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    ThatLostGuy

    [9201]Apr 21, 2009
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    Um.... I just made out with her again today so think what you want people.
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    Dafoose

    [9202]Apr 21, 2009
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    Um.... I just made out with her again today so think what you want people.

    Again, information on a need to know basis and I did not need to know that.

    In addition, I'm sure you're not taking teddy bears and homosexuality references from these guys seriously. xD
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    djdfire

    [9203]Apr 21, 2009
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    God, I've put this off long enough. I am actually going to start re-writing my finale post... After finals are done... which will be in about 3 weeks. Damn you, college.
    Anyway, after my story is done (whenever that will be) I plan to join up with Eman, unless DJ says otherwise. I promised him that after he waded through my endless filler and crap, I'd follow his storyline. If he still has one. And if he's still here.
    I'M STILL HERE!! lol. And I think it would be best for you to join up with Eman since I don't have a storyline at the moment (the I had before I started to get annoyed with for some reason).
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    Double09nhalf

    [9204]Apr 22, 2009
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    Dafoose wrote:
    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    Um.... I just made out with her again today so think what you want people.
    Again, information on a need to know basis and I did not need to know that. In addition, I'm sure you're not taking teddy bears and homosexuality references from these guys seriously. xD

    I think its getting to the point where we need to do something so he will quit spamming. If he'd stick to the site/forum topic then its all fun and laughes but he doesn't take the topic seriously and is only here to drawing attention to himself for kicks. this is a seriously terrible way to fill up a page.

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    Double09nhalf

    [9205]Apr 22, 2009
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    Hey dafoose I sent you an email. Let me know if you recieved it.
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    Dafoose

    [9206]Apr 22, 2009
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    Double09nhalf wrote:
    Hey dafoose I sent you an email. Let me know if you recieved it.

    Aye, I gots it. ;P
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    David-E-Oliver

    [9207]Apr 24, 2009
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    Suppose the Fire Lord had surrendered to Aang. Would Aang had still take away his bending powers? Also would Sukie have killed Aang if he had not been the Avatar? I noticed when they first meet the Koshie Warriors tried to kill them all. If the Iroi son had lived would he had succeeded in defeating Ba Sin Se?
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    Double09nhalf

    [9208]Apr 24, 2009
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    David-E-Oliver wrote:
    Suppose the Fire Lord had surrendered to Aang. Would Aang had still take away his bending powers? Also would Sukie have killed Aang if he had not been the Avatar? I noticed when they first meet the Koshie Warriors tried to kill them all. If the Iroi son had lived would he had succeeded in defeating Ba Sin Se?

    1st question - interesting

    2nd question - I don't think they were going to be killed either way. Avatar and co were just captured and bound.

    3rd question - very interesting.

    Now my question - what's your point? Are you going to write a story about your what-ifs. If not then agian i ask you: what's your point?

    PS: Post!!!!

    ////////////

    Siam - airbender

    Mizuhiro - firebender

    Master Ikasoruk - firebender and sword master

    ~~Flying just South of a small town in the forest that's NorthEast of the western coastline~~

    /////////////////////

    They had been flying for almost a week over forest and rocky mountains. Looking at the terrain Mizuhiro guesstimated that they were roughly halfway to the Western Air Temple. With winter coming the weather front's had caused the wind to be in opposition to their flying. The weather coupled with their tight schedule made Siam uptight and gave the rest cabin fever. With Kempa nearly at exhaustion they decided to land in a tall grassy field that was two miles outside a nearby village.

    With a small circle of stamped grass they set up camp. The tents were no problem but the set up for the fire would be tricky. They had to dig it wide enough so it wouldn't start the grass on fire and they couldn't use the grass for fuel because it would create more smoke than they cared for. Even though they made a couple trips for wood they decided to save what little they had for making dinner.

    With that taken care of the next item on the agenda was food and other supplies such as heavier clothes and blankets for the upcoming weather. Siam and Mizuhiro decided they would go while Master Ikasoruk prepared dinner. But as Siam was about to leave Mizuhiro stopped her.

    "Um, Siam, I got something to tell you. You see my dad is a rich and important official in the fire nation. You probably could say that this is why I am so interested. But the problem is that he might be looking for me or at least set up posters."

    Siam pondered for a minute then snapped her fingers. Going through her clothes she pulled out faded dark green pants with a brown top.

    "That's a little big for me," said Mizuhiro confused.

    "Actually it's for me. This is yours."

    She pulled out a brown jumper and a bandana. Mizuhiro immediately made the chocking sign.

    "C'mon... they will be looking for a boy and besides this will bring out your brunette hair."

    Without saying anything Mizuhiro grabbed the clothes and headed for the tent. He came out a moment later looking sheepishly. "Um, how do I look?"

    "Like you just came out of the closet, er tent."

    "Har, har. I mean would I pass for, you know, a girl?"

    Siam looked at him then reached into her supplies and got out her makeup. "Hold still. okay?"

    She made his lips darker and extended his eyelashes then finished up with making his cheeks redder. Satisfied with her work she put the makeup away.

    "Okay, let's head out," proclaimed Siam. "Oh and you're the silent one and I do all the talking."

