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    FireLordZuko93

    [9241]May 6, 2009
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    Double09nhalf wrote:

    Your actually a girl??? I thought that Dafoose was making fun of you at first until i read your page. And after looking at it, I have to say that i like the zuko evolution pictures. That is really cool. It shows him growing up from a pompous brat to becoming a pompous firelord

    Anywho, I was reaally wondering after reading all those pages: Who's story did you like the most Hmmmm????

    Little note on the side: i noticed that Eragon was one of your favorite movies. And i say DID YOU READ THE BOOKS AT ALL. The movie almost makes a spoof out of the books. I will never forgive the writer for letting that terrible peice of steamy pile of horse what-its make it to the movies for everyones viewing sorrow. Okay i'm done

    *facepalms* yes im a girl i think i need that little reminder back in my sig stating that i was cause apparently some people still dont know lolz dont ask why i have the "lord" in my UN..even i dont know

    pfffffffft dont make fun of zuko but thanks

    ok wow thats tough... hmmmm...theres not really one that i didnt like..except patheons that was just confuseing s*** you need to stop playing reruns and finish you dang story though

    uhhhh last time i checked i had Eragon under my favorite books xD I actually saw the movie first and liked it which is what got me into the books..but after reading the books the movie sucks

    (btw about to post profile..still working on this freakishly long history )

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    Double09nhalf

    [9242]May 6, 2009
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    FireLordZuko93 wrote:
    Double09nhalf wrote:

    Your actually a girl??? I thought that Dafoose was making fun of you at first until i read your page. And after looking at it, I have to say that i like the zuko evolution pictures. That is really cool. It shows him growing up from a pompous brat to becoming a pompous firelord

    Anywho, I was reaally wondering after reading all those pages: Who's story did you like the most Hmmmm????

    Little note on the side: i noticed that Eragon was one of your favorite movies. And i say DID YOU READ THE BOOKS AT ALL. The movie almost makes a spoof out of the books. I will never forgive the writer for letting that terrible peice of steamy pile of horse what-its make it to the movies for everyones viewing sorrow. Okay i'm done

    *facepalms* yes im a girl i think i need that little reminder back in my sig stating that i was cause apparently some people still dont know lolz dont ask why i have the "lord" in my UN..even i dont know

    pfffffffft dont make fun of zuko but thanks

    ok wow thats tough... hmmmm...theres not really one that i didnt like..except patheons that was just confuseing s*** you need to stop playing reruns and finish you dang story though

    uhhhh last time i checked i had Eragon under my favorite books xD I actually saw the movie first and liked it which is what got me into the books..but after reading the books the movie sucks

    (btw about to post profile..still working on this freakishly long history )

    yea your username gives no hint of... well um feminism. The only reason I decided to do reruns is because it was a good excuse to make corrections and becuaese some of these wankers had forgotten important parts of the blood plot. Srry been watching Yugioh the abridged for too long. And i'm glad you've seen the light with the movie. A terrible thing to do to a kick-@ss story. And I might just be done with the reruns and skip to present.

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    FireLordZuko93

    [9243]May 6, 2009
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    Name: Kaiya

    Parents: Ronin and Amaya

    Status: novice waterbender

    Age: 16

    Hair: dark brown, almost black

    Eyes: dark blue

    Height: 5'3"

    Location: a small village in the southern water tribe

    Weapons: daggers

    Appearance: At 5'3", she is pretty short, but is very thin. She is fair skinned unlike many other villagers in the tribe with darker skin. She has very dark brown hair that comes down to her back that she normally has tied in a braid. Her blue eyes tend to stand out from her dark hair.

    She wears a dark blue long sleeved shirt under a lighter blue fitted vest. She has strips of cloth wrapped around both her arms for extra warmth. She also wears a long navy blue skirt with slits in the sides so she can walk. She has thick boots and a fur jacket with a hood when it's cold.

    Personality: Generally quiet and shy, she would rather be in the side lines then in the spotlight. However, if provoked, she can often be very harsh and aggressive. She has always been very quick to learn things which ties in well with her adventurous spirit.

