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    Dafoose

    [8981]Mar 12, 2009
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    Double09nhalf wrote:

    The whole money issue in the beginning didn't make sense(or gold) to me.

    Oh, I get it. sense, cents.

    Post cometh soon, as Spring Break doth approach.


    I love surplus puns.
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    confucioussayhi

    [8982]Mar 13, 2009
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    Double09nhalf wrote:

    Dafoose wrote:
    Nice. I liked the setting of the tavern or bar Kibu was in, with the plum wine and the paper lanterns. I got a good image too. And i understand most everything clearly. xD keep it up man.

    You could? I couldn't make heads or tales of the first part. The whole money issue in the beginning didn't make sense(or gold) to me. But i liked the rest.

    So is your preference plum wine hmmm. And that bar scene in latter half... I know that place

    Kibu was angry because the price was so much higher than the last time he rented an ostrichhorse. The price last time was ten gold pieces and three silver pieces, but this time, it was 25 gold pieces. So he stole it and left the guy nine gold pieces, plus the one he had thrown at his head.

    I don't think the currency was ever really explained in the show, so I figured that ten copper pieces=one silver piece and five silver pieces=one gold piece. Money plays a big role, this being a story about a thief, so I needed some standardization. Nobody else has to use this system if they don't want.

    Sorry for the confusion nein.
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    Dafoose

    [8983]Mar 13, 2009
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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    Double09nhalf wrote:

    Dafoose wrote:
    Nice. I liked the setting of the tavern or bar Kibu was in, with the plum wine and the paper lanterns. I got a good image too. And i understand most everything clearly. xD keep it up man.

    You could? I couldn't make heads or tales of the first part. The whole money issue in the beginning didn't make sense(or gold) to me. But i liked the rest.

    So is your preference plum wine hmmm. And that bar scene in latter half... I know that place

    Kibu was angry because the price was so much higher than the last time he rented an ostrichhorse. The price last time was ten gold pieces and three silver pieces, but this time, it was 25 gold pieces. So he stole it and left the guy nine gold pieces, plus the one he had thrown at his head.

    I don't think the currency was ever really explained in the show, so I figured that ten copper pieces=one silver piece and five silver pieces=one gold piece. Money plays a big role, this being a story about a thief, so I needed some standardization. Nobody else has to use this system if they don't want.

    Sorry for the confusion nein.

    Oh, Kibu stole it? I missed that part, but I had the feeling he stole something when you mentioned him smiling. xD
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    Double09nhalf

    [8984]Mar 13, 2009
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    Dafoose wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    Double09nhalf wrote:

    Dafoose wrote:
    Nice. I liked the setting of the tavern or bar Kibu was in, with the plum wine and the paper lanterns. I got a good image too. And i understand most everything clearly. xD keep it up man.

    You could? I couldn't make heads or tales of the first part. The whole money issue in the beginning didn't make sense(or gold) to me. But i liked the rest.

    So is your preference plum wine hmmm. And that bar scene in latter half... I know that place

    Kibu was angry because the price was so much higher than the last time he rented an ostrichhorse. The price last time was ten gold pieces and three silver pieces, but this time, it was 25 gold pieces. So he stole it and left the guy nine gold pieces, plus the one he had thrown at his head. I don't think the currency was ever really explained in the show, so I figured that ten copper pieces=one silver piece and five silver pieces=one gold piece. Money plays a big role, this being a story about a thief, so I needed some standardization. Nobody else has to use this system if they don't want. Sorry for the confusion nein.
    Oh, Kibu stole it? I missed that part, but I had the feeling he stole something when you mentioned him smiling. xD

    No, no it's cool. I just didn't get your math until you explained it. okay cool

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    Double09nhalf

    [8985]Mar 13, 2009
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    And now for my post. I hope you like it. It may be a bit (but just a little) science stretched but meh.

    I had the last part checked with dafoose so to you booers

    enjoy:

    ps take note of certain parts

    ////////////////

    Mrs. Yoji - earthbender

    Sister - waterbender

    ~~Mrs. Yoji is confronting her assailant just after seeing her son and Siam sucked down into the earth~~

    /////////////////

    Mrs. Yoji felt the earth move below her and turned around to see her son and Siam swallowed whole by a giant skull that sank into the earth. She immediately punched a hole in the ground but found that she couldn't make it past the frost line in the soil. Now facing her giggling opponent Mrs. Yoji clenched her fist and brought her feet to the appropriate stance.

    "You want to play," bellowed the girl in laughter and the unfinished crystal around her neck started to glow brightly. The sister then proceeded to collect vast amounts of the rain that poured around her. She formed them into numerous icy needles, all pointing at Mrs. Yoji.

    "Let's have some fun," the sister screamed as she unleashed her attack. The tiny daggers charged at the old woman with a deadly desire. To the girl's surprise, Mrs. Yoji just stood there with her hands in the sky.

    "She's given herself up already," the sister pouted.

    Where Mrs. Yoji had been standing now stood a massive pillar of ice that pierced the ground in an area big enough for a small house. The sister approached slowly as she tip-toed on her icy footholds. She tried to glimpse into the pillar to see any remains but jumped back when she heard a slicing noise.

