Thanks man
I will take note
(Makes note)
Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
Thanks man
I will take note
(Makes note)
confucioussayhi wrote: |
I personally separate dialouge from regular sections so that it's more prominent and easier to identify, but Daf is right. You shouldn't need spaces throughout the whole paragraph. I don't know when I'm going to post. I need to soon. I'm starting to forget what I had him doing last. |
Eman5805 wrote: | ||
Ahhh, I think it was something about his fence saying he can't do anything with what he has and that he's in danger? |
ThatLostGuy wrote: |
As your amazing leader, I would like the 9000th post, please. |
The bold indicates lies. You have been officially impeached, for crimes including canon rape, approving of a Zombie plot, and creating characters with stupid names.
You have been proven guilty by a completely biased jury and replaced with Dafoose.
Therefore you are not the leader. By the way, Neither are you amazing.
BaiMaoRieji wrote: | ||
The bold indicates lies. You have been officially impeached, for crimes including canon rape, approving of a Zombie plot, and creating characters with stupid names. You have been proven guilty by a completely biased jury and replaced with Dafoose. Therefore you are not the leader. By the way, Neither are you amazing. |
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Lol, I liked taht bias jury part.
Dafoose wrote: |
Hmm...I actually wanted the 8888 post, but double09 got that one. xD |
Holy $@*% with a side order of whats-it
I had even noticed really. Man i gotta pay more attention. props for me
anywho, Dafoose, I gotta another sig idea to go with the one i have. (An add-on that really has nothing to do with my current one)
That is um... if you have the time ya-know. if your cool then I'll pm the specs
should post by end of week.
ps I am not your leader but still am selfproclaim-ing-ly awesome and if you let me have the upteenth post then i promise to laminate it in my um room and feel good about myself for no reason at all.
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Holy $@*% with a side order of whats-it I had even noticed really. Man i gotta pay more attention. props for me anywho, Dafoose, I gotta another sig idea to go with the one i have. (An add-on that really has nothing to do with my current one) That is um... if you have the time ya-know. if your cool then I'll pm the specs should post by end of week. ps I am not your leader but still am selfproclaim-ing-ly awesome and if you let me have the upteenth post then i promise to laminate it in my um room and feel good about myself for no reason at all. |
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So tell me, did you print the post out and laminate it so you would feel good every time you looked at it.
I'll pm it to you now
Double09nhalf wrote: | ||||||
So tell me, did you print the post out and laminate it so you would feel good every time you looked at it. I'll pm it to you now |
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No but really... all you guys will SERIOUSLY PAY if I do not get that post!!!
ThatLostGuy wrote: | ||||||
No but really... all you guys will SERIOUSLY PAY if I do not get that post!!! |
I bet I know somebody(that-shall-remain-nameless) that might
*CoughConfusionsayshiCough*
But if we reach down into our hearts we can all find the grace to...
(Throws up)
Nope, I got nothing for you there Pervy Sage
Its a biohazard down there.
posting sooooon
Kibu-Shi(Earthbending)
Leaving Las Vegas. Err... Ba Sing Se.
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Kibu was at the stables outside the lower ring, trying to rent an ostrichhorse. The stable owner had tried to charge Kibu 25 gold pieces for it, but Kibu refused.
"It was ten and three silver pieces last time!" Kibu shouted at the man.
"Well, last time all of our ostrichhorses hadn't been rented out! I have three left! It's 25 or you're walking!" the owner pointed towards the door.
Kibu took a single gold piece from his bag and bounced it off the stable owner's forehead. Then, muttering angrily, he stormed out the front door and was gone. Ten minutes later, the stable owner walked outside to take his lunch, but found the lock on the gate of the ostrichhorse pen had been picked and all three of his last ostrichhorses were gone. He looked all around but didn't see any sign of the thief or the animals. A glint caught his eye. Next to the gate, on top of the fence in a neat row were nine gold pieces and three silver pieces. He stared at them incredulously and pulled out the gold piece Kibu had thrown at him earlier.
"The nerve of that punk..." he muttered between gritted teeth.