    History: Kaiya's parents died when she was only about a year old. She only knew about her parents through her mother's journal. She read that her parents Ronin and Amaya were both scholars that traveled the world. They were neutral in the war, and were both non-benders. They both lived in Ba Sing Se all their live as refugees, so they decided to go out and see the world on their quest for knowledge. They went around the entire Earth Kingdom first making several scrolls about their customs, bending and many other things. When they went to the Northern Water Tribe, they did the same. Then they returned to Ba Sing Se and sold many of their scrolls at the University (mostly for money and a lighter load to carry around). Right before they left for the Southern Water Tribe however, Amaya discovered she was pregnant. They delayed the trip until almost a year after Kaiya was born.

    On the way to the Southern Water Tribe, they ran into a terrible storm. It diverted the boat off course and the landed a long way from the tribe. After hiking around a few days though, they came upon what looked like a camp. It turns out though that the camp was actually another village of the water tribe. It had about 70 people, mostly women and children, but still several men who at not gone off in the war. Amaya and Ronin decided to stay there, even though none of them were waterbenders who could show their style of bending.

    Everything else she had learned from the villagers.

    One morning after about 5 months later, the villagers woke up hearing a baby crying loudly. Some of them went into Amaya and Ronin's tent and were appalled by what they saw.

    The tent had been completely ransacked. Crates were opened and scrolls were thrown all across the floor, nothing had been left untouched. They saw sighs of a struggle, and then found both Amaya and Ronin dead in a corner. They found Kaiya on the other side of the tent, away from everything else. She was unhurt except for an odd, deep cut on her right forearm that resembled an "S" with an "X" over it. Even though they searched the whole tent and even the whole village, they couldn't find any sigh of the people that had intruded.

    Since that day, Kaiya lived with Taka, the eldest woman of the village who also served as the medicine lady. Taka had no children of her own and was willing to raise Kaiya when no one else wanted to. The village had a fear that the group of people that killed Amaya and Ronin would come back for Kaiya and possibly others.

    Kaiya's childhood was pretty normal. Taka was a very traditional woman however, so she had Kaiya indoors quite a bit teaching her how to run a house and also about different herbs for healing illness. Kaiya disliked it very much, however, and often sneaked out if the house to play. When she was 8 she started watching the boys during their training. She thought learning how to fight was much more interesting than learning about healing so she made watching them a daily habit. She would practice their stances in her spare time and one day Sheng (the man that was teaching the boys) saw her. He noticed how talented she was for someone who had only watched and eventually convinced Taka for him to train Kaiya too. The other boys ignored her, thinking she was weird for taking the class along with them. There was only one who did, his name was Manchu, and he soon became her best friend. After training for the day they would often spend the rest of the day playing together. They were both adventurous so they both would often travel many miles away from the village.

    It was on one of these occasions when Kaiya discovered she was a waterbender. She was ten and she and Manchu had traveled to the ocean looking off a cliff. They were laughing and talking when suddenly Manchu lost his balance and started to fall off the cliff. By some instinct, Kaiya moved her hands and made the snow stop his fall.

    Since no one in the village was a waterbender, she relied on herself and her parents scrolls to teach her. She had always enjoyed her parent's scrolls; since it was the only thing she had left of them, and never let anyone else read them. She didn't understand many of them, but she felt like they were all important. She felt like she might need the information one day, especially if the people who had killed her parents ever came back....

    did i leave anything out? i shortened it quite a bit so i could add some more stuff in the actual story so i hope it all still makes sense

    Edited on 05/06/2009 2:07pm
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    Eman5805

    [9244]May 6, 2009
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    Anybody who reads through 900 pages of this thread has automatically earned the right to join. And hell, first time we've ever seen anyone give names for their parents right off the bat, iirc.

    And it's spelled Rexsten, btw. And as far as he and his father and that whole mess involving him, just forget it. I wasn't taking that story too seriously. Only one I've ever been like that with was Indra.

    And now Van, I guess.
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    Dafoose

    [9245]May 6, 2009
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    Double09nhalf wrote:

    Your actually a girl??? I thought that Dafoose was making fun of you at first until i read your page. And after looking at it, I have to say that i like the zuko evolution pictures. That is really cool. It shows him growing up from a pompous brat to becoming a pompous firelord

    Anywho, I was reaally wondering after reading all those pages: Who's story did you like the most Hmmmm????

