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    ThatLostGuy

    [8581]Oct 21, 2008
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    Maybe I will DOOOD
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    ThatLostGuy

    [8582]Oct 21, 2008
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    I emailed Feever (since he's never on AIM anymore) last night and he said if I wrote it then he'd post it after he checked it over and edited what he didnt like and whatnot. So that's what we're gonna do. So his finale will PROBABLY be up soon.

    Tonight I hope.
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    YessirComprendo

    [8583]Oct 21, 2008
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    Feever (Ice Bender)

    RECAP!!!

    (After Moffu captured Feever and his new friend, Kaze...)

    You see... your father is a Fire Nation General! You might know him as 'dad', or maybe you call him by his first name, 'Vilvix'. But to us, the Fire Nation, he is known as 'General Vylx', and let me tell you son. Your father is a bad man! He betrayed the Fire Nation and killed another General. He killed General Diez, I don't know if you have heard of him though. Your father quickly spread around a myth that Diez was killed by some bandits who were looking for money and riches. But that was all a lie! And now your father is wanted, by Azula. But she doesn't have the authority or evidence to convict, aka kill, your father. So that's where you and I come into play. You will lead me to your father, and then I will kill him!"

    (Captured on a ship heading towards FN Island...)

    "Can we get some food around here!" Kaze, the beaten and bruised Air Bender with no one to rely on, grabbed his stomach from all the hunger pains he was enduring. "Gah, c'mon! I'm starvin' in here!"

    Feever walked over to the corner of the Brig and looked out the window of the Warship. "The seas are strong." Feever's hands were handcuffed together, otherwise he would have bended the water from the seas a long time ago. His legs were shackled together too. Kaze's, as well.

    There was a clanging on the cell door. "Dinner time, you two." The door opened and a Fire Nation Guard walked in, carrying a large tray of slop. He dropped it at his feet letting some of the mush spit out from the bowl. There were two spoons inside the bowl, meaning that Kaze and Feever had to eat from the same bowl. Disgusting? Yes. But this was prison, where sometimes conditions are so terrible that one would rather die than endure another day of hell.

    The Guard cracked a tiny smile and walked out of the room, slamming the door behind him. Kaze turned to Feever. "So you take that half and I'll take this one?" Feever laughed.

    -_-_-_-_- A month or so later -_-_-_-_-_-

    Feever looked at the barred window as he did every day. But this time he saw a different sight than usual. He saw land. The land was barren, sand covered and dirt ridden. There was little to no foliage. But there was a large crowd gathering. Feever saw tons of tents and structure already set up, as well as a lot more buildings being constructed.

    The Brig door suddenly creaked open. It was Moffu, and he was wearing a new facemask. Rather, his whole outfit had changed. He wore dark leather pants, which matched his dark facemask. On him was a dark coat, covering up a white shirt and some type of strapping running across his chest. There was a cigar in his hand, ironically, since he wore a mask which he would wheeze out from occasionally. There was also some type of sword attached to his back, as well as some type of hidden weapon which was being concealed underneath his coat.

    [THAT IS MOFFU]

    Moffu stomped into the room and grabbed Feever by the back of his neck and forcefully pulled him out from the Brig. "What about Kaze," Feever yelped whilst being forcefully pulled away from his newest companion.

    Moffu wheezed, "He'll be in good hands. Don't you worry, boy."

    Feever gulped as Moffu continued to drag him through the hallways of the Warship. Feever yelled, "What are you doing to me!? Where are we going!?"

    Moffu laughed. "How about we go and find your father, Feever? Doesn't that sound like fun? I'm sure old Vylx will be happy to see me!" Moffu chuckled once more until finally tossing Feever up some stairs and through a door at the top. Feever stumbled to the ground and noticed he was now on the deck of the Warship. Moffu stomped his foot on to Feever's back and then immediately grabbed him by the next once more and lifted him to his feet. He swung Fever's body around and faced him towards the Resistance Base (there were on the southern shore of Fire Nation Island).

    "You see that," Moffu muttered.

    "Yes. What is-"

    "It's the Resistance Base. And your father, along with a whole group of makeshift Fire Benders are going to be attacking this base very soon. It's only a matter of time before your father (Vylx) runs into me. And once he does- ha."

    Feever tried to release Moffu's grip from his neck but failed. "You'll what? Give him cookies!?"

    Moffu smirked. "Yes... if by cookies you mean 'kill him' then yes."

    -_-_-_-_- Four days later -_-_-_-_-_-

    By now the Fire Nation Warship had docked inside a small outcove amongst a set of large rocks in a small bay not too far away from the Resistance Base. The waters of the bay were rough, but it would be good enough to dock in. Azula, who was on the Warship this entire time, had commanded the Fire Nation soldiers to set up camp. It was coming along nicely. That is, until some unexpected visitors arrived with some news of the Resistance.

    From the east side of the bay came a large squadron of Fire Nation soldiers, being commanded by both Orinth and Wicker. Orinth let out a big wave at Azula. She responded with a big grin and a soft sigh. The soldiers that Orinth/Wicker commanded stopped to help Azula's soldiers set up the rest of their camp, but Orinth and the other main leaders continued towards Azula and the others.

    "How we doin' baby?" Orinth arrogantly announced.

    Azula shook her head. "Don't call me baby, Orinth."

    "Right right, baby. My mistake."

    Azula was all about business though, while Orinth was a man who enjoyed some fun here and there. Even if killing was considered as 'fun' in his mind. Azula spoke up to the group following Orinth. "Let's hear it? What news do you have for me? And where the hell is Ishtuix? I hired that man to do some serious intel work and all he gives me is sorry excuse. This is the last time I ever-"

    Orinth cut off Azula mid-sentence. "Woah woah. Ishtuix is doing his job, don't worry. He's doing an undercover job in the Resistance Base right now actually. He's with that girl, Bekk. Oh, and there's also Willy Woo and Darkboy."

    Azula grinned. "Willy? Darkboy? Together? Who's dumb idea was this?"

    Orinth laughed, "Ha! We listened to whatever Ishtuix told us to do. It was his idea to partner up Willy, Darkboy, and Asiscio together."

    Azula raised her head up to think for a moment. "That's right... Asiscio. The Fire Bender slash Air Bender. I was wary of hiring that man because he scared me a bit. Something about his eyes told me that he didn't want to join the Fire Nation for the sake of the helping the Fire Nation."

    Orinth raised an eyebrow. "Yeah- sure- whatever. Just listen to me for a second."

    Azula bit her lip as Orinth continued to talk. Orinth was not a very smart man for angering Azula. Did he forget how much power that woman holds in the palms of her hands? Or was he just looking for a good time by messing with Azula's mind?

    "Wicker and I were discussing matters and-"

    "HEY WHAT ABOUT ME!" Shujaka yelled.