Now outside the walls of Ba Sing Se and headed west, Kibu smiled as he rode. He had neglected to get saddlebags for supplies, given the circumstances, but he had heard that there was a nice inn on the road a few hours away. Kibu expected to arrive just as it got dark. A few uneventful hours of riding later, Kibu and his ostrichhorse reached the top of a small hill and saw the inn a little ways off in the fading light. It didn't seem very far, but by the time Kibu had crossed the distance, it was dark and the only light was that of the moon. There was a little pen next to the three story building for keeping animals. Kibu dismounted and led his ostrichhorse into the pen and took it to the water and hay, then left and closed the gate behind him. He walked up to the door and entered the inn.
Inside, the inn was warm and cozily lit with red paper lanterns. There was a small area to the left for dining tables and stairs to the rooms to the right. In front, there was a bar with several patrons. And behind the bar, a man in a nice green embroidered suit was polishing glasses with a cloth. Kibu walked up to the bar and sat down.
"Anything you'd like to drink?" the bartender asked without looking up from the glass.
"Yeah. I'll have some of that plum wine there." Kibu said, pointing to a bottle of magenta colored wine.
"Good choice. That's our house specialty. We grow the plums out in the back." he replied as he rolled up one of his sleeves that had come down and turned to grab the bottle. He got a short glass from under the bar counter and poured it about half full, but Kibu motioned to fill it up.
"I'm only getting one tonight. Fill it up." the bartender did so and Kibu took the glass, sipping off the top so he wouldn't spill it.
"So, where are you going?" the man asked as he put the bottle of wine back onto the shelf behind him.
"Just out of the city. Taking a holiday." Kibu took a long drink from the glass.
The bartender cocked an eyebrow, "You certainly like your drink, don't you?"
Kibu had nearly finished the rest of the glass off, but stopped and said with a smile, "You have no idea."
As Kibu finished his drink he noticed voices and laughter from the dining area. He turned and saw three absolutely stunning women talking with a man in the corner. He couldn't make out what they were saying but the man suddenly threw up his hands in a 'hey, why not' motion and pointed at one of them and nodded. The dark-haired woman laid her hand on his shoulder and he rummaged through his pockets, finally retrieving several gold pieces and handed them to her. She took them, then grabbed him by the hand and led him across the room and up the stairs. One of her companions, a fair-haired, hazel-eyed, beauty had watched them go, but her eyes now met Kibu's and she smiled and gave him a little wave.
The bartender noticed and said, "Its seven gold pieces, friend. She's all yours for that."
"And how much for the drink?" Kibu asked, still looking at the woman.
"One gold piece and five copper pieces."
Kibu pulled ten gold pieces out of his bag and handed it to the bartender.
"What's the extra for?" he asked.
"The bottle." Kibu replied, pointing at the plum wine.
The bartender chuckled a little and handed the bottle the Kibu. Kibu thanked him and walked over to the woman. With a nod from the bartender, she too grabbed his hand and led him upstairs.
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In Ba Sing Se-
"You did what?" a forceful voice echoed through the darkened chamber.
"There was another in the house. He took the file. I created a means to catch him." a rough dark voice responded.
"Argh! Next time you decide to do something so rash and foolish, consult me first! What am I paying your masters for?" the first voice boomed, amplified by the stone walls surrounding them.
"I understand. My charge is to serve you as long as you pay those of my order. What shall I do?"
"Did you see this thief's face?" the first asked more calmly.
"Yes. Very clearly." the second replied.
"Good, that is good. We can send out warrants for his arrest, without posting rewards. He knows not about your... actions, does he?" the first asked.
"He does not." the second replied simply.
"Do not be so reckless in the future, or I will have you removed and disgraced among the Hashshashin."
"Thank you, General." and with that, Hashshashin Go turned and left General Kato's private war room to await the arrival of the simple thief who had bested him.
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Woot, finally. I hope I explained everything clearly enough.
Dafoose wrote: |
Nice. I liked the setting of the tavern or bar Kibu was in, with the plum wine and the paper lanterns. I got a good image too. And i understand most everything clearly. xD keep it up man. |
You could? I couldn't make heads or tales of the first part. The whole money issue in the beginning didn't make sense(or gold) to me. But i liked the rest.
So is your preference plum wine hmmm. And that bar scene in latter half... I know that place
Double09nhalf wrote: |
The whole money issue in the beginning didn't make sense(or gold) to me. |
Oh, I get it. sense, cents.
Post cometh soon, as Spring Break doth approach.