    Little note on the side: i noticed that Eragon was one of your favorite movies. And i say DID YOU READ THE BOOKS AT ALL. The movie almost makes a spoof out of the books. I will never forgive the writer for letting that terrible peice of steamy pile of horse what-its make it to the movies for everyones viewing sorrow. Okay i'm done


    Wow, great job fireladyzuko. ^^
    At least we have a librarian here now.

    (i know my story was da best. ;D)
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    Double09nhalf

    [9246]May 6, 2009
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    Dafoose wrote:
    Double09nhalf wrote:

    Your actually a girl??? I thought that Dafoose was making fun of you at first until i read your page. And after looking at it, I have to say that i like the zuko evolution pictures. That is really cool. It shows him growing up from a pompous brat to becoming a pompous firelord

    Anywho, I was reaally wondering after reading all those pages: Who's story did you like the most Hmmmm????

    Little note on the side: i noticed that Eragon was one of your favorite movies. And i say DID YOU READ THE BOOKS AT ALL. The movie almost makes a spoof out of the books. I will never forgive the writer for letting that terrible peice of steamy pile of horse what-its make it to the movies for everyones viewing sorrow. Okay i'm done

    Wow, great job fireladyzuko. ^^ At least we have a librarian here now. (i know my story was da best. ;D)

    And we also know how good a lier you are

    anywho sweet character bio. It look to be a story that i am going to enjoy. keep writing...

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    djdfire

    [9247]May 6, 2009
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    FireLordZuko93 wrote:
    Eman5805 wrote:
    FireLordZuko93 wrote:

    hey guys

    Ive been wanting to join this thing for a while now...but i figured i would need to read everything to know what was going on...it took 5 months but now im probably one of the few people that has read everything

    so yeah... i conciter myself an ok writer (expect my spelling is terrible ) ..so if yall would like fresh blood in the thread id be happy to join i already have a character profile and everything..but im still working on the history

    Holy crap, you actually went through all 920 something pages? Man, that means you read all the crazy mess in the middle with the zombies...
    yeah i did which is why it took sooooo long im such a lurker yeah..wtf was TGL thinking? the first 2 seasons were really good though...i loved Rin and Scorch lolz i thought it was weird that you had rexton sr. (i think i spelled that wrong..) bald orginally
    Whoooa, man my hat goes off 2 ya. Can't believe you read all those pages. Wow, astonishing really.
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    Double09nhalf

    [9248]May 7, 2009
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    Okay since so many people wish me to stop doing reruns then so be it. I acompished what i wanted to do anyway. and so on with it.

    //////////

    Siam - airbender

    Mrs. Yoji - earthbender

    Grandma Chiyo - waterbender

    ~~Siam and Mrs. Yoji say goodbye to ranch and head for the northern temple~~

    /////////////

    The following day began anew with a glorious sunrise that that casts a warm glow upon the earth. Scanning the grassy horizon, Mrs. Yoji began finishing her preparations for their departure. Her face immediately turned to a scowl as she turned to the house.

    "Siam! Siam get your fanny out her or Avatar Roku help me I will drag you out."

    The girl finally made her appearance dressed in her Green blouse with a cloak and travel pants. On her back was a gummy sack containing provisions and her staff. Following up the rear was Grandma Chiyo who was pushing out the half conscious girl.

    "She's here Hana," Chiyo said replying for Siam. "She's just a little tired."

    "Tired? It looks like your pushing a cadaver around. Look at her... it looks like the rigarmortis hasn't set in yet. I pronounce her dead at O' nine hundred."

    Siam swayed her head and opened her blood shot eyes. "Wha... who's dead."

    "Hana," Chiyo said, "Stop teasing her. She was up half the night talking to Kempa. Here take this Siam. It will wake you up."

    Grandma Chiyo handed Siam a small bottle containing a liquid. Siam smelled first and then drank it down in half a gulp. She immediately winced and the sourness and gagged from the taste.