    Orinth sighed and rephrased his statement. "Wicker, Shujaka, and I were discussing matters and we decided to wait group up all the Fire Nation members we could find, and then wait on Ishtuix to give us the thumbs up to attack the Resistance Base."

    Azula shook her head in agreement. "Yes, very good."

    Orinth looked down for a moment. "Oh yes. And there is- uh- one more thing."

    Azula raised an eyebrow and tapped her foot.

    "The Avatar... he is- um. He's with the Resistance and in the Base with them. Ishtuix sent Willy, Asiscio, and Darkboy to capture him so we could use him as bait and gain some leverage in this war."

    Azula screeched into the heavens. "ISHTUIX DID WHAT!!! Does he not understand that this is the Avatar?! Three simple men cannot defeat him, or better yet, tie him up and escape with him!"

    Orinth smiled. "They're not simple men, baby. Darkboy is a legend of his time. Hell, he's a legend all around. The man can bend ALL the elements! And Willy Woo is a cockroach that never dies. Those two alone can defeat the Avatar. And hell baby, they've got Asiscio with them too!"

    Azula stomped her foot and walked back towards the Warship. She shouted towards Orinth with her back turned towards him. "Take a few of my men and go wait at the top of the hill for Ishtuix to show up. Once he appears, send someone to retrieve me and the rest of my men." Azula turned to Moffu, who was still grabbing Feever by the back of the neck like a dead animal.

    "Moffu, I'd like you to go with Orinth. You can take that dead piece of trash along with you too!"

    Feever yelped one final sentence before Moffu knocked him out with his metal fists. "My name is Feever, and I'm not a dead piece of trash!" *SMACK, Feever blacked out.*

    -_-_-_-_- The next day -_-_-_-_-_-

    Feever awoke tied up inside a small tent. He was alone inside the tent for the exception of Moffu who was sharpening the blade of his sword. "How did you get those metal arms," Feever asked.

    Moffu grinned, but nevertheless, answered Feever's question. "An explosion. It blew off one of my arms and part of my other arm. Luckily, some expert scientists and doctors helped me out immediately. Don't ever play with fire, Feever."

    "How long will we be here?"

    Moffu coughed from inside his dark and gloomy mask. "So you're the one asking the questions now, boy?"

    Feever shook his head in disbelief. "Jeez! Does everything I say anger you?!"

    Suddenly the tent door blew open and Garamond ("the pill popper") announced some important news. "Ishtuix has arrived. Come outside to hear what he has to say."

    Moffu turned to Feever and grabbed him by the neck. He quickly untied him and thrust him out of the tent to his knees. "Get up, boy!" Moffu grabbed Feever once again and dragged him towards the crowd which was gathering around Ishtuix, Darkboy, Bekk, and Mira (a little girl that considers Darkboy to be her 'father'.

    "Where's Asiscio and Willy?" Orinth immediately asked.

    Shujaka laughed, "Gah ha, I think the maggot finally croaked!"

    Ishtuix grinned and rubbed his mustache. "Asiscio decided to go after the Avatar on his own. He attacked Willy and Darkboy and then immediately proceeded to attempt to kill the Avatar and ultimately avenge his brother. We found the Avatar's tent on fire but have no idea if Asiscio or the Avatar are still alive.

    Garamond snapped a pill into his mouth and asked a question, thus interrupting Ishtuix's speech. "And where's Woo?" Capulet ("mentally unstable guy") was standing behind Garamond, completely uninterested in the conversation.

    Darkboy quickly spoke up before Ishtuix had a chance to answer Garamond's question. "Willy has joined the Resistance! He remembered his past and remembers what the Fire Nation did to him and his family. He is no longer with the Fire Nation Army, and if you ever see him, kill him on the spot."

    Orinth lashed out at Darkboy. "That's bull! Willy wouldn't join them just like that!"

    Darkboy gritted his teeth. "If you don't believe me then find out for yourself."

    "And how do I do that?"

    Darkboy clenched his fists. "We attack the Resistance TONIGHT!"

    -_-_-_-_- A few hours later, before the battle -_-_-_-_-_-

    Orinth motioned to Moffu to throw him his katana case, but quickly realized something. "Ah, crap. We forgot to inform Azula! Before we march down the hill we need to send someone to get her and the other soldiers." Orinth looked around for a trustworthy person, and he soon spotted Vylx resting near a dead bush far away from him. Orinth began to march towards Vylx and he soon called out his name.

    "Hey, Vylx... VYLX!" Vylx didn't hear him.

    "VYLXXXX!!!!" Orinth shouted.

    The loud shout was overheard by most of the camp. Moffu instantly turned towards Orinth and he quickly spotted Vylx sitting next to the bush. Moffu cracked a smile and grabbed Feever by the neck. "Let's go talk to daddy, shall we?"

    Edited on 10/21/2008 12:48pm
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    YessirComprendo

    [8584]Oct 21, 2008
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    k so TLG u write my finale since everyone but Feever and Moffu are your characters

    lemme just pm u somethin that must be in there

    have fun ill be posting again once midterms die down
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    ThatLostGuy

    [8585]Oct 21, 2008
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    Will do!!

    I also want people to know that everything my dude Feever just posted happened before all the new stuff I posted. So yeah, in his post Darkboy aint captured yet, Willy/Garamond havent died yet, and hell, the battle hasnt even begun yet when in my story the battle's been long over...
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    Dafoose

    [8586]Oct 21, 2008
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    SOooooooooooooooooo...

    ...

    he's a blast from the past?
    Or is he just The past?
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    ThatLostGuy

    [8587]Oct 21, 2008
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    ??
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    confucioussayhi

    [8588]Oct 21, 2008
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    ...Is it Wednesday yet? Maybe we can stop looking at TLG's crap.

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    Dafoose

    [8589]Oct 22, 2008
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    confucioussayhi wrote:

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    ...Is it Wednesday yet? Maybe we can stop looking at TLG's crap.


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    lol!
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    ThatLostGuy

    [8590]Oct 22, 2008
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    what does that even mean?
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    Dafoose

    [8591]Oct 22, 2008
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    what does that even mean?


    How should I know? You're the one who went "??" first.
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    YessirComprendo

    [8592]Oct 22, 2008
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    Feever (Ice Bender)

    Moffu is using Feever as bait to find Feever's father, Vylx, a man who Azula secretly wishes would be dead due to his terrible past in which he betrayed her.

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    Moffu grabbed Feever by the neck and began to pull him towards a tree which Vylx was sitting next to. Before Orinth could reach Vylx, Moffu tapped him on the back and offered something to him. "I've gotta go back to the Warships and talk to Azula. How about Vylx comes with me, since I've uhh.." Moffu pointed down to Feever whom he was dragging along through the dirt. "I've uhh gotta have some assistance in transporting this prisoner back to the ships."

