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    avatarforte

    [942]Dec 2, 2006
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    Fang-Airbender

    -Was captured by the Dai-Lee-

    I knew exactly what Scorch was planning the second he winked. "Copycat" I thought to myself. He soon revealed it to the fire nation girls and I was free. "Okay girls, lets play". I fired a blast of air at them. They both evaded it, but I was expecting that. Azula wouldn't have weaklings with her. A rock fist flying at me broke my thoughts, as I smashed it with my sword. "Damn Dai-Lee, stay outta this". About 30 of them surronded me. The two girls smiled.

    "What you gonna do now airbender", the one called Ty Lee said. I smiled then brought my air shield in as tight as possible. The Dai-Lee, thinking I was retreating, charged toward me. I waited till the last second, then discharged all the air at once. The Dai-Lee went flying, but the two girls stayed their ground. Ty Lee charged me, doing acrobatic moves to evade my attacks.

    "Don't let her hit you, you won't be able to bend", I heard Scorch yell. Perfect timing too, since she was right on me. I focused air around my body, so that her attack was deflected by the air. I blasted her away, then turned to the other. She threw little daggers at me, which I deflected with my sword. I launched a blast of air towards her, but directed towards her feet. She couldnt dodge it this time, being blown off her feet. Ty Lee came back into the fray, attacking quickly and prescisely. She knocked my sword away so I covered myself in air and fought with my fists. She was fast but I was faster as I threw kick and punch at her, blocking her counters. I sensed the arrows coming in the air before they got to me, so I blew them off and turned back to Ty Lee. I started throwing air blasts into the mix, each one as strong as a fireball. I finally managed to get her, throwing 2 air blasts in quick succesion. I jumped backwards, did a flip, and landed behind the other girl(Mai). I propelled my punches into her back and she stumbled over in pain. I smiled and prepared to finish her when I felt a sharp pain in my back. Ty Lee had managed to take me by surprise. I fell to my knees, unable to bend the air.

    "Heh, Azula was right. You can't control that itty-bitty spirit in you." Mai said. "Psshhh, and here they said you had mastered it. How boring".

    "Mastered it, heh. I never said that. I know that Ive barely tapped the surface. But thats more than enough to take care of you". The power surged inside me, the ability to bend returning once again. My eyes became that of a wolf's, cold and deadly. I blew them both off me and charged for Ty Lee. She attacked for my points again but I had complete control over the air and was much faster this time. I knocked both her arms away and kicked her in the mid-section, then blew her into a pillar. I dashed over to Mai, giving her the same treatment. More Dai-Lee appeared, but a few air blasts into the wall stopped them. Suddenly, a roar drew my attention. I looked up and saw Scorch change into Pyro. "Crap" I thought. I retrieved my sword and took off down the main hallway. Pyro, or rather Scorch as I had noticed who really was in control, had smashed the roof, so it was all coming done. On the way out, I turned and stuck out my tongue at Azula and her friends. "Nice try losers, hope you have house insurance". I got outside to see Pyro attacking the Dai-Lee, who had been engaged with Rin and Ami.

    "Fang, hurry up. I need some help" Ami yelled. She whipped 2 Dai-Lee into a pillar then turned to block incoming rock fists.

    "Damm, she is good". I blew 3 Dai-Lee who were sneaking up on her into a wall then unfolded my wings and flew to her side. Combining out attacks, we threw the rest of the Dai-Lee who were attacking down the stairs. We ran over to Scorch and Rin, where Scorch said something about a temple and spirits. He and Rin then took off into the air, so I grabbed Ami and followed them. A piece of cloth blew into my face, so I got a good whiff of it. "This smell, it can't be." The scent was in the direction that we were heading, so I only hoped I was right.
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    Eman5805

    [943]Dec 2, 2006
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    Azula? So, canon characters exist in this universe?
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    vegnegun

    [945]Dec 2, 2006
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    Eman5805 wrote:
    Azula? So, canon characters exist in this universe?

    there ain't a rule!!!!!

