Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
im not sure if someone made this but...
Name: Jake
Element: Air
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Hair: Brown and short
Height: 5'9
Special move: Air tornado
Weight: 140
??Jake is a wonderer who goes around from place to place helping people while trying to help defeat the fire nation. He seeks the avatar for his training in air bending and to help him.
Past: He lost his mother to a fire navy solider and he and his father left there home to a safer place. After the accident his father began to help other people. He tried to defeat a group of fire navy soliders but lost. Jake was only 13 when his father died. After he died he??swore to help other people and to do what he could to help defeat the fire nation.??
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here's the repost of the intro of my new character:
? (Waterbender)
A stranger walks the streets of Ba Sing Se.??The criminal element was ever present in the lower rings. Ready to prey on whoever was foolish enough to venture out of the safety of their homes at night. The stranger walked slowly and silently. The midnight blue robe concealing the stranger's face. Quickly, the stranger was not alone. Three men stepped out of an alleyway in the stranger's path. The stranger stopped, head down with face hidden. Only one was armed, two hammers hung at who apparently was the leader's side.
"Looks like we've got ourselves a newcomer, boys," the gruff voiced leader said. "Welcome to Ba Sing Se, it's awfully dangerous to be walking alone at night. Isn't it??boys?"
"You bet it is, alone, in this city, many don't make it out alive," one of the leader's stooges answered.
"Fortunatly,??we're in the business or protecting newcomers like you. All for the low price of 20 gold pieces. How about it stranger? Don't make the mistake of turning down our generous offer if you value your life."
The stranger said nothing. The leader got impatient. "Hey! Maybe you didn't hear me, but if you know what's good for you you'll accept our offer."
More silence from the stranger.The??leader growled and??stepped forward. "I've lost my patience, stranger." He reached for his hammers.
The stranger's head raised slightly revealing his mouth.??"Do you know??of a man named Zhang Yu?" The stranger suddenly asked.
The leader stopped. "What? Zhang Yu?"
"You do not know." The stranger spoke as if stating a known truth. "Then, I hold no reservation." The stranger turned around and began to walk away.
"What does he think he's doing?" the other stooge asked.
"You dare turn your back on me?!?" The leader said, furious, and charged hammer's drawn-
As suddenly as the attack began it ended. The stranger had turned around and stopped the leaders attack by placing his hand on the leader's chest. The leader was a still image. As if turned into a stone statue. Stopped in his tracks by the stranger's hand. The leader's eyes were wide with shocked. He couldn't move, save for twitching. The stanger was controlling him.
The leader's stooges, before cooky and sure were suddenly afraid and cowardly. They both slowly started backing away? "What in the world...what's wrong, Chief?"
The??stranger's arm??swung from the leader's chest and the??leader spun on his heal, swinging his hammer. He caught stooge #1 flush on the forehead, with a sickening crack. The man was dead before he hit the ground.
Stooge #2's instincts were on his side. He ran back down the alley he came from-
The stranger's arm swept in the direction the man ran and the leader flung his hammer at the man. It toppled end over end,??nailing stooge #2 in the back of the head. The handle hit first and sunk into the man's skull. The stooge fell forward and rolled several feet before coming to a rest.
The leader grunted again as his body straightend to stand upright, at attention. His body trembled more trying to resist the stranger who just made him kill his comrades.
"I could smell the blood on those hammers. You and your men have killed before,??but I decided to let you go.??You persisted.??But, you're heart is hard and cold.??If that is??how you choose??to live,??then I shall indeed make your heart cold. All debts repaid." The stranger walked away, raised one arm, just high enough so the leader could see, and clenched a fist.
The leader regained control of his body, but he instantly felt something moving inside his chest. His chest was cold. And getting colder. The leader tried to scream for help but his lungs were shriveling. His body??feeling cold.??
Darkness slowly enveloped him. He fell to his knees, energy seeping away. His heart beat fading as his heart freezes. The leader, who had terroized people in Earth Kingdom villages for protection money and killed all those who refused, lay freezing from the inside out. His heart beat...thump.......thump............
The last thing the leader saw was the??fading figure of the person who killed him. The woman in the dark blue robe....
Forigive the double post...here's the coninuation:
? (Waterbender)
The bodies were found early the next mourning. They Dai Li quickly stepped in and removed them before too much panic was caused. The stranger was not worried about being linked to the bodies. Waterbending puppetry left no physical evidence on the body being controlled and frozen heart more than likely had thawed (and burst)overnight. The Dai Li would more than likely conclude that the leader attacked and killed the other two men but then died to some ailment. Possibly writing it off as a heart attack or stroke.
