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    Dafoose

    [8401]Sep 10, 2008
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    Double09nhalf wrote:

    -TheSecondSign- wrote:
    Just checking in. Story is on hiatus, due to things I'm currently busy with.

    I'm almost done with my season only two more posts to the end of one and the beginning of another. Dafoose let me know when your finished.



    Thanks for giving me some time.
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    Redoblante

    [8402]Sep 12, 2008
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    Geeze guys it has been a while. So i'm starting again! Yeah, but i will be busy next week bloody exams started... But i will be back, i just needed to do this! Anyways how have you guys been? Looks like the thread functioning well as i can tell. And i must say, you all arn't getting to hostile! Thanks for that -smiles- Anyways here is Satsujin Koumori. I RP with him on some sites, and i'm known by that name sometimes... Yeah i'm hooked on text based now! Times have changed! Anyways check it out. -Looks out Door- Gotta get off the comp now, talk later!

    Redo...

    Name: Satsujin Kyuuketsuki Koumori

    Status: Water-Bender (Rouge Ninja Traveler)

    Weapon: Daisho handle. A valve is there to let water run through the bottum of the handle and come up through to the top, making a blade shape, and then freezeing it to make the blade stiff and sharp.

    Special move: Water Prision - Using the wrist movement of tai chi, Satsu can make a ball water prision, which can capture anyone, of any shape and size.

    Height: 6'1

    Age: 19

    Gender: Male

    Weight: 60 - 70kg

    Eyes: Green, with a ring of yellow around the pupil.

    Hair: Silver

    Appearance:

    Personality: Before the incident Satsu was a quite young kid, he was lively and talkative, as he is now bit more quiet Satsu is more irritated by even the most simple things, he also keeps quite at most times, he only talks to those he trusts. He takes things a bit too serious, but he is always looking for a competition, kids these days don't want to lose, especially Satsu. His jokes around but only when the time is right, but he hates it when people say jokes about him, you will occasonaly see a smile on his face. His never nervous about a task, as he says, "What ever happens, Happens..."

    When something bad is said he will get irritated then probably intimidate the person who said the foul remark or action. He is a quick thinker and a quick learner for that is what he is most known for. He also takes things really seriously and will not take no for an answer. Satsu is very respectful to other girls as he likes to be the gentleman, opening doors and letting people go first, and call them from their last name. example. Mr Koumori. He is very friendly to those he meets and is usually nice to anyone he meets, should they treat her respectfully as he does to them, if they don't Satsu would not be pleased.

    As a person he can be described easily; a thinker. He speaks little but tends to choose his words carefully, disliking needless blabber, like he likes to call it himself. He shows no immediate hostility towards anybody, even to some firebenders, although when dealing with them he shows hints of an odd bitterness, quite hard for one to put a finger on, for when you look into his eyes you can't figure out what he is thinking, planning, or hating, thus him giving the most intimidating look. While without the mask of his identity he is a calm and quite strategic fighter that relies more on brains than brawn, with it he becomes almost the direct opposite to his true self. Even though he is more of a thinker, he shows off another side most people haven't seen before, once he revelses himself behind his true face, which most people don't know about.

    History: Satsu was a nice and quite kid, he had little friends because he spent most of his time studying in the library, most people called him a dork, but he mostly ignored them. His mother passed away when he was only fourteen years of age, she died from a simple heart attack. The doctors didn't know what trigged it because she was perfectly healthy the day before. Before her death she was told her son was a water-bender, and how he could become very skillful with the right training. She couldn't believe it, she grew accustom to the fact that he was, she then died when he was halfway through his second year of training. And so did his dad as he grew to the fact that his son was amazingly talented, he was just a bit upset that he wouldn't be normal, and that he wouldn't get a normal job, but then he found out the bending jobs and what they involve, making his father also proud.

    Satsu came back home for the holidays and spent some time at home after hearing the death of his mother. His dad became a drunk ever since his mother died, he always came home late. Until one night news update said an outburst happened outside the local bar, a fight between three people erupted and started to have a go at one another. His dad came home twenty minutes later and gave Satsu a beating, he tried to fight back but with the beer bottle, his dad smashed the glass and cut Nick on his lower left arm leaving a scar. He then ran from home and his brutal father.

