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Avatar RPG*: Create your own Bender

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    Dafoose

    [8281]Aug 15, 2008
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    Double09nhalf wrote:

    Dafoose wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    I think Chad, DJ, and I are after the eclipse and before the Comet. I think after this season is up, we should all be in a post-war setting. But Eman's right, we did a lot of canon raping.
    I don't know about you guys, But my character's timeline reflected everyoneone's at most. I was trying to keep the setting post modern, or before before Yangchen. Regardless of the era and "canon" characters, I tried to isolate my stories so that it didn't matter what time it was in, as long as the state of my story agreed with the state of other peoples stories.

    Yea me too. I isolated mine into a different era so that i wouldn't feel pressured to slow down or speed up. Mine is around the time of the first comet (hint)

    That a pretty big and ugly red hint you have there.
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    libraman_92

    [8282]Aug 15, 2008
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    yeah, it gives away alot.
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    Kijar

    [8283]Aug 15, 2008
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    Name: Leon

    Status: Earth Bender

    Height: 5 feet

    Age: 16

    Weight: 130 Ibs

    Apperance:

    Personality: He is very much into revenge, some make fun of his clothes but he backs himself up with his bending and his sword

    Special Attack: Sword of the Stone [he places his sword in a stone and when he pulls it pack out he can chanel his bending with it turning it into a Stone Sword]

    Edited on 08/15/2008 8:15pm
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    kratosgod69

    [8284]Aug 15, 2008
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    Well this is basically what my guy looks like. Note that he only uses his weapons for defense. and that that was the closest I could get to his clothes.

    Dream Avatar

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    Dafoose

    [8285]Aug 15, 2008
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    Kijar wrote:

    Name: Leon

    Status: Earth Bender

    Invented: Tree Bending

    Hair: Blonde

    Clothes: Green Robe given to him by Toph

    Story: Leon was abandoned by his parents and wondered off to Be Sing Se where he finds Toph. She trains him to a great level and he studies the World to look for a new style. He found out Tree bending when he was practicing his moves with a blindfold on and he ran into a tree. He got mad and threw the tree toward Toph. She ducked and said "That was amazing,". Leon didn't realize he had created Tree Bending Toph was explaining it to him. He then created Tree Avalanche, Tree Prison, Basic Tree Throw, Multi Tree Throw and many more moves. Then Be Sing Se was attacked so Toph and Leon's friend Clay and Leon's girlfriend Jess followed him out of Be Sing Se and it was destroyed. Ever since then Leon has been tracking them down to figure out why they destroyed it.

    Current Progress: Leon, Clay, Jess and Toph aproach a Bounty Hunter Camp. Leon Crushes a tent with a tree and then they Bounty Hunters attacked. Leon notices that one of the BH's is the one that killed King Bumi. Leon Crushed him in a Tree Avalanche. Then Three arrows pierce Toph and Two more arrows hit Clay. "No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Leon shouts as Toph dies and Clay struggles to stay alive. Leon sends Trees flying at the Bounty Hunters. "Jess, get Clay out of here now!" Leon says as he pins a BH to the ground with a tree.

    Then: Jess tries to carry Clay out of there but the only place around is a Fire Nation Prison. She puts Clay on the Monorail and hops in. "You're gonna be fine Clay," Jess says then an arrow flies over and gets stuck in the Gears of the Monorail. Leon puts down the Bow. He runs over to the Gears pulls the Arrow out and Jumps into the Monorail as it starts to move again.

    After: The guards at the prison ask what they're doing and Leon tells them they need medical presigures. They guards lead them to the treatment center where the put Clay down on a bed to be treated. "wait you're Earth Bender's" the Docter says as the Guards start to attack. Leon kicks them in the face and grabs Clay as the three of them leave with the First aid. They get on the Monorail and start to go. Jess pulls the arrows out of Clay and they start to treat him. The lines are begining to be cut on the Monorail. Clay says "leave me and jump out of here and raise the rock panel bellow us," Leon nodded and jumped off the side, Jess followed.The Monorail fell and then Jess grabbed the rope as it was falling. She began to fall as well. "Jess!" Leon shouted

    To be continued...

    Sorry, you are disapproved for sevaral reasons:

    1. You have to wait for approval before you post your story.

    2. There is no, I repeat, "No way we will let you use a first Hokage talent or quality. This is the millionth time somebody has said "Tree Bending" btw, that's called "Foggy Swamp Style."

    3. I also don't approve your character because despite the fact you have typed quite a bit on your character, with the story and all, you still lack background information.

    4. The main Characters are not, (or should not. *gives evil stare at veterans*) apart of this RP. In my opinion, they dork the RPG thread quite quickly, even though I'm really fond of them outside the RPG.

    5. I will not approve of a continuation of your story until you revise and recheck your character according to our standards. If you have a question, just PM me and ask me what you want to do, and I'll help you make your new character. I don't want to discourage every newbie.

