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    bunibender

    [8201]Aug 8, 2008
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    sw33t

    Mayra 2.0

    Several weeks after meeting with lee, Mayra started to look into herself and see how the world saw her. She found a broken peace of mirror and looked at her reflection. her ivy green eyes shimmered back at her. Her eyes where the only good thing about her that she saw im the mirror. her hair was waist-length and it was full of tangles and debris, her face and hands where filthy and her clothes were tattered and worn. How did lee stand to be around her? she wondered after looking at herself. The next morning she wondered into the woods behind lee's house where he was waiting for her on a trunk off a tree. he smiled when he saw her but she wondered why.

    I am not pretty and i look like i rolled around in mud for 10 years she thought.

    But her thoughts didn't put a damper on his mood. He grabbed hand and they walked towards town. Around town Mayra had been know as the "Forest girl" she did care about her title to much in fact she responded if some one called her by her new nick-name. The two walked slowly down the main road stopping everyone and awhile to talk to some one or look at the amazing displays that some of the houses Had in there yards.Tomorrow would be the start of the earth kingdom festival. it is the annual week long festival that celebrates the earth kingdom and its many cultures and customs.she was vary excited for the festival tomorrow but she need something very important to celebrate. a dress. Lee had his formal garb for the festival but he had saved up just enough money to buy her a dress . It was his little surprise for her.

    As they counted their trek down the road an elderly traveler stopped them and asked for directions. He was a refugee and was trying to get to ba sing se. When may heard him say this her mind spun.She thought of her mother, her father her small village and then she thought of the fire Nation. Angry boiled in her stomach and her hands clenched into fists.the earth started to shake under her and the ground cracked in two. when this happened she was shocked, an earth quake? But as she looked around and saw the old man and lee backed up against an house and the rest of the town gawking at her she looked down and saw that the tremor had happened under her feet. she sprinted away and when she got under the cover of the trees she used rockrun. when she got to the river she looked at he reflection in the water. Her murky face looked back at her. with out thinking mayra knew what she had to do. May held her breath and jumped into the cool water. because she was orphaned at a young age, she was never taught to swim , but she managed pull a shelf of earth from the bottom of the river to stand on. she scraped the muck and grime off her arms and feet and untangled most of the twigs from her hair. with the help of a sharp rock she swiftly cut off most of her hair. When she was finish with her transformation. she made a walk way of rocks back to the shore. as she stood on the rivers edge she stared at her reflection and smiled at the outcome. She looked like a new person and she felt like one too. as May rockran back to town she saw lee i the distance looking for her. With perfect precision she turned and headed for lee, stopping about a foot away from him. She looked at him long enough to realize two things:

    1) He wasn't mad at her

    2)He wanted to tell her something

    There was a short pause and tension filled the air between them.

    "May what happened back there ? he asked he was obviously confused by her actions.

    " I don't know i remembered my mom and then i just snapped. I feel like a jerk and i will fix what ever i broke but i am so sorry" May said looking for forgiveness in his face.

    "don't worry about' it he said " whats done is done besides i fixed the hole its no big deal and..."

    But before he could finish, may wrapped her arms around him in a tight hug. When she pulled away from the hug lee was tomatobeet red. she laughed at him and sprinted back towards town.

    " hey wait up" he called. lee couldn't help but smile as he jogged though the wood after her

    tomorrow is going to be perfect, i know it.

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    confucioussayhi

    [8202]Aug 9, 2008
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    Not to be a downer, and I do hate him so, TlG has to approve your character before you post.

    Sorry. I like your stuff, but our "Great Leader" has to put it through first.

    P.S. Most of us put something before our posts, like mine:

    Name (Bending ability)

    Short recap of last post.

    Divider: ///////, -------, ________, etc.

    You don't have to do any of that, but at least make her name in a larger font.

    Your post is fine, but wait a little bit for -sigh- Him.
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    bunibender

    [8203]Aug 9, 2008
    • member since: 07/14/07
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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    Not to be a downer, and I do hate him so, TlG has to approve your character before you post.

    Sorry. I like your stuff, but our "Great Leader" has to put it through first.

    P.S. Most of us put something before our posts, like mine:

    Name (Bending ability)

    Short recap of last post.

    Divider: ///////, -------, ________, etc.

    You don't have to do any of that, but at least make her name in a larger font.

    Your post is fine, but wait a little bit for -sigh- Him.
    sorry i didn't know
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    vegnegun

    [8204]Aug 9, 2008
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    Thanatos (Memento Mori)
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    After murdering a group of thugs and their victims, a mysterious man confronted him
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    "Hey, Bambi.??? Who the hell are you?"

    Thanatos' breathing stopped for a moment, and he let out a long hiss. He turned around and saw a man's figure. With a flash of lightning, Thanatos saw the man had two small wings on his back. He growled and made his way toward the man. This bottom feeder would be an excellent desert to his previous meal. Thanatos mimicked the man by placing his hand on the hilt of his katana. He growled and drew his blade, splattering blood onto the ground.

    "You have no idea who you're messing with, pinhead," said the man. "I'm Asiscio." He drew his blade. Thanatos lunged at him, and both of their blades collided for a moment, before Asiscio leapt into the air. Thanatos jumped as well (remember, Thanatos' earth bending makes the coffins weightless to him), only to have a fireball hit him in the chest. Thanatos fell, breaking through the roof of a house and landing in a bedroom with a loud crash. A man and a woman sat up in the bed, scared by the new figure. Thanatos quickly cut their heads off with his katana and made his way out of the house. He looked into the sky, searching for Asiscio. He heard the sound of fire coming from behind him and built a wall with his coffins to block the blast. He moved the coffins out of the way and Asiscio tackled him to the ground. Thanatos tried to grab him with his bare hands, and both of the rolled through the wall of a second house. A group of old men were playing a game in a dimly lit room, and one of them stood up and shook his cane in the air.

    "Who the hell!?" Thanatos grabbed Asiscio by the arm and threw him against the wall next to the old men. The man with the cane whacked Asiscio over the head, and Asiscio sliced the cane in half with his sword.

    "You wanna try that again?" Asiscio got to his feet and flew out of a large window in the roof, causing shards of glass to fall to the ground. Thanatos stepped over toward the window and felt something tap one of his coffins. Without hesitation, Thanatos cut the old men's torsos from their hips. Thanatos jumped through the skylight and landed on the roof. He heard footsteps against the street below him and looked down. Soldiers from the fire nation palace were in the village; probably to quell the sudden dispute. Lightning flashed through the air and thunder cracked the sound barrier. The soldiers saw Thanatos' shadow for a split second, but when the turned around, he had disappeared.

    As tempting as it was for Thanatos to kill the soldiers there and then, he wanted to find Asiscio even more. Another lightning bolt jumped through the sky, and Thanatos saw a small shadow behind his own. Lightning struck again, and the shadow was larger. Thanatos waited a few seconds and stopped in his tracks, forcing his katana out in front of him. Asiscio's blade met his own, Thanatos putting a lot of strength behind his strike as Asiscio put his entire body weight on his blade. Thanatos brought two of his coffins up and tried to crush Asiscio between them, but he jumped back, throwing a fireball at Thanatos. The coffins came to meet the flames and Asiscio used his air bending to make the fireball explode into a screaming inferno.

    Thanatos slid back and quickly forced his coffins out in front of him. By chance, he slammed Asiscio into a building. Asiscio coughed and staggered on his feet, spitting on the ground.

    "Oh, come on. Is that the best you can do, graveyard?"

    Thanatos roared and lunged at Asiscio. Asiscio smirked and jumped into the air. Thanatos broke through the wall and entered a dimly lit room with the scent of flowers in the air. Two women stared at Thanatos, and another lightning bolt raced across the night sky, where Thanatos saw Asiscio's shadow. Thanatos jumped onto the bed and slashed the women into four pieces, and he heard the skylight above him open.

    "You idiot! Why'd you have to ruin the fun? It was just getting good, too."

