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Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
General Scorch (Fire Bender)
Scorch was surrounded completely and saw no means for escape. He knew if he tried to fly away, Rexsten would attack him and if he stayed on the ground, the results wouldn't be any different. He suddenly noticed he was standing on a manhole that led to the sewers. He took a ball of fire in his hand and through it onto the manhole, forcing it to shatter into a million pieces. He jumped in without hesitation.
"Oh no you don't!" exclaimed Orinth as he jumped in behind Scorch.
"Man, smallfry, you just won't give up, will you?" asked Scorch.
"Again," said Orinth, "DON'T CALL ME SHORT!!!!"
Scorch felt a knife penetrate on his back and was unable to move his left arm.
"So, it's a fight you want," said Scorch, "it's a fight you'll get!" He whirled around and saw Orinth holding his katana in his right hand and a small dagger in his left. Scorch slowly began to walk toward Orinth, limping and trying not to move his left arm. Orinth charged at Scorch and jumped over him, stabbing his dagger in Scorch's back. Scorch yelled in agony and whirled around again, kicking Orinth in the back and quickly ran away. He had definantly lost Orinth and came across a strange chamber with a stone bed and candles.
"How did that smallfry do so much damage to me? General Scorch!" exclaimed Scorch, "this is completely impossible, I should have won." The candles were lit, but Scorch ignored them and laid down on the bed, face down. Scorch slept, unknowing who??occupied the??chamber. (Orinth had not followed Scorch and rejoined his fellow comrades).????
****DREAM****
Scorch fell asleep and had the same dream that had haunted him ever sicne he had left the Fire Nation. His dream starts in a peacefule Earth Kingdom that suddenly becomes engulfed in fire. He sees a figure in the distance killing inoccent children, hearing their screams and seeing their blood fall on the ground. Scorch begins walking toward the figure and is horrified that the man is, in fact him. He freezes as Scorch throws a ball of fire at him.
****END DREAM****
Unknown to Scorch, he had been in a vegitative state for about a week and had been healed by a mysterious man (Red Death).
Scorch woke up??after a week of the same dream reoccuring several times??and was sweating. The daggers have been removed from his back and he was bandaged in all the places he had been wounded.
"Ah, so you're finally awake, boy." said a mysterious stranger. Scorch sat up and saw an old man.
"Who are you?" asked Scorch wearly, "and why have you helped me?"
"You are truly blessed, boy," said the??mysterious man.
"What!?" said a shocked Scorch.
"Oh, how rude of me," said the man, "my name is Kujo, I am the shamon of Omashu."
"No, what??do you mean by great spirit?" asked Scorch.??
Kujo sighed, "You were in too bad of shape to be healed by normal means," said Kujo, "it was the only way to heal you."
"What have you done to me!?" exclaimed Scorch.
??"Control your temper," said Kujo, "it is more crucial now than ever that you learn to control you're temper."
"What did you do to me?" asked Scorch calmly.
"That's better," said Kujo, "I had to help you; you weren't healing by yourself. I begged the spirits to help you, and only one stepped forward. The spirit of flame, Pyro, the great dragon."
"Pyro?" asked Scorch.
"Yes, he is inside of you now," said Kujo, "now, you must learn how to contro, your new power."
"Control it?" asked Scorch.
"Yes," said Kujo, "but I cannot help you. You must venture to an air temple and find my brother, Kai. There he will help you." Kujo waved his hand and one of the walls slid open to show the outside of the city. "You must head east of Ba-Sin-Se. Look for a ruined temple and my brother should be there." Scorch began to leave, "Wait, boy, give him this letter. Without it, he won't help you." He gave Scorch a scroll. "Oh, and I don't think your current clothes will be suitable for your long journey ahead." Kujo waved his hand again and a rock came up and shattered, revealing a new armor. Reno quickly changed and left the chamber,??and flew into the sky,??heading for the air temple.
"Remember child!" exclaimed Kujo, "control your temper!"
| vegnegun wrote: |
General Scorch (Fire Bender) Scorch had been surrounded by Willy Woo, Orinth, and Rexsten. Heaving sent Willy Woo through the air, he was know on the ground with his sleeve on fire. He quickly beat it out and slowly stood up. Rexsten had began to ready is most deadly move, the Richocet Rock, and Orinth drew two small daggers from his sleeves. Willy Woo tocuhed the ground and rock had engulfed his hands, making two gigantic stone fists as his weapons. They slowly moved in on Scorch.... |
Orinth swung his daggers three more times at the fire bender but the fire bender blocked them all by swinging his hands into Orinth's arms. I now lifted the ground up in front of me and I sent it flying at the fire bender. I yelled, "Orinth! Watch out!" Orinth looked up and the rock wall hit him and the fire bender directly! Orinth and the fire bender (General Scorch) were thrown back a few feet until they crashed on to the ground. I was the only one who stood standing for Orinth, the fire bender, and Rexsten were all lying on the ground.
