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    Eman5805

    [9181]Apr 19, 2009
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    It happened in my first two Van posts. I'd search, then copy and paste...but I don't feel like sifting through my post history or back tracking through 40+ pages, so I'll just type out a recap:

    Basically Van was a bandit in the Shi Wong Desert(I called it the Wang Shi Tong desert once, didn't I?) working for a fat baron named Xin Mao. Xin Mao was rich and had a secret cave where he stored all his riches since he couldn't lug all that gold and stuff through the desert. Xin Mao also kept a harem (group of girls a man bangs, basically hookers he brings with him). One of his harem died mysteriously and he got a new girl, Siyo, to replace her. During a party after a big, successful raid, the new girl and Van...get frisky.

    Later, some of Xin Mao's men wind up dead in an ambush near the cave and Xin Mao reasons that it was Van who betrayed him. Xin Mao has his men grab Van and he demands that Van say who he sold him out to. Van denies betraying Xin Mao and then realizes that he told Siyo where Xin Mao's cave was the night of the party. Without raising this fact to Xin Mao, Van breaks free and attacks Siyo and chases her into the desert. She escapes, revealing herself to be an Earthbender.

    Van is already in hot pursuit before he realizes that there's almost no way to convince Xin Mao he didn't betray him now. He just destroyed Xin Mao's tent and chased away his new girl. So, Van decides to cut his losses, just leave the desert, and disappear in Ba Sing Se; because Xin Mao'll probably send men after Van.

    He stows away on a boat, meets Lyra. Then he finds out that Xin Mao and everyone he worked with are dead. And Van's the prime suspect. And Van figures it could only be Siyo who framed him. Since she was the only person who was there and knew who Van was.

    Still not clear on anything? If it's about the plot, well then, it's most likely something you'll just have to keep reading to figure out. ^_^
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    ThatLostGuy

    [9182]Apr 19, 2009
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    I woke up in a hotties bed last night... it was awesome. I'm the man. That is all.

    TLG.......... out!
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    Double09nhalf

    [9183]Apr 19, 2009
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    Eman5805 wrote:
    It happened in my first two Van posts. I'd search, then copy and paste...but I don't feel like sifting through my post history or back tracking through 40+ pages, so I'll just type out a recap: Basically Van was a bandit in the Shi Wong Desert(I called it the Wang Shi Tong desert once, didn't I?) working for a fat baron named Xin Mao. Xin Mao was rich and had a secret cave where he stored all his riches since he couldn't lug all that gold and stuff through the desert. Xin Mao also kept a harem (group of girls a man bangs, basically hookers he brings with him). One of his harem died mysteriously and he got a new girl, Siyo, to replace her. During a party after a big, successful raid, the new girl and Van...get frisky. Later, some of Xin Mao's men wind up dead in an ambush near the cave and Xin Mao reasons that it was Van who betrayed him. Xin Mao has his men grab Van and he demands that Van say who he sold him out to. Van denies betraying Xin Mao and then realizes that he told Siyo where Xin Mao's cave was the night of the party. Without raising this fact to Xin Mao, Van breaks free and attacks Siyo and chases her into the desert. She escapes, revealing herself to be an Earthbender. Van is already in hot pursuit before he realizes that there's almost no way to convince Xin Mao he didn't betray him now. He just destroyed Xin Mao's tent and chased away his new girl. So, Van decides to cut his losses, just leave the desert, and disappear in Ba Sing Se; because Xin Mao'll probably send men after Van. He stows away on a boat, meets Lyra. Then he finds out that Xin Mao and everyone he worked with are dead. And Van's the prime suspect. And Van figures it could only be Siyo who framed him. Since she was the only person who was there and knew who Van was. Still not clear on anything? If it's about the plot, well then, it's most likely something you'll just have to keep reading to figure out. ^_^

    Ah now i remeber. Its been a while since that part and i think you had a big pause in between that part and the part where he meets the little girl. Okay I'm good now.

    Dafoose I going to resend you the PM. Check it out.

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    Dafoose

    [9184]Apr 19, 2009
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    I woke up in a hotties bed last night... it was awesome. I'm the man. That is all.

    TLG.......... out!

    That is information on a need to know basis and I do not need to know that.
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    Double09nhalf

    [9185]Apr 20, 2009
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    Dafoose wrote:
    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    I woke up in a hotties bed last night... it was awesome. I'm the man. That is all. TLG.......... out!
    That is information on a need to know basis and I do not need to know that.