    (Kashink)

    The sister saw a metal knife a thin as paper extend from the pillar and then slice the entire thing in a circle. The entire top half was then kicked skyward at the sister. The icy boulder then turned into a mist before it hit the sister.

    "Why no die," exclaimed the sister.

    Mrs. Yoji jumped to a safe distance away from the shard brushing the sweat from her forehead.

    "Hmmph, being up in the sky for so long has simply made you an airhead. But fine, to put it simply, rain is not as clean as you would think. In fact, rain the compilation of water particles around very fine particles of dust. In this form I wouldn't be able to control anything but when you turned the rain into a solid form I was able to manipulate them from the moment they were no longer under your control. You may control the seventy-one percent of the earth's surface... But I control the rest!"

    Mrs. Yoji fell backwards onto the ground and sank into it. She came up a second later covered in army made of rock. Then stamping her foot in the ground she vaulted backward onto a pillar that shot Mrs. Yoji at her target. Several icy walls came crashing down upon her but were slashed through by a blade that extended from the woman's forearm. As her velocity propelled the woman toward the sister, Mrs. Yoji extended spikes from all pointes of her armor.

    (Shashink)

    Mrs. Yoji peered at her assailant who, for some reason, still appeared to be smiling.

    Did I miss, Mrs. Yoji wondered. She examined her enemy to find that both blades extended from her forearms had pierced the sister's hands: almost splitting them in half lengthwise. Mrs. Yoji then stared at her opponent's face to find that the eyes were opaque.

    She's unconscious... no she is asleep, Mrs. Yoji concluded.

    "You, who are you," gasped Mrs. Yoji.

    The girl looked up and smiled as big as she could. "I, am... SISTER!"

    The sister kicked in the stomach sending her skyward.

    "Your domain? Mine, mine, my domain!"

    Spikes of all sizes surrounded Mrs. Yoji and pounded her in every direction. But while none of them could pierce the rocky armor, the woman was being pummeled alive. As her momentum finally ceased Mrs. Yoji found herself feeling weightless and lightheaded. She tried to angle herself head first but something landed on her chest. It was the sister who had landed her body on several spikes which pierced her legs to the armor. Mrs. Yoji then noticed that the unfinished crystal the girl wore was shining even brighter. The girl then proceeded to pound Mrs. Yoji's chest armor with fists encased in ice. The armor started to give in to the poundings as seeing that there were several large indentations in it.

    "Die, die, die," laughed the girl as they fell. "Now... Goodbye."

    The sister removed herself from Mrs. Yoji just in time to see the body plunge into the ground.

    "You die in your domain now," the sister commented.

    The armor hit the ground with a resounding thud almost broke apart. The girl then ran in circles in the sky around it. She only stopped when the armor got to its feet.

    "Why won't you die," the sister complained.

    The sister shot two spikes that smacked Mrs. Yoji's armor in the back of the legs in order to trip her. The girl then made a blade of ice and split the armor in half, splattering warm goo everywhere. Sitting back on the ground the sister laughed as she hugged her bloody knees.

    "Hah ha ha... eh?"

    The girl's laughter was cut short when four arms reached out of the ground and grabbed her by her arms and legs, forcing her to stand. In her anger a thousand icicles came flying at her restraints but were repelled by walls of rock that arose from the ground.

    "I'm sorry," said Mrs. Yoji as she surfaced from the earth. "I'm sorry about your predicament and if I could, I would try to release you but you have forced my hand."

    The girl stood there in the rain and started laughing again. As she did a huge block of ice formed over Mrs. Yoji and kept growing.

    "But as for you...," Mrs. Yoji said. "I will make your death as quick as possible and rid this world of your presence. Now I ask you, do you know why I picked this area to live. It's because of all the metals and minerals this area contains!"

    The woman then began to surface to shiny fragments of metal and began spinning them around the sister.

    (zak, zak)

    Electricity began coursing through the rain drenched girl as the two magnets spun faster. The sister screamed in an outrage and sent the block of ice plummeting toward Mrs. Yoji.

    "No, no, no NOOOO," screamed the girl as the unfinished crystal around her neck shattered. It was in this moment that the block of ice above Mrs. Yoji collapsed into a puddle of water that drenched her. She immediately ran over to the sister and caught her before she fell.

    "Thank you," the girl said as she coughed. "Is the nightmare finally over?"

    Mrs. Yoji stared into the girl's eyes, seeing that they were no longer opaque. "Yes."

    The girl then died with a real smile on her lips.

    //////////////////

    comment or die... please

    Looking back i think i kinda rushed the ending d@mn oh well...

    Edited on 03/17/2009 12:30pm
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    Double09nhalf

    [8986]Mar 13, 2009
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    Dafoose wrote:
    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    Double09nhalf wrote:

    The whole money issue in the beginning didn't make sense(or gold) to me.

    Oh, I get it. sense, cents.

    Post cometh soon, as Spring Break doth approach.

    I love surplus puns.

