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    r3173mpt10n

    [7521]Jun 21, 2008
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    Genesis: Airebending prodigy and master of swords.

    Giro: Earthbending prodigy.

    Katsumi: Waterbending prodigy.

    Karin: Firebending prodigy.

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    Giro: So....Karin was it?

    Karin: Yes...

    Katsumi: One more day correct?

    Giro: Until what?

    Katsumi: Genesis' full recovery...

    Giro: I guess s...

    The door opened and Genesis walked in. He took a seat and everyone else took a seat.

    Karin: Genesis!

    Katsumi: One day?

    Genesis: I can move, but I can't bend air for one more day.

    Katsumi: Oh...

    Genesis: Alright...onto a new order of business...

    Giro: And that would be...

    Genesis: The destruction of every nation's leaders, major political representatives....Basically anyone up there.

    Giro: And what do we hope to accomplish by doing this?

    Karin: Isn't it obvious?!?!?

    Giro: No....

    Genesis: With the death of all of these people, there will be chaos and mayhem. That's when we'll jump in and take charge. We are now called "Shǔ Guāng"...

    Katsumi: What's that mean?

    Karin: It means "The dawn of a new epoch." or "dawn". Right Genesis?!?!?

    Genesis: What she said...We will be taking charge and changing the destiny of this barbaric world.

    Giro: Shouldn't we be doing something a little smaller? I mean, we're only four people...

    Genesis: This should be accomplished over the course of four years if done perfectly...

    Genesis stretched his arms and Karin walked over and started to masage his shoulders.

    Karin: Like it? I can relax vital chi points and make the flow smoother.

    Katsumi looked away in anger and Giro laughed.

    Genesis: We will all go by pairs. Me and Katsumi and Giro and Karin.

    Karin and Katsumi: What?!?!?

    Genesis: Any questions?

    Karin raised her hand and so did Katsumi.

    Karin: I'm sorry, but mind if I partner with you instead?

    Katsumi: You snooze you lose.

    Genesis: That was a retorical question and I expect you to work well with your partner...Okay Karin?

    Karin: But!

    Genesis: For me?

    Karin: Fine!

    She stormed out and slammed the door.

    Giro: I'll go get better acquainted with my new partner...

    He walked out and Genesis stood up.

    Katsumi: Hey...

    Genesis: Yes?

    Katsumi: ...Nothing...

    Genesis walked out and Katsumi just sat there.

    Katsumi: Me and Genesis....partners....

    She smiled and she walked out. Giro was leaning against the wall and he started to walk with Katsumi.

    Giro: So...Feeling happy?

    Katsumi: What do you mean?

    Giro: I'm talking about the partnerships...

    Katsumi: What about them?

    Giro: You do know that he originally placed you as my partner right?

    Katsumi: So? He changed his mind and made the better choice.

    Giro: Wrong. He wasn't going to change it until I told him about your feelings towards him.

    Katsumi: YOU DID WHAT?!?!?

    She grabbed his collar and slammed him against the wall.

    Giro: Take it easy Kat. I was just kidding, but the original partnership was me and him and you and Karin.

    She let go and started to walk off. Giro ran to catch up to her.

    Giro: Wait.

    Katsumi stopped and turned around.

    Katsumi: What?

    Giro: Shouldn't you be watching him and making sure she doesn't "ravage" him?

    Katsumi widened her eyes and ran back. Giro started to laugh as he walked to his own quarters. Genesis took a seat on a chair and closed his eyes. Karin walked in and closed the door.

    Karin: We need to talk...

    Genesis: What?

    Karin: I want to be your partner.

    Genesis: We've been through this already...

    Karin: I'll make it worth your while if you catch my drift...

    Genesis: Not interested...

    Katsumi approached Genesis' door and hesitated until she started to knock on the door.

    Katsumi: Genesis? It's me Kat. Can I come in? I was wondering if you...

    Karin opened the door.

    Katsumi: ...wanted company...

    Karin: As you can see, he already has all of the company he needs...

    Genesis: Can you both leave and come back tomorrow? My neck is sore and I need some rest.

    Karin: I can fix that right up!

    Genesis: No thanks...I think some rest will do me some good.

    Katsumi: Okay...I'll leave...

    Karin walked out and walked down the western hallway and Katsumi walked down the eastern one. The door closed and Genesis walked over to his bed. He untied his sheathe and then set it leaning against his chair. He layed down and closed his eyes. He fell asleep in a matter of minutes.

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    ThatLostGuy

    [7523]Jun 21, 2008
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    Dark Inferno?
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    Double09nhalf

    [7524]Jun 21, 2008
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    What did you guys think of my post and the link(if any bothered to click it.)

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    djdfire

    [7525]Jun 21, 2008
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    Double09nhalf wrote:

    What did you guys think of my post and the link(if any bothered to click it.)

    It was pretty good. I liked the whole 'trust the wind' thing.
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    -TheSecondSign-

    [7527]Jun 21, 2008
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    Sorry that one was shorter.