    Orinth stared into Moffu's dark facemask for a second before responding. "Well sure, two is better than one. Just go tell Vylx that you're going with him..."

    Moffu nodded his head and continued to drag Feever towards his father, ex-General Vylx, who was looking in the complete opposite direction of them. Moffu tossed Feever down to the ground in front of Vylx.

    "SON!?" Vylx shouted.

    "DAD!" Feever shouted happily.

    Vylx looked up at Moffu. "YOU!"

    Moffu laughed. "ME!???"

    Vylx got up on to his feet and took a step towards Moffu. "You're the son of a b!tch that tried to kill me!"

    Moffu punched Vylx across the face with his metal fist. "That is CORRRRRECT, sir!" Feever attempted to stand up and assist his father, but Moffu stomped on him with his large boot. "Nah uh uh, Feever." Moffu grabbed Vylx by the back of the head and bashed his skull into the tree. He then proceeded to toss Vylx down the hill and let him roll down to the bottom to make sure that Orinth or his men wouldn't see the fight that was about to begin. Moffu grabbed on to Feever's neck and threw him down the hill as well.

    After marching down the hill, Vylx began to get to his feet. A hint of blood trickled down his face from where he was hit earlier. He engulfed his hands with fire and shot a fireball at Moffu, who blocked it with his metal arms. "You're going to have to do better than that, General," he laughed.

    Moffu secretly slid a harpoon out from its holder beneath his cloak. He whipped it out and launched the harpoon at Vylx as he readied his next attack. "NO!!!" Feever shouted as he attempted to jump in front of the harpoon. But he was too late, for the harpoon had sliced itself in between Vlyx's chest and stomach. He fell backwards on to his butt and began to gasp for air. Blood wasn't only coming out from his belly, but from his mouth too. Feever ran to his father's side to hear his dying words.

    "Feever... Shimbrah Poh. Go there to find..." He stopped talking.

    "FIND WHAT DAD!?!? FIND WHAT!?"

    With his last breath Vylx muttered one final word. "Answers..."

    Feever grabbed his father's head and began to sob uncontrollably. "Well then," Moffu said while approaching Feever. "Look's like you weren't needed after all." Moffu removed a dagger from his cloak and raised it over his shoulders, ready to strike down Feever. But from behind Moffu came a man who smacked Moffu across the back with his cane.

    Moffu tumbled forward and the man raced towards Feever. "Leave your father, we must go... NOW!" Feever looked up at the man and followed his orders. They began to run further down the hill as Moffu chased after them. He had the harpoon which he killed Vylx with. He took another shot with it barely missing Feever and hitting a tree next to him. After thirty minutes of running, Feever and the man had lost Moffu for good.

    Out of breath, Feever asked, "What is your name."

    "I am Hevet," the man answered. "I noticed that you weren't with the Fire Nation, and so, I rescued you."

    "Why would you risk your own life for mine?"

    "It's what I would want others to do for me. It's what I wished people had done for my own wife when she was slaughtered by Fire Nation scum some years ago. It is the moral thing to do, boy."

    Feever nodded his head. "And I thank you for this. But I really must get going. I must rescue my friend, Kaze, from one of the Fire Nation Warships. And then together, we must travel to Shimbrah Poh so I can find answers like my father told me to do."

    "Very well," Hevet said with a smile. "Be on your way now, boy. Finish what you father started and complete your journey throughout your life. I wish you luck."

    "Thank you," Feever said while smiling back. "I will always remember your name, Hevet. Always!"

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    YessirComprendo

    [8593]Oct 22, 2008
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    alright well it's not much but that was my season finale!!

    thanks tlg

    so ive got some good stuff to do with feever now but i dont have any time right now in real life to do posts and stuff

    if u need feever u can use him tlg
    but ive got a good idea based off of urs on where i wanna go with this so who knows maybe ill get a post in soon

    till then, seeya
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    BaiMaoRieji

    [8594]Oct 22, 2008
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    Bai Mao (firebender, pudao) (3rd person)
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    Bai Mao spent a week staking out the surroundings. He studied the building, took note of weak spots, ob served the daily life. He also noted that people let some things slip when nobody can repeat what was said. He tried to convince himself that he was avoiding the slave quarters so as not to look suspicious, but he knew the truth was that he was unsure of whether or not he could face Rieji after such a long time away from her.

    His avoidance came to an end when he and Dak were called into Tsaya's chamber. As he entered, he noted the colors. Whereas her father had a more Fire Nation template of Red and Gold, everything in Tsaya's chamber was black, save a gold Fire Nation emblem on one of the wall hangings. It seemed as if the room sucked the light from the surrounding areas.

    Tsaya had a frighteningly malicious grin on her face that made the room darker. She sat on an ornate throne with guards flanking her, drumming her un-gauntleted fingers against the armrest.

    Tsaya: What is taking those fools so long?

    They waited a few more minutes and soon two more guards entered with a figure in tow. She was struggling madly, and almost overpowering them. She was thrown unceremoniously at the foot of the throne. Bai Mao almost leapt at the guards, but remaind still lest his cover be blown. Rieji picked herself up and stared.

    Rieji: What do you want?

    Tsaya: Bai Mao is dead. Turn around and face the one who killed your beloved savior.

    She turned and faced Dak, nonplussed.

    Rieji: You have no proof.

    Tsaya: Yes I do.

    She snapped her fingers, and two more guards brought in Bai Mao's pudao, the glittering blade reflecting the blackness of the room. She stared at the venerable weapon, doing her best to find some defect, some flaw in the craftsmanship. there was nothing.

    Rieji: I don't believe you! This is a trick! You can't- It isn't-

    Tsaya's smile seemed to erupt into a new level of darkness.

    Tsaya: It is.

    Rieji: You... Bastard!

    She leapt up, grabbing the spear from the guards, and rushed at Dak, the point leveled at his chest when she was stopped. The silent one had quickly and efficiently disarmed her, and she was now facedown on the floor with his knee on her back. She struggled for a few minutes, but he wouldn't let up. She dropped her head and wept.

    Tasya: Let her up! and take her to the cells where she belongs. make sure that there are many pointed objects in her cell. She could take care of herself.

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    After the meeting, Bai Mao went back to his surveillance, bu t his heart was elsewhere. He saw Rieji. Alive and well, but she was so different. The quiet, softspoken girl he knew and loved was replaced with a stronger, more beautiful copy. He had to see her again. He went downto the dungeon silently and found her cell. There was no door, just bars. He stared at the girl- no, woman, laying on the floor with her head on the ground, bawling. various objects- sharpened stakes, rusty knives, and some old spearheads- were strewn about. That gave him an idea. he returned to his room, and, taking a dagger from the sash, returned to the cells. Rieji was still crying. he tossed the dagger in, making sure it clanked as loudly as possible.