    "This stuff taste horrid," said Siam as her eyes watered. "It tastes like rotten puke with a side of lemon and socks."

    "You have incredible taste buds dear," the woman jested.

    "But why did you give me that stuff? I thought you were going to give me something to wake me up?"

    "Ah, but you are awake dear. So do you think it worked?"

    "Um, well yes but..."

    Mrs. Yoji started walking toward them and interrupted their conversation. "Chiyo, we're heading out now that Siam awake. Siam if you want to fly I can follow you on a boulder. But always make sure you're always in sight of my position."

    Siam grumbled a complaint as she untwisted the wings of her staff and took off. The blue sky seemed to come alive as she gained altitude. She felt a warm pocket of air, reminding her that spring was just about to end as summer approached. After all that had happened Siam had forgotten how much of a release flying was. Her train of thought was disrupted by a boulder that flew up past her and exploded midair. She looked down at the grassy earth with a few sparse trees and realized that she had flown too high.

    "Ok, ok, I get it already... sheesh," Siam pointlessly shouted toward the ground.

    Siam immediately ascended from her current altitude until she could spot Mrs. Yoji. The woman gave her a peeved look but Siam waved her off with a free hand. Then Siam felt like putting on a show. She climbed into the heavens and with all her strength soared at her vertical limit. The clouds flew past her and wetted her cheeks only to be dried a second later by the wind currents that buffeted her.

    When she could go no further she looped backward toward the earth. As she descended Siam bended a path shaped to slice through the air. As she neared the ground she spotted Mrs. Yoji with a look of fear on her face. The reaction made Siam inwardly smile as she aimed for the boulder the older woman was riding on.

    "Siam! What are you... No! Wait...," Mrs. Yoji panicking.

    Then with all her might Siam pulled up and nearly blacked out from it. Before she slammed into the boulder Siam created a square like shape out of the air around her. A moment later she landed softly next to Mrs. Yoji who gave Siam a look of contempt. Siam looked at the woman confused.

    "Wha..."

    Before Siam knew what had happened she found herself buried up to her neck and surrounded by multiple pointy devices made of rock. Standing behind them was a red faced Mrs. Yoji. Siam then realized what she had done and braced herself for the worst.

    "Siam! Do you feel alive mostly when faced with uncertain death? Do you see this," said Mrs. Yoji pointing to her frazzled hair. "I'm getting gray hairs for my troubles concerning you. Here I am constantly saving your sorry butt and in return you almost kill yourself? Well...?"

    Siam look down at the ground and aloud her hair to cloud her face. Mrs. Yoji could not tell what Siam was feeling but only saw several tears fall to the ground.

    "I'm sorry," Siam replied as she sniffled. "I really didn't mean to scare you it is just that... So much violence has happened in such a short amount of time. I do not know how any of this had to happen to me but I cannot help but feel responsible. Riding the air is one of the few ways I can release some of my feeling."
    Mrs. Yoji heart melted along with the spikes pointed at Siam. Siam then felt the earth open up as the ground lifted. But even though she had been freed the girl still felt shackled.

    "I'm sorry," was all Siam could manage through the tears.

    Mrs. Yoji shook her head and walked to Siam, hugging her. "Idiot, you're not sorry at all. You're stubborn, selfish, and very-very stupid. But I love you as if you were the daughter I never wanted."

    Siam started to laugh so hard she got the hiccups.

    "Now," said Mrs. Yoji continuing. "You must be tired from that stunt you pulled so no more flying for you today. I'd stop here but we need to reach the West side of the Kyoshi inlet before nightfall."

    "That's okay I don't mind," Siam replied feeling a little better.