    "You'll pay for this," replied Mizuhiro in his frustration.

    "Now, now. You have to be a cheerful little sister. You look like a cross-dresser when you're angry. Master Ikasoruk we are heading out now. We'll come back late so no one will find us."

    ~~~~~~~~~~~

    "How do girls walk in these things," complained Mizuhiro.

    Siam looked at him and tried to suppress a laugh, "It would have been easier if all you had worn was the girls clothes."

    "Yes, but that would have been completely weird. And besides if something does happen I not going to be caught dead wearing this."

    The road to the little town was a very hard one. This was mostly because there wasn't one and they were trying not to create one, at least not until they made their way back. When they thought nobody was looking Siam and Mizuhiro jumped onto the main road leading out.

    As they neared the town they took note that it wasn't small at all. In fact it could make for a small city but with all the trees hiding it one could never tell. The first thing Siam bought was a woven hand basket for Mizuhiro to carry. From there they went to the various stories stores to gather the dried fruits and salted meats they required. During this time they got into a deep discussion.

    "Say Siam, did you really know your parents? I mean really know them," said Mizuhiro.

    Siam didn't say anything for a while. Either she was pondering the question or to Siam the memories were still too painful. Whatever the case was she answered Mizuhiro a moment later.

    "I really did know them," She replied, "They were wonderful and considerate. Whenever they had free time they always used it on me. We would spar together or fly into the purple and red clouds at sunset. They gave me my first glider staff. I loved them and they loved me back. What about your parents?"

    "All I remember about my mother was her sad face. She died when I was young and so that's all I can recall."

    "I'm sorry."

    "Don't be. I'm the one that brought the subject up. But you see my dad was also an important official. He has ambitions about making the world a better place. But in order to do this he needs to find the next avatar or else all is lost. The astrologers told him that the next avatar is suppose to be an airbender."

    Mizuhiro started to laugh at himself. Siam started looking at him weird "What is so funny?"

    Mizuhiro replied, "Even though I don't care about my father I'm carrying out his work by protecting you. Funny isn't it?"

    Siam was about to explain something but was interrupted by the (Thwock, Thwok) of a hammer. It was then that they saw a fire nation quad standing outside the town hall. Two of them were posted outside the main entrance and on more was nailing a piece of paper to the wall with a hammer.

    Suddenly a large bell bellowed and swarms of people gathered outside the doors of the town hall. People started to push to get a better look causing Siam and Mizuhiro to be separated in the masses. Siam was just about to fed up with the crowd when the doubles doors to the building opened up and two figures walked out. One was wearing long robes and wore spectacles and the other a red fire nation uniform. From what Siam could tell he had to be either a commander or a captain in the fire nation. The man wearing the spectacles came forward and spoke.

    "Thank you for coming my fellow citizens. The man who stands before you is commander Tseng. He has some important information to tell you so please listen carefully."

    The man stepped back and bowed to commander Tseng who also bowed back.

    "Thank you for coming so quickly," he started, "... I know you fine people have work to do so I'll be quick. There is a fire nation traitor who has been spotted south of here and is reported to have been heading north."

    The commander then proceeded to take one of the scrolls from his underling and unfolded it. On the front of it was a picture of Mizuhiro's face. Siam nearly jumped and hoped no one would notice how nervous she was.

    The Commander went on, "If you see him please report your findings to us. Do not attempt to take him on by yourself for he is very dangerous. Already he has murdered..."

    "No! You're the murderer," Someone cried out.

    A figure appeared in the middle of the crowd. The person wore all white with a black mask. Everyone scattered as the unknown figure brandished a curved sword that split in half. Crouching into position the person lunged at the commander bringing both blades down to cleave him in half. As the blades were about to come down the butt end of a staff struck the person in the face and sent him sprawling. As the person got up the cracked mask fell off. Siam knew she shouldn't have been surprise but she was.

    "Mizuhiro?"

    Most of the crowd had already scattered or was in the process of doing so. With the masses starting to thin Siam wondered if she should follow suit for fear of being caught. Siam made her decision and ran with the crowd. But instead of fleeing for safety she went around a building and hid with in hearing distance. She looked at the commander who had just unsheathed his hand and a half sword and pointed it at Mizuhiro.

    "Thank you for saving us the trouble of having to search for the troublesome needle in the haystack. Now if you will come quietly so I don't have to dispatch you.

    Mizuhiro looked at the commander in rage, "Dispatch me? Like you did my father? He was a fool for trusting you. I'd have to be crazy just to give myself up to the likes of you; you traitor."

    The commander threw off his mask revealing a huge gash that ran through where his eye used to be.

    "Your father was a both crazy and a traitor. And I've got reason to believe that you're no different than your old man."

    At that moment Mizuhiro snapped like a twig. He swung his blades in a circular motion over his head. The blades lit on fire and burned bright red. But as he swung them the heat increase until each blade burned dark blue. With his eyes almost burning the same color Mizuhiro brought his blades down to his sides and approached the commander.

    "My Father wasn't crazy! He died for what he believed in!"

