THE DARK AVATAR

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Chapter One: The Line of Destiny

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Chapter Two: The Prophecy

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Recap:
Aang has defeated Fire Lord Ozai 1 day before Sozan's Comet arrives. Avatar Roku talked to Aang in a dream, and told him to find the comet and destroy it, before whats inside, escapes. He also said the Line of Destiny, will open. It connects a random time on Planet Earth, with Aang's world. And whatever goes through the line, can't come back. And the comet is scheduled to land, on the Line of Destiny...

Avatar: The Last Airbender

Book 4: Shadow

Chapter 1: The Line of Destiny

Chapter One: The Line of Destiny

PART ONE

"Aang, what are we doing here?" Katara asked.

"I told you, Avatar Roku came to me in a dream, and told me to wait here, to destroy the comet", Aang replied.
They were on some island south from the Northern Water Tribe.
"I have to destroy it before the Line of Destiny opens and the comet goes to Earth", Aang said.
Aang looked into the sky, and he saw the flaming rock flying towards them, but it was still far away.
"There it is!" Sokka said.

Suddenly, three figures appeared. They looked like Earthbenders, but they had their eyes shut.
"Hello..Avatar", one of them said,

"Hi, what do you guys want?" Aang asked.

"We can't let you touch that comet, our master, won't like it", they said.
Suddenly, Katara and Sokka flew back and were trapped in a box of rock, with a slot opened for breathing.
"What are you doing?" Aang yelled.
"If you want your friends, come and get them!" one of the Earthbenders yelled.

"Let them go!" Aang?? yelled.

The boxes started to slide into the ground.
"STOP!" Aang yelled. "LET THEM GO!!"

"I said, come and get them, if you want them alive", one said.
Aang looked up and he could see the comet getting closer.
The earth under him shifted, The Line of Destiny was beggining to form.

Aang looked at Katara and Sokka, and the boxes slid into the ground.
"NOOOO!!!" Aang yelled. Suddenly his tatoos began to glow, and he went into The Avatar State.
The Line began to form under him, until the circle that you pass through, formed.
"Hahahaha", the Earthbenders laughed.

The comet flew closer, and closer...until it was nearing the ground.
"We will succeed!" The Earthbenders yelled. "Our master will be pleased".

Aang started to throw rocks at the Earthbenders but they blocked them.

One of the Earthbenders opened his eyes, and they were pitch black...

PART TWO:

Braeden sat on??the bench outside his school, swinging his dual swords. His class, History, had a project due, you have to learn the fight with swords by the end of the semester. Braeden isn't exactly what you call, "cool" but he has three best friends. The three most beautiful girls in school. Bailee, Lexi, and Mary Jane.
Braeden stood up, but his worst enemy, Matt Cook, pushed him back down.
"What do you want?" Braeden asked him.

"Get out of my way, loser", Matt said. He walked past Braeden.
Braeden stood up, and picked up his swords. "I'll get you someday Matt," he said.

"Yeah right", Matt replied. He laughed and walked inside school.

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At the end of the day, Braeden met up with his three friends.
"Hey Braeden, we're gonna meet you at your house tonight, O.K?" Bailee said.
"All right," he said. He put his backpack on with his swords in it, and walked onto his bus.
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When Braeden got home, he was practicing with his swords in his backyard. There were woods in his backyard, so his parents couldn't see him out there. Suddenly, the earth below him, started to shake.
"What the..." Braeden said.
Suddenly a line opened up underneath him, and purple light shown from it. A circle came up and showed a vision of something. It was a comet...and it was flying through the sky.
"A comet?" Braeden said. "But-"

He was cut short, as out of the circle, Sozan's comet came flying through the circle, and landed in front of him.
Then, the comet shook, and it rose into the air.

"Whats going on???" Braeden said.

The comet exploded, and floating in the air, stood a boy about his age. He has three scars along his face. Two on his cheeks, and on on his forehead.
He opened his eyes, and they were pitch black.
Braeden screamed. But then the figure landed on the ground, and drew out two swords. They had three words written on them.
Death, Destruction, Shadow

"You want a fight?" Braeden said with courage. "You got one!".

END OF PART TWO