Avatar: The Last Airbender: Fan Fiction(Book 3: Fire: Chapter 6)

AvatRkls
[1]Jul 31, 2006
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Aang falls to the ground and lays immoble.
Lu Ten: "That is how we killed Avatars long ago. If an Avatar got to powerful we would use the fluid from the a certain plant found only in the Fire Nation. The fluid would somehow react against the Avatar State causing it to recede from the Avatar. It also leaves him in the condition your in."
Aang: "Then why don't you kill me now? You've killed everyone else"
Lu Ten: "No, they're??alive.??I cut the watertribe girl's throat just enough so that the toxin that I used to??take down your bison would??make her unconcious.??I??stabbed the boy over there in a place where he would stay alive, so long as he is healed in few hours. The blind girl over there is just knocked out. And??I am not going to kill you because I am here to help you??fight the Fire Nation and to teach you firebending."
Aang: "What, if you wanted to help??me why did you fight me and??everyone else?"
Lu Ten: "Well, I just wanted to test you, to see how strong you are.' 'However, the reason I helped is a long story, which I will tell you later."
Aang: "So what now?
Lu Ten: "Well, first we wait for you and your friends to recover, then I will teach you fire bending and lead to the Fire Lord."
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AvatRkls
[2]Jul 31, 2006
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sorry for the wait my PC had been messing up
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fafnir97
[3]Jul 31, 2006
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I don't know...that seemed a bit anti-climatic to me.
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AvatRkls
[4]Jul 31, 2006
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I know this one actually disappoints me now however it will get better. The next chapter will be the story of Lu Ten then The Fire Bending. I make this all up off the top of my head you know
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fafnir97
[5]Jul 31, 2006
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I guess it didn't go as I expected. I was expecting Katara's healing powers to automatically kick in and heal herself, and then she goes and heals everyone else.

Oh, yeah, I know you do, and they are usually good. Well, I'm sure the next one will be really good.
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Pharmacopoeia
[6]Aug 1, 2006
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I'm sorry, but do you do this often? I've never seen one before. Or is this just completely random? Cause it dosn't make alot of sense if it's a one time thing. Oh, and why do you do it?
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AvatRkls
[7]Aug 1, 2006
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NO, I do it often and it is fun
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kuzon234ray
[8]Aug 1, 2006
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That was a big twist. It was good but... why couldn't Katara just be dead?
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fafnir97
[9]Aug 1, 2006
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kuzon234ray wrote:

That was a big twist. It was good but... why couldn't Katara just be dead?

Not a big Katara fan, are we. Kuzon?
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Colonel_Brian
[10]Aug 1, 2006
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fafnir97 wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

That was a big twist. It was good but... why couldn't Katara just be dead?
Not a big Katara fan, are we. Kuzon?

Nope But you should consider how it would affect Sokka ! Captain Ray after all their siblings and they still love each other.
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supersonicfan01
[11]Aug 1, 2006
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This "update" seemed completely random to me, but am i still glad that Toph is ONLY uncontious.
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Asj_Johnson
[12]Aug 1, 2006
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Reminds me of a idea I had for a fanfiction... I was going to title it Book Three: Fire, Chapter One: something... But it didn't work out. In mine, Zuko was going to teach Aang because he found out that his father would never take him back and because he was actually always against the war, but his sister ended up making Aang and the others think he was just trying to gain their trust so he could capture Aang.
I ended up starting a fanfic of the opposite - instead of Zuko trying to help Aang, he finally captures him.

Are you posting a little piece in several threads? If so, you're being wasteful...
But what do I know? I've only been around Yu-Gi-Oh! forums before now.
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Colonel_Brian
[13]Aug 1, 2006
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Well please do continue.
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kuzon234ray

[14]Aug 1, 2006

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Colonel_Brian wrote:

fafnir97 wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

That was a big twist. It was good but... why couldn't Katara just be dead?

Not a big Katara fan, are we. Kuzon?

Nope But you should consider how it would affect Sokka ! Captain Ray after all their siblings and they still love each other.

I have a older sister and I hate her.

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Colonel_Brian

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kuzon234ray wrote:

Colonel_Brian wrote:

fafnir97 wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

That was a big twist. It was good but... why couldn't Katara just be dead?

