads crowding up this forum! It's a waste of time and space for something that is never going to happen. I would love nothing more than to see every Dark Avatar thread closed down so we can actually talk about the show and not some pointless fanfic. |
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Come on its a little unfair to go on the guys thread and say your sick of his fanfic. Its not like theres fifty dark avatar threads theres like four. If your sick of seeing a certain thread go talk to the people who make who will teach aang firebending for the fiftyith time. Im not trying to start up an arguemnt but the guy is working hard on his story all he wants to know is what people think of it. read the story if you dont like it give some advice on how it can be better. |
exactly, thanks dude
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Come on its a little unfair to go on the guys thread and say your sick of his fanfic. Its not like theres fifty dark avatar threads theres like four. If your sick of seeing a certain thread go talk to the people who make who will teach aang firebending for the fiftyith time. Im not trying to start up an arguemnt but the guy is working hard on his story all he wants to know is what people think of it. read the story if you dont like it give some advice on how it can be better. |
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Yours and the other three threads aren't the only ones. There's been dozens of Dark Avatar Theories. It wasn't your idea, that's my only problem. Fanfic if you want to, but just do your own thing. Write about Sokka's childhood or something, do something unexplored. Don't write a story someone else already wrote. He isn't "working hard on his story". He's rehashing something somebody else already did. I'd like to see him work hard on his own story. Come on guys, surprise me. |
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I wouldn't say I'm copying Gantros, I'm using a good idea, and making my own version of it. And I actually am working hard on it.
Tv-man117 wrote: |
Look I cant speak for vampdude on this but if you have read mine the only thing i have copied is a dark avatar in some shape or form that is it with that charchter of a dark avatar which i havent even introduced yet in no way is copied no back story no its aangs long lost brother crap just give the story a chance i dont even know why i called mine a dark avatar when the thing i will introduce isnt even a avatar and will even have a name. Plus out of all the theories which would take place after ozai and th comet this is probly the best. I honestly rather see some type of dark avatar then rebuilding after the war. I see where you are coming from but just give the story a chance. |
You know what I'm not going to say your fanfic is a rip-off or what ever because I've never read it and I have no will to ever read it. But Fanfics aren't even supposed to be on this forum. In the end that's what the Dark Avatar is a baseless souless generic fanfiction that will never be made canon in any way shape or form
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You know what I'm not going to say your fanfic is a rip-off or what ever because I've never read it and I have no will to ever read it. But Fanfics aren't even supposed to be on this forum. In the end that's what the Dark Avatar is a baseless souless generic fanfiction that will never be made canon in any way shape or form |
My main problem with the Dark Avatar is the fact that it's spammed our board for months now. If this entire thing had been limited to one or two threads I wouldn't have a problem with that in fact for the first 3 to 4 threads I said nothing because people were having a good time and it wasn't doing that much harm to the forum??but then when there started to be threads about this created in the double digits that's when I get annoyed. You know I have my own theories too but I limit it to one thread and one thread alone I don't go around making three to four threads just to update my theory because I know that would hurt this forum by filling it up with basically the exact same thing.
So please if you all could just make one thread about the Dark Avatar and stick with it without having to make anymore, you'll never hear another negative word from me again.
What do you say to that idea?
ISpeakTheTruth wrote: |
My main problem with the Dark Avatar is the fact that it's spammed our board for months now. If this entire thing had been limited to one or two threads I wouldn't have a problem with that in fact for the first 3 to 4 threads I said nothing because people were having a good time and it wasn't doing that much harm to the forum??but then when there started to be threads about this created in the double digits that's when I get annoyed. You know I have my own theories too but I limit it to one thread and one thread alone I don't go around making three to four threads just to update my theory because I know that would hurt this forum by filling it up with basically the exact same thing. So please if you all could just make one thread about the Dark Avatar and stick with it without having to make anymore, you'll never hear another negative word from me again. What do you say to that idea? |
I agree with you some what. There should be just one thread for a dark avatar theory but the difference is that some are fanfics. So if some one made a zuko katara??story with more then one chapter??lets say should they have to put it in the charachters relationship thread just because it fits with that catagory.
