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    jjsthekid

    [642]Jun 4, 2009
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    Spongecraft pilot review: A+

    This was pretty good Terminoob! This show sounds interesting.

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    The_Cartoon

    [643]Jun 4, 2009
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    Terminoob, I liked all of the series that you posted but my favorite was probably Spongcraft. It has potential to be a fantastic series.
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    jjsthekid

    [644]Jun 6, 2009
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    Spongeclone review: A

    I will have to admit, your show is getting better. However, don't always ask reviews because not every episode will be reviewed. Also, you might annoy people if you keep asking for reviews all the time. Anywyas, this was a good episode.

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    bob_ball

    [645]Jun 7, 2009
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    Another multiple review session with bob_ball

    SpongeCraft - A+

    As a former WoW addict, I must say the thought of this becoming a series is awesome! I have high hopes!

    The Great Train Robbery - A

    Excellent The_Cartoon, Nat the thief who knew? But I am wondering if we will ever see The M.C.C. again?

    The Algaes Always Greener - A

    Your series is indeed interesting SpongeSebastian. I would love to see an episode like MM & BB 3 from Man Ray's point of view....just putting it out there

    The Good, The Bad, The USP - B+

    Loved the A plot, but the B plot about The Man selling Eel Scout Cookies was extremely random and not that great. Still, a great episode in general though

    Food World - B+

    Its great to see the tables turn and have SpongeBob be the person stealing the formula, but the fact that it was all a set up kinda brought the episode down a bit. Still one of your better this season spongebobs1fan

    Duplication 3000/SpongeClone - C

    This episode would have gotten a C+ but you always constantly ask for reviews, hopefully this teaches you to not always ask for reviews. As for the episode itself, it just felt very gimicky. First, the plot didn't seem like it was warranted the two parts. Then the ending was very bland. Welcome back to the spin-off forums and please stop constantly asking for reviews.

    Jail Time - C

    It seemed like there was no clear point to this episode except for it to be a crossover with Underwater Idol. Seriously, the plot was there, but there was no clear ending. It just had Parla singing, Mikey saying that he didn't steal the jewels, and that's it. jjsthekid, you can definitely do better and I am expecting you to recover from this disappointing episode.

    Clamapoloza - D+

    It seemed like you had a plot in there somewhere, but it got extremely confusing. I tried to reread it and still got lost. Then I noticed you had the whole episode in one giant sentence. Please fix this and the grade will probably raise. As for what I tried to read, you were just focusing on the minor details and not the major storyline in general. You just threw the plot in at the very end.
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    jjsthekid

    [646]Jun 7, 2009
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    bob_ball wrote:
    Another multiple review session with bob_ball SpongeCraft - A+ As a former WoW addict, I must say the thought of this becoming a series is awesome! I have high hopes! The Great Train Robbery - A Excellent The_Cartoon, Nat the thief who knew? But I am wondering if we will ever see The M.C.C. again? The Algaes Always Greener - A Your series is indeed interesting SpongeSebastian. I would love to see an episode like MM & BB 3 from Man Ray's point of view....just putting it out there The Good, The Bad, The USP - B+ Loved the A plot, but the B plot about The Man selling Eel Scout Cookies was extremely random and not that great. Still, a great episode in general though Food World - B+ Its great to see the tables turn and have SpongeBob be the person stealing the formula, but the fact that it was all a set up kinda brought the episode down a bit. Still one of your better this season spongebobs1fan Duplication 3000/SpongeClone - C This episode would have gotten a C+ but you always constantly ask for reviews, hopefully this teaches you to not always ask for reviews. As for the episode itself, it just felt very gimicky. First, the plot didn't seem like it was warranted the two parts. Then the ending was very bland. Welcome back to the spin-off forums and please stop constantly asking for reviews. Jail Time - C It seemed like there was no clear point to this episode except for it to be a crossover with Underwater Idol. Seriously, the plot was there, but there was no clear ending. It just had Parla singing, Mikey saying that he didn't steal the jewels, and that's it. jjsthekid, you can definitely do better and I am expecting you to recover from this disappointing episode. Clamapoloza - D+ It seemed like you had a plot in there somewhere, but it got extremely confusing. I tried to reread it and still got lost. Then I noticed you had the whole episode in one giant sentence. Please fix this and the grade will probably raise. As for what I tried to read, you were just focusing on the minor details and not the major storyline in general. You just threw the plot in at the very end.

    Actually Bob Ball, the episode isn't finished yet. I am fine that you gave my episode a C, but there is going to be another part of the episode.

    The Good, The Bad, The USP Review: A

    This was good DC-Dude, but i think you could have explained what happened to The Man. But still, it was a good episode.