    Rieji looked up and saw her tormentor. The dagger handle around her neck clanked as she sat up and saw one of her own dagers lying there. they stared at each other in silence, then he left. That stare gave Rieji all that she needed.

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    ThatLostGuy

    [8595]Oct 22, 2008
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    YessirComprendo wrote:
    alright well it's not much but that was my season finale!! thanks tlg so ive got some good stuff to do with feever now but i dont have any time right now in real life to do posts and stuff if u need feever u can use him tlg but ive got a good idea based off of urs on where i wanna go with this so who knows maybe ill get a post in soon till then, seeya

    K cooool. If I need you I'll email you and whatnot. Peace bro and good luck on your midtermzzz.

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    ThatLostGuy

    [8596]Oct 22, 2008
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    Asiscio (Fire Bender and Air Bender)

    (This is a "one time post" for Asiscio by the way. It had to be done.)

    Asiscio was last seen in a fight against Darkboy and Willy as the three of them invaded the Resistance Base under Ishtuix's command. Asiscio soon told his two "partners" of his past with the Avatar, and that Avatar Aang killed his brother a long time ago. Asiscio then attacked Willy and Darkboy, stole Willy's necklace, and went after the Avatar in the hopes of avenging his brother. Rather than capturing the Avatar like Azula ordered, Asiscio planned on killing him...

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    "I WILL KILL THE AVATAR AND AVENGE MY BROTHER," Asiscio shouted as he ditched the scene where he had just temporarily defeated Willy and Darkboy. He walked towards the Avatar's tent while clutching Willy's amulet in his fists. He put the amulet around his neck and created a fireball in the palms of his hands.

    "Burn, baby burn."

    Asiscio shot a fireball at the Avatar's tent. And then another. And another! And another! In a matter of seconds, Aang's tent was gleaming with a terrifying orange glow. Fire swept across the face of the tent and quickly advanced its way inside of it. Asiscio reached into his pocket and pulled out a drawing his brother made some years ago. He held it to his heart as he watched the tent burn to a crisp.

    "Looking for someone?"

    Asiscio turned to his left. "Who the hell are you and why do you talk with such an accent?"

    The man spoke up once again. Asiscio could tell he was some sort of Resistance Guard. "Argh... they call me Dinkins. Real name's Henrick."

    Asiscio turned away from the Avatar's tent and focused completely on Dinkins. "And... what the hell do you want from me? I'm not interesting in any cookies."

    "Do I look like a bloody boy scout to you?!"

    Asiscio grinned and willingly accepted this verbal fight. He spat back, "No you don't look like a boy scout... You look like a friggen putz!"

    "Argh mate, you've done it now!"

    Dinkins thrust out his sword and sped towards Asiscio at full speed. Asiscio slid his feet into the sand and shot a gust of wind at Dinkins, immediately throwing him from his feet and towards the burning tent. "Are we through here," Asiscio shouted. Dinkins stood up after looking like a complete fool and spat on to the ground. "Bloody putz," he whispered to himself before taking off in a different direction than Asiscio.

    Asiscio watched the tent for another five minutes but it was hopeless. The Avatar wasn't home, for if he was then he'd have Air Bended himself out of the tent minutes ago. It had become apparent to Asiscio that if he wanted the whereabouts of the Avatar then he would have to ask the head boss himself. He soon set course for the center of the Resistance Base and within minutes he stood outside Harabi's well guarded tent.

    A guard stepped in front of Asiscio as he attempted to enter Harabi's tent. "Halt!"

    Asiscio, as usual, wasn't going to take anything from anybody. "Who the hell are you!?"

    The guard, who wasn't used to having people talk back, stuttered before speaking. "I- I'm not allowed to let any imposters enter Harabi's tent. He is having a very important meeting with-."

    "Okay... Calm down babysitter," Asiscio muttered as he pushed the guard aside and entered Harabi's tent. The guard chased after Asiscio as the flaps of the tent flopped shut. "I tried to stop him," the guard whined. "But he was persistent!"

    Inside the tent was a small bloodstained wooden table and six wooden stools. There was a map in the center of the table, and it was being held down by some rocks and a couple of mugs. Papers were randomly scattered about the tent, as well as a weapon or two lying across the sand. (This is the tent that Willy/Darkboy end up in.) Harabi was sitting at the table along with two other men. He instantly stood up from his chair and pointed a finger at Asiscio.

    "WHO IS THIS MAN!?"

    Asiscio cracked a smirk and rolled Harabi's finger back into a fist. "Put that weapon away," he smiled. Harabi was not amused. He pushed Asiscio away from him and shouted once more. "For the last time. Who are you!?"

    "I'm Asiscio, and I am looking for the Avatar. Can you tell me where he is or do I need to buy some cookies first?"

    Harabi sighed and proceeded to pick up a dagger which was lying on the tabletop. "Are you a member of the Resistance?"

    "Why yes daddy, I am."

    Harabi's anger was quickly reaching a limit. "He's currently residing in a Resistance Base some miles away from here. It's a long walk. Have fun."

    "And why did you tell me this information without me having to interrogate you?"

    Harabi laughed. "I don't know if you are a good soldier or not. But I do know a sarcastic mother f*cker when I see one. And I'd like you to be out of my hair. Now then- get the hell out of my tent!"

    Asiscio laughed, "Okay Papa Bear. Thanks for the map to grandma's house."

    ++++++++ Three days later ++++++++

    After three days of wandering the shore of Fire Nation Island, Asiscio finally approached the Resistance Base he was looking for. Along the way he encountered numerous other Resistance Bases, but none of which contained the Avatar. Finally, a kind Resistance Warrior informed Asiscio the exact Base that the Avatar was living in. Once he heard that news, he set track for the site. And now here he was, just minutes away from hopefully avenging his brother.

    As Asiscio swaggered into the Base, he was greeted by many Resistance soldiers. Yet he didn't respond to any of them. After walking for a few minutes, Asiscio reached the center of town. He saw a large tent which had numerous guards in front of it. Asiscio thought to himself, "Either that's the Avatar or Harabi has just teleported himself into another tent."

    Asiscio grunted and stepped towards the tent. He got down on one knee and kindly greeted the guards. He planned on tricking them. "I am here to deliver some important news to the Avatar." The guards stared down at Asiscio with stone-like eyes. They never had to deal with intruders since no one would be dumb enough to take on the Avatar alone.

    Someone shouted from inside the tent. "Oogh! Do I have visitors!?"

    Aang leapt out from inside the tent, with his staff in hand. He landed on his feet in front of Asiscio. "Who are you," he questioned.

    "My name is Asiscio, and I have been looking for you for the past five years. You killed my brother, Dahmio. And I am here to avenge my brother by taking YOUR LIFE!"