    Actually the "hottie" was a sales representitive for bed-bath-and beyond and was allowing him to try one out.

    but yea second that.

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    confucioussayhi

    [9186]Apr 20, 2009
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    I woke up in a hotties bed last night... it was awesome. I'm the man. That is all.

    TLG.......... out!
    Teddy bears don't count, TLG. It has to respond, not just take it.

    Post some time this week. Eman, I think our brainwaves crossed or something... :/
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    Eman5805

    [9187]Apr 20, 2009
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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    I woke up in a hotties bed last night... it was awesome. I'm the man. That is all.

    TLG.......... out!
    Teddy bears don't count, TLG. It has to respond, not just take it.

    Post some time this week. Eman, I think our brainwaves crossed or something... :/


    For real? That's kinda freaky.

    Well, you what they say about great minds. I guess...
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    BaiMaoRieji

    [9188]Apr 20, 2009
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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    I woke up in a hotties bed last night... it was awesome. I'm the man. That is all.

    TLG.......... out!
    Teddy bears don't count, TLG.

    Neither do... you know, other men.
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    Dafoose

    [9189]Apr 20, 2009
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    I woke up in a hotties bed last night... it was awesome. I'm the man. That is all.

    TLG.......... out!
    Teddy bears don't count, TLG.

    Neither do... you know, other men.

    Yeah, I was about to qualify his statement as well...but I was afraid of TLG sharing more details. xD
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    Double09nhalf

    [9190]Apr 20, 2009
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    Well enough about our leader... er former leader's preferences. Please read, comment, and totally forget what TLG just wrote. Trust me you will feel better.

    ///////////////

    Siam - Air-bender

    Mizuhiro - fire-bender

    Master Ikasoruk - Sword master

    Kempa - Fuzzy flying bison

    me - the kick@ss author

    ~~Deciding to leave the coastline, Siam has fled the scene~~

    /////////////////

    Siam had to go. She had to warn the air temples of the impending danger. They would believe her, right? A million questions ran through head. Questions like was this the best course of action to take but in the end they all were in vain because she had already chosen her path. Someone however decided against her course of action and followed her into the woods.

    Siam ran for her life. She dodged past trees and bushes. She knew someone would have come after her if she left but this soon? Whoever it was that was chasing Siam was not only quick but agile as well. She decided to go by foot instead of air because too many people would notice her. But know running though this dense forest seemed to be the worst idea because she could find an opening through the trees.

    Coming down a steep slope Siam jumped down using air-bending to cushion her fall. Hiding under a fallen tree trunk she reached into her sack a produced a whistle with which she put around her neck and began to blow. The instrument made no sound and after a couple of seconds Siam frowned then tucked it in her shirt. She started to make her way down the rest of the mountain. Stepping between the debris Siam silently moved through the brush; her heart racing so fast she thought it would give her away. She heard a deafening snap and jumped into a nearby bush. She then realized that her position had already given away she sprinted through the trees. As she got frantic Siam reached for her whistle and blew it as hard as she could. A low noise answered in the distance up ahead.

    "Ah, there you are," she replied as Siam corrected her velocity.

    With her escape drawing near Siam quickened her pace and charged ahead. A shadow three yards to her right ran at the same pace. Siam, knowing she had to be quick, drew her rod and as she reached the clearing extended the wings. Siam threw it in front of her and leapt after it on to recoil as a ring of fire surrounded her.

    "You're a hard one to catch." A figure step out the forest and approached Siam. Even through the flames and flames she still couldn't make out the person's face. The person sat down at the edge of the fire and started to speak again. "So, where do you think you going?"

    The voice sounded young and mischievous but Siam didn't care who it was. She wasn't about to allow anyone to get in the way of her mission. She stood up straight and faced her opponent.

    "Like I would tell you! Kempa, now," she yelled.

    A massive roar answered Siam's call. A giant beast flew up behind her and as it blew through the fiery wall Siam back-flipped onto its back. The gust from the beast toppled the figure over.

    Retrieving her staff from where it had fallen, Siam pointed it at the fallen figure that Kempa was guarding. "Now who are you and what do you want?"

    The figure was about to speak when a hook shot flew out of the trees and grabbed the figure pulling him back. And if this wasn't bizarre enough a person wearing a white mask with horns landed in front of them and brandished a sword that split in two.

    "Stop," commanded the person lying on his back.

    "But my lord I really must protest. Allow me the honor of disposing of these rabbles that attacked you."

