Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
| -TheSecondSign- wrote: |
I can't believe no one is wondering what The End will do... Did everyone stop liking my story? Does it need more Itami craziness? Also, you college boys are lamers. MY institute of higher learning is in Chicago. Guess where I'M going! |
Great Lakes Illinois Navy Training Facility.
Then my A School for Master at Arms, then additional voluntary training to become an IA(Soldier), then most likely a deployment somewhere extremely hot where people bomb themselves.
| -TheSecondSign- wrote: |
Great Lakes Illinois Navy Training Facility. Then my A School for Master at Arms, then additional voluntary training to become an IA(Soldier), then most likely a deployment somewhere extremely hot where people bomb themselves. |
The End will make your baddie seem like a three year old with no arms.
His firebending is just at the point where if it were anymore powerful, Dafoose would probably make me decrease it.
You won't see all that yet, that's for the last part of the series, but you will see a tiny glimpse of just what he can do.
| -TheSecondSign- wrote: |
The End will make your baddie seem like a three year old with no arms. His firebending is just at the point where if it were anymore powerful, Dafoose would probably make me decrease it. You won't see all that yet, that's for the last part of the series, but you will see a tiny glimpse of just what he can do. |
Yeah, but I need to rewrite the last part. It may be up by friday.
An old character everyone really seemed to like comes back!
| -TheSecondSign- wrote: |
| Great Lakes Illinois Navy Training Facility. Then my A School for Master at Arms, then additional voluntary training to become an IA(Soldier), then most likely a deployment somewhere extremely hot where people bomb themselves. |
Sweet another sailor, Hoorah!!!
Seriously though you should cross rate over to the Seabees (Construction battalion) Cause we rock.
Plus, you can take just about any CB rate and use it for a civillian job(looks tight on a resume as well)
Enjoy boot camp
I intend to enjoy every moment of it.
Sorry about how long it's taking, but there's a really, really big battle scene where basically one guy fends off like twelve people, so it has to be written perfectly.
| -TheSecondSign- wrote: |
Sorry about how long it's taking, but there's a really, really big battle scene where basically one guy fends off like twelve people, so it has to be written perfectly. |
| Dafoose wrote: | ||
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By the way dafoose i made the post longer
Let me know what you think... i'll post them all when i'm through with the scene setting (if you know what i mean) then i'll post.
And i'll be posting soon too.
| confucioussayhi wrote: |
| Wow, it died in here... Truth be told, I'm waiting for someone to say "Finale time!". I'm not much for filler. Since I've got the whole thing written in my head, and it's a 4 or 5 part finale. We can't do finale time until everybody's ready, especially Chad, who I haven't talked to in awhile. I think he has some more stuff to do before we get to the big volcano scene. |
| Dafoose wrote: | ||
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Dafoose as you know i am finishing up my first season... Getting there anyway.
For intensive purposes, some useless filler has been skipped. After this, we can skip right to Tao Lin (or whatever) Bay. I'll try to make this short (and mushy) as possible.
Bai Mao (firebender, Pudao)
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The past few days went by slowly, mainly because Jasmine's pregnancy was moving along. Back pain, constant tiredness, and the occasional complaint that my child was performing a gymnastics routine on her bladder were all there. I had threatened many times to carry her, but as we were currently broken up, we could barely talk to each other anymore.
One night, when we were close to Tao Lin Bay, I awoke to strange noises coming from Jasmine's tent. They sounded choked and choppy. I went in and found Jasmine crying. She turned as I entered.
Jasmine: What do you want?
B'ao: I heard you crying. What's wrong?
Her voice was choked and sobbing.
Jasmine: Like you don't know. We were boyfriend and girlfriend for a year. I always knew that it wouldn't last, but I kept it up. I couldn't leave you. Then, you made me fall in love with you, I'm about to have your baby, and You're leaving me for your ex! Wouldn't you be sad?
B'ao: I'm sorry. I never meant to hurt you.
Jasmine: But you did.
B'ao: You hurt me first. You never realized that I said that I had to choose? You know I love Rieji, I told you everything about my past. The fact that I was conflicted about what to do didn't mean anything to you?
Jasmine looked at me as if she were seeing through my soul. Then she got up and wrapped her arms around me. I stayed in her embrace for a long time, then spoke.
B'ao: Would you give me another chance, and let me choose for myself?
Jasmine only smiled and nodded. I kissed her forehead and left.