    Asiscio swept his feet across the sand and shot a fireball at Aang's chest. Quickly, Aang dodged the fireball causing it to strike his tent. One could hear Sokka's scream from inside the tent. "Ahhh! My jacket!"

    Asiscio rapidly shot two more fireballs at Aang, both of which were dodged immediately. Sokka screamed again. Asiscio quickly noticed that he couldn't simply defeat the Avatar with simple Fire Bending. He ran towards Aang and the four guards and shot up into the air using Air Bending (of course). His dark wings helped him stabilize his flight, much like Aang's staff would. Before he launched himself off from the ground he shot off two more fireballs. Each fireball hit a separate guard smack in the face.

    Aang followed in Asiscio's footsteps and set sail into the Air. Asiscio was still ready for Aang to do this though, for he shot off three more fireballs at Aang while soaring through the sky. Aang dodged the first and the second, but the third one nicked his staff causing him to lose his balance in the air and come crashing down to the sandy shore. Asiscio flew above the Avatar and quickly detached his wings. He fell through the air and held out his dagger in front of him. He was inches away from falling on top of Aang when one of the remaining two guards pushed Asiscio mid-flight.

    Asiscio head slid across the sand much like the Avatar's did moments earlier. Both Aang and Asiscio leapt on to their feet at the same time. "Is that all you got, guard? You going to push me to my death!?"

    The guard talked back. "No, I will-." Asiscio shut him up with a fireball to the groin. He proceeded to send another fireball at the remaining guard, quickly knocking the guard off of his feet.

    Aang took a few paces forwards and faced Asiscio. "I'm sure I didn't mean to harm your brother!"

    Asiscio spat on to the ground. "THAT DOESN'T MATTER TO ME! YOU KILLED HIM! YOU KILLED MY BROTHER!" A tear fell from Asiscio's eye. "And now... I am going to KILL YOU!"

    Asiscio raced towards Aang while gripping his dagger sliced down at Aang. The stab was missed, and Aang followed the attack by shooting an Earth pillar up from the ground. The pillar rose straight up into Asiscio's jaw and raised him off from his feet and sent him flying backwards on to his back. Aang slowly approached Asiscio's limp body. "I wasn't here for a fight. And I'm sorry for what I did to your brother." Aang walked away, dignity and all.

    ++++++++ One hour later ++++++++

    Asiscio was up and running for about ten minutes now. He didn't value the fact that the Avatar spared his life. Asiscio was wandering around the Resistance Base, searching for Aang so he could defeat him and avenge his brother. Asiscio planned on searching high and low, for Aang could be behind any corner; hiding and waiting. Asiscio entered a small alleyway as rain shot down from the sky and poured on his head. Thunder struck and lightning could be seen streaming across the heavens. Asiscio turned the corned and entered the darkest part of the alleyway.

    A large figure with six coffins surrounding his grotesque body could barely be seen through the dark night sky and poorly lit alleyway. Asiscio reached for one of his blades and approached the monster standing before him.

    "Hey Bambi... Who the hell are you!?"

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    Thanatos (Memento Mori)
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    "Hey, Bambi.??? Who the hell are you?"

    Thanatos' breathing stopped for a moment, and he let out a long hiss. He turned around and saw a man's figure. With a flash of lightning, Thanatos saw the man had two small wings on his back. He growled and made his way toward the man. This bottom feeder would be an excellent desert to his previous meal. Thanatos mimicked the man by placing his hand on the hilt of his katana. He growled and drew his blade, splattering blood onto the ground.

    "You have no idea who you're messing with, pinhead," said the man. "I'm Asiscio." He drew his blade. Thanatos lunged at him, and both of their blades collided for a moment, before Asiscio leapt into the air. Thanatos jumped as well (remember, Thanatos' earth bending makes the coffins weightless to him), only to have a fireball hit him in the chest. Thanatos fell, breaking through the roof of a house and landing in a bedroom with a loud crash. A man and a woman sat up in the bed, scared by the new figure. Thanatos quickly cut their heads off with his katana and made his way out of the house. He looked into the sky, searching for Asiscio. He heard the sound of fire coming from behind him and built a wall with his coffins to block the blast. He moved the coffins out of the way and Asiscio tackled him to the ground. Thanatos tried to grab him with his bare hands, and both of the rolled through the wall of a second house. A group of old men were playing a game in a dimly lit room, and one of them stood up and shook his cane in the air.

    "Who the hell!?" Thanatos grabbed Asiscio by the arm and threw him against the wall next to the old men. The man with the cane whacked Asiscio over the head, and Asiscio sliced the cane in half with his sword.

    "You wanna try that again?" Asiscio got to his feet and flew out of a large window in the roof, causing shards of glass to fall to the ground. Thanatos stepped over toward the window and felt something tap one of his coffins. Without hesitation, Thanatos cut the old men's torsos from their hips. Thanatos jumped through the skylight and landed on the roof. He heard footsteps against the street below him and looked down. Soldiers from the fire nation palace were in the village; probably to quell the sudden dispute. Lightning flashed through the air and thunder cracked the sound barrier. The soldiers saw Thanatos' shadow for a split second, but when the turned around, he had disappeared.

    As tempting as it was for Thanatos to kill the soldiers there and then, he wanted to find Asiscio even more. Another lightning bolt jumped through the sky, and Thanatos saw a small shadow behind his own. Lightning struck again, and the shadow was larger. Thanatos waited a few seconds and stopped in his tracks, forcing his katana out in front of him. Asiscio's blade met his own, Thanatos putting a lot of strength behind his strike as Asiscio put his entire body weight on his blade. Thanatos brought two of his coffins up and tried to crush Asiscio between them, but he jumped back, throwing a fireball at Thanatos. The coffins came to meet the flames and Asiscio used his air bending to make the fireball explode into a screaming inferno.

    Thanatos slid back and quickly forced his coffins out in front of him. By chance, he slammed Asiscio into a building. Asiscio coughed and staggered on his feet, spitting on the ground.

    "Oh, come on. Is that the best you can do, graveyard?"

    Thanatos roared and lunged at Asiscio. Asiscio smirked and jumped into the air. Thanatos broke through the wall and entered a dimly lit room with the scent of flowers in the air. Two women stared at Thanatos, and another lightning bolt raced across the night sky, where Thanatos saw Asiscio's shadow. Thanatos jumped onto the bed and slashed the women into four pieces, and he heard the skylight above him open.

    "You idiot! Why'd you have to ruin the fun? It was just getting good, too."

    Thanatos jumped into the air and tried to hit Asiscio with his katana. However, Asiscio jumped to the streets below and started running away from Thanatos on foot. He followed the fire bending freak through the alleyways, when he heard a shout come from behind him.

