Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
BaiMaoRieji wrote: |
Anoyne realize that an asterisk has been added to our thread title? |
-TheSecondSign- wrote: |
Well the only one who can do that is the guy who makes the topic... |
Part II will be up soon.
The End will show a small demonstration of his power.
Samei-Water bending assassin
Location-Tavern's backroom
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Scarlet Rose
Part 2
"OK,so I understand everything.Just one question,when was her last kill?"Samei leaned back on her little wooden chair as she waited for the awnser."o,about 5 seconds ago"he replied,Samei straightened the chair and looked around.Everything was fine.How did he know?She was about to ask when Dirk whispered "Shoot" and fell to the floor,scarlet blood started to spread on the floor,and a rose stood very still in the wall across from him,it had cut his throat as it flew through the air.A figure stood behind him,it spoke "So,trying to get rid of me,brother?How rude.".She started to walk towards the man when a blood-covered rose flew right by her neck.Samei had plucked it out of the wall and attempted to use it against it's very owner."Bad,thats my pay check your trying to kill.".She drew her sword and stood waiting for the woman to attack "Thanks for eliminating some of my competition" she continued "that may help me a little,he was getting on my last nerve."She finished and charged at Rose.
"I could do without you to,though" she said as she went to stab Rose.Rose dodged and drew a sword,It seemed custom made,a rose pattern in it's handle.Samei decided to defend until the full moon gave her extreme power.The woman showed excellent skill,but not much stamina.She was fatigued before long.The full moon rose.Samei created tiny,but sharp,ice particles.They were see through,and therfore,invisable.A perfect attack.All Samei had to do was close her hand to a fist and Rose would be impaled with hundreds of little ice daggers."Gonna kill me with water bending than?" Samei nearly dropped all of the ice particles in shock "But how--"."If your trained it's easy to find these things out.".Samei nodded and quickly closed her fist,making the death fast but not painless.The sword and martial artist sat,mouths open and eyes wide."Uh" was the only word out of thier mouths.
Samei walked over to the man."Ok,that was easy money,so,i'll take my pay now."
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Not alot of detail I know,but what do u expect from a 7th grader?
ThatLostGuy wrote: |
What's with all the TLG hate people!??! HAHHAHA I'M IN COLLEGE NOW It is AMAZING!! I've already gotten with a two sophomores and one junior Anyways, it's hard for me to succom some time, but it'll be coming soon. It's Labor Day Weekend this weekend, meaning NO CLASS ON MONDAY!! Also, on Friday I have the lowest of the low... one class. So expect me to be back. It's just tough to log on here when you're out partying most nights, or studying hard. Whatup gangsta's, chicka chicka yeah. |
FrigginGodess wrote: |
may I still join? I have an energy bender on my way. |
Try another kind of bender.
Hung Ta
I felt guilty for leaving him with the Dai Li. Nearly sick.
But I had to leave. I had to leave that town. I couldn't take being there.
No sooner had I bent down then I was hurled through the air by the ground.
I turned around to see the two agents bend a hole out of the walls of the shop. The one who had exited through the right raised his arms and destroyed a house near them. The other turned to me and looked to my eyes. He knew who I was.
He sprinted for me incredibly fast, bending a large rock up and aiming it at me.
I lowered myself below ground and hit the walls of my hole with my hands. Ripples exploded through the terrain and the agents were knocked to the ground.
I hadn't earthbended as an offense since my escape from Lake Laogai. I had trained to use it as defense and refined it a lot, even to the point of being an amateur sandbender. But when I got the chance, I unleashed myself.
I dragged my feet through the ground, using the ground beneath me as a conveyor belt in the direction of the nearest agent. He was up by the time I reached him but that didn't matter, as I locked everything up to his neck in earth. It wouldn't last long, but it gave me time.
The other agent hadn't waited though. After I imprisoned the other, this one launched a spike of earth straight into my back and thrust me forward a couple feet.
Two earth hands grabbed me, and soon after, two others did. My limbs were stuck to the ground. How were we supposed to get out of these?
"You heard us, did you, Hung Ta?" asked Kur Hi, the man who had imprisoned me. "You know what's going on? You know about the war being over?" He asked angrily, tightening his hands' hold on me.
The circulation in my arms were being cut off. I could barely feel myself breathing. I felt myself nod.
"Then you know we aren't going to go out lying down."
I nodded again. My senses were growing blurry.
The two started pulling my limbs outwards. I started to struggle, but it was for naught.
FrigginGodess wrote: |
Okay, I'll try waterbending. I might take the description tomorrow. |
I can't believe no one is wondering what The End will do...
Did everyone stop liking my story? Does it need more Itami craziness?
Also, you college boys are lamers. MY institute of higher learning is in Chicago. Guess where I'M going!
kratosgod69 wrote: |
At least people seem to read your stories... |
No, no... atually i read both of yours
Secondsign your posts are very good. Your plot is a little liquid but that just gives you more flexibility. Also your posts are easy to read especially with the fight scenes. And as for THE END... I can wait lol
keep up the good work
Kratosgod you need to put more space between your paragraghs so that they are easier to read. Since your new i can't judge your story b/c i haven't read enough to get a clear picture... but keep working on it.
And Hey what about my posts, huh, what do you think of my story.