| the_mental_teen wrote: |
| am i 1000? |
sweet! sorry, couldn't help it
*every1 gains up on him and gives him atomic wedgie*
WHAT! I MADE A CHARACTER ALREADY!! d@mn...
Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
| the_mental_teen wrote: |
| am i 1000? |
Darkboy "D" (fire,water,earth,wind)
willy was sended to commander perry, while i decided to follow him
'listen willy i'm not a bad person when you've got to know me'i started
i saw that he was ignoring me but so what he could still hear me
'i've done some things where i'm not excatly proud of i'm changing my ways of living' i continued
'HOW CAN YOU SAY THAT YOU ARE HEAD OF THE ARMY IF THERE ARE NO FOLLOWERS FOR THE THRONE YOUR NEXT'he yelled at me
'do you think any other man would've let you live or let the old man escape, yes i may be in line for the throne but that is when ozai has died just like iroh, zuko and azula and that can take a long while' i said
when we reached the door of commander perry i said one final thing
'look i know you want revenge on me, i'm going to the eastern temple i've heard that pyro also has gone to there maybe i can get him under my control again just like 1242 years ago' i started' when his host (scorch) learn to control him i may have a difficult time with converting him again'
'1242 YAERS AGO HOW OLD ARE YOU' he yelled at me again
'h??h?? good question i'm 2132 years old i was cursed by the war spirit when i was 25 year wich gave my infernal life but a none to pleasent one as well, anyway i need to go now and perry is waiting for you here he becomes??quickly angry so i would enter that door as quickly as possible,??when you arrive at the eastern air temple look for a sign i can't stand to long at one spot but that sign will tell you where i'm heading at' i said
i'd say a proper goodbye with azula and to my 2 dai lee gaurds to say that??they must take orinth to a hospital, then??left the city with 1000 gold pieces i've got from azula to take with me the armor was also mine to keep i went straight to the air temple i must control pyro again, that young host(scorch) have no idea what will happen to him when he controls pyro.
| the_mental_teen wrote: |
| am i 1000? |
| ThatLostGuy wrote: | ||
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agree lets kill him
Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
Azula told me to put on my Fire Nation uniform and go find Commander Perry, my new master. I put on my clothes and I was soon approached by D. We talked for a little while and he told me that he was going to find Pyro at the Eastern Air Temple. D then walked away...
I said to myslef, "D. Why would I trust that man! I bet he is already lying to me!" I turned around and Commander Perry walked into the room. I said, "Hello cheif. I'm Willy Woo. Pleased to meet you."
Commander Perry said, "Well Willy you will be on the front line. It is your duty to make rock walls to protect MY soldiers!" I replied, "You are gonna let me die protecting other people! This is an army, not some sacrificing Willy game!" -
Perry yelled, "Don't talk back to me you coward. Thats all you are, a coward and a weakling! No one cares about you Willy. You aren't even blood thirsty like me. I am a Commander of a troop. Sooon I will be promoted to a General of many troops! And you Willy, have accomplished nothing! Your a coward and you have never killed a man in your life!" Perry spit in my face and I rubbed the spit off with my arm.
I yelled back, "You are the coward! I fight my own battles. You use pawns like me to win the battles for you!" I spit into his face and he created a flame in his hand immediately. Perry yelled, "This flame will killy you Willy! And you deserve it you low-life coward scum! You aren't cut out for being in the Fire Nation. After I kill you I will inform Azula that I killed you personally becuase you wen't blood thirsty enough!"
I created a rock fist quickly and I punched Perry in his face. he then sent a fireball at my face but my "rock fist" blocked the flame. I hit him twice more in the face and his node began to bleed. I ripped his helmet off from his head and I created a bouler. I yelled, "BLOOD THIRSTY! Is this good enough for you!" I sent the boulder into his face I then I made anotehr boulder. I yelled, "In case you aren't dead yet why don't I give you another boulder!" I sent a second boulder into Perry's face, crushing his skull.
I stood over his dead body and said, "Hahahahaha Perry! you are my first kill! Willy Woo's reign has come and I am a blood thirsty bastard!" I took off my clothes and I changed into Perry's outfit. I put his mask over my head and it covered my face. I said to myelf, "Hahahaha now they will think that I am the Commander." I hid Perry's dead body in a closet of the room we were in.