    "Halt!" Thanatos turned around to face the fire nation soldiers he saw only minutes earlier. They sent fire streams at him, but Thanatos blocked them with his coffins and charged the soldiers. They drew their weapons, but it was too late. The beast had already slain the seven warriors, their blood and guts splattered against numerous buildings.

    He looked to the sky again, in hopes of finding his most annoying of prey so far.

    "Behind you," said the small voice.

    A strong force pushed Thanatos forward into the pools of blood from the soldiers.

    "You'll have to better than that, bone daddy!" Asiscio laughed and threw more fire at Thanatos. Thanatos blocked the flames and pushed himself up with the coffins, running toward the airborne punk.

    "Memento mori!" Thanatos leapt onto a short building and then made his way to a taller one. Asiscio laughed at the display, especially when Thanatos almost busted through a roof. Thanatos jumped into a spire and lunged into the air toward Asiscio, smacking him several times with his coffins before kicking him down toward the outskirts of town. Thanatos used his earth bending to send his coffins and himself toward the site where Asiscio landed. He saw the indentation of Asiscio's body on the ground, but Asiscio already fled the scene. That's when a dim glow started radiating from a tent, and two shadows were very close to each other.

    Suddenly, a boy with a staff behind him flew into the air and Asiscio chased after him.

    "Get back here, cue ball!"

    The boy looked back at Asiscio. "I refuse to fight you. I'm sorry that I may have been responsible for your loss, but I'm sorry."

    Asiscio threw a barrage of fireballs at the boy. "An eye for an eye, arrowhead!"

    Thanatos roared and chased the two benders on foot, when the boy turned around and raced toward Thanatos unknowingly. Thanatos used the night sky to mask his presence, and when the boy got close enough, he raised his katana into the air and sliced through the boy's staff. The boy fell to the ground and Asiscio followed him. Thanatos raced for the young boy and tried to stab him in the head, but a sudden burst of air pushed him away. Asiscio landed between the two and sent explosions of fire from his palms. They both fell back and Asiscio laughed.

    "This is sad. Didn't mommy tell you two not to play with fire?"

    Thanatos' breathing accelerated and he charged for Asiscio, attempting to smack him down with his hand. Asiscio stepped to the side and kicked Thanatos' coffin. The coffin pulled back and tried to hit Asiscio, but again, it missed. Asiscio fell to the ground when a large rock hit him in the side. Thanatos saw that the boy had used earth bending to throw the boulder into Asiscio, and he quickly stomped on the ground and kicked another rock at Thanatos. Thanatos held his sword at the ready and shattered the boulder into a hundred pieces. The pieces hovered in mid air and shot into Thanatos. Well, his coffin, at least.

    Thanatos ran to the downed Asiscio and brought his foot down. Asiscio blocked his foot with a sword and took out his second sword. He stepped back and forced a pair of coffins toward Asiscio. Asiscio rolled out of the way and kicked himself into the air, flying towards the young boy.

    "Get over here, you avatar-wannabe!"

    The avatar stomped on the ground and earth shot up at Asiscio. Using his swords, Asiscio shattered the stones and rammed into Aang (at this point, I'm already sick of writing the avatar, although I technically should, since Thanatos doesn't know his name.). Thanatos lunged at the two as they wrestled each other, who were fighting for dominance over the other, and kicked them both in the ribs. The slid across the ground and rolled off each other. Thanatos walked toward the downed benders, when a rock hit him in the torso and forced him back, earning a roar from the monster.

    "Don't worry, twinkle-toes, we got your back!" shouted Toph. Next to her stood Katara and Sokka.

    Sokka's jaw dropped. "Heeeeey ??? that's the bastard that burned my jacket-coat!" he whined.

    "Shut up, we'll get you another one," groaned Katara.

    Thanatos roared when he set his sights on his new prey. He stepped toward them and his coffins started to feel heavier the closer he got to them. He saw Toph was in an obscured earth bending stance, and he realized she was applying more pressure to the coffins. He kneeled and slammed his fists on the ground, sending massive vibrations through the earth and blinding Toph ??? as if she wasn't blind enough already. He felt the pressure on his coffins fade and charged for the Gaang. Sokka drew his meteor blade and tried to counter Thanatos' katana, but the strength behind the beast was much greater than that of the young warrior and he toppled Sokka with ease. Katara took some water from her pouch and slashed at Thanatos with it. Thanatos felt the weight on his coffins increasing again and a large earth pillar kicked him into the air.

    Thanatos looked down and saw Asiscio attacking the gang, Aang close on his tail. He used the handle of his sword and whacked Toph over the head, knocking her out.

    "That outta take care of the blind b***h," he said.

    Thanatos used his own abilities to keep himself in the air and positioned himself with his katana. "Memento mori!" He forced himself down to the ground with a tremendous speed and brought his blade down onto Asiscio. Asiscio grunted when he blocked the katana with both his swords. A large earth wall slammed into both Thanatos and Asiscio, forcing them to roll on the ground together. Asiscio quickly got away from the beast and looked at Aang, who had thrown the earth wall at them.

    Thanatos stood and held his head high, roaring. His muscles were hard and working at full force now, which made him breathe a lot harder and heavier than ever before. Asiscio raced for Aang and Thanatos followed with a slow pace, allowing his energy to build up. Aang took out his staff and spread its wings out again, having used ice to fix the side Thanatos destroyed. He flew into the air and Asiscio pursued him. Thanatos watched them as they did their little dance, exchanging blasts of fire and air. Asiscio used his body and tackled Aang, sending them both into a fire nation fort. Without making a sound, Thanatos raced toward the fort, using the earth beneath his feet to quicken his pace.

    Sokka stood up and looked at Thanatos as he sped away. "Katara, stop him!"

    Katara shot a glare at Sokka. "With what? We're in the heart of the fire nation island. I don't have enough water to do anything."

    "You're useless."

    "Ohhh, then why don't you do something? Oh, you can't! You know why!? You don't even bend!"

    Sokka sighed. "Why the heck did we come here when we're both useless?"
    ==========

    Savage (metal claws)
    -------------
    Just about to reveal Kore's true identity
    -------------

    Savage took a deep breath. "Kore, you don't even remember who you are? Let me remind you. You're real name is???."

    Just then, Asiscio and Aang fell through the top of the medical tent and crushed a bed. Aang stood and ran, but Asiscio quickly got to his feet.

    "Get back here, you sonnova!" He lunged at Aang and tackled him to the ground, punching him in the face. Aang fell back, and Asiscio grabbed his collar. "Hey, let me help you up." He punched Aang in the face again.

    Savage saw Mayhem walk into the tent with Spike, and Spike laughed at the fight.

    "You two; get a freaking room."

    Asiscio stood up and pointed his swords toward Spike and Mayhem. "You wanna go, wonder boy?"