Then Rexsten stood up and I said to him, "Buddy, are you allright?" He relpied, "Yeah, I'm fine." I tunred back to Ornith and the fire bender. They both stood up again so Rexsten and I began to surround the fire bender once again. Ornith and the fire bender made some smart remarks at each other such as being short. The fire bender then broke a sewer hold (manhole) he was standing on and Orinth jumped after him. A few moments later Orinth came bac out of the manhole and he said, "I stabbed the fire bended like three times! But, somehow he still got away!" I replied, "Its okay Orinth. We will kill that fire bender some day!"
??The, I turned around becuase I heard footsteps. A Fire nation soldier was standing in the distance and he yelled, "Inturders! Help, help, help! Intruder alert, inturder alert!"....
C'mon guys what's with all this overpowered characters. There is only one avatar who can bend all elments. There is not such thing as a multibender. Be creative, crate deep characters with unique skills, or soon we'll have 50 avatars named "darkboy" "red death" or something like that.
We really should write some rules for this RPG!
| Leodegarioiii wrote: |
C'mon guys what's with all this overpowered characters. There is only one avatar who can bend all elments. There is not such thing as a multibender. Be creative, crate deep characters with unique skills, or soon we'll have 50 avatars named "darkboy" "red death" or something like that. We really should write some rules for this RPG! |
| ThatLostGuy wrote: |
| Yes, I agree. Red Death, edit your person. Make him a water-bender and something else. FIrst of all, your character had no parents or anything, how did he learn all the elements!!!!?!?!?!?!?!? There is one avatar, and in this RPG it is Darkboy, thats it. Edit your posts, please... |
All characters should have a real name.
Darkboy is the only avatar-like character on this RPG,?? but i think he really should get an interesting name.
As said by Leodegarioiii:
C'mon guys what's with all this overpowered characters. There is only one avatar who can bend all elments. There is not such thing as a multibender. Be creative, crate deep characters with unique skills, or soon we'll have 50 avatars named "darkboy" "red death" or something like that.
We really should write some rules for this RPG!
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Agreed...
??Oh, and I just checked out the website.... NICE!
| Leodegarioiii wrote: | ||
All characters should have a real name. Darkboy is the only avatar-like character on this RPG,?? but i think he really should get an interesting name. |
| TheGreatAvatar wrote: |
| Red death(all elements) *leaving the govener's palace in omashu* I noticed some flames popping everywhere, but from where i was, i thought it was just some dynamite exploding. It was time to go back home to rest..I slipped through the ground and came out of the ground at my temperary home in omashu my home was underground when i got home, i was about to rest on my bed, when i noticed there was a bloody fire nation general lying on my bed with a knife in his back. i figured this was one of the rare times i could use my waterbending healing. I slowly took the knife out of his back and healed him...then i left him to lie on the bed for the night while i slept on the ground |
Did you read my post before yours? The two stories don't add up at all! The man?? that helped Scorch was a shamon and an earth bender named Kujo. And Kujo infused the spirit of flame, Pyro the great dragon, into Scorch that allowed him to heal. If you will, a Yue solution.
So, if you wouldn't mind, change it so that it makes sense??with mine??or that you meet me later or something, or just delete it.
Just wondering when my character got a friend I didn't make Rexsten to be the kinda guy who is easy to get along with, I know Earthbenders stick together in this??but couldn't he be operating in some mercenary capacity then? Like have him make some "You hog-monkeys are going to owe me for this." kinda remarks...Ol' Rex is a bit of??a jerk...
| vegnegun wrote: | ||
Did you read my post before yours? The two stories don't add up at all! The man that helped Scorch was a shamon and an earth bender named Kujo. And Kujo infused the spirit of flame, Pyro the great dragon, into Scorch that allowed him to heal. If you will, a Yue solution. So, if you wouldn't mind, change it so that it makes sense with mine or that you meet me later or something, or just delete it. |
| Eman5805 wrote: |
Just wondering when my character got a friend |
| TheGreatAvatar wrote: | ||||
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Okay, that was my bad. But, I can make this work, somehow.
How about your character leaves because he thinks my character has died. My characters wounds were more than water-bending could take care of, hence, why the shamon, Kujo,??that liberated your temporary home had to infuse Pyro into Scorch.
I figure this would be nuetral ground for both of us, requiring little change in either story.??
Our paths might cross again, depending on the fact if we somehow meet again.??
| ThatLostGuy wrote: | ||
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The only reason I wasn't posting anything cuz I've been on and off, and haven't followed the story too closely...where did you leave off?
