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My X-Mas Made-up Story - A Krabby Khristmas Karol

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    Gamekirby

    [1]Dec 18, 2007
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    Before Christmas, I'm gonna create my version of a Spongebob Squarepants episode based on the story of "A Christmas Carol" by Charles Dickens.

    Mr. Krabs (Eugene Krabs) as Ebenezer Krabs (Ebenezer Scrooge)

    Spongebob Pants as CratchitBob WorkPants (Bob Cratchit)

    Squidward Tentacles as Squldcob Marlcles (Jacob Marley)

    Patrick Star as Tiny Pat (Tiny Tim)

    Mermaidman as Mr. Merman (Homeless Man)

    Barnacleboy as Mr. Barneboy (2nd Homeless Man)

    Mrs. Puff as Ms. Belluff (Belle 'Ebenezer's first love' )

    Sandy Cheeks as Ghost of Christmas Past

    Pearl Krabs as the Ghost of Christmas Present

    Plankton as Ghosts of Christmas Future

    Edited on 12/18/2007 10:09pm
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    minerva73

    [2]Dec 18, 2007
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    Pretty cool idea. I'd like to hear it when you finish.
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    Gamekirby

    [3]Dec 18, 2007
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    A Krabby Khristmas Karol

    (Chapter 1.) -Meet Ebenezer Krabs-

    One day on Christmas Eve in an old village called Bathing Bottom, a greedy manager/miser named Ebenezer Krabs of the Krusty Krab who also is obsessed with money and only money but nothing else, with his appearance named CratchitBob WorkPants who does nothing but cook Krabby Patties and the cashier since the lost of Ebenezer's partner named Squldcob Marlcles. CratchitBob begged Ebenezer Krabs to give him a raise for a special Christmas present for his sick friend Tiny Pat knowing that he's hurt and wants to have a special present for a Christmas miracle and a speedy recovery. Ebenezer Krabs yells "Bah, Hamkrab!" knowing that it means "No" until he starts kissing and counting his money, Cratchit makes a sad expression knowing that Squidcob would've helped him on his daring need for help until he leaves while crying knowing that Ebenezer will never change his ways. CratchitBob sees lots of citizens and beggers, begging Ebenezer Krabs to give them some money for Christmas until he repeats saying "Bah, hamkrab!" as he leaves his restaurant and returns to his house in a hated place called Miserkrab Hill which has lots of signs in order to prevent anyone from entering the gates knowing that a dark, stormy night approaches for the night until a moaning sound was heard. What is the moaning sound and will Ebenezer Krabs ever change?

    Edited on 12/19/2007 5:05pm
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    minerva73

    [4]Dec 20, 2007
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    That's great for a first chapter. The character's personalities seem to be in sync with those of the regular story.
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    Gamekirby

    [5]Dec 21, 2007
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    A Krabby Khristmas Karol

    (Chapter 2.) -Squidcob Marlcles' Ghost-

    Ebenezer Krabs noticed a low, moaning sound coming from the halls of his house, his curtains rattled, the vents howled until Ebenezer Krabs grabs his sack of money as a shield to protect himself when all the sudden a shadowy figure appears from the floors of Ebenezer Krabs' dusty floor. The ghost of Squidcob Marlcles appears with chains all over him, a ripped shirt, burns in the face and a scar on his forehead with Ebenezer whimpering in fear thinking that the ghost was planning to steal his money until gives him a message from beyond the grave. Ebenezer tosses a vase at Squidcob but it goes through him and shatters, Ebenezer starts throwing books and other things but they all when through Squidcob's ghostly body until Ebenezer falls to the fall, tired and exhausted knowing that a ghost cannot get hurt physically. Squidcob warns Ebenezer Krabs that at nightfall when he sleeps, three more spirits from the great beyond will meet Ebenezer in his sleep or in a nightmare, Squidcob also warns that If Ebenezer Krabs doesn't change his ways by sunrise, his news will be grim until Squidcob disappears and when he vanishes, Ebenezer puts on his pajamas and starts sleeping in the dark night until he notices a tapping sounds coming from all over his bedroom and sees a cold mist coming under his doorway. Who and which spirit will Ebenezer Krabs encounter?

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    mitsukigirl13

    [6]Dec 22, 2007
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    I like it so far, but I'm getting alittle sick of everyother Christmas special using the same Christmas carol plot line.
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    CamptownCHEESE

    [7]Dec 22, 2007
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    Cool, my name is Belle.
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    Gamekirby

    [8]Dec 24, 2007
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    A Krabby Khristmas Karol

    (Chapter 3.) -Pain of the Past-

    A mysterious cold mist appears from Ebenezer's doorway, a ghostly creature with a glass ball around a disembodied head with a cowboy hat along with a ghostly robe,she spoke with a Texan accent and catches Ebenezer with a lasso and hogtying him up in the middle of the dusty floor know that he's encountered one of the ghosts. It was the ghost of the Christmas past, a spirit that shows the victim's past on how he or she would've changed their ways in their childhood to their younger years to see how their lives where like. The Ghosts grabs Ebenezer with her lasso, turns him into a ghosts and travels throughout the sky and travels to a ye olde pub where they encountered a younger version of Ebenezer Krabs in a party with lots of guests until both the ghost and Ebenezer noticed a beautiful young lady. Ebenezer recognize the girl to be Mrs. Belluff, a young spirited women who the young Ebenezer once love in his life and thought about marrying her until the ghost shows Ebenezer a few years later showing that young Ebenezer fell in love with money so much, he ignored Mrs. Belluff until she leaves him and notices that he's kissing the money instead of her, knowing that he lost his true love forever until Ebenezer starts whimpering and begs the ghost to stop showing his past until he ends up back in his bed until another rumbling sound appears. What's making the rumbling and who's coming for Ebenezer?

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    thecrab15

    [9]Apr 1, 2008
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    My other X-mas episodes are: The Chumbalaya Effect Take The Whale By The Wheels Rude Pearl The Krusty Grinch
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