    Running to his mothers grave he met his God Mother he hasn't seen for 4 years, then finding out she was a water-bender she took him in. Satsu doesn't talk nor live with his dad who moved from Surry to Manchester to live with his God Mother who in fact is a water-bender who teaches him the arts; He left some time ago to travle to the north pole in search of a master. He devotes himself to Water-bending and Tai Chi wich both blend to increase his ability. He became a rouge ninja for his villiage as he then decided to leave to travel to the north pole.

    RP Sample:

    ((Hey guys this is just from some Supernatural RP site i am on at the moment, just to show you what i have been doing lately... Enjoy))

    Sam sat in the empty motel room, the room was cold due to the air con that was braking the sound of silence, having Dean not around wasn't the same. Sam looked up as he also leant back in the plastic chair that felt like it was going to break, since he has been leaning back on it repeatedly. Sam thought of an idea what to do, as he lowered his arm, reaching out to grab a bottle of beer he opened the bottle and flipped open his laptop. He raised his bottle as the laptop was rebooting.

    "For you bro..."

    Same spoke softly as he took a sip out of the bottle, placing it down on the cheap birch wooden desk. The screens to the laptop finally appear after five minutes, maybe less. Tired he was, he hasn't had a decent sleep in over a week or two, and he had been trying to track down that son of a female dog Lilith. Sam was just about to type in, "Mysterious Electrical Storms" Until two cop cars roll up, and attend the reception. He was waiting for them, that's why he had his bag already packed. Jumping up on his own two feet to stretch his legs; his hands reached down as he picked up his bag, walking through the motel room, Sam came to the bathroom window. The toilet looked like it hasn't been cleaned for at least two months. Above the toilet stood a window, Sam opened the window as fitted his bag through. His bag landed with a thud, he was almost climbed through the window until he forgot his laptop. "Ah crap my laptop!" Sam thought as he just remembered that he left it on the desk. Rushed back swiftly and picked up his laptop off the desk, swiftly walking back to the bathroom, jumping out of the window to land in front of the Impala. Sam gave a smile as he picked up his bag and throwing it into the car without a care, but to softly place his laptop in the passenger seat. Starting the car Sam drove off into the distance.

    "I learnt from the best"

    He concurred looking up at the photo of Himself, Dean and his Father. Sam let out a smile as he turned up the volume, listening to Stair way to Heaven by Led Zeppelin after listening to that song for less than ten seconds he turned it off, to listen to nothing but the cold air run past his face with the window spun down.

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    Dafoose

    [8403]Sep 12, 2008
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    Uh, need I say more?

    Accepted. Welcome back redoblante.
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    Redoblante

    [8404]Sep 12, 2008
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    Cheers! Yeah i have grown with my application construction... Good eh? Anyways need to study, i'llbe back on to RP with Satsu later.
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    Double09nhalf

    [8405]Sep 12, 2008
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    Redoblante wrote:
    Cheers! Yeah i have grown with my application construction... Good eh? Anyways need to study, i'llbe back on to RP with Satsu later.

    Yaa, Cheers mate. Lets edd over to t'e pub an smash ah cupple. drinks alaround

    seriously though i wouldn't be a lame party here without you vetrans

    welcome back.

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    Redoblante

    [8406]Sep 13, 2008
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    So Dafoose, what about that Day 100? Where is that? Mentioned Aeroses Death? Maybe Satsu could meet up with you guys at the North Pole. The he can give you the letter... Anyways guys what did you think of my return? Good post or what? Oh yeah well i did type this in the qick reply box -smiles- But here it is.. A fresh start... By the way, whats the freewebs site again? I lost the link...