    /////////////

    i anybody needs more of a recap then let me know... please comment and such

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    BaiMaoRieji

    [9249]May 7, 2009
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    It turns out I have a dentist's appointment on Monday, so Tuesday's the day I'll try to get my finale up. Then I have fanfics to update, a site to make, a job to find, a world to take over... Oh, ignore that last one. *shifty eyes*

    Oh, and welcome Fresh Meat- er.. FLZ

    Edited on 05/07/2009 9:01am
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    Eman5805

    [9250]May 7, 2009
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    Dafoose wrote:

    (i know my story was da best. ;D)


    Sure it was, Daf. Sure it was.
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    BaiMaoRieji

    [9251]May 8, 2009
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    New Page!!! (for me anyway)
    Edited on 05/08/2009 7:42am
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    Double09nhalf

    [9252]May 8, 2009
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    New Page!!! (for me anyway)

    WHERE WHERE

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    BaiMaoRieji

    [9253]May 8, 2009
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    My account is set so that There's fifty messages per page on any given forum, so I'm now on page 186.
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    Eman5805

    [9254]May 8, 2009
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    My account is set so that There's fifty messages per page on any given forum, so I'm now on page 186.


    Heh, I'm on 926.
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    Dafoose

    [9255]May 8, 2009
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    Oh, and welcome Fresh Meat- er.. FLZ

    I caught that. xD U r more freshmeat than her... Posting 5 times in a row for the 9000th post and saying "Yata!" Which was completely dorky.
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    Double09nhalf

    [9256]May 8, 2009
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    Yata!!

    I'm on page 463.... I didn't know that you could change the number of posts per page.

    By the way Fireladyzuko as a new member of this forum topic you are required to post something soon... becuase i say so. Naw just kidding but it would be nice if somebody could fre@king post something already.

    Edited on 05/08/2009 5:39pm
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    Hfsdhgfsjgbwer

    [9257]May 8, 2009
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    Name: Laura Takahashi
    Age: 16
    Gender: female
    Weapons: Two yellow fans, dagger with a wooden hilt
    Bending: None
    Nation of Origin: Earth Kingdom

    Personality: When Laura meets new people, she is quiet, but when she gets to know she just talks on and on and on. Laura is very happy most of the time except when she is upset or in the middle of a battle. She gets all worked up about the littlest of things and has moods.

    When she has these so called "moods" she is hard to be around. Laura absolutely hates the Fire Nation considering what they did to her family. Laura wants to go and murder General Zhao. He gave the orders for the attack at the Northern Water Tribe, and the attack on her home.

    Physical Appearance: Laura has long medium brown hair. It is wavy, she has a fringe that covers parts of her eyes. She wears glasses, which are black. Her eyes are a mix of blue, green and grey, with gold/yellow around the macula. Her skin is fair.

    Laura's wears a dress, it is mostly brown. There is a gold band under her chest and a gold band at her waist. The front part of the top part of her dress and the skirt is dark olive green. In between the two gold bands is light green. Her shoes are brown. She has a gold band around her neck.

    History: Before Laura was born. A female Water Bender and a male Earth Bender got married. They were her parents. Yuki Narita and Jon Takahashi. They were married for 15 years, in this time they had two girls. Laura Takahashi and Emilie Takahashi. When Laura was 7 and Emilie was 5 Yuki and Jon broke up. They divorced 1 year later. Yuki moved back to the Southern Water Tribe. But the girls chose to stay with their father, their friends and their school.

    2 years later, the Fire Nation attacked the Southern Water Tribe. Killing Laura's family and her mother. All of Jon's family were already dead at the hand of the Fire Nation before Laura was born. Laura's hatred for the Fire Nation is bottled up inside of her. Fighting to get out. Laura swore that if she met General Zhao, she will fight to the death. Emilie inherited Earth Bending from their father, but Laura is a non-bender.

    Laura and Emilie go to an Earth Kingdom school in Ba Sing Se, where they were born and raised. Jon is a full time guard of the royal palace. Laura and Emilie don't see much of him. Emilie is always practicing Earth Bending with her friends. When she was 12, Laura went to Kyoshi Island and trained to be a Kyoshi warrior. When she turned 15, she became the leader. A year later, Laura left Kyoshi Island and moved back to Ba Sing Se, taking the skills she learnt with her.
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    Hfsdhgfsjgbwer

    [9258]May 8, 2009
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    I forget, is it an RPG or you just post stories, im not quite sure
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    Dafoose

    [9260]May 8, 2009
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    Hfsdhgfsjgbwer wrote:
    I forget, is it an RPG or you just post stories, im not quite sure

    Yup, that's what it is.
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