    If you want a surplus pun look at the American economy. It is almost hilarious

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    BaiMaoRieji

    [8987]Mar 13, 2009
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    Double09nhalf

    [8988]Mar 13, 2009
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    14

    Um

    69

    naa just kidding

    and actually you'ld be 13

    cause i'm 12

    Edited on 03/13/2009 3:42pm
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    Rock_Goddess_18

    [8989]Mar 13, 2009
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    Since the title says you can create your own bender, I'll try making my own bender too.

    Name: Harris Scorcher

    Type: Fire-Bender

    Age: 37

    Birthday: 6/22/1971

    Gender: Male.

    Description: He does fire studying for a living and makes deals with any pirates he comes across for profit or rare items. He likes to travel around the woods looking for creatures to hunt or observe. He has never successfulyl become a Fire Nation Soldier. He is just a local villager. He practices to become better at fire-bending every day. I will post more information about him later.

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    Dafoose

    [8990]Mar 13, 2009
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    Rock_Goddess_18 wrote:

    Since the title says you can create your own bender, I'll try making my own bender too.

    Name: Harris Scorcher

    Type: Fire-Bender

    Age: 37

    Birthday: 6/22/1971

    Gender: Male.

    Description: He does fire studying for a living and makes deals with any pirates he comes across for profit or rare items. He likes to travel around the woods looking for creatures to hunt or observe. He has never successfulyl become a Fire Nation Soldier. He is just a local villager. He practices to become better at fire-bending every day. I will post more information about him later.


    Hmm, I look forward to the pending information.
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    BaiMaoRieji

    [8991]Mar 14, 2009
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    Rock_Goddess_18 wrote:

    Since the title says you can create your own bender, I'll try making my own bender too.

    Name: Harris Scorcher

    Type: Fire-Bender

    Age: 37

    Birthday: 6/22/1971

    Gender: Male.

    Description: He does fire studying for a living and makes deals with any pirates he comes across for profit or rare items. He likes to travel around the woods looking for creatures to hunt or observe. He has never successfulyl become a Fire Nation Soldier. He is just a local villager. He practices to become better at fire-bending every day. I will post more information about him later.

    No offense, but it will be in your best interest to give him an Asian-sounding name.

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    djdfire

    [8992]Mar 14, 2009
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    Ariel (waterbender), Chase (firebender)

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    Chas watched as his cousin repeatedly attack a sand sculpture of himself, angry at the sudden turn of events. He turned to Lu Ten who was beside him watching as well.

    "This is ridiculous. We need to come up with something or else we won't be able win this battle. And you know how much I hate losing, especially a fight." Chase stated

    "I don't know what we could do. All I know is that we need more troops and quickly or else we will lose.", Lu Ten state back. Then a thought came to Chase.

    "Lu Ten I think I know how to get more troops!" Chase exclaimed.

    "How?", Lu Ten asked curiously.

    "Back in my days as a general we used to use this island as a training ground. Plus we also these little devices that helped us locate each other in case we are attacked, need each other, or any other important reasons. Everybody that was under my command was required to have one and to keep until I say they said they weren't need anymore." Chase explained.

    "Oh ok. But how do you they have it, you were pronounced dead for almost 10 yrs. What makes you think they would still want to keep the devices?" Lu Ten asked.

    "Because, I didn't tell they they didn't need them anymore. My troops were very loyal to me and understood to still carry my commands, even if I were to die.", Chase stated. He then reached into his bag and pulled out this small pouch full of little stones.

    "Ok, when I throw this stone up, I'm going to hit it with a blast of lightning and it's to light up and illuminate the sky." Chase stated as took out one of the stones.

    "Umm ok, that's nice and all. But how do you know that they will see it?" Lu Ten asked.

    "These stones produce an enormous amount of bright red light that is capable of being seen throughout the entire Earth Kingdom if it is hit with a powerful enough blast. Trust me they'll see it, and we'll get a response." Chase answered.

    "I hope so", Lu Ten stated as he watched Chase through the stone up high in the air. Chase then quickly conjured up his lightning and shot it towards the stone. It struck dead on, lighting up the sky with an enourmous bright red light shining over the island. Lu Ten looked at the light in awe, while Chase looked towards the sky, praying for a response. Minutes, he saw lightning fly up and another bright red light shone in the distance. Soon others followed and the sky was soon almost lit up completely in the bright red light. Chase was filled with triumph as he saw his old troops respond to his call for help.

    "I've got to hand it to ya, you've got some of the most loyal troops that I've ever seen." Lu Ten commented

    "Yeah man, I know" Chase responded.

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    Wow, I haven't posted part of my story in months but oh well here it is. It feels a lil rusty but hopefully it shall suffice for now.

    Edited on 03/14/2009 8:01am
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    BaiMaoRieji

    [8993]Mar 14, 2009
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    DJ is back!
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    BaiMaoRieji

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    BaiMaoRieji

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    I did it!!! YA TAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VPG1Bkmu52g&feature=channel_page

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LzSWdj4izHM&feature=related

    Edited on 03/14/2009 8:50am
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