    Satsujin K (Waterbender (Rouge Ninja Traveler))

    Awaken Facts

    The sun grew dim as Satsu sat on the ledge of the metal captivated fir nation boat. Taking a sip of his sake, Satsu twisted his body around as he walked down the stairs to the bellow deck, the red lights flashed as it lit the hallways. His eyes sharpened around every corner he took, nodbody could let down their gaurd as he walked into a large room filled with wrecked barrels of flame. Walking down the rusty stairs that could just hold his wait carried him down to the metal floor that he stood on. His foot steps made a hollow sound which echoed through the room. He looked down on the ground to see a gianty blood stain. He didn'y know whos blood it was but sure did it look bad, as if some one took him by suprise a few meters back, which made the person crawl to the light. Looking closely he saw a quill that lay close to the barrel. As if he tryed to write a letter. Then to see parchment lying on the ground a few steps back, as if the wind had pushed it across. Satsu bent his knees and sized the scroll with his glove covered hands. Unraveling the mysteriouse letter Satsu read the lines one by one.

    Mar & Kela

    The time you are reading this my body has been been set out to sea. I was killed by Aires, and i was mistakened to go out looking for him alone. I hope that you made it safeluy as planned to the North Pole. Just remember where ever you are, i will be there with you along the way. Mar i liked you, and i always have, since the first time we met, and first time we departed, i would do anything to see you again, unfortunatly i cannot. I leave you my sword, wich will bring you good luck, where ever you may need it. Kela, you have been good to me, even though we haven't known each other that long, i am grateful for you to take care of Mar, i leave you bag, one that i haven't traveled without, there are valubles which will come in handy to you. For now i bid you fair well, and will see you in the after life.

    Love

    Aeros

    Rolled the parchment, and slowly turned his head as he saw the bag and the sword lying on the ground. He walked over to that and picked it up. Examining the sword he saw the engravments, "Live by the blade, die by the blade..." Words of wisdom, is what they are called, every skilled being has some sort of wisdom in their path. As he looked at his handel he saw the inscriptions, "The waves consume the body as the body consumes the wave" One of the most famous sayings in the water tribe. He had no idea what it ment yet, but in due time he will figure out the puzzle. Hours went by as he carried the belongings up to the main deck, placing the letter in the bag and the sword around his waist. He turned his head and upwards to the captain as he shouted at the top of his lungs.

    "We are not the only ones going to the North Pole! Keep an eye out for people by the name of Mar and Kela!"

    He yelled across the boat. He throat was getting awfully sore as he always yelled, too much more likely. He smirked out at sea as the headed their way to the north pole. Maybe a stop by Be-Sing-Se on the way, if he was lucky enough to have time and run on sechduel. Satsus mouth felt dry as he took another sip of his sake, looking at the blade he looked back out to see, wondering what his trip might bring, forntune? Misfortune? Divinity? Nah now he was just getting ahead and greedy of himself... Maybe thanked and welcomed now that was fitting.

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    Dafoose

    [8407]Sep 13, 2008
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    Redoblante wrote:

    So Dafoose, what about that Day 100? Where is that? Mentioned Aeroses Death? Maybe Satsu could meet up with you guys at the North Pole. The he can give you the letter... Anyways guys what did you think of my return? Good post or what? Oh yeah well i did type this in the qick reply box -smiles- But here it is.. A fresh start... By the way, whats the freewebs site again? I lost the link...

    Still not here yet, but it's going to happen really soon. I want to ask you to hold off on your stories till the next season, because this one is finally ending. Then, i'll have the privelege of skipping forward 2 more months into spring, and the plot will thicken greatly.

    Epic posts will come.

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    Redoblante

    [8408]Sep 13, 2008
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    -Thumbs Up- Sure, thats sounds great! I'll be here, reading, and i need to do some English Study! Stupid teachers and their exams -Mummbles Off-
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    Double09nhalf

    [8409]Sep 13, 2008
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    Okay folks the countdown finally...FINALLY begins. I've decided to repost my last well post so nobody gets lost then i will barrage you all with the rest of them buwa ha ha ha.

    Unless i counted them wrong this one is #4 or 3rd might combine one...

    //////////////////

    Siam- Airbender

    Makani- Master airbender

    ~~Waking from the dream~~

    /////////////////

    It was not long before Siam had switched into a fresh change of clothes and
    with staff in hand joined the others outside the temple. The sun was
    setting and a brilliant sunset filtered through the western air-temple
    causing everything to be bathed in red and purple. Even though no one
    officially knew what was going on she could feel a sense of tension flowing
    through the air.