    Kratosgod: that's a good avatar, despite the fact you lack his equiptment. It's always good to have a visual.
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    Double09nhalf

    [8286]Aug 15, 2008
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    Hail Dafoose: The bringer of hailfire and the corrector of Noobism
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    libraman_92

    [8287]Aug 15, 2008
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    Double09nhalf wrote:
    Hail Dafoose: The bringer of hailfire and the corrector of Noobism


    Here, here!
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    Dafoose

    [8288]Aug 15, 2008
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    libraman_92 wrote:
    Double09nhalf wrote:
    Hail Dafoose: The bringer of hailfire and the corrector of Noobism
    Here, here!

    Only one smiley can explain how I'm feeling.

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    libraman_92

    [8289]Aug 15, 2008
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    Dafoose wrote:

    libraman_92 wrote:
    Double09nhalf wrote:
    Hail Dafoose: The bringer of hailfire and the corrector of Noobism
    Here, here!

    Only one smiley can explain how I'm feeling.


    and what a smiley it is! three cheers for Dafoose!
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    confucioussayhi

    [8290]Aug 15, 2008
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    Dafoose may be doing what TLG doesn't, but little old me is here to say, Stay On Topic.

    Or it's my foot up your asses.

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    Dafoose

    [8291]Aug 15, 2008
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    confucioussayhi wrote:

    Dafoose may be doing what TLG doesn't, but little old me is here to say, Stay On Topic.

    Or it's my foot up your asses.

    I was about to say the same thing.
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    libraman_92

    [8292]Aug 16, 2008
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    Dafoose wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:

    Dafoose may be doing what TLG doesn't, but little old me is here to say, Stay On Topic.

    Or it's my foot up your asses.

    I was about to say the same thing.


    so someone make a new bender.
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    lilulloa6

    [8293]Aug 16, 2008
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:

    Dafoose wrote:
    there is no such thing as a "14 year old firebending master that shoots lighting

    *sAnZeUeLzAe*
    actually azula is 14 years old on the believe it or not she is you can look it up too.
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    libraman_92

    [8294]Aug 16, 2008
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    lilulloa6 wrote:
    BaiMaoRieji wrote:

    Dafoose wrote:
    there is no such thing as a "14 year old firebending master that shoots lighting

    *sAnZeUeLzAe*
    actually azula is 14 years old on the believe it or not she is you can look it up too.


    no need, we know, we know
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    BaiMaoRieji

    [8295]Aug 16, 2008
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    I'm uninspired right now. *sleeps*
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    libraman_92

    [8296]Aug 16, 2008
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    I'm uninspired right now. *sleeps*


    aren't we all?
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    confucioussayhi

    [8297]Aug 16, 2008
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    I'm uninspired right now. *sleeps*
    Then give me a spark, and I'll do it for you.

    And stop sleeping in the RPG, that's my thing.
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    BaiMaoRieji

    [8298]Aug 16, 2008
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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    I'm uninspired right now. *sleeps*
    Then give me a spark, and I'll do it for you. And stop sleeping in the RPG, that's my thing.

    *tries to light spark rocks*

    *fails*

    *gives up and smokes a joint*

    *wonders how he lit said joint*

    *is too high to care*

    I got nothing...

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    kratosgod69

    [8299]Aug 16, 2008
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    Hung Ta

    I stretched the limits of my ostrich-horse further. It was tired. I was as well.
    I'd heard news. Incoming news from around the Earth Kingdom. The war was over. The Avatar had returned. But I would've rather not get my hopes up. For most of my life since the Dai Li, I've helped refugees, victims of the Fire Nation, and believing the threat was gone only for it to return wouldn't be good. I'd pass judgement on the world after there was nobody in further need of my help.
    So I guess I was willing to spend the rest of my life helping people. Regardless of the Fire Nation being gone, people would always be in need. I don't want to spend the rest of my life doing that. I didn't. There will always people in need of help, but I need to focus on the big problems.
    So, it was night. I was surrounded by desert, but I knew I was near the oasis. I needed to get there before I slept. Or else they could get me. They would get me.
    My cantine had long been empty. My mouth was dry. But it was relatively cool outside. I could make it to the oasis.
    I did sincerely hope the war was over. I wanted a normal life. Maybe a home in Ba Sing Se where I could settle down. Helping people, while fulfilling, forced me to long for something more. Something I could appreciate doing. A family. Something I haven't had for a long time.
    But that wouldn't happen as long as the Dai Li existed. Even if the war was done, I doubted the Avatar could have put the Dai Li to rest.
    The journey through the desert was ending. My ostrich-horse needed sleep. It would get it soon. The oasis was in my sight. A small hut built around a monumental pool of clean water.
    I tied up my ostrich-horse to the wall, near a bucket of feed and water. I walked through the hut and stared, swallowing. This would be the confines of my life forever. I could feel it.

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    lilulloa6

    [8300]Aug 16, 2008
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    libraman_92 wrote:
    lilulloa6 wrote:
    BaiMaoRieji wrote:

    Dafoose wrote:
    there is no such thing as a "14 year old firebending master that shoots lighting

    *sAnZeUeLzAe*
    actually azula is 14 years old on the believe it or not she is you can look it up too.


    no need, we know, we know
    well obviously they didnt
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