I walked outside of the room and there was no one there which meant nobody knew that I just killed their true Commander. I walked out another door and I saw at least 40 Fire Nation soldiers. I yelled, "This is your Commander! Troops, we are gonna kill all men, women, babies, and children. I am a blodd thirsty man and I won't stop until the Fire Nation has complete control over the world! Now lets move out! Lets move out of Ba-Sing-Se and capture every villiage in our path!"
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| am i 1000? |
Rampage (Gigantic Axe)
"YES!" exclaimed Rampage, "hurry Savage, we can't afford to lose him!" Rampage got up and began to run towards Scorch, until something got into his way: a massively gigantic mountain. It had cut off the path and Rampage looked up. It must have been over 90 stories high, and was very flat, meaning there wasn't much to climb onto.
"Well, what do we do now?" asked Savage.
Rampage growled, "return to Ba-Sin-Sa I suppose." And with that, Rampage and Savage made there way back down to the river and crossed it. It took them several hours to make it back to the town. They were about to rest there, when a massive ball of fire came over the horizon and headed towards Rampage. Rampage held his axe in front of him and the ball disappeared into it.
"Fire Nation!" exclaimed a panicing citizen, "they're attacking." Rampage growled again.
"This goes completely against what I know I should do," said Rampage, "Savage, brace yourself. Its time for some bloodshed."
Spike (Archer)
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Bulldozer said, "Lets go to the Eastern Air Temple just like Kujo told me to. I feel like I have a purpose! We should go there. I'm sure that the Avatar will be there!" I replied, "Okay whatever. Lets go...." We soon found some kid we gladly gave us a ride near the Eastern Air Temple. The kid said he was heading that way anyway. Along the way I thought of how I was going to become friends with the Avatar and eventually trick him. I hoped that I could kill the Avatar. If I suceeded, then I would surely become the new Lord of the Fire Nation!
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I looked up at a huge mountain and said, "Dam! That's steep! How can we get up there?" Mayhem replied, "I can climb it!" I answered back, "No you can't! There is almost nothing to hold on to!" Mayhem nodded his head and accepted that he could not climb the mountain. The three of us began to walk around the mountain, in search of a hidden tunnel or staircase. I then saw a small wooden sign that was attached to the mountain.
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The sign said, "Only the Good are allowed and the Evil are forbidden. Spirits shall pass as well." I laughed and said, "Well we are evil. What do I care. Hahahaha!" I touched the sign and I felt some sort of movement coming from it. Mayhem touched it and he said, "Yeah, I feel like heat or something." Bulldozer then touched it and a part of the mountain slid open and a staricase appeared before my eyes.
-
There was another sign next to the staircase which said, "I see you contain a spirit. You shall pass." I looked at Bulldozer and he said, "I TOLD YOU KUJO PUT A SPIRIT INSIDE MY BODY!" I responded, "Wow! You might actually be right. But, I won't beleive you until I see the spirit." Bulldozer laughed and said, "Can you see spirits anyway." Mayhem answered, "Yeah. The person who contains the spirit inside them can become that spirit." I replied, "Cool. Thats good to know!"
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The three of us began to walk up the long staircase. The mountain door behind us soon shut and we were in the dark. But, we just kept on walking....
Ami (waterbender)
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I went back to the waterfal to practice waterbending, it??is the only thing that kept my parents close to me.
I sighed and began to relax and go through the motions of some simple moves not really competitive moves, just decorative moves, some that I had made up myself.
'Why did I have to see that firebender kill mom?' I wondered to myself as I felt the tears stream down my face again. I dropped the water I was bending and began to cry again... I knew that I didn't want to cry, but I knew that I needed to let it go.
"Ami!" it was Katara
"Ami, are you okay?" Katara asked
"Yeah, I'm fine" I replied, wiping my tears
"For some reason, I don't believe that" Katara countered "Ami, I know you're hurting, but it doesn't help any to bottle your pain inside... I remember trying to cope with my mother's death..."
"Katara, you have NO IDEA WHAT I'M GOING THROUGH!" Ami belowed in tears "You still have your father, brother??and grandmother, I can't even bost that...??I??have??no one??left in my family execpt the older sister??I maybe see once a year"
Katara pulled back slightly, Ami was right, compaired to her she had been lucky, extremely lucky
"Ami, I know you suffered more than your fair share but we all share the same grief" Katara whispered tears falling down her cheeks
Ami sighed and wiped her eyes
"I shouldn't be unloading all of this on you" she sighed
"No, go ahead, I want to help you, Ami"
"No, Katara, you have your own tasks to do... you need to help the Avatar, let me deal with my pain my way"
"How by bottling it up like you've been doing for the last ten years?" Toph asked
Ami sighed, they were right, she had to let go.