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    BrennanNN

    [647]Jun 7, 2009
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    bob_ball wrote:
    Another multiple review session with bob_ball SpongeCraft - A+ As a former WoW addict, I must say the thought of this becoming a series is awesome! I have high hopes! The Great Train Robbery - A Excellent The_Cartoon, Nat the thief who knew? But I am wondering if we will ever see The M.C.C. again? The Algaes Always Greener - A Your series is indeed interesting SpongeSebastian. I would love to see an episode like MM & BB 3 from Man Ray's point of view....just putting it out there The Good, The Bad, The USP - B+ Loved the A plot, but the B plot about The Man selling Eel Scout Cookies was extremely random and not that great. Still, a great episode in general though Food World - B+ Its great to see the tables turn and have SpongeBob be the person stealing the formula, but the fact that it was all a set up kinda brought the episode down a bit. Still one of your better this season spongebobs1fan Duplication 3000/SpongeClone - C This episode would have gotten a C+ but you always constantly ask for reviews, hopefully this teaches you to not always ask for reviews. As for the episode itself, it just felt very gimicky. First, the plot didn't seem like it was warranted the two parts. Then the ending was very bland. Welcome back to the spin-off forums and please stop constantly asking for reviews. Jail Time - C It seemed like there was no clear point to this episode except for it to be a crossover with Underwater Idol. Seriously, the plot was there, but there was no clear ending. It just had Parla singing, Mikey saying that he didn't steal the jewels, and that's it. jjsthekid, you can definitely do better and I am expecting you to recover from this disappointing episode. Clamapoloza - D+ It seemed like you had a plot in there somewhere, but it got extremely confusing. I tried to reread it and still got lost. Then I noticed you had the whole episode in one giant sentence. Please fix this and the grade will probably raise. As for what I tried to read, you were just focusing on the minor details and not the major storyline in general. You just threw the plot in at the very end.

    what was wrong i go from my best episode to my worst episode what am i doing wrong? i just wanna have a great spin-off

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    terminoob

    [648]Jun 7, 2009
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    BrennanNN wrote:

    bob_ball wrote:
    Another multiple review session with bob_ball SpongeCraft - A+ As a former WoW addict, I must say the thought of this becoming a series is awesome! I have high hopes! The Great Train Robbery - A Excellent The_Cartoon, Nat the thief who knew? But I am wondering if we will ever see The M.C.C. again? The Algaes Always Greener - A Your series is indeed interesting SpongeSebastian. I would love to see an episode like MM & BB 3 from Man Ray's point of view....just putting it out there The Good, The Bad, The USP - B+ Loved the A plot, but the B plot about The Man selling Eel Scout Cookies was extremely random and not that great. Still, a great episode in general though Food World - B+ Its great to see the tables turn and have SpongeBob be the person stealing the formula, but the fact that it was all a set up kinda brought the episode down a bit. Still one of your better this season spongebobs1fan Duplication 3000/SpongeClone - C This episode would have gotten a C+ but you always constantly ask for reviews, hopefully this teaches you to not always ask for reviews. As for the episode itself, it just felt very gimicky. First, the plot didn't seem like it was warranted the two parts. Then the ending was very bland. Welcome back to the spin-off forums and please stop constantly asking for reviews. Jail Time - C It seemed like there was no clear point to this episode except for it to be a crossover with Underwater Idol. Seriously, the plot was there, but there was no clear ending. It just had Parla singing, Mikey saying that he didn't steal the jewels, and that's it. jjsthekid, you can definitely do better and I am expecting you to recover from this disappointing episode. Clamapoloza - D+ It seemed like you had a plot in there somewhere, but it got extremely confusing. I tried to reread it and still got lost. Then I noticed you had the whole episode in one giant sentence. Please fix this and the grade will probably raise. As for what I tried to read, you were just focusing on the minor details and not the major storyline in general. You just threw the plot in at the very end.

    what was wrong i go from my best episode to my worst episode what am i doing wrong? i just wanna have a great spin-off

    One tip to a great spin-off is to have proper grammar, your episodes are one giant sentence with random capital letters, hardly any punctuation.
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    jjsthekid

    [649]Jun 7, 2009
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    Blast Off Review: A

    I will have to admit, this was a great episode of your show. Your show is getting better! Well, i enjoyed this episode.

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    The_Cartoon

    [650]Jun 7, 2009
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    Blast Off - C

    It's what Terminoob said. You have to work on your grammar, spelling, and especially sentence structure. Even if you have a good plot, most of the time I can't understand the writing at all. It's almost as if you don't care at all about your series and you are just writing sloppy for no real reason. I'm sorry to be so harsh, but if you want your series to improve you need this advice. Because even though this episode was better than the last one, I can only give it a C because the grammar was still bad. Sorry again, but I promise that I'm trying to help
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    jjsthekid

    [651]Jun 7, 2009
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    Survivor Review: A+++++

    Clapmaster, Season 3 of Spin-off action is great so far! I like seeing Daniel again, and i like Seeing DJ from my Scooter show.