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    ThatLostGuy

    [946]Dec 2, 2006
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    Eman5805 wrote:
    Azula? So, canon characters exist in this universe?

    I guess so. I don't really care anymore. Just don't use ALL the characters....
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    Eman5805

    [947]Dec 2, 2006
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    Eman5805 wrote:
    Azula? So, canon characters exist in this universe?
    I guess so. I don't really care anymore. Just don't use ALL the characters....

    *sigh of relief* Good...I was trying to decide if I should make another character for my "Stranger" to interact with, but now I can just use...well you'll find out in the next couple days...I'm trying to write ahead instead of making it up on the fly so that's why my posts on the "Stranger" are few and far between...

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    ThatLostGuy

    [948]Dec 2, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
    -
    I yelled, "Ow! Damit! Jax, I think I twisted my ankle." Jax ignored me and continued to fight Rin in the underground arena place. Hevet walked over to me and I said, "Hevet. Don't help out Jax fight Rin. Help me. You are my friend, right?" Hevet examined my foot and said, "Are you okay Willy? You seem really down." I replied, "Well Jax just shoved me down to the floor and I think I twisted my foot. And Orinth betrayed me. And Dahat betrayed me. Rexsten and Red Death are dead! I haven't won in a fight yet. I'm useless! If you can't beat them, join them."
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    Hevet stared down at me with wide-eyes and said, "Willy. You aren't seriously thinking of joining the Fire Nation!" I didn't respond. I looked back at Jax and I saw that Rin had left with the Air Bender (Fang) and the Water Bender (Ami). My foot stopped hurting. I walked over to Jax and said, "Well. Lets follow them."
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    Hevet and I walked into a small doorway. We wandered down a hallway and I saw a room with green crytals in it. I said, "Well look at this. A hidden room filled with crystals. I don't care about following Rin and her friends. Lets take some crystals! I bet they are worth a lot of money!" Ilooked around for Jax and I noticed he was gone. I asked Hevet, "Where is Jax?" Hevet turned his head in all directions but Jax was no where to be seen.
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    Hevet and I??began grabbing crystals when I said to Hevet, "You know??that Jax??shoved me earlier. In the fight Jax??shoved me!??He was lucky I didn't get pissed off at him. Lately, I'm not in a good mood." Hevet replied, "Willy you need some rest." I replied, "Yes i know. Well lets get these crystals to a pawn shop!"

    Edited on 12/03/2006 2:04pm
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    AEtherBlue

    [950]Dec 3, 2006
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    Orha - (Unknown)
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    I just woke up in a strange house... "How did I get here? Last time I remember I was fighting Fire Nation soldiers at some old mans house. Well, whatever, I have some buisness to take care of." I said to myself.

    I looked around the room for any weapons or armor. Seemed like a cosy residence. I looked around and walked up th road, I went back and noticed something laying on the side of the house. I picked it up, "Wow, this might be worth something." I lifted it and walked off. I walked down the street for a couple of hours. Then stoped. I looked around me at the big Fortress that surrounded. These streets where my home. I've lived here my entire life. I've seen every alley way every corner of this city. The only part about this is that I dont know how I got here. I cant remember much. But I was in bliss anyways, I am in my city! BA-SING-SE!
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    Name-Orha
    Specialty-Weapons and martial arts. Likes to break peoples bones. Is VERRY strong. EG: Lifting over a ton above her head. Make-Shift EarthBending(Chucks BIG rocks.)
    Bending-None as of yet.
    Height-5'4"
    Age-17
    Gender-Female
    Weight-100
    EyeColour-Bright Green
    Hair-Black, Long, Neat.

    Background: None, Can't remember her childhood. Winds up different places when she wakes up from sleep. (Sleepwalker maby??)
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    I had somewhere to be. I walked down to the lower city sectors and noticed some demolition that had happened to a building. I walked over to it, "Hello? Is anybody there?" I shouted. I walked around the side and gasped as I noticed a man pinned to the wall. I ran straight over to him, "Oh my, are you ok?" I looked at him, I checked his pulse, "He's Alive!"I said to myself. "Who did this to you?" I asked him. He moaned. "Huh?" I asked him. He moaned again. "WHAT are you saying???" I aksed him again. He just maoned. I grabbed one of the spikes holding him in place. "Tell me who did this."I asked one more time. Just a moan.

