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The I.J.L.S.A. Adventures! (fanfic) (Chapter 6's up) (Accepting guest stars!)

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    babanator

    [1]Dec 2, 2008
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    I wrote this fanfic on another forum but I may aswell post it here. In order for me to post another chapter I need 3 to 5 comments. I might be able to put in guest stars but onlky after chapter 5 becuase that's what I'm up to....

    Chapter 1: A New Mission

    "Gary, I got a letter," Spongebob screams. "It's from the Chief, and he says that I need to go to Headquarters at once!"

    Spongebob runs to Headquarters and sees Sandy, Squidward, Patrick and the Chief. The Chief stands up and starts talking.

    "You may wonder why I gathered all of you here--- it's because the amount of crime in Bikini Bottom has sky rocketed and Mermaid man and Barnicle boy are just too old to do anything about it. I need the I.J.L.S.A. to reunite."

    Suddenly Squidward stands up and screams, "There is no way I am am reuniting with these barnicle heads!"

    The chief replies, "Well, if you are part of the I.J.L.S.A., it would mean you would be a super hero with thousands of fans admiring you."

    "I like the sound of that!" says Squidward.

    The Chief then continues to talk.

    "We've got word that there's a bank robbery in the Bikini Bottom Bank. It's your job to stop them!"

    The I.J.L.S.A. run to the bank, and they barge in and they see everyone in panic. Spongebob sees the bank robber who appears to be covered with fire.

    Spongebob asks the bank robber, "Who are you?"

    The bank robber replies, "My name is Inferno and I control the element of fire."

    Patrick uses his stretching power to grab Inferno from 100 feet away. But as soon as he touches Inferno, he gets burned and starts screaming. Suddenly Inferno throws a ball of fire at Spongebob while he's tying his shoe. Spongebob is knocked unconscious. After witnessing this, Squidward runs away screaming like a girl.

    Sandy turns invisible and sneaks into the bathroom. She fills a cup with water from the sink in the bathroom and sneaks back to where Inferno is standing. Sandy throws the water at Inferno. Inferno starts shouting in pain and throws fire everywhere. Sandy is hit and she is also knocked unconscious. Inferno takes out his phone and dials a number. He then says to the unknown person on the other end of the phone, "Boss, the bank robbery was successful!"

    Inferno then hangs up and runs off with the money.

    Edited on 12/25/2008 8:27am
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    ultimatekey

    [2]Dec 2, 2008
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    Wow, this is interseting. I want to see what happens next. This is good
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    The_Cartoon

    [3]Dec 2, 2008
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    It is good, but I don't think that fanfics are allowed here.
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    FOP_fan17

    [4]Dec 2, 2008
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    This is good, but what is the I.J.L.S.A? I understand they stop crime, but is that from an episode?
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    eggs_aRe_fun

    [5]Dec 2, 2008
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    Its the International Justice League of Super Aquaintences from

    Mermaid Man and Barnacle Boy V.

    "And they made the best lunchboxes, too."
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    babanator

    [6]Dec 2, 2008
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    Wow I'm getting some good feedback. Chapter 3 will be up if I get 5 more comments!

    Chapter 2 I.J.L.S.A. vs Inferno!

    Squidward, who is terrified, runs to his mom's house. Squidward tells his mom what happened and she immediately calls the cops. They get there as soon as possible and take Spongebob, Sandy, Squidward and Patrick to the hospital. But, sadly, Inferno got away. The chief calls a meeting a few weeks later after the I.J.L.S.A. has recovered.

    Two weeks later at the meeting:

    Spongebob: How could have Inferno possibly have gotten those fire powers?

    Chief: The answer to that question is a very interesting story. You see, Inferno was actually once a member of the I. J.L.S.A. a long time ago, and our scientists created a special suit for him that gave him the ability to control fire.

    Spongebob: What happened to him?

    Squidward: Can you let him finish his story!

    Chief: Well, some stuff happened which I don't want to get into just yet and we had to fire him. But, he always said that...

    Patrick: WAIT!!!!!

    Spongebob: What's the matter Patrick?

    Patrick: I have to go the bathroom.

    The chief's cell phone starts ringing and he has to pick it up.

    Chief: (talking on his cell phone) Really? I'll get the I.J.L.S.A. on it right away. (hangs up)

    Sandy: What is it Chief?

    Chief: Inferno has been spotted at the Bikini Bottom bowling ally. I need you to go there right away. This time I'll give you all high powered water guns so you'll be prepared.

    Patrick: But I still need to go the bathroom!

    The I.J.L.S.A. rushes to the bowling ally to confront Inferno.

    Inferno: We meet again!

    Inferno starts throwing fire balls at the I.J.L.SA., and Sandy retaliates by shooting off her water gun. Inferno is knocked unconscious, his fire power shuts down, and the I.J.L.S.A. is able to bring him back to Headquarters.

    To be continued...... If more people comment!