    Mizuhiro suddenly crouched with both his blades and with all his might swung the blades around him sending a shockwave of deadly blue heat. As the wave approached the soldiers they tried to counter it with a fire shield of their own. But as the wave broke upon them they were cut down by its ferocity and killed. Seeing the inferiority of blocking the attack the commander leapt with a single bound over the flame.

    When the flame approached Siam she just made it by ducking under. The flame tore five feet into any building it touched and set the town afire like it was a roman candle. With everything in sight burning Siam knew it was time to leave. She went over to the spot where she had last seen Mizuhiro only to find him unconscious on the ground. Siam turned to leave when she heard a voice behind her.

    "You can't take him, he's coming with me."

    Siam turned around to find the slightly singed commander pointing his sword at her. She quickly took out her whistle with one hand and air-bended into it.

    "Why do you want him," replied Siam.

    "He is an atrocity and a monster for his idea's and you would do well to hand him over."

    Come on, come on, she thought. She knew one of two things would happen in the next minute and Siam was hoping for the later.

    "I am sorry miss but if you don't hand him over..."

    "ROOOOAAR."

    The all too familiar sound rang though the blazing fire as the flying buffalo swooped in and charged the commander sending him flying ten feet and unconscious. A figure jumped off of Kempa's back and grabbed Mizuhiro from Siam.

    "Master Ikasoruk."

    Siam was about to jump on as well but as luck would have it she found the basket Mizuhiro had been carrying with all the supplies intact. With everything set and ready Kempa pushed off the ground with his mighty legs and burst through the flames leaving a smoke funnel in his wake.

    Siam sorrowfully turned around to take one last glimpse of the beautiful little city as it was turning to ash. The sight burned in her eyes as she watched the remaining townspeople crying because they could not put out the fire for fear of the being trampled by the falling trees.

    ////////////////

    Edited on 04/24/2009 8:49pm
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    David-E-Oliver

    [9209]Apr 25, 2009
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    Azalan is walking thru the forest (minding his own buisness) and he enters a clearing and sees the Aang and Co. He immediately goes into combat stance preparing to strike (then it dawns on him that he is not a bender). The Aang and his gang surround him and this is how it turned out.

    "I challenge the Avatar to a one-on-one duel, right here, right now!" said Azalan

    "I would rather not fight you; and if you join us we will treat you well," said Aang hopefully.

    "NEVER, I could never betray the Fire Nation!" snaps Azalan hotly.

    "We know you have no bending powers!" said Sokka as he points his sword at him.

    "And I got every reason to hate you!" said Katara

    "Let me bury him!" said Tophe

    (to be continued) - [Sorry I had things I had to do; but I will finish it up as soon as possible.]

    Edited on 04/25/2009 6:05pm
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    Dafoose

    [9210]Apr 25, 2009
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    Well, uh, if you wanted to intertwine with our stories, you can't have an Avatar and your characters have to be original.
    That's the main rule of thumb in this rpg if you want to join stories with the other writers.

    Otherwise you would be posting lonely posts among people rping without you. xD
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    Eman5805

    [9211]Apr 25, 2009
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    Uh...who is Azalan and Toffe?
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    ThatLostGuy

    [9212]Apr 25, 2009
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    Should I bring Brewster back??

    Or make a new character?
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    Eman5805

    [9213]Apr 25, 2009
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    If he doesn't have as ridiculous a name as Biff Brewster, I'm fine with it. I could deal with Willy Woo.

    I just can't take any post with a character bearing that name for serious.
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    Dafoose

    [9214]Apr 25, 2009
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    At least make your character Hungarian. XD
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    David-E-Oliver

    [9215]Apr 26, 2009
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    'Azalan take a step back and realizes he is outnumbered four to one.

    "Look, we know you can't fire bend; so why don't you just give it up?" said Sakka

    "I want to fight the Avatar! But first I want him to promise not to air bender," said Azalan.

    "Why should we fight on your terms?" said Tophe

    "Because I'm outnumbered four to one and I want a fair fight. Besides I wasn't even looking for you!" said Azalan.

    Edited on 04/26/2009 8:29am
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    Dafoose

    [9216]Apr 26, 2009
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    Alright, you can continue with your rpg, but like I said before, you won't have anything in common with the others who are RPGing because none of us are using characters or sound alike characters from the show and none of us are using an Avatar.
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    Eman5805

    [9217]Apr 26, 2009
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    It's spelled Sokka, Azula, and Toph, btw.
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    Dafoose

    [9218]Apr 26, 2009
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    Eman5805 wrote:
    It's spelled Sokka, Azula, and Toph, btw.

    Wow. I thought they were just adaptations of the same characters...Seriously, that many mispellings?
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    Dafoose

    [9219]Apr 26, 2009
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    Ok, I'm just saying this to motivate myself...
    But on June 1st, I will type the next installment for my story.
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    Double09nhalf

    [9220]Apr 26, 2009
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    Hey dafoose. I know your the leading authority and all but if David E Oliver will stick with it. I would like to see him write a story using A avatar and his what-ifs. My only requirement is that he doesn't use Aang (mostly because he's got the personality all wrong) or any of the characters from the show. This is a new season and if it matters i'm putting out my opinion.
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