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I agree with you some what. There should be just one thread for a dark avatar theory but the difference is that some are fanfics. So if some one made a zuko katara??story with more then one chapter??lets say should they have to put it in the charachters relationship thread just because it fits with that catagory. |
Once again Fanfiction isn't allowed on tv.com forums so that's not a problem....
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Once again Fanfiction isn't allowed on tv.com forums so that's not a problem.... |
Avatar: The Last Airbender
Book 4: Shadow
Chapter Three: The Grand Master
The Dark Avatar walked out of the forest, and looked into the mountains ahead. There were dark, black clouds circling around the high peaks of the mountains. He rubbed his hand on his dual broadwords, then continued walking. He saw a dark cave up ahead, and decided to go in it. The outside of the cave was covered with odd carvings that he couldn't understand.
He entered the cave, and he saw a man meditating on the ground. A circle in the stone was carved around him, with the same words.
"Are you, who I think you are?" the man asked.
"I'm The Dark Avatar," he said.
"And I, am the Grand Master," he replied.
"Really! I've been looking for you!",??Dark Avatar replied. "But I have questions."
"I'm sure you do, but now, we have things to do!" he said.
"Like?"
"You have to master the four elements, learn your destiny, learn how to go in and out of the Dark Avatar State, and, maybe we'll have some time for tea!" he said.
"Ummmm, ok," Dark Avatar replied.
"We'll begin your bending training now," Grand Master said. "We'll start with water-"
"Hey, I'm a little tired, so, can I rest?" Dark Avatar asked.
"I said, WE'LL BEGIN BENDING TRAINING NOW", Grand Master said, he seemed annyoed.
"Okay, Okay!" Dark Avatar said.
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After two weeks of training, The Dark Avatar, was done!
"I can't believe it! You're the fastest pupil I've ever had!" The Grand Master said.
The Dark Avatar bowed to him.
"Now, of your destiny.." he said. "Your destiny, is to collect the three Scrolls of Prophecy. Shadow, Light, then Balance. Each one, gives you a new bending power. First, you must get Shadow, then Light, then last, Balance. After you get the scrolls, you must kill the Avatar, and if he is killed by you, the Avatar Cycle is broken. He will also try to collect the scrolls."
"Thats a lot to do," Dark Avatar said.
"Now, to get in and out of the Dark Avatar State, you need to think of evil, dark things."
"I don't remember anything though..."
"When I put my hands on you, they will fill your mind with memories."
He put his hands on the Dark Avatar's head, and suddenly, he remembered back when people used to bully him. His eyes turned to black, and his clothes turned black as well. He rose into the air.
The Grand Master laughed. "The Dark Avatar is born!" he said.
Suddenly he was blasted by some fire. "What are you doing?" he yelled.
"I know you have the Balance scroll. Where is it?" Dark Avatar said to him.
"I'll never tell you"! Grand Master said.
He blasted him with fire across the face, and walked away.
"The Prophecy says one will defy Destiny. The Prophecy, will be fulfilled," he said. He took two scrolls out of his pockets, and Earthbended a hole open. He dropped the scrolls down the hole, and shut the hole.
The Grand Master, and his cave were engulfed in fire.
Leave comments plz
With only 54 minutes until the Earth King, I'm gonna write another chapter. This is the Aang chapter. It is called,
"Spirit's Shadow".
It is a very interesting chapter. It shows some old characters, and gives some clues to the missing characters (if u dont't know who yet).
Spoilers for "Spirit's Shadow"
*An old character returns
*more clues to the missing members of the gang
*Aang's new quest is given to him
*The Dark Avatar shows some of his true power
New chapter will be posted around 6:20-6:30. Give me comments on Chap 3 plz