Kibu-Shi(Earth Bending)

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Name- Kibu-Shi, shortened as Kibu

Age- 33

Height- 5'11"

Weight- 165

Weapon/Bending- He is a competent earthbender and carries a kali stick that doubles as a cane. Kali Stick-It's basically like this. It's made out of Kamagong, a type of ebony wood that is comparable to iron and is capped with silver on both ends, one of which is a ball to use as a grip when walking. His earthbending styIe could be described as minimalistic, because he prefers to trip, confuse, and disarm with earthbending, instead of crushing or knocking people out. He's more apt to run than fight a group of people. His real forte is the kali stick, if he gets close enough to strike with it, he usually wins. Even if he's been disarmed, he is still formidable, and uses earthbending in clever ways to turn the tide of a fight.

Occupation- Thief

Appearance-

^Is almost perfect, but he has no poofy things on his gi top, and the pants should be a little looser. He leaves his gi untied and doesn't wear anything under it. He has a shoulder bag containing tools, food, and other various items that also has loops on the back strap to hold his cane when its not being used. The rest should explain itself.

Personality- He is carefree and loose, but he can change in an instant if confronted. He can be very smooth and often uses this to have sex with random women he finds in bars or brothels or street corners or anywhere they are. (he'll die young of syphilis...) Besides these shortcomings, he is a unshakable friend and would go far to make sure that his friends are taken care of. He is always likable, even by the women he stands up, he always lets them down gently and often keeps contact with them afterward.

History- He was born in the Southern Earth Kingdom to a local politician and his wife. He grew up like any other earthbender child, going to bending schools and using it for pranks. Life was good and happy for much of his life. Then, when he was 11, his mother died and his father sent him away to live with an old friend of the family that same day. He waited for weeks with the old man, sure that his father would come get him again, but he never saw him again, and he later learned that foul play was suspected in his mother's death. The man he had been sent to live with was in fact a great Kali master whose skill was famous in the province. With nothing else left for Kibu, and because he felt sorry for him, the man, Tatsu-Shi, took Kibu as an apprentice to keep his mind off it. Seven years later, Tatsu declared that Kibu was a full master, and that only time could make him better. Tatsu presented Kibu with an ancestral Kali Stick and sent him on his way.

Kibu set out looking for fame and fortune and eventually found it in Omashu, when he tried out for an Earthball team (Iroh's Tale, ToBSS). Earthball was played with 5 people on each team and he was immediately recognized as a star because of his training as a fast and light earthbender by Tatsu. He played Earthball for two years, accruing a small measure of fame. Then, in a match against Ba Sing Se's team a jealous opponent deliberately struck him in the right knee with a boulder. It was a legal hit, if just a little harder than is allowed, and Kibu was pulled from the game. His pride wouldn't let that stand however, and, ignoring the team physician, he got back into the game with the intent to do the same to the other man. This proved to be his greatest fault, because as soon as he tried to kick a boulder at the man, his fractured kneecap shattered and broke away from the rest of the bones and he was crippled.

Now, thirteen years later and long since getting an experimental stone knee replacement from a close friend of Tatsu, Kibu lives as a thief, walks with a cane, and drinks heavily most of the time. When asked, he claims the alcohol is just a little vice, but he's really trying to temper the pain in his knee. he even keeps a flask with him in his bag for when he's not close to a tavern. He hides his knee as best he can, walking without the cane most of the time and passing it off as merely a weapon when asked about it. His master's old kali stick is what now serves part time as a cane. He has risen to fame as a thief also, drowning his past career in a wave of heists that were deemed impossible. His natural speed serves him differently now and he'll walk down one side of a street and up another, coming out with his bag full. For fun. He likes challenges and takes contracts from various crime lords in Ba Sing Se for "unattainable" items so he can stay interested. His personal projects are usually easier and for more direct profits. He has a home outside the city underground in the ruins of old Ba Sing Se and uses tunnels dug from the sewers to get past the wall if needed. Currently, he is planning a job on a government official's home in the upper ring.
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End profile. More tomorrow. Comment if you want.

P.S. This storyline has a lot, a LOT, of sex. And drugs and alcohol and such. Be glad that I can't write erotica, because you'd all have to read "stuff". A lot of "stuff".

Interesting character... by the way, your second link failed(I think)

Can we even write like that? I always thought that stuff like that could get you kicked off or whatever.

Meh, keep writting man.

Name- Hashshashin-Ichi (First Assassin, Ichi)

Age-28

Height- 6'4"

Weight- 195

Weapon/Bending- Earthbending, carries a wide assortment of weapons on his body. Two slightly curved granite swords of medium size, a rough onyx shard that's been formed into a dagger, various tools and weapons in the stone vambraces on his arms, such as, stone darts, garrote wire, small grapple with metal wire, a short dagger, and several stone throwing knives. He uses his bending to sneak and hide and to augment his arsenal, but if confronted unarmed, he could easily defeat most opponents. He never needs to resort that, because most times, the only indication he was in your house is an obituary the next day. Stealth is his game, and he only openly attacks on the rarest occasion.