    Thanatos jumped into the air and tried to hit Asiscio with his katana. However, Asiscio jumped to the streets below and started running away from Thanatos on foot. He followed the fire bending freak through the alleyways, when he heard a shout come from behind him.

    "Halt!" Thanatos turned around to face the fire nation soldiers he saw only minutes earlier. They sent fire streams at him, but Thanatos blocked them with his coffins and charged the soldiers. They drew their weapons, but it was too late. The beast had already slain the seven warriors, their blood and guts splattered against numerous buildings.

    He looked to the sky again, in hopes of finding his most annoying of prey so far.

    "Behind you," said the small voice.

    A strong force pushed Thanatos forward into the pools of blood from the soldiers.

    "You'll have to better than that, bone daddy!" Asiscio laughed and threw more fire at Thanatos. Thanatos blocked the flames and pushed himself up with the coffins, running toward the airborne punk.

    "Memento mori!" Thanatos leapt onto a short building and then made his way to a taller one. Asiscio laughed at the display, especially when Thanatos almost busted through a roof. Thanatos jumped into a spire and lunged into the air toward Asiscio, smacking him several times with his coffins before kicking him down toward the outskirts of town. Thanatos used his earth bending to send his coffins and himself toward the site where Asiscio landed. He saw the indentation of Asiscio's body on the ground, but Asiscio already fled the scene. That's when a dim glow started radiating from a tent, and two shadows were very close to each other.

    Suddenly, a boy with a staff behind him flew into the air and Asiscio chased after him.

    "Get back here, cue ball!"

    The boy looked back at Asiscio. "I refuse to fight you. I'm sorry that I may have been responsible for your loss, but I'm sorry."

    Asiscio threw a barrage of fireballs at the boy. "An eye for an eye, arrowhead!"

    Thanatos roared and chased the two benders on foot, when the boy turned around and raced toward Thanatos unknowingly. Thanatos used the night sky to mask his presence, and when the boy got close enough, he raised his katana into the air and sliced through the boy's staff. The boy fell to the ground and Asiscio followed him. Thanatos raced for the young boy and tried to stab him in the head, but a sudden burst of air pushed him away. Asiscio landed between the two and sent explosions of fire from his palms. They both fell back and Asiscio laughed.

    "This is sad. Didn't mommy tell you two not to play with fire?"

    Thanatos' breathing accelerated and he charged for Asiscio, attempting to smack him down with his hand. Asiscio stepped to the side and kicked Thanatos' coffin. The coffin pulled back and tried to hit Asiscio, but again, it missed. Asiscio fell to the ground when a large rock hit him in the side. Thanatos saw that the boy had used earth bending to throw the boulder into Asiscio, and he quickly stomped on the ground and kicked another rock at Thanatos. Thanatos held his sword at the ready and shattered the boulder into a hundred pieces. The pieces hovered in mid air and shot into Thanatos. Well, his coffin, at least.

    Thanatos ran to the downed Asiscio and brought his foot down. Asiscio blocked his foot with a sword and took out his second sword. He stepped back and forced a pair of coffins toward Asiscio. Asiscio rolled out of the way and kicked himself into the air, flying towards the young boy.

    "Get over here, you avatar-wannabe!"

    The avatar stomped on the ground and earth shot up at Asiscio. Using his swords, Asiscio shattered the stones and rammed into Aang (at this point, I'm already sick of writing the avatar, although I technically should, since Thanatos doesn't know his name.). Thanatos lunged at the two as they wrestled each other, who were fighting for dominance over the other, and kicked them both in the ribs. The slid across the ground and rolled off each other. Thanatos walked toward the downed benders, when a rock hit him in the torso and forced him back, earning a roar from the monster.

    "Don't worry, twinkle-toes, we got your back!" shouted Toph. Next to her stood Katara and Sokka.

    Sokka's jaw dropped. "Heeeeey ??? that's the bastard that burned my jacket-coat!" he whined.

    "Shut up, we'll get you another one," groaned Katara.

    Thanatos roared when he set his sights on his new prey. He stepped toward them and his coffins started to feel heavier the closer he got to them. He saw Toph was in an obscured earth bending stance, and he realized she was applying more pressure to the coffins. He kneeled and slammed his fists on the ground, sending massive vibrations through the earth and blinding Toph ??? as if she wasn't blind enough already. He felt the pressure on his coffins fade and charged for the Gaang. Sokka drew his meteor blade and tried to counter Thanatos' katana, but the strength behind the beast was much greater than that of the young warrior and he toppled Sokka with ease. Katara took some water from her pouch and slashed at Thanatos with it. Thanatos felt the weight on his coffins increasing again and a large earth pillar kicked him into the air.

    Thanatos looked down and saw Asiscio attacking the gang, Aang close on his tail. He used the handle of his sword and whacked Toph over the head, knocking her out.

    "That outta take care of the blind b***h," he said.

    Thanatos used his own abilities to keep himself in the air and positioned himself with his katana. "Memento mori!" He forced himself down to the ground with a tremendous speed and brought his blade down onto Asiscio. Asiscio grunted when he blocked the katana with both his swords. A large earth wall slammed into both Thanatos and Asiscio, forcing them to roll on the ground together. Asiscio quickly got away from the beast and looked at Aang, who had thrown the earth wall at them.

    Thanatos stood and held his head high, roaring. His muscles were hard and working at full force now, which made him breathe a lot harder and heavier than ever before. Asiscio raced for Aang and Thanatos followed with a slow pace, allowing his energy to build up. Aang took out his staff and spread its wings out again, having used ice to fix the side Thanatos destroyed. He flew into the air and Asiscio pursued him. Thanatos watched them as they did their little dance, exchanging blasts of fire and air. Asiscio used his body and tackled Aang, sending them both into a fire nation fort. Without making a sound, Thanatos raced toward the fort, using the earth beneath his feet to quicken his pace.

    Sokka stood up and looked at Thanatos as he sped away. "Katara, stop him!"

    Katara shot a glare at Sokka. "With what? We're in the heart of the fire nation island. I don't have enough water to do anything."

    "You're useless."

    "Ohhh, then why don't you do something? Oh, you can't! You know why!? You don't even bend!"

    Sokka sighed. "Why the heck did we come here when we're both useless?"
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    Savage (metal claws)
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    Just about to reveal Kore's true identity
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    Savage took a deep breath. "Kore, you don't even remember who you are? Let me remind you. You're real name is???."

    Just then, Asiscio and Aang fell through the top of the medical tent and crushed a bed. Aang stood and ran, but Asiscio quickly got to his feet.

    "Get back here, you sonnova!" He lunged at Aang and tackled him to the ground, punching him in the face. Aang fell back, and Asiscio grabbed his collar. "Hey, let me help you up." He punched Aang in the face again.

    Savage saw Mayhem walk into the tent with Spike, and Spike laughed at the fight.

    "You two; get a freaking room."

    Asiscio stood up and pointed his swords toward Spike and Mayhem. "You wanna go, wonder boy?"

    ============
    Thanatos (Memento Mori)
    ---------------

    Thanatos made his way into the fort, where a guard confronted him. He opened his mouth to speak, but Thanatos shoved his katana down the man's throat. Another guard shouted and brought his sword out to slash Thanatos, but Thanatos punched the man in the throat and caused him to suffocate. He grabbed the first man and ripped his head from his shoulders and threw the body into a large tent with a hole in its roof.

    "Memento mori!" he shouted. He ran into the tent and rammed a pair of archers, knocking them into the middle of the floor. Thanatos saw Savage, Kore, Argus, and Obsidian standing on the opposite side of the tent, Asiscio standing to their right, Aang struggling to stand on their left, and the two archers in the center of the tent.

    Savage clicked his claws and Kore took the eclipse axe from Argus, who stood at the ready with his arm-mounted shuriken. Obsidian stood and put his better arm forward, gathering fire in his palm. Asiscio grasped both of his swords and stared down Aang and Thanatos. Spike and Mayhem stood and looked all around them.

