Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)

"Is she going to live?" asked Scorch.

Katara sighed, "I don't know. It's too difficult to tell at this point."

"I should have left her when I had the chance," said Scorch, "this is all my fault." He slammed his fists on the ground before getting up.

"Scorch, no," said Katara, "it's not your fault."

"Yes it is!" exclaimed Scorch, "because of me, she got hurt!" Scorch stood their silently for a few moments, "a dead once done can never be undone, but perhaps it can be mitigated." Scorch went down to the chasm??to find Fang and Jax, and saw Jax pinned to the wall and Fang standing there. But there was also another man that??looked like Jax and??had lunged at Fang.??Fang was on the ground, not injured, but was about to counter attack him.

"No Fang," said Scorch, "this B*tch is mine." He walked forward and took fire in his hands. The man turned around and readied his swords. Fang got up and ran out of the chasm, for he knew that this wasn't going to be pretty. Scorch encased his body in fire and lunged at the man, grabbing him and kneeing him in the stomach.

"Pathetic fool," said the man, "this boy's anger and hatred toward you is too much to kill." He slashed at Scorch's stomach, but Scorch quickly backed away and blasted fire at the man. He was encased in fire and screamed in agony. Scorch slowly walked towards him and took a ball of fire in his hand and extended it into a long, thick stream. He struck the man down and the fire went out. He stopped moving and seemed dead. Scorch thought he had avenged Rin, when a red orb lifted from the body and seemed to float in midair. It then zoomed out of the chasm through a wall.

"I look forward to our next meeting," said Scorch, "and next time, you won't get away." Scorch clenched his hand into a fist and slowly walked towards Jax, when he heard Fang's voice from behind him.

"Scorch, leave him," said Fang, "we have bigger problems top side." Scorch turned around and followed Fang back into the chamber where Rin had been. He saw Katara, Sokka, and Toph had been subdued and lyed on the ground. He saw that three men (Bulldozer, Mayhem, Spike)??were standing there and that blood was flowing heavily from Rin's body.

"Rin," said Scorch, "I'm sorry. But, there seems to be no other way." His body began to glow ruby red.

"Fang, will you fight by my side?" asked Scorch. Fang nodded and his body began to glow milky white.

"Oh please," said the larger man (Bulldozer), "this will be too easy." His body began to glow grey, just like Scorch and Fang's. (Fang, take it from here)

Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master

Jax fell on the ground and landed with a big, THUD.
Jax blacked out and had a strange dream.

Jax stood on a path. It was the path with the two doors. Now, there was a third door. Jax stood in the middle, and the other Jax, the evil one appeared in front of him.
"I am here to guide you Jax, not to harm you,"he said.
"The door on your left leads to running away, and leaving the Fire Nation behind."
"The door on your right, leads to following your love for Rin, but wait, do you really love Rin anymore?"
"I don't know," Jax said. "She hasn't felt the pain I have."
"The third door in the middle, leads to darkness. I will join you once again, and we will save Rin, Ami, Scorch and Fang. But then we will stay together," he said.

Jax stood looking at the doors. He walked down the path.

Jax put his hand on the door on the right. But he stepped back.

"No," he said.
He stepped through the middle door.

Scorch was facing off against Bulldozer, Spike, and Mayhem alone. Rin was down from her injuries, and Ami was stuck against the wall with a sword. He felt the spirit go into his brain, and take control of all his muscles in his body.

He hovered in the air and his eyes turned pitch black, as he exploded in anger, and Bulldozer, Mayhem, and Spike were thrown??back. Jax fell on the ground.

Scorch stood over Jax. He remembered his words that he would kill him if he saw him again.
Jax was being taken over.
"What have I done?" Jax said. "Help me!" he yelled.
Scorch just stood there.
"PLEASE!" Jax said.

Spike (Archer)

Bulldozer, Mayhem, and I got to the top of the hidden staircase and we opened a door. We soon encountered Toph, Sakka, and katar. I said, "Hi. I am Spike. I would like to be your friend." Sokka stared at me and threw a boomerang at me. I ducked and then Bulldozer ran at them and knmocked them all out. Bulldozer is huge and his armor can make people black out easily.

Soon enough we were encountered by a whole bunch of people that wanted us dead. I began to fight an Air Bender and it was a good fight. Mayhem was fighting Ami, Jax, and Rin. Bulldozer (unaffected by element attacks) was fighting Scorch. All of a sudden, the ground began to shake!

I looked around the room. Rin and Jax were still lying on the floor. Fang turned into a vicious wolf and attacked me. Ami was fighting Mayhem. And then I saw Bulldozer and Scorch!