    I'm still thinking about what happens next.

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    Lord-darkboy

    [7528]Jun 21, 2008
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    my old character description was inaccurate so I remade it, (still has the feeling I forgot something)

    Name: Darkboy AKA "D"

    Status: Fire-, air-, earth- and waterbender

    Height: 6'7"

    Age: 2145 (he looks like he's 25)

    Gender: Male

    Eyes: red

    Hair: Black

    Other Noticeable Features: has a tattoo on his left arm D 1.18.11.2.15.25

    Personality: has a love for breaking people and to argument, he's paranoid to some extent and his loyalty to the Fire nation is admirable, believes in 'mission first, personal feelings later' and will do almost everything to complete a mission

    Appearance:

    Background: Darkboy was born in an age where the 'lower' humans didn't gain a name and where send directly into the army, Darkboy was send in Division "D" and his code number was "1.18.11.2.15.25" this was tattooed into his left arm, after a while they noticed they could make a name with his code number and so the name Darkboy came into play, while in the army Darkboy along with all the other children where trained in the art of war and when they where 6 years old they fought on the battlefield, when Darkboy was 10 a coup d'etat came and Darkboy's father became the new ruler, he tried to get Darkboy out of the army to really spent time with his own son, but after 10 years with only being guided how to kill someone he gave in and placed Darkboy under his brothers command, Darkboy served 6 years under his uncle's command until he fell in battle, broken and full with sorrow Darkboy deserted the army and wandered around for 4 years, when he came back to his home-city he saw that it was burned down, completely ravaged and his father was crucified against the city walls along with the rest of the royal family and nobility, lusting for revenge Darkboy spent 5 years of killing those who where resposible, when he was 25 he openly cursed the gods and killed everyone in a temple on that moment Darkboy was cursed with immortality, at first Darkboy laughed with it and took it like a gift but over the years he saw that it was a curse, generation after generation Darkboy lived, to see his friends die of age, While age and disease didn't affect Darkboy's body anymore he could still be killed as it became his dream to be killed on the battlefield, ofcours Darkboy wouldn't just sit and wait to be killed, no it would be one who had enough power to kill him when he went all out, centuries passed and Darkboy became a legend in the world and after a while a myth, while most people think that Darkboy is just a fairy tale, there are some that know that Darkboy really exists, at a certain point Darkboy fought against Shi Roh where he lost 98% of his powers and bringing him back to the level of a novice firebender, Darkboy spend the rest of the 11 years to ragain his former power.

    Abilities: D is a close to mid range fighter and uses airbending to move faster, D also makes use of his surroundings and isn't afraid to play dirty

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    -TheSecondSign-

    [7529]Jun 21, 2008
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    Alright, I decided to redo the last part on the account that I didn't get it right. I didn't get Dosu's awakening or his meeting with the waterbender right, so I'm going to redo the whole post.

    As of right now, he's still in that black void.

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    r3173mpt10n

    [7530]Jun 21, 2008
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    djdfire wrote:
    Double09nhalf wrote:

    What did you guys think of my post and the link(if any bothered to click it.)

    It was pretty good. I liked the whole 'trust the wind' thing.
    It was good stuff. I liked that trust the wind thing to.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [7531]Jun 21, 2008
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    I'm glad you remade your original description, D
    And by the way, how come you arent online anymore? We have to talk about our "plans".
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    r3173mpt10n

    [7532]Jun 21, 2008
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    I'm glad you remade your original description, D
    And by the way, how come you arent online anymore? We have to talk about our "plans".

    *Eavesdropping.*
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    djdfire

    [7533]Jun 21, 2008
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    Oh yeah, I had ment to ask this earlier but what does anybody hink of my post?
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    r3173mpt10n

    [7534]Jun 21, 2008
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    djdfire wrote:
    Oh yeah, I had ment to ask this earlier but what does anybody hink of my post?

    I like that breath ice crystals thing. That's very creative.
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    djdfire

    [7535]Jun 21, 2008
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    r3173mpt10n wrote:
    djdfire wrote:
    Oh yeah, I had ment to ask this earlier but what does anybody hink of my post?
    I like that breath ice crystals thing. That's very creative.
    Thanks
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    Zehrzehr

    [7536]Jun 21, 2008
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    Name: Chu Yen

    Status: non-bender (Wing Chun martial arts)

    Height: 5'8"

    Age: 19

    Gender: male

    Eyes: brown

    Hair: bald except for a long black ponytail

    Other Noticeable Features: Chu tattoos, on his back, the name of each of the opponents that he deems worthy.

    Personality: Chu, as a master of Wing Chun believes in economy of movement and extends this belief to everything he does. All of his movements are precise, calculated and planned.

    Appearance: Chu appears unassuming and is often underestimated because of his entirely normal appearance. Most people that meet him assume he is a government clerk or accountant. He always appears calm and does not get nervous or excited under pressure. Chu is of medium height and slight build. His incredible strength is often hidden from view by loose clothing and his inconspicuous manner.