    "Ms. Nakamura."


    Surprised to hear her father's name Siam paused but turned around
    immediately afterwards to face the little girl holding the clipboard.

    "Um, Tam right?"

    Even though the little girl looked a little surprised she remained in a
    professional stance. She reminded Siam of a box of tin soldiers she had
    received for her first birthday. For some reason her relatives were very
    surprised to find out that she was a girl.

    "Um, Ms. Nakamura, Master Makani told me to ask you to meet him in the
    temple. "

    "Yes, of course," Siam replied hastily.

    As Siam entered the temple she saw multiple monks kneeling before the
    statue. Some of them were meditating while others were other up prayer. She
    started to walk toward the door on the foot of the statue when someone
    tugged at her pants leg. She looked down to face Tam staring up at her.

    "Please wait here," Tam said in a quiet voice.

    The little girl made her way to a woman who was standing by the entrance.
    When Tam finally got the woman's attention through various means the woman
    walked back with Tam to where Siam stood.

    "You're here to see Master Makani right," said the woman, "He'll he here in
    a moment. Meanwhile please meditate or pray if your heart needs it. Just be
    take care not to stub your big toe."

    As the woman left Siam walked through and around the monks until she came
    to the statue. Siam sat down in front of Avatar Zephyr's big toe on his
    right foot. Crossing her legs and cupping one hand over the other Siam
    began to meditate. As Siam meditated another woman wearing a hood walked up
    and sat down beside her. The women began to pray in a high pitched voice as
    she bowed toward the statue. It was then that Siam noticed that the woman
    next to her wasn't a female at all. Not knowing who it was Siam decided to
    make a deduction.

    "Clans-Member Makani?"

    She heard the person chuckle quietly, "Who knocks at the garden gate?"

    Siam shook her head in bewilderment, "One who has eaten the fruit and
    tasted its mysteries..."

    Makani took off his hood revealing his bald head that reflected with the
    light that shone through the temple windows. The sight almost blinded Siam
    with sheer illumination.

    "Thank you for coming so quickly to my summons," said Makani, "I hope I
    didn't call you at a bad moment. By the way, how did you know which foot to
    meet me at?"

    "My parents once told me that Avatar Zephyr only had four toes on his left
    foot because of a birth defect. And I seriously don't understand why the
    creators who built the statue wouldn't want make a anatomically correct
    replica?"

    Makani looked at the statue and then chuckled again, "The master masons who
    designed the statue was very stubborn. When he looked at the initial design
    he decided to give the statue five toes on each foot. His argument was that
    when people looked at the statue they would think that the toe broke off
    somehow and think the statue imperfect. This anatomical correct flaw in the
    statue would tarnish his reputation for perfection... or so the story goes."

    Siam started to scratch her head with a puzzled look then began to laugh as
    well.

    "But getting to the subject, I take it that you have heard of our neighbors
    coming to visit us."

    Siam nodded, "But how can you say 'neighbors' when you already know of
    their wicked plan."

    Makani lowered his head and sighed.

    "Siam, I know you were hurt and that something precious was taken away from
    you. But you must forgive them and most of all you must not let these
    feelings obscure your judgment."

    "I do hate them. I detest them for their cowardliness and I won't forgive
    them for taking my parents away from me," Siam seethed.

    Makani almost looked shocked but relaxed, "Siam, you must listen and take
    to heart what I am about to say... This unrest, this hatred will only destroy
    you if you continue to ignore it."

    The words shocked Siam's core as she realized the precision of his words.
    How can I, how would I ever truly forgive them and be free of this hate,
    thought Siam.

    Makani breathed deeply then slowly got up and put his hood up, "Siam,
    please follow me."

    She got up and followed him out of the temple. As they walked outside they
    made their way to the edge of the platform that overlooked the chasm.
    Even with the Sun shining down on Siam she still felt cold. More than cold
    she felt alone and started to cry a little. Makani took off his hood, then
    turned to her and griped her by the shoulders.