After a few hours walking around most??areas of the lower ring, the stranger decided that the upper rings would more than likely be where Zhang Yu would be.??After??reading one of the many signs??posted on street corners, the stranger found herself??standing infront of the upper ring??wall. It was no different than all the other walls in Ba Sing Se the stranger had seen, but getting through this one??could take some effort.??
darkboy (fire,earth, water,wind)
was assigned to kill tank and glide for willy woo
i didn't feel much for it killing 2 people more but i had to fight rampage before he would do more dmg.
'... wait a second if i killed them where would we meet again this city is gigantic'i realized 'thanks agni that he atleast gave me the disrctiption of the two men and where they would possible be'
when i reached the outer wall i saw tank and glide together with agry man (spike), and his 2 friends.
'how am i going to solve this without killing more then i'm expected' I asked myself
the i gotted it when i saw the waterpit
'dear la please give me the strenght i need to knock those 3 men out atleast'i said
just when i wanted to do my attack they locked tank and glide into a metal box and putted them on a transport
'perfect'i said and followed the trading car out off BSS with my ostich horse (yea i have one how do you think i've gotten into BSS)
when they far far enough out off side i stiked and robbed the car, i just took the metal cage and told the man to leave then i hessitated, while tank and glide where watching me
'shall i kill you guys now or should i give willy woo the honor'i asked them with a smile on my face
'don't be so shy you can talk for now' i said them
'wh... who are you' 1 of them asked
'the retired head tactitian of the fire natio,n i'm sure you heard of me'i said laughing 'but now i have told you that i've got to kill you guys now'
'ARE YOU D? 'the second one yellled' I HEARD OF YOU YOUR THE REASON WHY THIS WAR STARTED'
'so you do know me , yes i persuaded fire lord sozin the start the war when the comet camed the famely who hold the daggers of fear must be destroyed'i said irritated 'we never founded them until when i was retired i got a clue so i went to the terra team to do my job 8 year ago, now that you know all of this you shall die'
'but...' the first one said again 'don't you want to have a fair fight '
'no, i can't take the risk you'll flee right now still you can choose your death
between : cooking, crushing,freezing, drowning, or exploded lungs choose wisely' i said laughing
***15 minutes later***
'COME ON GUYS I DON'T HAVE ALL DAY' i yelled at them 'SCREW IT I'LL CHOOSE CRUSHING'
as i pushed 2 boulders out of the ground to smack into the cave they said something
'whenever you die you will never have a good spot in the spirit world 'one of them said
becoming angry at this comment i smashed to 2 boulders against each other while crushing the cage in the center
'never start talking about that you will have to die for a greater quest of mine'i said when it was done
i started to tore the cage down to see what happend and i chopped of their heads and putted them in a bag then i made my way back to BSS to deliver the heads to willy woo
'rest in peace young firebenders' i said to there maded graves
when i maded back into the city i started to look for willy woo again or atleast hoping he would find me
(i didn't knew if tank or glide where controlled by anyone so i just maded there death quick
if someone controlled them just pm me and i will edit the messege to a fight)
ThatLostGuy wrote: |
AEtherBlue can you sum your last post up into a few key facts...because I was lost...my eyes kept wondering due to the fact that this post is huge!! |
he does have a point i write with big spaces bit this was GIGANTIC oven rampage axe was nothing compared with that
Spike (archer)
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Bulldozer, Mayhem and I were bringing Tank and Glide to see Lord Obsidian. I wanted Tank and Glide to be hung and I wanted to see them die for their failure!
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I tied up Tank and Glide as we arrived at a small transport vehicle that is run by some type of horse. I put Tank and Glide into little cages and I locked them inside. I said, "Bulldozer, Mayhem, group talk." We walked around a small hill and made sure that Tank and Glide couldn't see us. I pulled out an arrow. I said, "Screw it. I don't wanna walk all that far just to see Obsidian. I'm gonna kill Tank and Glide myself." I heard a swooping sound of a sword. I ran around the hill and saw the bodies of Tank and Glide on the floor, but their heads were missing! So, obviously Tank and Glide were dead! -
I said, "Well. It looks like someone beat me to it. Hahahaha what do I care. Someone just killed the same two people that I wanted to kill." Bulldozer laughed and said, "Who's Tank?" I replied, "Bulldozer. You're an idiot! Grow some brains!" Bulldozer laughed....