    "This friggen sucks," said Spike.


    Sorry it took so long to get pt.2 up. Up til a few nights ago, the internet was down round here. I tried to post this once, but tv.com apparently didn't post it. Here's pt. 2 of 3.

    BR>

    Thanatos (Memento Mori)
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    Just my last post, geez
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    Everyone in the small tent just stood in a circle, looking at one another. Thanatos' heart was pumping so heard that he thought it would burst from his chest. He couldn't take it anymore. Which of the prey would he choose to go after first? No, that didn't matter. He'd kill them all eventually. He drew his sword and roared.

    "Memento Mori!" He charged and swung his coffins around, forcing Savage, Argus, Kore, and Obsidian down to their backs. He moved so fast that everyone panicked. Argus pushed himself up and morphed his arm-mounted shuriken into a chain whip using his earth bending, but when he turned, Thanatos hit him against the jaw with a harsh uppercut. Kore took the axe and swung it at Thanatos, only to hit one of the coffins and crack is down the center. He hit it again, breaking the coffin into two. Thanatos slashed at Kore with his katana, fixing his coffin with a quick contraction of his fist.

    Kore stepped back and then forward, swinging his axe into Thanatos' side. Thanatos punched Kore in the stomach and kicked him in the head. Kore landed on the ground and Thanatos brought his katana over his head. Just as he swung it down, he felt something grab onto his shoulders and pull him back. The tip of his katana scathed over Kore's cheek, cutting in about half an inch. Still, this was enough to cause blood to run down the blade.

    Thanatos whirled around and grabbed onto the claws that had dug deeply into his shoulders. Savage flew into the air when Thanatos whipped him up, and he felt the cold hard ground almost instantly when Thanatos pulled him back down. This was too intense.

    No, it couldn't be.

    That's right. It wasn't enough for him.

    With his body now quaking like a malfunctioning machine, Thanatos made his way for Savage, who was holding his left shoulder. Broken. Not broken enough, still. Thanatos kicked Savage into a pole and forced his blade deep in Savage's shoulder, lifting it. Savage cried out in pain, the bone starting to jut out from his skin. He removed the blade only when a fireball hit his side.

    That crippled firebender? No. The loudmouth airbender/firebending freak? No, that wasn't his attack either. Thanatos turned and saw nothing, only to return his attention back to Savage. Unconscious, and therefore boring. Another fireball, this time from behind, hit his coffin. He turned, and saw his other three prey. However, this time, they had two new members.

    "You're firebending still needs some work," said Obsidian.

    Spike smirked. "Can it."

    "Kore, Mayhem, Argus. Get in close to him," said Obsidian. "Spike, we'll have to try to finish him off."

    "How the hell will we do that?"

    "Just shut up and follow my orders."

    Mayhem pulled out his spiked-sword and Argus morphed his shuriken into a long, thin blade, and Kore flipped the axe onto his shoulder. The three of them ran toward Thanatos, who had his katana at the ready. Fifteen feet. Ten feet. Seven feet. Closer and closer, but Thanatos made no effort to counter or flee. Just then, his coffins rapidly spun around him and he forced his way through the group of three, grabbing Argus by the throat. He threw Argus against a table, breaking the table, and lunged at him. He twirled his sword, making small cut at Argus' back, earning several howls of pain. Something then pushed Thanatos forward, causing the beast to roar with anger. He turned, his blade meeting Kore's eclipse axe. The two fought against each other, each one putting more and more strength behind their weapons. Thanatos pushed Kore back, but Mayhem darted from under Kore's legs and whirled around, slashing at Thanatos' chest several times with his spiked sword. Blood spattered against the dirt ground, but then Thanatos slammed against Mayhem from two sides with his coffins, hearing some bones crack. Mayhem fell, groaning, and Kore stumbled a little.

    Still, too much.

    Thanatos pointed his coffins at Kore, quickly jabbing at him with each one before slicing at his right arm. Kore fell back, his arm already drenched with his blood. Boring. All so boring. Just then, an arrow hit his coffin. He turned and saw Spike readying another arrow on his bow, and Obsidian making a large ball of fire with his uninjured hand. Obsidian stepped forward and threw the fireball at Thanatos. Thanatos brought his coffins together, making the fireball explode and fill the tent with flames. When he closed his eyes to prevent blinding himself, Thanatos felt a small stab at his shoulder. He looked down and saw an arrow had gotten between a very small gap in his coffins. Still, it didn't go deep enough to truly harm Thanatos. He pulled the arrow out and crushed it in his hand, opening his shield again. He saw Spike and Obsidian standing a few yards away from him and started spinning his coffins around himself again.

    Thanatos charged for Obsidian and Spike, when something powerful and hot forced him over to his side. Thanatos roared when he hit the ground and looked around himself. That was NOT the avatar or the idiot. It was something else, but what? Thanatos stood, his coffins touching the ground, and looked around. Again, this time from behind, a large, blue fireball shoved him forward. Thanatos caught himself with his arms and slammed his coffins against the dirt, sending himself back to his feet.

    Both Spike and Obsidian were watching what was happening, and while Spike couldn't keep track on whatever was fighting Thanatos, Obsidian had no problem. He-the man attacking Thanatos-was much faster than the last time Obsidian had met him, but his method of attacking had changed very little. Mayhem and Argus had already gotten to cover, but Kore and Savage had fainted on the tent ground.

    "What the hell is going on?" said Spike.

    "It looks like this outpost attracted more than it's fare share of attention," said Obsidian.

    Another blast of fire forced Thanatos from his feet and out of what would have been the tent, if it were still standing.

    "Spike, get Kore," said Obsidian. "I'll get Savage and we'll pull out now."

    "What about that beast?"

    "It's Scorch's problem now."
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    Oh heck yea, I so did that! Now, not only are Asiscio and Aang doing only Angi knows what with each other, but my first character to grace this RPG has made his comeback as well.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [8205]Aug 9, 2008
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    YES!!! THE RETURN OF SCORCH!!!! WOOO!!!!
    Does this mean Fang's back
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    Dafoose

    [8206]Aug 9, 2008
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    Ooo, Vegnegun's back.
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    -TheSecondSign-

    [8207]Aug 9, 2008
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    Khuzo, mercanary

    Near his home jungle, off the coast of the ocean.

    Khuzo was climbing down the surface of an ocean cliffside. About 300 feet below him, waves violently crashed into the side of the cliff, and if he fell now, he'd surely die. Just beneath him were massive, jaggy rocks sticking out of the ocean floor. For once in his entire life, he wished he could bend. He reached down for another abrasive surface of the rock, but it fell underneath his weight, but his shifted bodyweight caused the rest of him to fall with it. He screamed and just managed to hang onto the rock in his left hand.

    Grunting, he scrambled violently around the cliffside, trying desperately to grab onto another rock. He found one, and jumped along the wall to grab it. He fell past it, and fell to the ocean. He threw his sword and the chain flew out about fifteen feet. It slammed into the cliffside, saving his life. He twisted about, and dangled in the air. He slammed into the side of the cliff, and shouted out. He scrambled back onto the cliffside, and grabbed onto a nearby rock. He breathed heavily, and it was getting colder and colder.

    Two hours ago he had managed to clear the jungle and was now by the ocean. It had taken him several hours to get this far, and the jungles were more dangerous during night. He hoped to soon have company. He propped himself up with his legs and then looked out over the cliffside. A large, wide opening in it that led to a large cave came into view.

    "Finally..." Khuzo grumbled. He began climbing to the right. Slowly, he managed to make his way over to the opening. He grabbed onto the ledge and climbed up. Khuzo pulled his wet, soaking, freezing body up to the warmth of the cave. He collapsed, and panted heavily on the ground.

    "I...will never...do that...AGAIN..." he grumbled, and he laid down on the cave floor. Sitting there for a moment, he finally got himself up. Brushing himself off, he walked down the completely pitch black corridor of the cave. He reached in his pocket and pulled out a long, thin stick. Slamming it against the wall, it lit up the entire cave and fizzed loudly. He stuck it in his mouth and then kept walking down the corridor.