    "Look at me Siam."

    She started to hiccup as she looked up with her wet, red eyes.

    "Siam Nakamura, if anybody missed your parents more than you it would be
    me. Their friendship is one of the few things I will ever treasure in this
    lifetime. And you have been like the niece I never had. I would hate to
    lose you in death or to yourself with the anger you harbor. And you must
    remember, death is only an illusion," said Makani chuckling as he held out
    his dress, "like clothes."

    Down to only the sniffles, Siam decided she was feeling better.

    "Um, Uncle Makani," she said hugging a surprised Makani, "Thank you.... But
    what are we going to approach the fire nation troops?"

    Makani paused for a second and pondered as to their next course of action.

    "Since they are searching for you I will go and greet them and see what
    their intentions are..."

    Siam started to protest but Makani stopped her.

    "I know you are curious and want to go but if I let you go you must promise
    me that you will stay hidden while I negotiate with them."

    Siam started to pout but nodded her head.

    "Good, well with that settled I should probably get into some 'respectable
    clothes' before we greet our new guests," chuckled Makani as he head back.

    "Oh and one more thing," said Makani turning around, "Put on your traveling
    clothes and then be back here in an hour. But don't tell your little friend
    about this. I don't trust him..."

    Even though she was a little confused Siam nodded again and Makani resumed
    his pace back to his quarters while she made her way to the nursery.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    "Makani... Makani," Someone shouted.

    Makani turned and searched for the person calling his name, "Ah,
    Clans-member Lynne. I thought you would already be back in the earth
    kingdom by now.."

    Lynne noticed the dress but tried to keep it to herself as she talked, "I
    met a old friend and decided to spend a little time with her. She's been
    having trouble lately... But anyway I heard that you got visitors. Anything I
    can do to help?"

    "No, No I'll be fine. I'm pretty sure it's just some misunderstanding that
    needs to be figured out," replied Makani, "You can be on your way and have
    a safe journey."

    "Thank you," she replied, "I intend to. By the way, the food your monks
    served was very good. I am a bit envious. I was informed that you made the
    desert... boysenberry pie I think. I am a bit peeved though. I never got to
    try any since it went like hotcakes."

    Makani started to laugh, "Actually it was prune pie with a few laxative
    herbs."

    Lynne started to chuckle herself, "No wonder the restroom facilities were
    backed up."
    ~~~~~~~~~~~

    Knowing that time was not a luxury they did not posses Siam and Makani left
    under the concealment of night. Gliding silently through the air with her
    staff Siam felt glad for the breeze that glanced across her face. As she
    stared into the sparkling heavens Siam saw a shooting star and wished with
    all her heart that tomorrow that she would find everything all right and
    her anxiety relieved.

    "Siam!"

    Suddenly snapping back into reality Siam turned toward Makani who was
    currently searching the forest floor beneath them.

    "Yes, uncle," replied Siam.

    Flying next to her Makani momentary stared at her then returned his gaze to
    the forest.

    "Siam, I know that you been through a lot but I need you to treat our
    present situation with the utmost importance. And there is something else
    that I've been meaning to talk to you about. It is about your friend..."

    Siam looked at him quizzically, "You mean Mizuhiro?"

    Makani nodded, "That is the one. I got the opportunity to meet with him
    yesterday. He is an interesting lad and he is very knowledgeable for one so
    young..."

    He paused for a second and even though Siam wanted to say something she
    patiently waited.

    "...I wish I could choose my words more carefully and less bluntly but time
    will not permit it. (Sigh) Siam I don't trust him. I can't pinpoint it but
    something about him bothers me greatly. I don't mean to disturb or alarm
    you but I am asking you to be wary."

    Siam knew he went well but she could help but blurt out.

    "But he couldn't be..."

    Makani suddenly put his hand over her mouth and nodded at the ground.

    "Our guests have arrived," he said.

    Siam peered over the side of the saddle to see a couple hundred torches
    moving through the scattered trees below them. Siam couldn't believe her
    eyes.

    How could an entire army this size just show up without drawing suspicion,
    thought Siam. She turned to Makani, "So, we found them... now what?"