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    terminoob

    [652]Jun 7, 2009
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    The first 5 episodes from Spin-Off Action Season 3: A+

    This was a great way to start off the season, clapmaster, and you're right, 5 IS more awesome.
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    BrennanNN

    [653]Jun 7, 2009
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    Survivor Review - A+

    great season premiere clap master and lulu a petty thief? YAY

    well i will have another episode today guys of cheeks and bob

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    DC-Dude

    [654]Jun 7, 2009
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    Survivor Day 1, 2, 3: TGTR (Too good to rate)

    I gotta say, these episodes were amazing! I love the conflicts between Victoria and Cala and The Quickster and Sam! THE 4TH AND 5TH EPISODES WERE AMAZING, ALSO!

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    bob_ball

    [655]Jun 7, 2009
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    The First 5 Episodes of Season 3 of Spin-off Action - A+++

    Read the reviews of the other four previous reviews of these five episodes and that's pretty much exactly what I have to say.

    Fred's New Pet - A

    Sorry I was kinda harsh in my last review jjsthekid, but I had no clue that it was a multi-episode story arch. Still it was kinda poorly written though so my grade stays. Anyway this episode shows exactly what makes you a great spin-off creator which is a great episode (even though the plot was kinda simple)

    Good Ol Jimmy - A+++

    This episode was awesome DC-Dude. I don't know which storyline was greater. The A part or the B part because they were both fantastic. When your show is finished, this will definitely in my opinion be one of the episodes I'll always remember

    The Day New Plats City Stood Still - C+

    I'm also sorry about being harsh on your review, but you seriously need to work on your grammar, spelling, and sentence structure like The_Cartoon stated in his review of your episode before this one. I too am just trying to help because while you usually have good plot ideas, they get plagued by the three problems you have listed above.
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    jjsthekid

    [656]Jun 7, 2009
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    bob_ball wrote:
    The First 5 Episodes of Season 3 of Spin-off Action - A+++ Read the reviews of the other four previous reviews of these five episodes and that's pretty much exactly what I have to say. Fred's New Pet - A Sorry I was kinda harsh in my last review jjsthekid, but I had no clue that it was a multi-episode story arch. Still it was kinda poorly written though so my grade stays. Anyway this episode shows exactly what makes you a great spin-off creator which is a great episode (even though the plot was kinda simple) Good Ol Jimmy - A+++ This episode was awesome DC-Dude. I don't know which storyline was greater. The A part or the B part because they were both fantastic. When your show is finished, this will definitely in my opinion be one of the episodes I'll always remember The Day New Plats City Stood Still - C+ I'm also sorry about being harsh on your review, but you seriously need to work on your grammar, spelling, and sentence structure like The_Cartoon stated in his review of your episode before this one. I too am just trying to help because while you usually have good plot ideas, they get plagued by the three problems you have listed above.

    It is ok Bob Ball.

    Anyways, here is a review.

    Good Ol Jimmy Review: A+

    DC-Dude, this was probably the best of the season so far. I enjoyed this episode alot.

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    clapmaster

    [657]Jun 7, 2009
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    Good Ol Jimmy - A+++++

    DC-Dude this is definitely the best episode this season and will definitely go down as one of the best in your series when its all said and done. Seriously, it was that spectacular.
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    clapmaster

    [658]Jun 7, 2009
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    Number 1 Priority - A+

    Hmm WoW and SpongeBob. I still can't get over how funny the concept is. Still, this does convert into an awesome series idea. I can picture multiple episode plots with this series.

    As for the eppy itself, it was great. I definitely agree that Mr Krabs is rouge-worthy and that his character fits the best with the races.
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    terminoob

    [660]Jun 7, 2009
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    BrennanNN wrote:

    bob_ball wrote:
    The First 5 Episodes of Season 3 of Spin-off Action - A+++ Read the reviews of the other four previous reviews of these five episodes and that's pretty much exactly what I have to say. Fred's New Pet - A Sorry I was kinda harsh in my last review jjsthekid, but I had no clue that it was a multi-episode story arch. Still it was kinda poorly written though so my grade stays. Anyway this episode shows exactly what makes you a great spin-off creator which is a great episode (even though the plot was kinda simple) Good Ol Jimmy - A+++ This episode was awesome DC-Dude. I don't know which storyline was greater. The A part or the B part because they were both fantastic. When your show is finished, this will definitely in my opinion be one of the episodes I'll always remember The Day New Plats City Stood Still - C+ I'm also sorry about being harsh on your review, but you seriously need to work on your grammar, spelling, and sentence structure like The_Cartoon stated in his review of your episode before this one. I too am just trying to help because while you usually have good plot ideas, they get plagued by the three problems you have listed above.

    what the hell i spell every word correctly and whats wong WITH MY DAMN GRAMMER AND SENTACING STRUCTER WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????????????? WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG

    Well... Your last two episodes

    just had sentences like this

    so that's not really a sentence... That's not sentence structure, that's just putting a "tab" between thoughts, you don't use periods or commas... We aren't trying to be mean, it's just difficult to understand.

    Edited on 06/07/2009 5:13pm
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