    It was getting warmer was we walked down the corridor, and thunder boomed outside, and a massive lightning strike struck down into the water beneath him. It flashed the entire cave with intense, bright light. He stopped and looked around. Nothing. He kept walking. As he got down the corridor, he found an ornate door etched entirely out of stone. He felt it's surface and found a small pressure switch. Pressing it, he found another one by feeling around the door. Then he stepped on a third pad, and the door opened. It slid open very slowly, grinding all the way. It opened completely, and inside several people stood and sat around cleaning all sorts of weapons or sitting around chatting.

    They looked up, one raised a bow, and another slowly raised his hands. Khuzo looked at them with a blank face and pulled the flare out of his mouth.

    "...sup?"

    "Hey, Khuzo," another said, and he went back to cleaning his weapon.

    "Long time no see, Khuzo," another said.

    Khuzo stepped in and flipped a switch, causing the whole door to come down. He walked past several people and through winding corridors until he got to a large, ornate door. A nearby guard growled at him, but Khuzo walked past him anyway. He pulled open the door and walked in. Inside, on a small mat, sat an elderly man drinking a spot of tea. Next to him was a Jian sword, very much the opposite of Khuzo's. He quietly sipped his tea, his back turned to Khuzo, calmly watching a fire.

    "So, Khuzo, why have you returned to The Guild? What do you need now?"

    "Compensation."

    "Really? Compensation? You, who regularly killed my assassins as often as you helped them, you, whose sense of morality has cost my organization thousands, and you, who regularly makes a mockery of the skill of my most proficient men?"

    "Yeah."

    "Very well then, what is that you need, my friend?"

    "I need men, and a boat, and you."

    "Me? What good does an old man like me have for a group you form?"

    "Old man? Don't be stupid. I know what you are. Noone has your skill. You make me look like a child."

    "You are a child. You're a child who happens to be proficient swinging around some sharp metal. You haven't even forged your own swords yet. Still hanging on to your father's pair. And your methods are crude. Bombs, poison, chains, what true warrior uses such items?"

    "The kind that wants to make the fight as easy and fair as possible."

    "Hah. The fight could be very fair with just a sword, you are a dirty little skunk."

    "Well that may be, but I've proven myseld and your little organization still owes me."

    "What do you want these men for?"

    "I assume you know about the eclipse? Well, I don't know if you know about the Fire Nation when it comes to secrecy, but I need your men to basically take out the trash. We'll be striking prime targets while the Fire Nation is weaker."

    "Hmm...excellent strategy...but even though we owe you...you will not get my men. Not until you prove yourself to ME personally."

    Khuzo pulled out his swords and got into a stance. The old man didn't even turn around. Khuzo dropped his swords, and then unravelled the chains on his arms and chest. He dropped his knives, bombs, and flares. Then grabbed a larger, single scimitar of the wall.

    The old man picked up the jian and turned to face him. He kicked the pillowseat he had been standing on away and then unsheathed the sword. He threw the sheath aside.

    "Are you ready, Khuzo?"

    "No, but if this what you want-" and Khuzo stabbed a nearby table, pulled it infront of him, and then kicked it towards the old man. He jumped and, while twirling in the air, sliced the table completely in half. Khuzo brought up his sword and rushed at him. He swung, but the old man immediately jumped again as soon as he touched the ground. Khuzo jumped back and blocked an extremely powerful strike that pushed a huge dent in his sword. The old man pulled it out and Khuzo backed off. He looked at the sword.

    "How the?"

    "Superior material makes a superior SWORD!" he yelled, and he swung again. Khuzo ducked and the sword sliced completely through the pillar beneath him. He got back up and jumped back. He reached instinctively for his explosives, but they weren't there.

    "Crap," he grunted and then he dodged another strike.

    "I haven't seen such a pathetic swordsman in MY LIFE!" the man yelled, and Khuzo blocked the sword again. He pushed the sword down and the old man's slid off instead of simply going in, and he swung back. Khuzo now went on the offensive, slicing a table in half with one strike.

    "That's more like it! Use what your father taught you! Try and kill me!" the old man yelled, and he blocked each strike.

    "The only swordsman more pathetic than you is your sorry excuse for a brother, Khuzo!" he yelled again, and easily blocked several more strikes. He pushed to Khuzo's back, and the two met back to back and struck at each other constantly. The guard had walked in but immediately backed off. Sparks were flying in massive, circling waves and the two showed no signs of stopping. Finally, the two seperated and then charged at each other again.

    "COME ON, KHUZO! HIT ME!" the man yelled, and Khuzo swung with his full strength. He made a strike at the old man's legs, but he jumped and landed ON Khuzo's sword.

    "Un-FREAKIN'-believable!" Khuzo yelled, and he twirled with the sword and the man jumped off. The two restarted their fight and continued constantly trading blows until the old man kicked Khuzo's legs out from underneath him.

    Khuzo hit the ground hard and dropped the sword. He slowly looked up and there was sword in his face.

    "You...have yet to master swordsmanship. Of all your skills, you use swordsmanship the most frequently. Do you truly think that you are at your peak? You haven't even BEGUN to reach your peak boy. One day, you'll be like your father. THAT man was unstoppable."

    "He was...but things happened. We can't control them," Khuzo said, as he pulled himself up. The old man slowly walked over and grabbed his sheath.

    "And your leg has a bad charlie horse in it. Go see the doctor in the medical center. She can get it out."

    "Yeah, I know. Thanks, old man."

    "Yes. Your men and boat will be by the docks below. Your old friends will be quite excited to see you, Khuzo. It truly has been too long."

    Khuzo stood up and walked over to the door. He walked back to grab the sword, and set it on a nearby table.

    "And Khuzo."

    "What?"

    "Watch your footing better, boy."

    "Right."

    "And good luck. Something tells me your brother will be crossing your path again soon. Don't let that little monster dishonor you, Khuzo. Kill him before he has a chance to do more harm to your father's reputation. And watch out. Reports of pirates are coming up all over the coast. And they're the same pirates you have a very difficult past with, Khuzo. Watch out for that lumber, crazy captain of theirs."

    "I will. Thanks for the update," Khuzo said as he walked out the door.

    The guard looked at him and grunted, and then nodded his head.

    "Well, that was fun," Khuzo said.

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    BaiMaoRieji

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    I have returned to the land of America, ad am typing via on-screen keyboard so as nt to wae anyone with my loud-ass keyboard. Post Monday
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    I have returned to the land of America, ad am typing via on-screen keyboard so as nt to wae anyone with my loud-ass keyboard. Post Monday


    Glad you're back.
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    Double09nhalf

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    Dafoose wrote:
    Ooo, Vegnegun's back.

    Nice, very nice

    Blood splashing+cracking/protruding bones+intense flameballs= very cool post

    although it $ucks to be them.

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    BaiMaoRieji

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    Double09nhalf wrote:

    Dafoose wrote:
    Ooo, Vegnegun's back.

    Nice, very nice

    Blood splashing+cracking/protruding bones+intense flameballs= very cool post

    although it $ucks to be them.


    Also, swinging coffins around = ultimate badass.
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    Double09nhalf

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    -TheSecondSign- wrote:

    "And your leg has a bad charlie horse in it. Go see the doctor in the medical center. She can get it out."

    "Doctor, I think i've found it," said the nurse pulling a plush hand puppet out of Kuzo's leg.

    "Ah, good work nurse. You've found the charlie horse," replied the doctor.

    LOL

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    -TheSecondSign-

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    Khuzo, mercanary

    The Guild Cliffside HeadQuarters

    --

    "Well, I managed to fix your leg. It turns out that whatever hit you there moved a once completely harmles piece of a spear out of place and it caused you a significant amount of continous pain, but that shouldn't be a problem anymore. But there's some other problems."

    "Such as?"