    ============
    Thanatos (Memento Mori)
    ---------------

    Thanatos made his way into the fort, where a guard confronted him. He opened his mouth to speak, but Thanatos shoved his katana down the man's throat. Another guard shouted and brought his sword out to slash Thanatos, but Thanatos punched the man in the throat and caused him to suffocate. He grabbed the first man and ripped his head from his shoulders and threw the body into a large tent with a hole in its roof.

    "Memento mori!" he shouted. He ran into the tent and rammed a pair of archers, knocking them into the middle of the floor. Thanatos saw Savage, Kore, Argus, and Obsidian standing on the opposite side of the tent, Asiscio standing to their right, Aang struggling to stand on their left, and the two archers in the center of the tent.

    Savage clicked his claws and Kore took the eclipse axe from Argus, who stood at the ready with his arm-mounted shuriken. Obsidian stood and put his better arm forward, gathering fire in his palm. Asiscio grasped both of his swords and stared down Aang and Thanatos. Spike and Mayhem stood and looked all around them.

    "This friggen sucks," said Spike.


    Sorry it took so long to get pt.2 up. Up til a few nights ago, the internet was down round here. I tried to post this once, but tv.com apparently didn't post it. Here's pt. 2 of 3.

    Thanatos (Memento Mori)
    ------

    Everyone in the small tent just stood in a circle, looking at one another. Thanatos' heart was pumping so heard that he thought it would burst from his chest. He couldn't take it anymore. Which of the prey would he choose to go after first? No, that didn't matter. He'd kill them all eventually. He drew his sword and roared.

    "Memento Mori!" He charged and swung his coffins around, forcing Savage, Argus, Kore, and Obsidian down to their backs. He moved so fast that everyone panicked. Argus pushed himself up and morphed his arm-mounted shuriken into a chain whip using his earth bending, but when he turned, Thanatos hit him against the jaw with a harsh uppercut. Kore took the axe and swung it at Thanatos, only to hit one of the coffins and crack is down the center. He hit it again, breaking the coffin into two. Thanatos slashed at Kore with his katana, fixing his coffin with a quick contraction of his fist.

    Kore stepped back and then forward, swinging his axe into Thanatos' side. Thanatos punched Kore in the stomach and kicked him in the head. Kore landed on the ground and Thanatos brought his katana over his head. Just as he swung it down, he felt something grab onto his shoulders and pull him back. The tip of his katana scathed over Kore's cheek, cutting in about half an inch. Still, this was enough to cause blood to run down the blade.

    Thanatos whirled around and grabbed onto the claws that had dug deeply into his shoulders. Savage flew into the air when Thanatos whipped him up, and he felt the cold hard ground almost instantly when Thanatos pulled him back down. This was too intense.

    No, it couldn't be.

    That's right. It wasn't enough for him.

    With his body now quaking like a malfunctioning machine, Thanatos made his way for Savage, who was holding his left shoulder. Broken. Not broken enough, still. Thanatos kicked Savage into a pole and forced his blade deep in Savage's shoulder, lifting it. Savage cried out in pain, the bone starting to jut out from his skin. He removed the blade only when a fireball hit his side.

    That crippled firebender? No. The loudmouth airbender/firebending freak? No, that wasn't his attack either. Thanatos turned and saw nothing, only to return his attention back to Savage. Unconscious, and therefore boring. Another fireball, this time from behind, hit his coffin. He turned, and saw his other three prey. However, this time, they had two new members.

    "You're firebending still needs some work," said Obsidian.

    Spike smirked. "Can it."

    "Kore, Mayhem, Argus. Get in close to him," said Obsidian. "Spike, we'll have to try to finish him off."

    "How the hell will we do that?"

    "Just shut up and follow my orders."

    Mayhem pulled out his spiked-sword and Argus morphed his shuriken into a long, thin blade, and Kore flipped the axe onto his shoulder. The three of them ran toward Thanatos, who had his katana at the ready. Fifteen feet. Ten feet. Seven feet. Closer and closer, but Thanatos made no effort to counter or flee. Just then, his coffins rapidly spun around him and he forced his way through the group of three, grabbing Argus by the throat. He threw Argus against a table, breaking the table, and lunged at him. He twirled his sword, making small cut at Argus' back, earning several howls of pain. Something then pushed Thanatos forward, causing the beast to roar with anger. He turned, his blade meeting Kore's eclipse axe. The two fought against each other, each one putting more and more strength behind their weapons. Thanatos pushed Kore back, but Mayhem darted from under Kore's legs and whirled around, slashing at Thanatos' chest several times with his spiked sword. Blood spattered against the dirt ground, but then Thanatos slammed against Mayhem from two sides with his coffins, hearing some bones crack. Mayhem fell, groaning, and Kore stumbled a little.

    Still, too much.

    Thanatos pointed his coffins at Kore, quickly jabbing at him with each one before slicing at his right arm. Kore fell back, his arm already drenched with his blood. Boring. All so boring. Just then, an arrow hit his coffin. He turned and saw Spike readying another arrow on his bow, and Obsidian making a large ball of fire with his uninjured hand. Obsidian stepped forward and threw the fireball at Thanatos. Thanatos brought his coffins together, making the fireball explode and fill the tent with flames. When he closed his eyes to prevent blinding himself, Thanatos felt a small stab at his shoulder. He looked down and saw an arrow had gotten between a very small gap in his coffins. Still, it didn't go deep enough to truly harm Thanatos. He pulled the arrow out and crushed it in his hand, opening his shield again. He saw Spike and Obsidian standing a few yards away from him and started spinning his coffins around himself again.

    Thanatos charged for Obsidian and Spike, when something powerful and hot forced him over to his side. Thanatos roared when he hit the ground and looked around himself. That was NOT the avatar or the idiot. It was something else, but what? Thanatos stood, his coffins touching the ground, and looked around. Again, this time from behind, a large, blue fireball shoved him forward. Thanatos caught himself with his arms and slammed his coffins against the dirt, sending himself back to his feet.

    Both Spike and Obsidian were watching what was happening, and while Spike couldn't keep track on whatever was fighting Thanatos, Obsidian had no problem. He-the man attacking Thanatos-was much faster than the last time Obsidian had met him, but his method of attacking had changed very little. Mayhem and Argus had already gotten to cover, but Kore and Savage had fainted on the tent ground.

    "What the hell is going on?" said Spike.

    "It looks like this outpost attracted more than it's fare share of attention," said Obsidian.

    Another blast of fire forced Thanatos from his feet and out of what would have been the tent, if it were still standing.

    "Spike, get Kore," said Obsidian. "I'll get Savage and we'll pull out now."

    "What about that beast?"

    "It's Scorch's problem now."
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    vegnegun

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    Okay, in case any of you guys are wondering, there's actually a reason that TLG and I brought up those dead posts. Soon, I'll be posting my Season Finale. However, because it's been such a long time since I posted anything, I'd figure none of you remember anything that's gone down leading up to the finale.