    I rammed it into him deaper. He screaed. "Ready to talk?" I asked him. Tears came from his face along with his silence. I pounded in another spike. He screamed, this time he went limp. "Damn. I thought you'd be more fun." I walked back down the street. Hmm, I wonder where i can pawn off this wonderfull item here? I started to walk towrds a pawn shop when I heard a sound from inside a local bar. "Ooh, I wonder if there'll be a buyer in there?" I asked myself. I walked up to the inside of the bar. Anyone home? A large dangerouse looking man was sitting at the bar the rest of the bar was empty. I walked up to him and said, Hey... know where I can barter this off? The guy looked at me funny. He bent his head down to cheack the item I found,I raised my hand and I whacked him over the back of the head, pulled him up by his hair, and asked "Hey, you wouldent know where I could Barter this right?" His head bleeding, he shook his head. I smacked it against the table again. "NOW, Do you, Ugly Bartender dude, know where I can BARTER this off?" He nodded this time and stomped his foot, a passageway opened up and cheering was haerd from below. "Thanks." I told him and chucked him into the wall. I walked down the steps with little hair folicles still in my fingernails. I brushed them out, I stoped at a wall, there was noise comming from it. "Oh well, I guess I'll wait outside." I said. I walked back up and saw the bartender standing there with a grin on his face. "What, ugly? You want a fight?" I asked him. He pulled out a katana and charged down the steps. He swung at me as I sidesteped, I tripped him down the stairs. I walked back down and stomped on his hand. Breaking it. "Oho, Now you're defenceless. well, we cant have that now can we? Better bandage you off a little." I pulled him up the stairs and cleaned his hand, then I went over and got a first aid kit. I wrapped up his hand as it was still bleeding, "Don't worry, I'll try to fix it right up for you. I finished with the bandaging and he got back up. Now now, Patients have to STAY DOWN!" I Kicked out his leg and heard a snap, he fell to the ground and I leaned over him."Now, ooh see? You shouldent move like that, your all beaten up." I went over to his other hand. "See?" I grabbed and twisted it breaking that one too. The man cried out in pain. "I thouight you where "Tough Man", Not even making a sound after you broke your leg and hand, men your size shouldent be running down stairwells.

    "Crazy Bich" He yelled out and tried to scramble away. I was deaply hurt and I walked over to him.

    "You know, I was only trying to help!" I yelled and kicked his side, sending him into a wall. There was a Huge cracking sound as he hit and he just lay there silent. "You got yourself killed on me! Whats your problem?" I yelled. Suddenly I heard the sliding of some earth and then a crunch. I decided to go down the stairs again, I steped to the place where I saw the dead end. suddenly the earth behind me closed up and I was trapped. The block to the front and side of me started opening, the side one finished first but it was dark. I heard voices from the other side of the front block so I instinktively hid behind something. I saw two girls and a guy come out, the guy took the lead, and they said something, I followed them a little more untill they got to some sort of cavern.

    Gleaming green crystals just lined all along the walls of the cavern.

    "Oh, so this is what the're doing here, I dont think that they should need to keep this all to themselves, I wonder if they like to share?" I said as I started to walk up to them, they imediately left, however and I was stuck in shock standing in the middle of the room. "Fine, don't take all of these glouriouse treasures." I started picking off large chunks of it from the cavern, but it was slowly getting harder to breath, I coughed but kept on going, I started to feel a pain in my chest so I stopped. It was increadably musky and hard to breath now. Suddenly I hear some people comming, I hid in a corner unseen with a small stack of crystals. I saw two people come out of the same corridor, "OOh no, my crystals, maby they wont see them or maby just dont care like the other ones." I said to myself. the first one came in and looked around at the beutifull crystals.