Scorch transformed into a huge dragon! Scorch swung his tail at Bulldozer and Bulldozer didn't even flich. He did not get affected by the attack. Bulldozer then squinted and his armor turned very dark gray. Bulldozers whole body began to glow gray. And smoke fogged up the room. I heard a whole buch of people coughing and I even heard a wolf (Fang) growl. The smoke cleared and Bulldozer turned into a huge rhinocerous.

The dragon and the wolf surrounded Bullzoder, in his Rhino form. I looked back at Mayhem and Ami was lying on the ground. Mayhem ran over to me and said, "I blacked her out good. Hahaha WHAT THE HELL! IS THAT A DRAGON, A RHINO, AND A WOLF?" I replied, "Yeah. And the Rhino is Bulldozer!"

Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)

Scorch looked down at Jax who had just asked for help. "Why should I help you?" asked Scorch, "you almost killed Rin." Jax looked up and tried to take control again.

"Scorch, please," said Jax, "I'm.... argh!" The dark spirit within him had began to take control again. Scorch lifted Jax up by his shirt.

"Control it!" exclaimed Scorch, "you make your choices, not me." He tossed Jax to the side and stared at the three men, Spike, Bulldozer and Mayhem. Mayhem was on the ground, out cold, and Spike and Bulldozer slowly began to walk towards him, swords in hand, when they suddenly froze.

"Now, two against one?" said a voice in Scorch's head, "that doesn't seem very fair now does it?"

"Pyro?" asked Scorch, "no, I will not lose control to you. Not again!"

"Oh ho!" exclaimed Pyro, "but you already have. Remember what happened to Rin? Or better yet, how your parents tossed you aside when you most needed them? They never wanted you, only your brother, Obsidian."

Scorch sighed, "I don't care about them. I made a promise and I intend to keep it!"

Pyro laughed, "You promised? What a petty concept!" Scorch looked at his hand which had been encased in red lightning.

"No!" exclaimed Scorch, "I will do this without you!" He heard Pyro's beastly laugh and then time resumed. The three slowly walked towards him, each with a sword. Scorch looked over at Fang, whom was shaking and still glowing white. A white shell suddenly encased him and exploded, revealing a white wolf.

"ARGH!" exclaimed Bulldozer, "what's happening to me?" Scorch looked at him and a grey shell had begun encasing him.

"And so it begins," said Pyro in Scorch's head, "now, its my turn!" Scorch felt his body clentched and red lighting encased it. A shell encased him and exploded in unison with Bulldozer's, which revealed a gigantic Rhino, and Pyro was released. Pyro looked at the Rhino and then at the Wolf.

"You," said Pyro to the wolf, "you escaped me the last time, Exodus. But, not this time!" Pyro then looked at the Rhino, "and you, Devestator, I warned you to stay out of my way, but you chose not to!" Pyro then looked over at Jax, "And you. I must thank you. For without your help, I'd still be in that hell which was Scorch's mind."?? He slowly walked over to Jax and grabbed him with his tail before hurling him out of the chamber and onto the ground. Exodus growled at Pyro and Devestator looked as though he was ready to charge toward Pyro. Exodus charged for Pyro and so did Devestator. (Fang, TLG, take it from here if u want).

General Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)

Devestator and Exodus had just charged for Pyro and Pyro opened his mouth wide and fired a stream of fire towards them. Exodus stopped, but Devastator kept going and went straight through the fire and collided with Pyro. Pyro fell backward and grunted. Exodus jumped on top of him and clawed at his chest. Pyro grabbed Exodus with his tail and hurled him across the chamber and forced a wall to break. Pyro stood up and charged out after him, passing by the bodies of Toph, Sokka, Katara, Rin, and Ami, and breathing fire at Exodus. He felt an arrow ding against his back and turned around, seeing Spike and Mayhem firing arrows at him. Pyro charged for them, when Devastator got between him and them. He charged for Pyro, but Pyro charged at him as well and they both collided. Pyro clawed at Devastator's thick hide and drew little blood before backing away and taking to the air. He grabbed Devestator by the neck and procceded to fly across a walk area, dragging him toward an edge before losing his grip and let go before Devastator fell off the edge. Pyro turned around and was going to attack, until he felt a force land on top of him:?? it was Exodus.

"Yield Pyro," said Exodus, "he is not involved in this."

"Argh," said Pyro, "he got involved immediatly when he attacked me." He grabbed Exodus by the neck and tossed him against the canyon wall. Pyro stood up and flew towards Exoduc. "This time, you won't get away."