Occupation- Hashshashin(Assassin)

Appearance-

^This is pretty good, but his feet wraps should be black, the swords crossed on his back should be moved down to his waist, and the moon pin on his cloak should just be an amethyst shard. The onyx dagger is the sheath going sideways, but it's not in a sheath and is only about half that size. That's just for visualization. That's Ichi's black messenger hawk there. Just pretend it's a hawk.

Personality- None. Silent except when necessary, expert of blending into population, most people don't even realize if he's standing right next to them because he's so plain and unassuming. He can strap his sword sheaths to his legs and cover himself with his cloak and hood if needed.

History- Ichi doesn't have much history. The Hashshashin were being contracted by the Fire Nation to raid villages in the Earth Kingdom. It was a regular practice then, by all sides, because the Hashshashin had bases in all of the nations. The Hashshashin are divided into four steps, a standing army with tens of thousands of troops all over the three nations; hitmen who are cheap(and sloppy) and hired by disgruntled spouses, small-time politicians, merchants, etc.; the Hashshashin, the elite assassins, hired for the most dangerous, most profitable, and most high-profile jobs, but they don't get the pay for their missions, they work under their respective Kage out of respect and honor, finally, the Kage, who are retired Hashshashin who were skilled enough to survive a career of dangerous assassinations and replaced their master when he or she died. The Kage run the Hashshashin and it's army from an ancient hidden temple in the mountains east of the great desert. The Hashshashin are the only ones who are allowed to see the Kage and each one was trained by a different Kage. There are only five Hashshashin.

Back to Ichi. He was born to parents in a small Earth Kingdom town that was serving as a makeshift hospital for wounded soldiers. Before he was a month old, the village was attacked and burned to the ground and all of the wounded were slaughtered on the orders of the Fire Nation General paying for the attack. When the mercenaries reached Ichi's home, his father tried to make them leave, saying that they didn't want to fight, but the men knew he had been harboring Earth Kingdom wounded and the orders were to kill them. So they cut down Ichi's father and stormed inside his house. His mother heard the noise and tried to run, but she was killed by an archer as she stepped out her back door. The men found Ichi, and brought him back with them, because the Kage had requested that they find children wherever they could. They presented him to the Kage and left the audience chamber. One of the Kage, the eldest who's Hashshashin had recently died, came out from the Kage's chamber and claimed him, starting him on the path he would follow for life. Now, that Kage is soon to die, and Ichi will take his place. But Ichi has been given one last mission first.

Name- Hashshashin-Go (Fifth Assassin, Go)

Age- 21

Height- 5'6"

Weight- 145

Weapon/Bending- Earthbender and dual Tomahawks. He also has an onyx dagger, but he rarely uses it. Simple, eh? His style relies heavily on Earthbending attacks and his tomahawks. Each one has a stone in the bottom of the handle so they can be retrieved after being thrown. The stone isn't big enough to let Go alter it's path however. His style is the absolute opposite of Ichi's. He isn't as stealthy, attacks fast and hard, and kills everyone he sees around his target. Guards, houseguests, wives, whoever.

Occupation- Hashshashin(Assassin)

Appearance-

^Not much to say. He's pretty simple. The dagger is there on his waist. He shaped it into a straight blade after it was given to him. The bird is obviously his hawk. It should be black.

Personality- He is impulsive and impatient. He is also sadistic, which breaks the tenets of his order. He enjoys killing, and does so whenever he has the chance. He is on the verge of being a wanted man in Ba Sing Se. This has gotten him in trouble with both his master and all the Kage, and they are trying to determine how to deal with him. His assassinations are sloppy and messy, completely different from Ichi's.

History- Go was captured by the Hashshashin army when he was five and brought to one of the local bases with the intent to be sold as a slave to the Fire Nation when they came to pay for the attack, but when they tried to put irons on him, he stabbed the soldier in the eye with a knife he hidden from an earlier meal, killing him. One of the other Hashshashin was leaving after visiting the base commander and saw the event. She stopped the men from killing the boy and took him away to the mountain temple to present to the Kage. The Kage were wary about starting with one his age, but they needed another Hashshashin soon, so they accepted him.

He steadily grew and trained until he was a Hashshashin and the one that had saved him was already a Kage with her own apprentice who was only slightly younger than Go. For several years he completed missions, but his success was marred by his lack of restraint, until now, when the Kage are close to killing him themselves. There are other options, and they have assigned him to a mission they hope will prove too much for him.

Name- General Kato

Age- 64

Height- 6'6"

Weight- 180

Weapon/Bending- Powerful earthbender. Very powerful. Carries a Jian in a gold leaf and gem encrusted sheath, but it is still very much a real sword. He usually doesn't have to fight though, but his old days in the army have made him a technical master of the Jian and daily practice keeps his bending in top form. Age has slowed and weakened him, but very slightly.

Occupation- Earth Kingdom Minister of War and Commander of Domestic Forces

Appearance-

^Nothing to say, really.