This is my character and it has been accepted by ThatLostGuy. She will be now on the second book.
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Name: Hannisa Okari
Alias: Sira Zinet
Bending powers: She is a waterbender and a very fast and skilled fighter in hand-to-hand combat.
Age: 17
Hair: Dark Brown
Heght: 5'4
Skin: Dark Golden
Eyes: Honey yellow
Story: Her mother gave birth to her while in a boat sailing to the Earth Kingdom. After giving birth the boat was attacked by the Fire Nation and her mother swam to the closest land (Fire Nation) and died a couple of days later in a beach.??Hannisa was found by Inia Morat a famous singer in the Fire Nation. Raised with a younger??brother Sei and older brother Lo Shin that protected her with their lives. She trained with them but not firebending since she couldn't but developed great hand-to-hand combat and was known for being very sneaky. While in a battle with the Earth Kingdom and some Waterbenders that were helping them, she finds her father that recognizes her because of her similarity with his wife and her mother. Her father takes her as a refugee and tells her the real story shocking her with this and at first denying it. She is let go by her father letting her think about it.
When she comes back to the Fire Nation she finds out hey killed her stepmother becomes furious and escapes. While escaping she finds her stepbrothers and tells them the truth and tells them she has to go, she escapes in a ship,??hidden. Her stepmother was killed when a general tried to rape her and she fought back, he burned her body completely.
She now is trying to find her father and tries to manage her waterbending powers.
Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords master
WOO! My first Season 2: The Assasins, post
Jax has just had a seizure, and is about to have some dreams about his past, and possibly his future
Jax remembered back to when he was a little boy. It was the day his village was invaded by the Fire Nation. He was in his brother's room. He saw his brother's broadswords on the wall. Everyone in his family got a pair of broadswords when they turned 14, it was the family legacy. He walked out of the room, and into the market area, to see his parents.
"Mommy, where is Xen?" he asked.
"He left to go training with father," she replied.
Jax ran towards the forest and saw them training with their broadswords. The ones in his room weren't real, they were just the igsignia of his family. He watched them train, then he walked farther into the forest, and he saw a beautiful girl. She was at least 15, 16. She was talking with a man about her age, then he left. Jax walked to the girl, and he said hello.
She smiled at him and said hello back. He immediatly fell in love with her.
She said she had to leave, and Jax said goodbye.
He ran back to the village, and ran into his room.
"Mommy, when do I get my swords?" Jax asked.
"You don't get your swords Jax, you earn your swords," she said.
He went outside, and saw people running around and panicking.
His father and brother were standing at the village gates with their broadswords ready. His father ran back to him and talked to him.
"Jax, my boy. The Fire Nation is invading our village. I want you to hide in the temple. Jax, if we don't make it, always know you have a bigger destiny then here. You are an Earthbender, the only one of our family. I love you Jax," he said. He cried and hugged Jax. Jax was confused, but he ran to the temple, and stood on the roof. He looked down at the village as Fire Nation troops walked into the village, and started to burn the houses to the ground. He saw a women fighting his father and brother. It was that women he loved from the forest!
He ran down, and grabbed his swords that his father hid away until he was 14. He ran outside, dragging the swords, and swung them with all his strength hitting the women in the back of the legs. She screamed and fell over. She screamed and spit fire in his father and brother's direction. Jax screamed and dived in front of the flames. Some of it hit his stomach, but the rest of it hit his family in the face. Jax screamed from the pain. Blood oozed out of his wound. He turned and looked at the women. He took his swords, and stabbed them into her back, and killed her.
He turned to his brother and father.
"Daddy, you're gonna be okay!" he said.
"No son, this is it. I love you very much Jax."
"Dad! No! Wait!" he yelled.
"Jax, you've earned your swords," his dad said. They both died.
Jax found his mother dead as well. He was the only survivor of the village. He thought of the women who betrayed him.
"Fire Nation can't be trusted," he said. "I'll kill them all!"
He fell on the ground and cried. Then he looked into the sky and screamed.
Name:
Status: Fire-bender
Special move: 360 flame kick
Height: 5'8"
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Weight: 135
Eyes: green
Hair: buzzed
Personality: cocky, determined, hates being 2nd best, loves showing off his skills in front of other fire-benders