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    jjsthekid

    [667]Jun 7, 2009
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    New Evidence Review: A+

    This was a great episode, The Cartoon! I was sad that Old Man Jekins got arrested. But i don't think he did it. It was also cool To See The M.C.C again.

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    The_Cartoon

    [668]Jun 7, 2009
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    BrennanNN wrote:
    wich one was better the together one or the spaced one?

    Definitely the together one. The problem was that it was one sentence. If you add periods to it, you've got yourself a well-written spin-off!
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    The_Cartoon

    [669]Jun 8, 2009
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    Hey mods, why did I just get 2 TOS violations for giving constructive critisism??? It says off-topic posting but those were on-topic!

    The Sponge Flies - B+

    Major improvement BrennanNN! You are listening to my advice and it's helping a lot. A few mistakes here and there but still, nice job.

    First 6 Episodes of Spin-Off Action - A+++

    I swear, this show is incapable of a bad episode Clapmaster. Not much to say other than, fantastic work!
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    jjsthekid

    [670]Jun 8, 2009
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    Ghost Town Review: A+

    Pretty Good Clapmaster. I like seeing The Flying Dutchan in an episode.

    Snail Day Care Review: A

    This was also good! I like seeing some new episodes of Sponge- Pat.

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    dragiiin123

    [671]Jun 8, 2009
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    terminoob wrote:
    BrennanNN wrote:

    bob_ball wrote:
    The First 5 Episodes of Season 3 of Spin-off Action - A+++ Read the reviews of the other four previous reviews of these five episodes and that's pretty much exactly what I have to say. Fred's New Pet - A Sorry I was kinda harsh in my last review jjsthekid, but I had no clue that it was a multi-episode story arch. Still it was kinda poorly written though so my grade stays. Anyway this episode shows exactly what makes you a great spin-off creator which is a great episode (even though the plot was kinda simple) Good Ol Jimmy - A+++ This episode was awesome DC-Dude. I don't know which storyline was greater. The A part or the B part because they were both fantastic. When your show is finished, this will definitely in my opinion be one of the episodes I'll always remember The Day New Plats City Stood Still - C+ I'm also sorry about being harsh on your review, but you seriously need to work on your grammar, spelling, and sentence structure like The_Cartoon stated in his review of your episode before this one. I too am just trying to help because while you usually have good plot ideas, they get plagued by the three problems you have listed above.

    what the hell i spell every word correctly and whats wong WITH MY DAMN GRAMMER AND SENTACING STRUCTER WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????????????? WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG

    Well... Your last two episodes

    just had sentences like this

    so that's not really a sentence... That's not sentence structure, that's just putting a "tab" between thoughts, you don't use periods or commas... We aren't trying to be mean, it's just difficult to understand.
    u should work on ur potty mouth as well.
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    BrennanNN

    [672]Jun 8, 2009
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    silly draggin i wonder what dc-dude thinks of the latest episode of my show and what you guys think about my show so far?

    while here a couple of reviews

    Ghost Town - A+

    another good episode clapmaster good work

    Snail Day Care - A+

    i like your show man keep up the good work
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    dragiiin123

    [673]Jun 8, 2009
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    BrennanNN wrote:
    silly draggin i wonder what dc-dude thinks of the latest episode of my show and what you guys think about my show so far? while here a couple of reviews Ghost Town - A+ another good episode clapmaster good work Snail Day Care - A+ i like your show man keep up the good work

    the adventures of cheeks and bob A-

    good show! just work on ur grammer and it can be awesome!

    also

    THE SYNDICATION IS DOWN!!! ITS DOWN!!!!! ITS GIANT!

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    DC-Dude

    [674]Jun 8, 2009
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    The Sponge Files: A

    Wow, I really enjoyed this episode! Love the parts with Sam and Vorra! Awesome episode!

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    jjsthekid

    [675]Jun 9, 2009
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    The Darkness Review: A-

    This was pretty good. Even though there were some problems, this was a cool way to end the first season.

    Plankton's Choice Review: A+

    Another great episode of The Krusty Train! I wonder what will happen to Plankton? I can't wait for the next episode.

    Edited on 06/09/2009 3:46pm
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    BrennanNN

    [676]Jun 11, 2009
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    The Great Longboard Race - F+++++++++

    i hated this episode cause lulu was eliminated but hey she will be back for season 2 of taocb and maybe i can persway you to put her in season 4
    i cant belive she slept and lost DAMNIT LULU you stupid head LOL
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    The_Cartoon

    [677]Jun 11, 2009
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    ^ That's not really fair. Just because your character was eliminated doesn't mean the episode was bad. After all, only one character can win. And btw, Season 4 will be the All-Star season.

    All 5 Spin-Off Action episodes: A+

    Only 10 characters remaining, I can't wait to see what happens next Clapmaster!
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    BrennanNN

    [678]Jun 11, 2009
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    i was playing around cartoon the episode was good i was being funny cause lulu is a light sleeper
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    The_Cartoon

    [679]Jun 11, 2009
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    Ah, my bad. I know how you feel though. Conner from Livin' Like Larry has been kicked off twice. But it was still great to see him in Spin-Off Action in the first place.
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    jjsthekid

    [680]Jun 11, 2009
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    Snowbound Review: A+

    This was pretty Good, The Cartoon! But i am wondering if we will see The M.C.C again?

    5 new episodes of Spin-off action review: A+

    These were also good Clapmaster! While i was sad that DJ was voted off in one episode, they were still great.

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