    "Ugh, I was the one who first attacked them. Geez, you always come late you old fart. How long have you been tracking me anyway?"

    The person dropped his pose then put his swords together and put them back in their sheath. "Since you left your quarters unannounced. You had me..."

    Siam just couldn't wait any longer. This was just getting to weird to her. "W-wait, excuse me? Is that you Mizuhiro?"

    The person picked himself up and dusted himself off. "Yes, it's me... sorry about that; I only meant to scare you."

    She got off of Kempa and walked toward Mizuhiro. "I'm not scared anymore..."

    She walked up to him then studied something on the ground. When Mizuhiro followed her gaze to what she was looking at Siam deck him in the face sending him sprawling. The person with the white mask started to move but Mizuhiro put his hand up.

    "No, no, I deserved that. Although I wish you hadn't gone for my nose. Oh yes, I forgot. Siam this is my guardian, servant, and teacher Master Ikasoruk."

    Master Ikasoruk bowed toward Siam all the while keeping one eye fixed on her.

    She felt she should curtsy or something but decided to dismiss it. "So did you come all the way out here just to grace us with your presence and scare the living hell out of us, me."

    "No, not at all, but it was fun. But first let's settle down for the night. Master Ikasoruk could you fetch us some wood for a fire."

    While the wood was being fetched Siam unloaded her cooking supplies and some cups. Mizuhiro then started making a fire pit and placed stones around the hole. Soon they were sipping hot green tea around the fire with Master Ikasoruk on watch and Kempa demolishing every shred of grass in sight.

    Mizuhiro distractedly put down his cup and looked up at the stars. By producing a flame at the end of his finger he started making figure eights in the sky. "Your flying-bison is impressive. Tempa, right?"

    "Kempa. He has been with my family all my life. He is actually pretty old in age for a flying bison. So... why did you follow me?"

    "I read the letter you received. I don't know who behind this but I am going to find out and like you I'm going to prevent it as well. To this extent I and my servant shall accompany you to the western air-temple. That is if you will have us."

    Siam lay back onto the soft grass and looked up at the sky. It was cloudy for the most part but even though the clouds she saw a shooting star. She closed her eyes and silently said something. Mizuhiro was about to talk but Siam raised her hand for silence. After a second she turned her head sideways to face Mizuhiro.

    "Yes you and your servant may come with us. You may even ride on Kempa with me or otherwise we won't make it in time... I am grateful of your assistance. Now, what did you want to say?"

    Mizuhiro didn't know whether to laugh or cry but chuckled to himself.

    "what is so funny? I was being sincere."

    He looked as he was about to explode with laughter. "You, You just laid down on an ant hill!"

    Siam jumped to her feet and twirled around feeling her back. An army of angry ants were crawling all over her. Just as she was about to get frantic one of the ants that had been crawling through her hair dropped onto her nose.

    "Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaagggh!"

    /////////////////////

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    Eman5805

    [9191]Apr 20, 2009
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    Fire ants are the worst, eh?
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    Double09nhalf

    [9192]Apr 20, 2009
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    Eman5805 wrote:
    Fire ants are the worst, eh?

    Yea, I once went to Florida to visit my Granny and there were a lot of them and I was wearing sandals at the time. It's not so bad actually when they are just on your feet because you don't get as frantic when there bites itch your legs/feet/etc. And when it happens you get an impressive Mexican hat dance performance.

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    Dafoose

    [9193]Apr 21, 2009
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    Never snort fire ants.
    EVER. xD
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    David-E-Oliver

    [9194]Apr 21, 2009
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    SchoolsOut13 wrote:

    Okay, I don't think this was already created, so I'm gonna make it up right now. If you guys wanna RP Avatar, than PM me (That means send me an e-mail over tv.com for you n00bs out there) and I'll get you started by posting your info on my blog. And sense the Avatar forums are usually flooded, I hope to have the RPG up by today. Well, give me some characters! I'll show you my description:

    Name: Perry Itukou
    Status: Fire-bender
    Special move: Fireball assault
    Height: 5'6"
    Age: 15
    Gender: Male
    Weight: 135
    Eyes: Hazel
    Hair: Dishwater Blonde (Dirty Blonde)
    Personality: He's out for two things. One is to use his fire-bending skills to destroy his foes, and the other is to impress the ladies. That's it; plain and simple.