    Any, so my finale will be up pretty soon, hopefully. Some serious %%%%% and %%%%%% and then some more %%%%%% is going to go down!
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    vegnegun wrote:
    Okay, in case any of you guys are wondering, there's actually a reason that TLG and I brought up those dead posts. Soon, I'll be posting my Season Finale. However, because it's been such a long time since I posted anything, I'd figure none of you remember anything that's gone down leading up to the finale.

    Any, so my finale will be up pretty soon, hopefully. Some serious %%%%% and %%%%%% and then some more %%%%%% is going to go down!


    I just re-read my Asiscio post and your huge posts, and DAMMM dude I can't wait for your Finale!!!

    It's gonna be amazing!!!
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    Jax: Earth, Fire, Broadswords

    ----FINALE-----

    So the legend says...a dark plague will spread through the lands. Men will become the darkest parts of themselves. The war will rage until the plague reaches death, and brings it alive. Heroes will face their destinies, and villians will tear those dreams to pieces. One must face his ultimate fate, and face the darkness of this plague. If he should fail, the world will end with his fall. If he succeeds, the truth is revealed...

    Jax and Gantos awoke as thunder clapped in the distance. Rain splatted the ground around them. Jax gathered his things and stared off into the distance.

    "Willy Woo is dead Jax," Gantos said. "Destiny is changing again. The Destiny Warriors fight must end here. Our journey to kill those who have altered our goals is over. We have a new goal."

    "And what, may I ask, is that?" Jax asked. He heard another roaring thunderclap.

    "To exterminate the Blex," Gantos replied.

    "Do you even know where they are?" Jax asked.

    "Yes I do. They are at the end of the canyon, on a small riverbed. They are preparing to move out to a bigger location, so we must ambush them now, and eliminate them."

    Jax reluctantly agreed. Gantos seemed dark on the inside, like rage was building. As they walked the rain glistened on Gantos' face. He kept running his fingers along his circle blades. He looked like the real battle was the mental one taking place inside. The Blex wanted Gantos dead, so Jax could imagine the nerves running through every portion of his body.

    Gantos began to sweat. The storm worsened. The wind picked up making the walking harder. He began to grow a dark frown upon his face. Jax kept eyeing him. The rain poured harder and harder. The drops splashing against Gantos' metal weapons annoyed Jax, but especially Gantos. The *clink* *clank* every second could drive any man insane. It was harder to hear those noises as every step they took, the possibility was them marching to their very own doom. Jax reached into Gantos' supplies and pulled out his canteen. He finished off the last drops of cold, refreshing water, then rose his hand in the air and let the rain refill his canteen. He took another swig of the water, then put it back into the supply bag.

    The canyon was coming to an end, and still, the blasted storm continued. Was the water spirit punishing them? Pushing them back away from the Blex? Blex were not souls to be pitied, they would not be protected by a spirit. They deserve to die. Jax kept running that thought in his head. Was this a neccessary kill?

    And finally, the exited the canyon. The river was in sight. The beach was almost flooded. But he could see them, actually both Jax and Gantos could spot them. Their seemed to be an aurora coming from them. The Blex were marching alongside the river. Gantos spotted the leader. He spotted the one who killed innocent souls before his eyes. The leader who turned him against his own brother, and family. The one who drove him to the brink of insanity and back.

    And inside Gantos, the thing holding him from the darkness snapped. He had no control over his actions. His hatred for that...abomination grew ten fold. He unstrapped his metal tools and they fell to the ground.

    "Gantos, if you're going to fight, you need your weapons!" Jax said.

    "Back off. I don't need my f***ing weapons," he said. He screamed bloody murder. It was a scream that could be heard through the thunder and lightning. Then, Gantos made his own lightning.

    The sight could be described as fireworks, gone beserk. Thousands of lightning bolts from the sky rained upon the Blex. But none struck the leader. All of the Blex were burned alive by the flame. But the leader stood tall, untouched. Gantos, wanted to watch him burn.

    "Jax, send him into the water," Gantos said.

    "Gantos..just kill him no-"

    "NO!" Gantos yelled at Jax. "He must suffer!"

    Jax bent the earth under the Blex leader, sending him flying into the river. The Blex leader turned, and laughed.

    "WHAT ARE YOU LAUGHING AT?" Gantos screamed at him.

    "It is done Gantos, the bomb will be activated. Oh, do kill me. I don't want to be here when it goes off! HAHAHAHAHAHA!" the Blex leader laughed.

    Gantos electrified the river, ending the leader's laughter. The creature burned to a crisp, his burning body steaming in the water. The body slumped down, and drifted away. The rain bashed the ground. And suddenly, Jax spotted it. The bomb.
    They had mere moments to escape the end.

    "Gantos! Run this way!" Jax yelled. Him and Gantos began to run back towards the canyon. The ticking should have been drowned out by the rain and thunder, but in Jax's head, it was the loudest sound in the world. The wind prevented him from running to his full potential. Gantos was ahead of him, barely. Suddenly, he heard it. The bang. He turned to see the black orb, slowly erupting. It was growing bigger and bigger. If it touched them, they were doomed.

    They ran more. The black orb pulsing behind them. Jax could not do it anymore. His legs felt numb. The rain pushing him back. The constant thunderclaps. Suddenly, the black orb stopped. The inner part of the orb exploded, and the orb dissapeared.

    "What..?" Jax said. He stopped running and looked forward, as a blur crossed his gaze. And as soon as he turned to face Gantos, the blur returned, and Gantos was suddenly on his back. A black dagger in his chest. A man was stepping on Gantos, his foot pressing against his neck.

    "Finally, I have found you, my brother."

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    (Back a little bit to where the bomb stopped)

    The inner part of the orb exploded. The wind as the orb dissapeared made his cloak ruffle. He looked forward and saw a man stepping on another. Another man was just standing, watching the scene.

    "There they are," the man spoke.

    He walked forward and grabbed the destroyed bomb box. He tossed it into the river and watched it float away.

    "Now, lets see what this bending can do," he said. He bent two black orbs in his hands.
    "Haha, I can bend my very own Blex Bombs," he laughed. He dissolved them into his hand. But he felt a prescese behind him.

    A spirit was in his midst. Laughing.

    And suddenly, the body of a man appeared in front of him. Apparently, reincarnated.

    "Well hello Lucas," the reincarnated man said.

    Lucas stepped back, creating two Blex Orbs in his hands. "What--what do you want?"

    "I have returned for vengeance. And I am taking your bending," he said.

    "Get back!" Lucas yelled.

    "Hahahahaha," the man said. He swished the hair out of his face to reveal two pitch black eyes. "Try and stop me."

    Jonah was back.

    END OF SEASON 4

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