    Makani look a Siam with a grin on his face, "We have a little fun."

    /////////////////////

    Okay folks let me know what you think. Remember comments are either as good a gold or arsenic in your morning coffee

    Yah, been their once... fortunatly I wasn't on the recieving end. um, circumstantial evidence really

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    kingearth

    [8410]Sep 14, 2008
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    Ok i admit the killing of parents was cliche so how about the firebenders took them away because they were planning on killing fire lord ( if this takes place before finale that is).

    More history.... hmmmm.... idk someone more creative, can u help me make history, i need to have someone to give me ideas so i can run with them...

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    kingearth

    [8411]Sep 14, 2008
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    also does amyone wanna give me a run down on the storyline and characters... merci beaucoup!!!
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    Redoblante

    [8413]Sep 14, 2008
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    chall433 wrote:

    My bender would have to be

    Bender: water

    Age: 12

    Name: hailong

    Hight: 151 inches



    please follow the template that is shown on the first page, or you can scroll up and see mine, and just copy the template format off there.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [8414]Sep 14, 2008
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    im new here... can i join?
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    briggsey2k7

    [8415]Sep 14, 2008
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    Too late to join?

    Name: Shaun Jaunce

    Status: Water Bender

    Special Move: Tight rope-He wraps the foe in water then freezes it then makes it tighter and tighter

    Height: 6'3

    Age: 18

    Gender: Male

    Weight: 190

    Eyes: light blue with a hint of green in one

    Hair: dirty blond

    Appearance: He has quite a slim-muscular build but isn't to fond of his height. His hair is a bout medium length and his fringe is just above his eyebrows, he normally wears something to cover his mouth. He wears the usual water tribe clothes but his top has no sleeves and the trousers are a bit shorter. He wears fingerless gloves and has a bit of cloth wrapped around his left arm.

    Personality: He is quite stubborn at times and doesn't like doing certain things. He can be cocky and a bit laid back at times but doesn't like loosing and will do anything to win. He can get emotional though but doesn't like to show.

    History: Shortly after his birth his father died in a battle meaning he never really met him but from rumours he heard he was a great man and he has always looked up to him because of that. When he was younger he was picked on for being an outcast and not doing much with the others but soon grew to surpass them in his abilities and he trained to be a warrior like his father, he then started becoming more popular with everyone but still wasn't to fond of the company but soon got use to it. At 15 he decided he needed to get away so eventually left and went travelling on his own.

    Edited on 09/14/2008 11:42am
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    Dafoose

    [8416]Sep 14, 2008
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    chall433 wrote:

    My bender would have to be

    Bender: water

    Age: 12

    Name: hailong

    Hight: 151 inches


    Hey chall. How's it going?

    Well, I can see you want to join the RPG.

    In order to get accepted to it, I'll need the following about your character:

    The description you have there, only with more details.
    A background, more detailed. A beginning to your story.

    and Since your character is under the age of Eighteen, I'll need you to limit his power. I'm glad it's not a prodigy. XD that makes for better writing.


    Also, To the new guy, with the Shaun Jauce character.

    The description isn't quite fitting to the character. Technically, a 135 lbs person that is 6'2" is very weak build for the description of muscular.
    I'm 6"2' In RL, so being 135 sounds like suicide. I'm about 25 lbs from that point.

    So I want to ask you to moderate and change your character description into something more believable. Changing age, whatever makes it worth reading. The template is good though.

    Also, to all the new people, chall and briggs, and the veteran, Redoblante, and the smart guy, TLG, lol.

    All your character's stories should wait until the new season begins, if I can get everyone to post their finales, like Double09 is doing, thanks for breaking the ice man.

    lol, ice man. HA!!!

    I'll read your post now.
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    Dafoose

    [8417]Sep 14, 2008
    • member since: 10/27/07
    • level: 19
    • rank: Fall Guy
    • posts: 1,591
    Lol, arsenic in your morning coffee. I liked the story, and I like how Avatar Zephyr only had four toes.