Personality- He appears to be friendly and sociable in public, friends with every man, woman, and child, sunshine and rainbows and such, but when he is in private with colleagues or subordinates, he becomes ruthless and calculating. He isn't intentionally cruel, but he won't stand for laziness or failure among his men, and will debate his fellow cabinet members into a hole in the wall before he would concede a point. He enjoys power a little too much, but his various schemes go mostly unnoticed due to excellent planning and sharp calculations.

History- Kato was born in Ba Sing Se to a highly respected General in the Earth Kingdom army and an heiress from a highly respected old family. His father nudged him towards military service as he grew older, and when he was seventeen, he enrolled in the Earth Kingdom Officer's Academy. Two years later, he graduated as a Lieutenant. Through his actions in the war in the next few years, he advanced to Colonel, where he got his first command position. In this position, he got a taste of power. He had a whole base of men following his orders, and he loved it. This was where his trouble started. Rumors had spread about how another officer could take Kato's post away, and would be visiting that week. Kato waited until the day of the officer's arrival and just an hour before, he ordered one of his men to attack anyone near the base on sight because a Fire Nation force had taken an Earth Kingdom supply line earlier and they could be flying the Earth Kingdom flag. The man, following orders, alerted the watch and they readied for an attack. Long story short, they attacked the visiting officer and killed him. Before the man Kato had ordered could explain the situation to anyone, Kato had him executed for treason and murder.

Kato was given a quick promotion for handling the soldier and bringing the other Colonel justice. He was moved to a better post and had more men and more power. From there, he clawed his way to the top, cheating, murdering, lying, and obscuring evidence until he was a General with several bases under his command. Now, with all this influence, he decided he would try for the Council of Five and from that the War Minister's position. A few years later after serving on the Council of Five he was appointed War Minister by the Royal Advisers, who are ruling in the Earth King's stead just as the war ended. Now, he has command over all forces of the army. But, he still has to answer to the rest of the Advisers...

Ok guys, redoblante says he's not coming back.

FINALLY!!!
On with the show! The second season can continue and at last, I'm in full control of my characters...

Except Saze and evelet, which scorching flame has yet to take away from me.

soooo...
Damit. It was easier with one character.

NAME: Rooa Horitto

AGE: 14

ABILITY: Water Bending and Blood Bending

WEAPONS Her bending

NATION Fire Nation

HISTORY Rooa was born in the Fire Nation, her parents are Ketto and Jon Horitto. They have been broken up for as long as Roos can remember. Jon was originally from the Earth Kingdom and can bend Earth. He lives there now in Ba Sing Se. Ketto cant bend. Rooa has a sister called Emiri (12) and she can bend Earth. Her step brother Ke (5) hasnt shown any hints about Fire Bending.

Paru is Ketto's husband, Ke's dad and Rooa and Emiri's step father. Paru can bend Fire and is in the army. Since they married, Ketto's last name has changed from Horitto to Rasaru, because that is Paru's last name. Rooa and Emiri has ancestory of a long line of Water and Earth bending on their fathers side. Rooa goes to school but she hates it, so she escapes. She knows enough already.

The government knows the the two Horitto girls bend another element other than Fire, but Paru forced the government to let them stay and not go into prison with the other Water and Earth benders.Her mother owns a small hotel. It is two stories high and has an attic. Rooa's bedroom is the attic.

APPEARANCE: Medium brown hair, fringe, wavy and half way down herback, but she wears it tied back in a pony tail with a gold hair band. Greeny blue eyes with gold around the pupils. She wears glasses because her eyesight isnt good, and if she doesnt wear them she has a bit of trouble seeing.

Rooa wears a dress, it is mostly dark red. There is a goldband under her chest and a gold band around her waist. The front part of the top part of the dress and the front part of the skirt is blood red. The part inbetween the gold bands is pale red.Her shoes are simlier to balet shoes, escept they dont have the laces and are flatter. They are black. She has a gold band around her neck.

PERSONALITY: Rooa is happy most of the time and is feirce fighter. But when gets upset, watch out. Some people may say it is scary. When she is angry, to solve the problem she Blood Bends.

(The picture is just for the outfit, so I erased her head lol )

Welcome to Avatar RPG Hfsdhgfsjgbwer (All that meat and only one potato {vowel = potato})

Um... did your cat fall asleep on your key board

Anywho onto business...

I'm pretty sure that you are trying to make a family tree for your character but it is seriously is confusing to read.

Try seperating them into paragraphs and being a little bit more specific on who your talking about and that person's relationship to your main character.

Ex: TLG, our leader, can't write for (fill in the blank).

Ex 2: Jon, Rooa's father, was origonally from the earth kingdom...

Other than that its all cool.

(PPSssst, talk to Dafoose in order to get your character OKed )

PS nice headless character.

So confucioussayhi your new characters are Kirby, Ichy, Goo, and playdoh. But which one is the main character. Or are all they all?

tear it up in Ba Sing Se!