    I got a great character:
    Name: Azalon
    Age: 12 years old
    Sex: Male
    Non-Bender
    He is skilled in wrestling and unarmed combat. He is a bit of a coward; but if pressed he will defend himself. He spend most of his day at school, wrestling or making up Air Bender Jokes. He would love to fight the avatar (as long as he agreed not to use bending)
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    Eman5805

    [9195]Apr 21, 2009
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    Welcome to the fold. Always good to see someone interested, but you can't really go by the original post. It's almost four years old now.

    What we'll need is a basic descritpion of what he looks like, his history(does he have any family or what not) and any other detail you wanna spare.

    After that, basically just throw in with your story. You can join with someone and collab or do you own thing like most of us already are.
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    Double09nhalf

    [9196]Apr 21, 2009
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    Eman5805 wrote:
    Welcome to the fold. Always good to see someone interested, but you can't really go by the original post. It's almost four years old now. What we'll need is a basic descritpion of what he looks like, his history(does he have any family or what not) and any other detail you wanna spare. After that, basically just throw in with your story. You can join with someone and collab or do you own thing like most of us already are.

    Hey Eman I don't think he read that. He's a noob(no offense really) because he did the same thing i did and didn't notice that there are over four hundred pages. He's probably new to the site as well. But DavidEOliver I hope you the best of luck with writing your story and don't worry about being a noob to the site. I made the same mistake as well. Sometimes our leader TLG doesn't even know what he's doing himself. He is a Permanoob.

    Edited on 04/21/2009 10:40am
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    Dafoose

    [9197]Apr 21, 2009
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    Well, as the leader, then I just have to say a few things:
    There is no avatar. This RPG does not go by the original storyline.
    You can post whenever you want.
    You can post as long as you want.
    TLG is not the leader.
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    BaiMaoRieji

    [9198]Apr 21, 2009
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    God, I've put this off long enough. I am actually going to start re-writing my finale post... After finals are done... which will be in about 3 weeks. Damn you, college.
    Anyway, after my story is done (whenever that will be) I plan to join up with Eman, unless DJ says otherwise. I promised him that after he waded through my endless filler and crap, I'd follow his storyline. If he still has one. And if he's still here.
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    Eman5805

    [9199]Apr 21, 2009
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    God, I've put this off long enough. I am actually going to start re-writing my finale post... After finals are done... which will be in about 3 weeks. Damn you, college. Anyway, after my story is done (whenever that will be) I plan to join up with Eman, unless DJ says otherwise. I promised him that after he waded through my endless filler and crap, I'd follow his storyline. If he still has one. And if he's still here.
    lol, I don't plan on abandoning yall again for a good lil bit. I'm actually enjoying where this story is going. Seeing as I'm basically freestyling the story as I go(honestly, when I came up with the concept of Lyra, that wasn't even her name and she sure as hell wasn't Indra's sister), I wanna see what happens next. Which is kind of weird...
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    Double09nhalf

    [9200]Apr 21, 2009
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    Eman5805 wrote:
    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    God, I've put this off long enough. I am actually going to start re-writing my finale post... After finals are done... which will be in about 3 weeks. Damn you, college. Anyway, after my story is done (whenever that will be) I plan to join up with Eman, unless DJ says otherwise. I promised him that after he waded through my endless filler and crap, I'd follow his storyline. If he still has one. And if he's still here.
    lol, I don't plan on abandoning yall again for a good lil bit. I'm actually enjoying where this story is going. Seeing as I'm basically freestyling the story as I go(honestly, when I came up with the concept of Lyra, that wasn't even her name and she sure as hell wasn't Indra's sister), I wanna see what happens next. Which is kind of weird...

    Dafoose I know your the leader leader I just didn't realize that TLG(aka pervy Sage) had stepped down or thrown off the high horse yet. So now that it is officail

    ALL HAIL DAFOOSE, LEADER OF THE "AVATAR RPG*: CREATE YOUR OWN BENDER" FORUM TOPIC. Yayz all around.

    And Eman a lot of my stuff has been free-styling. The plot stays the same but the guts of the story keep growing bigger and some times i worry that the guts are swallowing the plot. kinda nasty really. Take Mrs. Yoji's home for example: at first i was going to have her some Iwao dead when he was a baby. This would give show Siam why Mrs. Yoji has empathy for her but also a reason to live. But I decided to give the son a rare desease that he would have to live with that pained him on a daily basis. This would connect with Siam's horrible memories and predicament that also pained her. It's pretty cool to see your story as well as mine evolve.

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