    "Well, further examination revealed that your body contained various other...problems..."

    "Such as?"

    "Well, not so much as problems with your body, per se, but let's just say that your body also harbored several other..."objects"..."

    "Such AS?"

    "Well, for starters, there's the swordtip in your abdomen, the poison dart lodged underneath the skin of your neck, your left leg had a considerable amount of well...what appears to be metallic shrapnel, possibly from an explosive, there's an arrowhead stuck in your right foot, and your forehead had a piece of rock lodged deep underneath the skin. Also, I found three shark's teeth in your right arm, a broken key in your left arm, your left hand had a cactus needle stuck in it, and to top it off, there was part of what looks like a knife handle or part of a knife stuck IN your head. Actually in it. All the way underneath the skin. Completely covered by your body."

    "Is that all?"

    "Yes that should about-wait. Did you just ask if that was ALL?"

    "Yeah, I always figured there was more in there."

    "And none of this ever bothered you at all? You never felt any pain from any of this? No deterrence, physically?"

    "No, why should I?"

    "...I...I never...I never want to know what it is that you do, or why you do it, is that clear?"

    She was standing, dumbfounded, directly next to a metallic tin that contained all of these things. The weapon bits and shark's teeth were covered completely in blood.

    Khuzo got up and looked down in it. He picked out the cactus needle and stared at it.

    "Hmph, I always wondered where my lucky needle went. I had it in my hand one day and it was gone."

    "Please, no more. Also, your team has been assembled and your boat is ready."

    "Oh, thank you."

    Khuzo walked out of the office and closed the door behind him. When it closed, he saw the nurse shaking her head. She was picking up the metal tin, and then disappeared from view. He looked up and saw an old friend standing infront of him.

    It was the legendary Scarecrow Jack. He was tall, and hidden behind a full set of leather armor with some chainmail joints. Over it was a large, brown, shapeless cloak that went over the entire upper half of his body. His head was entirely covered by a helmet that Scarecrow had built himself. He held out his hand silently to shake Khuzo's.

    Scarecrow was a genius. A nonbender, like Khuzo, but a genius who had learned to turn one art of Khuzo's into something completely different. Scarecrow was so intelligent it was scary. He had built artillery equipment Khuzo would have never dreamed of. Small, compact bomb launcers that could a lot of damage very quickly. A master of the bomb, was Scarecrow Jack. He hardly ever spoke either, and noone, other than Khuzo, knew his real name. Scarecrow Jack was just a stagename.

    "Hey Scarecrow, how's it goin'?" Khuzo asked as he shook his hand. Scarecrow only nodded, even in the presence of his best friend. On his back was a large, metallic, ornate tube like device that was shaped like a crossbow, with the drawstrings sticking out of it. But the top was covered, so the ammunition, whatever it was, couldn't be seen. Or touched. It had a unique handle as well. A collapsable, portable cannon was disassembled on his wasit and back, and there were several grenades on him as well, and a sword was also apparent, attached to his belt. A forth unique object was on his back, but it had a hook sticking out the end.

    Scarecrow stepped aside, and a very, very attractive girl roughly Khuzo's age stepped forward. She was wearing a fitting chinese dress, and looked like she was a wealthy upperclass woman, not a bounty hunter for The Guild. She was shorter than him, roughly by eight inches, and didn't smell like the back end of an ape. Then again, she hadn't just climbed down the cliffside. She had taken the easier way that involved water and fancy boat rides. She stepped up to Khuzo, and smiled slyly.

    "Khuzo...when was the last time we saw each other?" asked the girl.

    "Two years ago, possibly today, I think. Well, at least on friendly terms, Rain."

    "Yes, Ba Sing Se was a lot of fun, wasn't it?" she replied. Rain was no push over. Her name was true to her waterbending fighting style, something that could send shivers down even Khuzo's spine.

    "As fun as being choked to near death," he replied sarcastically. She smiled and stepped back, but winked at him. Khuzo's face was concealed largely by his still pulled over cloak, but he smiled back at her, but it wasn't a flirtatious smile, it wasn't a friendly one either.

    It was the kind of smile you gave to someone when you basically wanted to say, without words, "I'm gonna kill you as soon as we're not surrounded by other people". She gave him a similar smile and stepped back for one last man to come in. This man was considerably larger than either Khuzo or Scarecrow, and looked far more menacing. He had a considerably darker skin tone than Khuzo, who often appeared lighter than most people despite his constant exposure to the sun and extreme elements, and was much, much taller. He was well built, not overweight, and carried a massive, intimidating sword on his back. He had a scowl on his face and he looked down at Khuzo.

    "We're here to do something. Well, let's do something."

    "And how are you, Davin?

    "I'm feelin' good, first time I have since Ba Sing Se. I'm still singing over what you did to me, Khuzo," Davin said in a more cheerful tone that the girl. He almost seemed to be fond of these events.

    "It was a good challenge, you're a real tough one, Davin."

    Davin's sword was but one of many weapons he used. He wore a large cloak, like Khuzo, but with different weapons. On his waist was a sling, a long chain with a sharp pommel was on his chest, and a very large machete was also on his waist. On his back were also two large shields, almost as big as Rain. He stepped aside to let other people pass by and hear Khuzo's briefing.

    "After the storm is over, we'll be heading back to a small group of mine, and then laying seige to a large Fire Nation facility afterwards. It's located on a large island and is a very old temple. As with very old temples, RAIN, you should know BY NOW THAT THERE ARE TRAPS, UNLIKE LAST TIME," he said in a loud, angered tone. She smiled innocently.

    "Why, Khuzo, you should've ducked. It's not my fault that arrow went where it did."

    "It still hurts to sit down sometimes, Rain. It still hurts to sit down."

    "Hey, at least it was back there, and not upfront."

    "You wouldn't have a head if it had hit me upfront."

    She smiled innocently again and then stopped talking.

    "Now, as customary, anyone not in our group you can kill at your own leisure. Anything valuable that you find is yours to personally do as you wish with. We have one objective, and that is to assault and kill everyone on the island. No one escapes, and no one not in our group gets to live and tell about what happened on that day. They all die. We clear?"

    "Crystal," Davin said.

    "You got it," Rain said.

    Scarecrow nodded.

    Rain looked over at him.

    "Scarecrow Jack, huh? I never saw you at Ba Sing Se. I heard you left the competition in "shambles". What can you do?" she asked. Scarecrow pulled the crossbow off his back. He pulled out a small canister from underneath his cloak. He pointed to the barrel, and then to the round. Scarecrow then showed the action of loading it into the back breech of the tube, and it became clear it could only hold one canister before needing another to be loaded, just like the crossbows it had been modeled after, and then put the canister away. He then raised his hand and made a "boom" motion with it.

    She raised her eyebrows curiously.

    "Well, I'll have to see that in action, up close, to get the full jist of it, won't I?" she asked.

    He only nodded, and then put the crossbow away.

    "It looks to me like he said it was a bomb launcher. I wonder how far they go."

    "I don't know...but we'll have to see, won't we? Don't you also have a "pet", Scarecrow?"

    Scarecrow nodded again, but remained otherwise motionless and completely silent.

    Khuzo patted him on the shoulder.

    "She can be pretty annoying, but don't underestimate her," he said.

    He only nodded.

    Outside, the storms passed over violently.

    --

    No, what Scarecrow has is NOT a gun, I know that that's forbidden. It's actually a combination of an ordinary crossbow and the first chinese artillery cannons(One of which he was also carrying as a collapsable version). The first chinese cannons were carried by a single man who wore them over the shoulder. This was almost 800 years ago.

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    LondonParisNYC

    [8214]Aug 9, 2008
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    Sorry for the procrastination.