    "Well look at this. A hidden room filled with crystals. I don't care
    about following Rin and her friends. Lets take some crystals! I bet
    they are worth a lot of money!" He said (Willy Woo). They started taking them, then they stopped and argued or something, I diddent pay any attention. "Well lets get these crystals to a pawn shop!" I heard the first one say.

    "Noo!! I said my crystals... there mine. I don't want to share them with anybody." I droped the crystals on the ground and charged out of the darkness. I jumped at the old one (Hevet) and knocked him to the ground. The one with the crazy hair (Willy Woo) looked around just as I got up.

    "Who are you? Why are you attacking my freinds?" He said.
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    Lord-darkboy

    [951]Dec 3, 2006
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    darkboy "D" (fire, wind, earth, water)


    patrolling through the palace


    i realized that there where secret passeges to the palace so i went patrolling to have more change with seeing intruders when i walked near the throne room i heard there was a fight going on. i opened the door slightly to see whats going on.

    'it can not be'i whispered to myself 'pyro i?? thought he was contained since our last meeting, I wonder if he reconize me *smile*'

    'h??h?? now lets see if our little fire prodigy (azula) i strong enough to defeat pyro'i said laughing

    i passed the crstal caves when i heard talkng downstairs now talking more of a yelling

    'you there'I said while pointing to 4 men'get down there and see if there is someone'

    they only nodded and i continued my patrol

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [952]Dec 3, 2006
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    actually...ill try a different bender this time=)


    Name:yang



    Age:14



    Bending:airbending..skilled
    with staff



    Hair:bald..with an
    arrow on his head



    Eyes:brown



    ??



    yang was born in a cave near the southern air temple. When word spread that the avatar dissapeared and the fire nation was going to begin a big war, jiang's grandparents fled and found a secret cave to hideout in. They have been living there for years. soon Yang was born, and he learned about everything that happened. He wanted to make a difference, so he set out to help stop the fire nation


    and..ill be back soon to start the rpg..just remember, i made this character, so if u see an airbender named yang pop out of nowhere in the future..thats me=)
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [955]Dec 3, 2006
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    im only asking
    and i already killed off my own character
    i wont be fully playing until around christmas
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [959]Dec 3, 2006
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    Lord-darkboy wrote:
    would you pls delete all those messages that has nothing to do with this RPG for fighting just PM toeach other

    I did..and i wasnt fighting..maybe u might want to change a little thing in ure story..i was just suggesting...so if i offended any1..srry
    =)
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    Vampdude69

    [960]Dec 3, 2006
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    Willy Woo (Earth Bender) - I yelled, "Ow! Damit! Jax, I think I twisted my ankle." jax ignored me and continued to fight Rin in the underground arena place. Hevet walked over to me and I said, "Hevet. Don't help out Jax fight Rin. Help me. You are my friend, right?" Hevet examined my foot and said, "Are you okay Willy? You seem really down." I replied, "Well Jax just shoved me down to the floor and I think I twisted my foot. And Orinth betrayed me. And Dahat betrayed me. Rexsten and Red Death are dead! I haven't won in a fight yet. I'm useless. if you can't beat them, join them." - Hevet stared down at me with wide-eyes and said, "Willy. You aren't seriously thinking of joining the Fire Nation!" I didn't respond. I looked back at Jax and I saw that Rin had left with the Air Bender (Fang) and the Water Bender (Ami). My foot stopped hurting. I walked over to Jax and said, "Well. Lets follow them." - Jax, Hevet, and I walked into a small doorway. We wandered down a hallway and I saw a room with green crytals in it. I said, "Well look at this. A hidden room filled with crystals. I don't care about following Rin and her friends. Lets take some crystals! I bet they are worth a lot of money!" - The three of us began grabbing crystals when I said to Jax, "You know you shoved me earlier. In the fight you shoved me! You are lucky I didn't get pissed off at you. Lately, i'm not in a good mood." Jax replied, "Sotty I had no intentions to harm you." I replied, "Yes I know. Well lets get these crystals to a pawn shop!"

    Ummm, dude, Jax is injured, he isn't walking around

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