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    Chewster17

    [7]Dec 2, 2008
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    Wow this is good! . But im not sure if its allowed :/ but I dont know lol.
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    RedSoxFan274

    [8]Dec 2, 2008
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    Well we don't normally post fanfics so we wouldn't know. The mods don't really come here, anyway, so...
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    babanator

    [9]Dec 2, 2008
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    Chewster17 wrote:
    Wow this is good! . But im not sure if its allowed :/ but I dont know lol.
    Thanks, what do you liike about my story?
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    babanator

    [10]Dec 2, 2008
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    RedSoxFan274 wrote:
    Well we don't normally post fanfics so we wouldn't know. The mods don't really come here, anyway, so...
    I think fanfics are allowed.
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    ultimatekey

    [11]Dec 2, 2008
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    Wow, it will be good if this was an episode.
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    bob_ball

    [12]Dec 2, 2008
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    fanfics can be posted in the spin-off ideas topic
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    babanator

    [13]Dec 3, 2008
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    Can you guys tell me what you like about my story?

    Chapter 3 Inferno's Flashback

    While Inferno is unconscious, he has a dream about his past. In his dream, Inferno is at his old middle school, back when his name was still Thomas.

    Teacher: Thomas, Go to the principal's office right away!

    Thomas: But why?

    Teacher: I don't know, but he said it's important.

    Thomas nervously walks to Mr. Brown's office.

    Mr. Brown: Thomas, a student told me that you brought a knife to school.

    Thomas: I didn't, I swear!

    Mr. Brown: We opened your locker and the knife was there!

    Thomas: Someone must have put it there!

    Mr. Brown: You put it there--- you are expelled!

    Inferno's dream fast forwards to when he's an adult working for the I.J.L.S.A.

    Chief: We've got information that you have been stealing money from the I.J.L.S.A. fund.

    Inferno: I didn't steal a cent!

    Chief: You did, and you're dismissed from the I.J.L.S.A.

    Inferno: You'll regret this one day!

    Inferno storms out and starts screaming how he hates the I.J.L.S.A. Manray and the Dirty Bubble appear and say that they hate them, too. Manray: Inferno, would you like to join the E.V.I.L. corporation?

    Suddenly, Inferno wakes up and sees that he's in handcuffs and that the Chief and the members of the I.J.L.S.A. are surrounding him, along with his old school principal, Mr. Brown.

    Inferno: NO!!!! This is worse than my dream!



    To be continued if people comment.
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    spongeboy22

    [14]Dec 3, 2008
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    copyright your idea so nick can't steal it
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    babanator

    [15]Dec 4, 2008
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    spongeboy22 wrote:
    copyright your idea so nick can't steal it
    If nick stole it I'd be flattered. So what did you guys think of the new chapter?
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    PokeSponge123

    [16]Dec 4, 2008
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    babanator wrote:
    spongeboy22 wrote:
    copyright your idea so nick can't steal it
    If nick stole it I'd be flattered. So what did you guys think of the new chapter?

    I loved it!!
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    babanator

    [17]Dec 4, 2008
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    PokeSponge123 wrote:
    babanator wrote:
    spongeboy22 wrote:
    copyright your idea so nick can't steal it
    If nick stole it I'd be flattered. So what did you guys think of the new chapter?
    I loved it!!
    Thanks to that comment I'll post the next chapter!

    Chapter 4 Spongezilla


    Chief: Inferno, where is the money you stole!?

    Inferno: I'll never tell you!

    Mr. Brown: Thomas, tell me where the money is now!

    Inferno: My name's not Thomas anymore!

    Chief: I didn't want to do this, but you left me no choice. Tell me where the money is or I'll shoot you with this gun...I mean water gun.

    Inferno: Okay fine, just don't shoot me with that water. I gave the stolen money to my bosses.

    Chief: Who are your bosses?

    Inferno: The dirty bubble and Manray.

    Chief: You joined the e.v.i.l corporation?!

    Inferno: Yes, after you fired me for something that I didn't do! I hate you! I hate all of you!

    Inferno starts screaming and the Chief has to tranquilize him.


    The next day the Chief calls a meeting.

    Chief: We have information that the e.v.i.l. corporation has the stolen money from the bank robbery. I want you to go there and arrest the dirty bubble and Manray.


    The I.J.L.S.A arrive at the e.v.i.l. headquarters and confront the dirty bubble and Manray.

    Spongebob: You're under arrest for bank robbery!

    Manray: Not so fast, I have a little trick up my sleeve.


    Suddenly a huge robot, shaped like Spongebob, appears.


    Unknown robot: I am Spongezilla and I will kill you all!!!!!



    To be continued if I get 4 replies........

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    PokeSponge123

    [18]Dec 4, 2008
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    That was the best chapter yet!!
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    ultimatekey

    [19]Dec 4, 2008
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    This is getting good!
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    Chewster17

    [20]Dec 4, 2008
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    I agree this is getting real good! Nick definetly needs to steal this!!..
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