    Quick recap of last 4 entries:-Character Tessa introduction, stories of troubled past, explains how she's a thief. ambushed by rag-tag team of rebels trying to help the post-war world, brooklyn-paranoid, chris-goody-two-show, Alexis-cold, John-angsty, Tessa agrees to join, Group set out for revenge, fame and fortune, except for Chris who only wants good. Tessa reveals something disturbing she witnessed involving a girl killed in a hail storm, Alexis and John get into a heated argument, they steal a boat and sail off to the firenation capital to meet the untouchable 8 (zuko, katara, aang, sokka, toph, mai, suki, ty lee).. Tessa explains her deepest fears. Tessa reveals she wasn't an orphan and John reveals is the son of Zhao the deceased fire nation general.
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    #5

    We were all liars on the inside. Even myself, I am a liar. Alexis, Brooklyn and Chris are looking at John and I with all-accusing eyes just because we didn't want to be judged by were we've come from.

    I came from middle-****suburbia. Picket fences around the lawn, barbecues with neighbors, mother father and sister. Deceased sister that is.

    John comes from the riches of royalty. Politics, scandals, and blood on his hands. And yet, we are the same. We wanted a fresh start. We want people to look at us and rebels who have nothing, in search of everything.

    Alexis came from a drunken-stepfather's fury. Beer bottles smashing against the walls, and bruises down her arm. When Brooklyn and Chris found her she was working behind the smokey alcoves of the brothel house.

    Brooklyn came from pure sociopathy. Her brother, turned against the family and decided to join the firenation army. He persisted to kill his mother, father, younger brother and older sister. Brooklyn hid in the coat closet, and watched all with eyes wide open.

    Chris came from hippies, no wonder. Not much of a back story there.

    We sat in the throne room, waiting for firelord Zuko to make his entrance. I could tell the room was ornate, I could tell you everything was trimmed in a fine layer of gold, I could tell you the walls were a deep maroon and floors a lustrous black marble with the firenation emblem mosaiced in red in the center, but you already knew that. This was the firenation after all, war or no war they were still the country of luxury and extravagance

    "You're a f***ing traitor." alexis snarled. She was fuming. She was so angry she couldn't even sit down with us. She just paced back and forth across the room, holding her head her hand, mumbling is disbelief.

    "Alexis, I swear I am nothing like my father. He was insane with power! I wanted nothing to do with that!" John tried to explain, grinding his teeth together in frustration. No one believed him.

    "John..." a voice said, still a silhouette in the darkly lit entrance to room. "Once a liar, always a liar."

    "zuko" he said, his voice suddenly very solemn

    I found it amazing that my eyes were drawn to his scar immediately. I couldn't look away. I felt like a little kid staring at cripple, their mother quietly scolding them with a tug on the arm.

    "Explain to me why I shouldn't have you killed." he said, walking over to us. I was surprised he didn't sit on the throne, but rather at the table, right next to us.

    We all choked a little on his words.

    Zuko looked around at us, clearly seeing we all had no idea about John. "I see he's left you all in the dark about his past."

    John looked off somewhere in the distance, knowing the story that would follow.
    "First you should know everything John has told you, it's all bullsh*t."

    John was grinding his teeth together, dappled by beads of sweat nervously engulfing his face.

    "One year ago, when I briefly returned to firenation, by the request of my father, I saw John again. John used to be a childhood friend of mine, so when I went to search for him, I was surprised to hear he was in prison...

    "What do you mean, he's in prison?" inquired Zuko, remembering John only as a young smiling fourteen year old, training opposite of him.

    "John was smuggling money out of the capital bank, with the help of woman named Annette., who was a bank employee."

    Annette was a woman he knew all too well. By that I mean behind bedroom doors.

    "Annette." he said, his voice dry and incredulous

    The man nod his head. "It's really a shame what happened to her, she was such a sweet girl."

    Zuko suddenly found himself unreasonably angry at the guard, "What happened to her!?"

    "Annette decided she didn't want to be a part of the operation anymore, and confronted John. She told him that if he didn't stop pilfering money, she would go to the authorities. John and Annette were living together on the the Palace grounds at the time, it was believed they were also romantically linked. John didn't take the news too well, and one night, poisoned Annette's dinner. The coroner found large amounts of cyanide in her body, and John's motive was obvious."

    The man could feel the steam and anger advancing up from his palms.

    "I'm sorry Prince Zuko."

    His breathes were shallow and fast, fists clenched like wrecking balls "Take me to him!" he demanded.

    It was the shortest walk of his life. His was blinded by fury which made his feet move like they were pacing on air.

    "John you bastard!" was all he was able to say his voice dripping with livid fervor.

    "Zuko, I can explain. I didn't poison her or steal money from the bank. Annette was working with a man named Chen who despises me because of who my father is. Annette didn't want to steal money anymore so got nervous and poisoned, then made it look like I did it, by packing one of my suitcases and leaving it in her room. But Chen was very paranoid, and killed himself in fear of getting caught."

    Zuko understood that sometimes death was a better option then facing the torment of the firenation.


    "You have to understand. John is a very good liar. He had me believing him whole-heartedly in no time. I pulled some strings to get him out of jail. I would say that was one of the biggest mistakes in my life, because a couple of days after, something horrible happened."

    We all instinctively leaned in a little bit closer.

    "I came home one day to the palace, and on my way upstairs to my room, I passed the room of a girl named Marie. John, got around, you know. So I wouldn't have been surprised if he was in that room as well. The door was shut, but a strange smell was leaking out. It smelled like gasoline. So knocked on the door..."

    "Is everything O.K. in there? It smells like gasoline." Zuko asked, lightly rapping on the door.

    There was no answer.

    "Marie...John...you guys in there?"

    More silence.

    Zuko slowly opened the door to see something very shocking. Marie was tied and bound to a chair, and John was spilling gasoline all over the room.

    John saw me, and smiled slightly. Before Zuko had time to say "what the..." He lit the room ablaze. The flame raged very quickly and crawled onto the walls. Zuko could see John through the smoke. For a second their eyes locked and the room seemed to freeze, because Zuko realized at that instant, John had gotten exactly what he wanted. It was purely euphoric for him that Zuko had walked in at that exact moment, and John was savoring the disbelief deluging Zuko's eyes. John quickly moved for an open window and climbed out. Just as Zuko was about to follow after him, a flame soured right in front of his face, causing him to fall to the ground.

    He suddenly remembered Marie. But as he looked at her from the ground, smoke quenching his lungs, he saw her skin, dark and corroded, her eyes still open, mouth slightly gaped, but she was singed, he was looking at a dead woman walking. A dead woman searing.

    "I later found out it was an assassination plan gone awry. Marie had accidently stumbled across John's papers. On those papers, were well drawn out sketches and plans concerning an assassination attempt, targeting me. He walked in just as marie was looking was looking at the paper. He was going to make it look like a suicide, but when I walked in, he must have figured, 'why not kill two birds with one stone.' I found all this out with an associate he was working with, who was later put to death."

    I think everyone was just in a state of shock. How does one take in that kind of information. All I could think about is that night, talking with John about my fears. He seemed so vulnerable and human...but now to hear this. I didn't know how to react. I felt so lost in Zuko's story, like an endless maze.

    "But I wonder...why John...why have you come back, especially considering what I know. I wouldn't think of you as stupid enough to jeopardize what ever little operation you have going on here. So tell me John, why are you here."

    ______
    sorry this took so long to get up.
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    Double09nhalf

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    Nice posts Paris but I gotta comment on the gasoline. You see while gasoline is very flammable it could never exist in the avatar world. And while coal, oil (like lamp oil) do exist gasoline is a modern day fuel that is a filtered form of crued oil/ Texa tea for all those beverly hillbilly watchers.

    I might just be making a mountain out a mole hill but we try to stay true to the avatar world(even though some of these guys BS certain things *Coughinsert-here Cough*

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    LondonParisNYC

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    Double09nhalf wrote:

    Nice posts Paris but I gotta comment on the gasoline. You see while gasoline is very flammable it could never exist in the avatar world. And while coal, oil (like lamp oil) do exist gasoline is a modern day fuel that is a filtered form of crued oil/ Texa tea for all those beverly hillbilly watchers.