"Okay, Katara, Toph, I'll tell you the story of what happened to my parents as it??has been??burned into my memory"
Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)
Scorch sat next to Rin whom was under a blanket, due to the cold wind.
"You okay about this?" asked Scorch.
"Yeah, now that I think about this," said Rin. Scorch lifted her blanket and got under it with her. (Rin, not what u think!)
"Its cold up here," said Scorch, "let me try to warm you up." He hugged her and began to radiate a small amount of heat from his body.
"Thanks," said Rin, "you know, we've been through a lot together. And, you've never left me before. Just promise me that you never will."
"Don't worry Rin," said Scorch, "I will always be here for you. I promise." He held her tight and she held him. Rin began snoring a few moments later. Scorch looked down at her and laid her down before getting up and leaving the chamber. He saw Aang was standing there waiting for him.
"Scorch," he asked, "can we talk?"
"Sure," said Scorch, "what do you want to talk about? I'll teach you firebending soon..."
"Not firebending," he said, "how did you and Rin become so... close?"
"Oh, that?" asked Scorch, "its kinda hard to explain. I guess it all sorta started when we met. It really jumped when me and Fang had a bet... and, well, from there it has been natural."
"Oh," said Aang. He sounded depressed.
"Is there something wrong?" asked Scorch. Scorch thought for a few seconds and it came to him, "Wait, are you having girl trouble." Aang quickly covered Scorch's mouth.
"Not so loud," said Aang, "yeah, I'm having some problems."
"With who?" asked Scorch, "Toph?... or Katara?" Aang blushed when Scorch mentioned Katara's name. "I see. Well, has anything BIG happened between you two?" Aang looked at Scorch for a moment, "alright, stupid question. I guess I mean emotional."
"Oh, well there have been a few times," said Aang.
"Hmm," said Scorch, "did she react good to them? Like, show you she liked you too?"
"Well, yeah," said Aang. "But, I don't know how to tell her how I feel. She's so beautiful."
"Hey man, I felt the same way about Rin," said Scorch, "have you ever said I love you?" Aang blushed again. "Well, that's your problem. Just say it to her and see what happens from there. That's all I can tell you."
"Thanks," said Aang, "you've been a real help."
"Well, I'm glad," said Scorch, "and about your firebending training... We'll start as soon as me and Fang are finished with the guru." Scorch walked around the temple and found the guru.
"Ah, so are you ready?" he asked.
"Not without Fang," said Scorch. Scorch turned around and saw Fang come into view and fly down towards them. "I guess we can start now."
"Good," said Kai, "well then, sit down over here." Scorch sat on the ground and began to fall deep in thought. He heard Fang touch down on the ground and sit down as well. He heard Kai get up and placed one hand on Scorch's head.
"Relax, both of you, clear your mind," said??Kai,??"ah, I have thought much on your spirits and your own personal abilities. This is my conclusion". They both waited for his answer. "Scorch, you have a very strong will to protect and do whats right. The spirit inside you, the great dragon Pyro, feeds on your disbelief and sadness. And Fang, you are strongest when you are calm and relaxed. The spirit you carry, the great wolf whos name has been lost to the winds to time, is fueled by your anger and rage. In simplistic terms, in order to gain more control over these spirits, you must focus more on the emotions which feed your strength and away from those that feed your spirit". Both??Scorch just sat there in awe.
"Well, what are we waiting for?" Scorch said. Kai??nodded then looked at Fang.
"Yeah, lets go this show on the road," said Fang.??Kai nodded then indicated to a room near them.
"Then lets get started," said??Kai, "First we need to..." But Scorch heard??a??female scream and jumped.
"I'm sorry, this is going to have to wait," said??Scorch, "Fang, come on!"
"Wait!" exclaimed Kai, "I must just give you a warning. You will encounter other spirits on your journey. There is someone else with a spirit within them as well. Her name is Talho, and you must seek her out before its too late." They nodded.??Fang got up and??they ran down to the temple chamber that they had made camp.??They saw the earthbender, Jax,??standing over Rin with bloody swords.
"NO!" exclaimed Scorch, Rin had stopped moving and wasn't even breathing.??Jax turned around and looked at Scorch.
"One down," he said, "one to go."
(Rin, Ami,??Jax make a filler story for how Jax did it)