    Background: Chu was raised in a Wing Chun monastery. Orphaned at a young age, the monks brought him up as one of their own, teaching their individual specialties to him in turn. Ng Mui, one of the legendary Five Elders, personally trained Chu in his mastery of relaxation techniques. Training from the age of 4 has given him a mastery over most of the teachings of the Wing Chun monks.

    Abilities: Chu is an expert in all forms of the Wing Chun martial arts. He fights with a minimum of energy expended and can therefore continue combat for a very long time. His approach to combat is: practicality, efficiency and economy of movement. In practice, he has been able to stay in constant combat for a full 24 hours.

    He rarely uses kicks unless in defense of a kicking opponent. He focuses his attacks on short, powerful, efficient punches. In addition, he is an expert in the use of the Butterfly Swords which he uses as an extension of his own body, emphasizing his punches with a short, strong blade.

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    r3173mpt10n

    [7537]Jun 21, 2008
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    Genesis: Airbending prodigy and master of swords.

    Katsumi: Waterbending prodigy.

    Giro: Earthbending prodigy.

    Karin: Firebending prodigy.

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    It was morning and Genesis opened his eyes. When he awoke, Karin's face was right above his.

    Genesis: Is there something you need?

    Karin: No...no....I just thought you'd like something to eat, so I made you breakfast.

    Karin moved back and sat on the chair. Genesis sat up and stretched.

    Genesis: Is everyone else awake?

    Karin: Katsumi is, but that lazy bum for a partner is still sleeping. So.....I was wondering...

    Genesis: No.

    Karin: You don't even know what I'm going to ask....

    Genesis: You can't switch partners.

    Karin: Then again...maybe you do.

    Karin sat next to him and slid her hand down the side of his face.

    Karin: Please...

    Genesis grabbed her hand and put it aside.

    Genesis: We'll partner in the future. Okay?

    Karin stood up in excitement.

    Karin: You won't be disappointed!

    Genesis: Yeah...

    Karin walked out and brushed shoulders with Katsumi.

    Katsumi: Excuse you...

    Karin turned around.

    Karin: Aren't you going to say sorry?

    Katsumi: Why should I? You're the one that bumped into me.

    Karin: Oh really?

    They both jumped backwards and Karin attacked first. She shot a ball of red fire towards Katsumi, but Katsumi put up a wall of water and blocked it. When the fire and water clashed, steam filled the halls.

    Karin: Coward! Move this steam if you have the guts!

    Katsumi gathered all of the steam and made a water whip. She tried to hit Karin, but she moved to the side. Karin created a fire whip and tried to hit Katsumi, but she dodged it. Giro was walking down the hall until he heard noises.

    Giro: Fighting?

    He kept on walking until he ended up between the two. They both closed their eyes and tried to whip each other as hard as they could, but accidentally hit Giro instead. They opened their eyes and saw Giro with two different lash marks on him. He stood with his arms crossed and shaking his head.

    Giro: A team should be working as one and not have internal conflicts.

    Karin: She started it!

    Katsumi: What?!?!?

    Giro: Settle down!

    Karin: Didn't that hurt?

    Giro: What? The whips? Nah! I've had worse.

    Katsumi: But those were our strongest...

    Giro: I have a thin outer layer made comepletely of earth on my chest.

    He raised his shirt and there was a small crack along his abs.

    Giro: See? No harm done.

    Karin: I have never seen anything like it!

    Giro: This is something that everyone in my clan has. We learn it as children. It's kind of like Gen's Darkned State. Well....his is actually a bloodline thing, but it's all the same...Anyways...You guys should stay away from each other for a bit until things cool down. That's an order.

    Karin and Katsumi both lifted their heads and walked in opposite directions. Genesis walked out and looked around. He saw lash marks all along the walls of the hallway, burn marks, and small puddles of water. He looked at Giro and Giro facepalmed himself.

    Genesis: What happened?

    Giro: Nothing happened here. Just a friendly little practice duel.

    Genesis: Okay...Carry on.

    Genesis walked away and Giro sighed.

    Giro: Those girls owe me one...

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    r3173mpt10n

    [7538]Jun 21, 2008
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    djdfire wrote:
    r3173mpt10n wrote:
    djdfire wrote:
    Oh yeah, I had ment to ask this earlier but what does anybody hink of my post?
    I like that breath ice crystals thing. That's very creative.
    Thanks

    No problem. You deserve that comment.
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    h3r01cdud3

    [7539]Jun 21, 2008
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    Sorry for not describing it,

    Dark Inferno is a new move I added to Skar.It only occurs when Raks is in control.I got the Other part of me part from Sum-41-Hell Song.Dark Inferno can occur with only hatred that can engulf anything in total darkness.Raks can only appear at near death situations like hollow Ichigo.I'll edit my character.

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