    I might just be making a mountain out a mole hill but we try to stay true to the avatar world(even though some of these guys BS certain things *Coughinsert-here Cough*

    Ohhh sorry. I didn't even realize lol.

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    Eman5805

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    Steam driven vehicles would logically proceed gas driven, btw.

    And glad to see Vegnegun is back. I probably should post something besides my own stuff now.
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    crazyteen000

    [8218]Aug 10, 2008
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    LondonParisNYC wrote:
    Sorry for the procrastination.

    Quick recap of last 4 entries:-Character Tessa introduction, stories of troubled past, explains how she's a thief. ambushed by rag-tag team of rebels trying to help the post-war world, brooklyn-paranoid, chris-goody-two-show, Alexis-cold, John-angsty, Tessa agrees to join, Group set out for revenge, fame and fortune, except for Chris who only wants good. Tessa reveals something disturbing she witnessed involving a girl killed in a hail storm, Alexis and John get into a heated argument, they steal a boat and sail off to the firenation capital to meet the untouchable 8 (zuko, katara, aang, sokka, toph, mai, suki, ty lee).. Tessa explains her deepest fears. Tessa reveals she wasn't an orphan and John reveals is the son of Zhao the deceased fire nation general.
    ________
    #5

    We were all liars on the inside. Even myself, I am a liar. Alexis, Brooklyn and Chris are looking at John and I with all-accusing eyes just because we didn't want to be judged by were we've come from.

    I came from middle-****suburbia. Picket fences around the lawn, barbecues with neighbors, mother father and sister. Deceased sister that is.

    John comes from the riches of royalty. Politics, scandals, and blood on his hands. And yet, we are the same. We wanted a fresh start. We want people to look at us and rebels who have nothing, in search of everything.

    Alexis came from a drunken-stepfather's fury. Beer bottles smashing against the walls, and bruises down her arm. When Brooklyn and Chris found her she was working behind the smokey alcoves of the brothel house.

    Brooklyn came from pure sociopathy. Her brother, turned against the family and decided to join the firenation army. He persisted to kill his mother, father, younger brother and older sister. Brooklyn hid in the coat closet, and watched all with eyes wide open.

    Chris came from hippies, no wonder. Not much of a back story there.

    We sat in the throne room, waiting for firelord Zuko to make his entrance. I could tell the room was ornate, I could tell you everything was trimmed in a fine layer of gold, I could tell you the walls were a deep maroon and floors a lustrous black marble with the firenation emblem mosaiced in red in the center, but you already knew that. This was the firenation after all, war or no war they were still the country of luxury and extravagance

    "You're a f***ing traitor." alexis snarled. She was fuming. She was so angry she couldn't even sit down with us. She just paced back and forth across the room, holding her head her hand, mumbling is disbelief.

    "Alexis, I swear I am nothing like my father. He was insane with power! I wanted nothing to do with that!" John tried to explain, grinding his teeth together in frustration. No one believed him.

    "John..." a voice said, still a silhouette in the darkly lit entrance to room. "Once a liar, always a liar."

    "zuko" he said, his voice suddenly very solemn

    I found it amazing that my eyes were drawn to his scar immediately. I couldn't look away. I felt like a little kid staring at cripple, their mother quietly scolding them with a tug on the arm.

    "Explain to me why I shouldn't have you killed." he said, walking over to us. I was surprised he didn't sit on the throne, but rather at the table, right next to us.

    We all choked a little on his words.

    Zuko looked around at us, clearly seeing we all had no idea about John. "I see he's left you all in the dark about his past."

    John looked off somewhere in the distance, knowing the story that would follow.
    "First you should know everything John has told you, it's all bullsh*t."

    John was grinding his teeth together, dappled by beads of sweat nervously engulfing his face.

    "One year ago, when I briefly returned to firenation, by the request of my father, I saw John again. John used to be a childhood friend of mine, so when I went to search for him, I was surprised to hear he was in prison...

    "What do you mean, he's in prison?" inquired Zuko, remembering John only as a young smiling fourteen year old, training opposite of him.

    "John was smuggling money out of the capital bank, with the help of woman named Annette., who was a bank employee."

    Annette was a woman he knew all too well. By that I mean behind bedroom doors.

    "Annette." he said, his voice dry and incredulous

    The man nod his head. "It's really a shame what happened to her, she was such a sweet girl."

    Zuko suddenly found himself unreasonably angry at the guard, "What happened to her!?"

    "Annette decided she didn't want to be a part of the operation anymore, and confronted John. She told him that if he didn't stop pilfering money, she would go to the authorities. John and Annette were living together on the the Palace grounds at the time, it was believed they were also romantically linked. John didn't take the news too well, and one night, poisoned Annette's dinner. The coroner found large amounts of cyanide in her body, and John's motive was obvious."

    The man could feel the steam and anger advancing up from his palms.

    "I'm sorry Prince Zuko."

    His breathes were shallow and fast, fists clenched like wrecking balls "Take me to him!" he demanded.

    It was the shortest walk of his life. His was blinded by fury which made his feet move like they were pacing on air.

    "John you bastard!" was all he was able to say his voice dripping with livid fervor.

    "Zuko, I can explain. I didn't poison her or steal money from the bank. Annette was working with a man named Chen who despises me because of who my father is. Annette didn't want to steal money anymore so got nervous and poisoned, then made it look like I did it, by packing one of my suitcases and leaving it in her room. But Chen was very paranoid, and killed himself in fear of getting caught."

    Zuko understood that sometimes death was a better option then facing the torment of the firenation.


    "You have to understand. John is a very good liar. He had me believing him whole-heartedly in no time. I pulled some strings to get him out of jail. I would say that was one of the biggest mistakes in my life, because a couple of days after, something horrible happened."

    We all instinctively leaned in a little bit closer.

    "I came home one day to the palace, and on my way upstairs to my room, I passed the room of a girl named Marie. John, got around, you know. So I wouldn't have been surprised if he was in that room as well. The door was shut, but a strange smell was leaking out. It smelled like gasoline. So knocked on the door..."

    "Is everything O.K. in there? It smells like gasoline." Zuko asked, lightly rapping on the door.

    There was no answer.

    "Marie...John...you guys in there?"

    More silence.

    Zuko slowly opened the door to see something very shocking. Marie was tied and bound to a chair, and John was spilling gasoline all over the room.

    John saw me, and smiled slightly. Before Zuko had time to say "what the..." He lit the room ablaze. The flame raged very quickly and crawled onto the walls. Zuko could see John through the smoke. For a second their eyes locked and the room seemed to freeze, because Zuko realized at that instant, John had gotten exactly what he wanted. It was purely euphoric for him that Zuko had walked in at that exact moment, and John was savoring the disbelief deluging Zuko's eyes. John quickly moved for an open window and climbed out. Just as Zuko was about to follow after him, a flame soured right in front of his face, causing him to fall to the ground.

    He suddenly remembered Marie. But as he looked at her from the ground, smoke quenching his lungs, he saw her skin, dark and corroded, her eyes still open, mouth slightly gaped, but she was singed, he was looking at a dead woman walking. A dead woman searing.

    "I later found out it was an assassination plan gone awry. Marie had accidently stumbled across John's papers. On those papers, were well drawn out sketches and plans concerning an assassination attempt, targeting me. He walked in just as marie was looking was looking at the paper. He was going to make it look like a suicide, but when I walked in, he must have figured, 'why not kill two birds with one stone.' I found all this out with an associate he was working with, who was later put to death."

    I think everyone was just in a state of shock. How does one take in that kind of information. All I could think about is that night, talking with John about my fears. He seemed so vulnerable and human...but now to hear this. I didn't know how to react. I felt so lost in Zuko's story, like an endless maze.

    "But I wonder...why John...why have you come back, especially considering what I know. I wouldn't think of you as stupid enough to jeopardize what ever little operation you have going on here. So tell me John, why are you here."