    Fun Facts!!!
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    Double09nhalf

    [8418]Sep 14, 2008
    • member since: 11/14/07
    • level: 10
    • rank: Holy Level 10!
    • posts: 583

    Here is # 3 in the countdown (I'm basically posting once per day to finish up)

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    Siam- airbender

    Makani- Master airbender

    ~~ just about tlo reach the firenation army in the forest~~

    /////////////////

    Siam felt like she was flying through the trees as she leapt from branch to
    branch. She was glad that they didn't run because the ground was covered
    with puddles from recent rains. She looked down and nearly slipped her
    footing on a wet branch. As Siam regained her balance and she compensated
    to keep up with Makani.

    "I told you not to look down," chuckled Makani, "Just focus on your footing
    and creating enough wind to push you to the next step... also reducing your
    wind friction would hurt either."

    Siam made a face then looked in front of her searching for the little
    lights that flickered in the distance. Then a question popped in her head.

    "But why did we have to leave Kempa? Couldn't we have flown overhead?"

    "Kempa maybe be able to flying silently but our intention is to get caught
    or rather found then be on our merry with our guests in tow. We'll need to
    be agile in our escape. Kempa is strong but not quick in his movements...,"
    replied Makani as he ascended through the trees.

    For the rest of the evolution they remained silent. The only sound ringing
    through the forest was the resonance of the crickets and cicadas chirping.
    A moment later Makani signaled for them to stop. Avoiding a puddle Siam
    leapt to the forest floor next to him and they hid in the shadows.

    "For this next part I need you to stay always behind me while I acknowledge
    our guests," whispered Makani.

    Siam was about to protest but he continued.

    "The reason being that armies are always preceded by scouts which are used
    for first warning. If one of the scouts finds me then you head back."

    "I won't leave you to be killed by the fire nation," replied Siam in her
    anger.

    Makani stared and Siam and replied in a stern voice.

    "You do not know who killed your parents nor the fire nation army
    intentions. It is not are way to harbor such hatred... you must give it up."
    Makani then lightened his tone, "Besides, I won't let them capture me. Now
    wait here while I head over to that tree to greet our guests."

    With that Makani leapt from Siam's spot to a couple trees ahead of her.
    While sitting on the ground Siam tuck the sack Makani had given her for
    camouflage and through it over herself. She waited for what seemed like an
    eternity as the minutes went by. Suddenly something tussled right next to
    her. She stood very still and held her breath. When Siam peeked out of a
    hole in the sack she didn't see anything except for the stars. Then
    something walked right up in front of her and looked around. The person
    inched forward and was almost right on top of her.

    (snap)

    The scout immediately turned around from where he came and ran back.

    (Thwack) (splash)

    That had to have been Makani, thought Siam.

    But a couple moments later the same scout returned and threw off the cover.
    Siam shrieked as the scout grabbed her. She tried to airbend but nothing
    was happening. The scout bound Siam's hands and picked her up.

    "I found another one," the guard shouted as he hauled her off.
    Before Siam could comprehend what this meant she saw another scout carrying
    a second body over his shoulder. The person was very muddy and had a sack
    over his head. Then Siam recognized the person...

    "Uncle," Siam breathed in disbelief.

    ////////////////

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    Double09nhalf

    [8419]Sep 14, 2008
    • member since: 11/14/07
    • level: 10
    • rank: Holy Level 10!
    • posts: 583

    Dafoose wrote:
    Lol, arsenic in your morning coffee. I liked the story, and I like how Avatar Zephyr only had four toes. Fun Facts!!!

    By the way, for most of my characters i choose their name based off of their element. It makes the job a lot more easier

    (Just a note)

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    Dafoose

    [8420]Sep 14, 2008
    • member since: 10/27/07
    • level: 19
    • rank: Fall Guy
    • posts: 1,591
    Double09nhalf wrote:

    Dafoose wrote:
    Lol, arsenic in your morning coffee. I liked the story, and I like how Avatar Zephyr only had four toes. Fun Facts!!!

    By the way, for most of my characters i choose their name based off of their element. It makes the job a lot more easier

    (Just a note)



    I noticed that. lol. good job.
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