Not a big Katara fan, are we. Kuzon?

Nope But you should consider how it would affect Sokka ! Captain Ray after all their siblings and they still love each other.

I have a older sister and I hate her.

You shouldn't I dislike my brothers actions but I still love im even if I want to hit him in the face.

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kuzon234ray

[16]Aug 1, 2006

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Colonel_Brian wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

Colonel_Brian wrote:

fafnir97 wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

That was a big twist. It was good but... why couldn't Katara just be dead?

Not a big Katara fan, are we. Kuzon?

Nope But you should consider how it would affect Sokka ! Captain Ray after all their siblings and they still love each other.

I have a older sister and I hate her.

You shouldn't I dislike my brothers actions but I still love im even if I want to hit him in the face.

I didn't say I didn't love her, because I do. I just hate her. There is a fine line bettwen love and hate.

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Colonel_Brian

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kuzon234ray wrote:

Colonel_Brian wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

Colonel_Brian wrote:

fafnir97 wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

That was a big twist. It was good but... why couldn't Katara just be dead?

Not a big Katara fan, are we. Kuzon?

Nope But you should consider how it would affect Sokka ! Captain Ray after all their siblings and they still love each other.

I have a older sister and I hate her.

You shouldn't I dislike my brothers actions but I still love im even if I want to hit him in the face.

I didn't say I didn't love her, because I do. I just hate her. There is a fine line bettwen love and hate.

Ah yes I'm quite familar with that line

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kuzon234ray

[18]Aug 1, 2006

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Colonel_Brian wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

Colonel_Brian wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

Colonel_Brian wrote:

fafnir97 wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

That was a big twist. It was good but... why couldn't Katara just be dead?

Not a big Katara fan, are we. Kuzon?

Nope But you should consider how it would affect Sokka ! Captain Ray after all their siblings and they still love each other.

I have a older sister and I hate her.

You shouldn't I dislike my brothers actions but I still love im even if I want to hit him in the face.

I didn't say I didn't love her, because I do. I just hate her. There is a fine line bettwen love and hate.

Ah yes I'm quite familar with that line

Do you or your brothers bite each other? Because when I was younger I ues to bite my older sister all the time, she has the scars to prove it.

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fafnir97

[19]Aug 2, 2006

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kuzon234ray wrote:

Colonel_Brian wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

Colonel_Brian wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

Colonel_Brian wrote:

fafnir97 wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

That was a big twist. It was good but... why couldn't Katara just be dead?

Not a big Katara fan, are we. Kuzon?

Nope But you should consider how it would affect Sokka ! Captain Ray after all their siblings and they still love each other.

I have a older sister and I hate her.

You shouldn't I dislike my brothers actions but I still love im even if I want to hit him in the face.

I didn't say I didn't love her, because I do. I just hate her. There is a fine line bettwen love and hate.

Ah yes I'm quite familar with that line

Do you or your brothers bite each other? Because when I was younger I ues to bite my older sister all the time, she has the scars to prove it.

No, cause we're not crazy enough to leave physical scars. Leave only mental scars, no one can prove anything that way.......j/k.

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kuzon234ray

[20]Aug 2, 2006

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fafnir97 wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

Colonel_Brian wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

Colonel_Brian wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

Colonel_Brian wrote:

fafnir97 wrote:

kuzon234ray wrote:

That was a big twist. It was good but... why couldn't Katara just be dead?

Not a big Katara fan, are we. Kuzon?

Nope But you should consider how it would affect Sokka ! Captain Ray after all their siblings and they still love each other.

I have a older sister and I hate her.

You shouldn't I dislike my brothers actions but I still love im even if I want to hit him in the face.

I didn't say I didn't love her, because I do. I just hate her. There is a fine line bettwen love and hate.

Ah yes I'm quite familar with that line

Do you or your brothers bite each other? Because when I was younger I ues to bite my older sister all the time, she has the scars to prove it.

No, cause we're not crazy enough to leave physical scars. Leave only mental scars, no one can prove anything that way.......j/k.

I leave mental scars now of day. But sometimes I want to bite her like I ues too... but I don't. *sighs*

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