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    sorry this took so long to get up.
    instead of gasoline you could of used blasting jelly
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    LondonParisNYC

    [8219]Aug 10, 2008
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    crazyteen000 wrote:
    LondonParisNYC wrote:
    Sorry for the procrastination.

    Quick recap of last 4 entries:-Character Tessa introduction, stories of troubled past, explains how she's a thief. ambushed by rag-tag team of rebels trying to help the post-war world, brooklyn-paranoid, chris-goody-two-show, Alexis-cold, John-angsty, Tessa agrees to join, Group set out for revenge, fame and fortune, except for Chris who only wants good. Tessa reveals something disturbing she witnessed involving a girl killed in a hail storm, Alexis and John get into a heated argument, they steal a boat and sail off to the firenation capital to meet the untouchable 8 (zuko, katara, aang, sokka, toph, mai, suki, ty lee).. Tessa explains her deepest fears. Tessa reveals she wasn't an orphan and John reveals is the son of Zhao the deceased fire nation general.
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    #5

    We were all liars on the inside. Even myself, I am a liar. Alexis, Brooklyn and Chris are looking at John and I with all-accusing eyes just because we didn't want to be judged by were we've come from.

    I came from middle-****suburbia. Picket fences around the lawn, barbecues with neighbors, mother father and sister. Deceased sister that is.

    John comes from the riches of royalty. Politics, scandals, and blood on his hands. And yet, we are the same. We wanted a fresh start. We want people to look at us and rebels who have nothing, in search of everything.

    Alexis came from a drunken-stepfather's fury. Beer bottles smashing against the walls, and bruises down her arm. When Brooklyn and Chris found her she was working behind the smokey alcoves of the brothel house.

    Brooklyn came from pure sociopathy. Her brother, turned against the family and decided to join the firenation army. He persisted to kill his mother, father, younger brother and older sister. Brooklyn hid in the coat closet, and watched all with eyes wide open.

    Chris came from hippies, no wonder. Not much of a back story there.

    We sat in the throne room, waiting for firelord Zuko to make his entrance. I could tell the room was ornate, I could tell you everything was trimmed in a fine layer of gold, I could tell you the walls were a deep maroon and floors a lustrous black marble with the firenation emblem mosaiced in red in the center, but you already knew that. This was the firenation after all, war or no war they were still the country of luxury and extravagance

    "You're a f***ing traitor." alexis snarled. She was fuming. She was so angry she couldn't even sit down with us. She just paced back and forth across the room, holding her head her hand, mumbling is disbelief.

    "Alexis, I swear I am nothing like my father. He was insane with power! I wanted nothing to do with that!" John tried to explain, grinding his teeth together in frustration. No one believed him.

    "John..." a voice said, still a silhouette in the darkly lit entrance to room. "Once a liar, always a liar."

    "zuko" he said, his voice suddenly very solemn

    I found it amazing that my eyes were drawn to his scar immediately. I couldn't look away. I felt like a little kid staring at cripple, their mother quietly scolding them with a tug on the arm.

    "Explain to me why I shouldn't have you killed." he said, walking over to us. I was surprised he didn't sit on the throne, but rather at the table, right next to us.

    We all choked a little on his words.

    Zuko looked around at us, clearly seeing we all had no idea about John. "I see he's left you all in the dark about his past."

    John looked off somewhere in the distance, knowing the story that would follow.
    "First you should know everything John has told you, it's all bullsh*t."

    John was grinding his teeth together, dappled by beads of sweat nervously engulfing his face.

    "One year ago, when I briefly returned to firenation, by the request of my father, I saw John again. John used to be a childhood friend of mine, so when I went to search for him, I was surprised to hear he was in prison...

    "What do you mean, he's in prison?" inquired Zuko, remembering John only as a young smiling fourteen year old, training opposite of him.

    "John was smuggling money out of the capital bank, with the help of woman named Annette., who was a bank employee."

    Annette was a woman he knew all too well. By that I mean behind bedroom doors.

    "Annette." he said, his voice dry and incredulous

    The man nod his head. "It's really a shame what happened to her, she was such a sweet girl."

    Zuko suddenly found himself unreasonably angry at the guard, "What happened to her!?"

    "Annette decided she didn't want to be a part of the operation anymore, and confronted John. She told him that if he didn't stop pilfering money, she would go to the authorities. John and Annette were living together on the the Palace grounds at the time, it was believed they were also romantically linked. John didn't take the news too well, and one night, poisoned Annette's dinner. The coroner found large amounts of cyanide in her body, and John's motive was obvious."

    The man could feel the steam and anger advancing up from his palms.

    "I'm sorry Prince Zuko."

    His breathes were shallow and fast, fists clenched like wrecking balls "Take me to him!" he demanded.

    It was the shortest walk of his life. His was blinded by fury which made his feet move like they were pacing on air.

    "John you bastard!" was all he was able to say his voice dripping with livid fervor.

    "Zuko, I can explain. I didn't poison her or steal money from the bank. Annette was working with a man named Chen who despises me because of who my father is. Annette didn't want to steal money anymore so got nervous and poisoned, then made it look like I did it, by packing one of my suitcases and leaving it in her room. But Chen was very paranoid, and killed himself in fear of getting caught."

    Zuko understood that sometimes death was a better option then facing the torment of the firenation.


    "You have to understand. John is a very good liar. He had me believing him whole-heartedly in no time. I pulled some strings to get him out of jail. I would say that was one of the biggest mistakes in my life, because a couple of days after, something horrible happened."

    We all instinctively leaned in a little bit closer.

    "I came home one day to the palace, and on my way upstairs to my room, I passed the room of a girl named Marie. John, got around, you know. So I wouldn't have been surprised if he was in that room as well. The door was shut, but a strange smell was leaking out. It smelled like gasoline. So knocked on the door..."

    "Is everything O.K. in there? It smells like gasoline." Zuko asked, lightly rapping on the door.

    There was no answer.

    "Marie...John...you guys in there?"

    More silence.

    Zuko slowly opened the door to see something very shocking. Marie was tied and bound to a chair, and John was spilling gasoline all over the room.

    John saw me, and smiled slightly. Before Zuko had time to say "what the..." He lit the room ablaze. The flame raged very quickly and crawled onto the walls. Zuko could see John through the smoke. For a second their eyes locked and the room seemed to freeze, because Zuko realized at that instant, John had gotten exactly what he wanted. It was purely euphoric for him that Zuko had walked in at that exact moment, and John was savoring the disbelief deluging Zuko's eyes. John quickly moved for an open window and climbed out. Just as Zuko was about to follow after him, a flame soured right in front of his face, causing him to fall to the ground.

    He suddenly remembered Marie. But as he looked at her from the ground, smoke quenching his lungs, he saw her skin, dark and corroded, her eyes still open, mouth slightly gaped, but she was singed, he was looking at a dead woman walking. A dead woman searing.

    "I later found out it was an assassination plan gone awry. Marie had accidently stumbled across John's papers. On those papers, were well drawn out sketches and plans concerning an assassination attempt, targeting me. He walked in just as marie was looking was looking at the paper. He was going to make it look like a suicide, but when I walked in, he must have figured, 'why not kill two birds with one stone.' I found all this out with an associate he was working with, who was later put to death."

    I think everyone was just in a state of shock. How does one take in that kind of information. All I could think about is that night, talking with John about my fears. He seemed so vulnerable and human...but now to hear this. I didn't know how to react. I felt so lost in Zuko's story, like an endless maze.

    "But I wonder...why John...why have you come back, especially considering what I know. I wouldn't think of you as stupid enough to jeopardize what ever little operation you have going on here. So tell me John, why are you here."

    ______
    sorry this took so long to get up.
    instead of gasoline you could of used blasting jelly

    does blasting jelly smell like anythign though?

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    Dafoose

    [8220]Aug 10, 2008
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    My opinion on the Gasoline:

    The Northern air temple. Watch that episode, find out how the war balloon was made, use that as your basis for any engine. Fin.

    Gasoline isn't too questionable, I think it's alright.
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