Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
| Triforce442 wrote: |
Name: Talon Age:17 Height/Weight:5'9 125lb Bending: Water bending Pref using Ice Special Moves: Ice Claws( covers hands in ice and tips are very sharp) Ice Dragon( This move is not yet complete the basic idea is a dragon made of ice through bending make it appear to be alive) Eyes: Icy Blue Hair: Snow White History: Before Talon was born his mother and father were going through some tough times. They lived in a poor district of the city. His father was a low ranking soldier and his mother work in the healing huts. After becaming pregnant they knew they needed more money so his father bought a cheap boat and became a fisher man for some extra cash. 9 months later the fateful day was here but sadly during birth Talon's mother went through some complications and past. After the tragic passing of his wife Lee(Talon's father) went into a deep session of greif. He would spend hours looking into his new son's Big brown eyes that reminded him so much of his wife's. To pass the hours he would rock his son and tell him stories of the northern water tribe. Talon being a baby would just stare blankly at his father when he did this but after hearing one story he strangely began to giggle and smile at his father. The story that did this was about one of the "Tribes Protectors"... It is said that there is a Mystical Ice Dragon that lives under the ocean around the Northern Water Tribe that protect its people from danger. They also say that its serves as a Gate Keeper of the "Spirit Oasis" which is believed to be a point where the spirit world and mortal world overlap. This Legendary Ice Dragon goes by the name of Haru. After about two weeks Lee needed to get back out on the sea to make some money. Not having anyone to look after Talon he was forced to take him along. While out on the sea an unexpected rogue wave came crashing into the boat sending the young by plummeting into the unforgiving ocean. Lee not ready to lose the last part of his family quickly dove into the frigged water after his son but Talon was no where to be found. The sobbing father Thrashed at the water in desperation. After two minutes in fear of freezing to death himself he climbed back into the boat. While sitting there Lee heard a splash and the unforgettable giggle of his beloved son. When he looked over the side he saw what looked to be like a Serpents Tail. Lee picked up his son was shocked to see His big brown eyes have turned a Icy Blue and his deep Black hair has turned a Snowy White... To be Continued |
ok well thats my story i posted a couple weeks ago i plan to keep it going but i just started school and havent had the time so within the next few days i will make the next part
Samei:Water Bending Assassin
Location: A small ocean-side villiage.
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Samei sat on the beach,the wind blowing her hair into her face.Around her many children were making sand castles,chasing eachother,and laughing.She sighed,remembering her childhood when she,too,had no worries.She would laugh and play without a care in the world.Those she thought were the good days.Her deep thought moment was interupted when a little boy,only about 6-7 years old,came up to her.His light blue eyes seemed to sparkle in the afternoon sun,his jet black hair moving slightly in the wind."My parents asked me to give you this." He showed her a special seashell,in that particular villiage,it meant friendship.She took the seashell and held it lightly.She turned back to the little boy and asked "Could you take me to your parents?"
He nodded and turned.Samei got up and followed the boy as he started to walk.He walked near the water but stepped away as it came in.He seemed to be afraid of it.His face turned to a frown and his feet stumbled as he went away from the gleaming blue water.Samei made a see through wall of ice that kept the water from coming near them.His face turned to a smile and he moved with pride instead of fear.Finally they neared the end of the beach,and his parents...
She walked ahead of him.She could notice who his parents were.The mother had the same features as her son,also,they were the only ones on that part of the beach.She then realized who the mother really was...
"Nani!!" she shouted and ran to meet her childhood friend."Samei!!' she shouted back.Nani had moved away after the raids had started.They moved to a villiage in the earth kingdom,she never knew it would be here.She hugged her friend."It's been to long" she said.She lighly pushed her away to look at her face.Her facewastotally flaw free except a light scar on her right cheek.She had fallen one time while her and Samei where playing.Samei gathered enough strengh totake her fallen friend to the healers all the way back in town.She was uncoincouse the whole night.Samei had stayed with her all night.
"I missed you so much" she said.They stared at eachother."O,let me introduce you,this is my husband,Lee,and this is my son,Kiran." she said "Lee,Kiran,this is my old friend,Samei."Samei shook both thier hands.Nina asked her husband and son to go while they catch up."So,how is Master Tiyu doing?".Samei forgot that Nina had left right after the first raid."Nina,there is something you should know..."
To be continued..
How was that last post?I tried to be a little more describtive,did it work?
| Mei-Chi wrote: |
| How was that last post?I tried to be a little more describtive,did it work? |
I for one think you did a very good job.
Although i had a hard time understanding this sentence
(Samei made a see through wall of ice that kept the water from coming near them.)
Sometimes people think what they are writing instead of writing what they think (rap your mind around that one)
Its okay, but in order to catch yourself reread what you write out loud.
By the way do i sense another Rock Lee Fan
so is it way to late to join if so nvm... if not...
Name: Reif
Gender: Male
Bending: Earth (can do a little sand and metal though)
Special ability/attack: Reif prefers not to "attack" he prefers to use a strong defense instead. Many times he will use the Earthbending move that puts up a wall behind his attacker, moves them to that wall and binds there arms, legs and forehead. If neccesary he will make a staff of earth erupt from the ground and move it swiftly around at his target knocking them silly !
PErsonallity: Reif enjoys learning more about his culture and his bending. He watches other nations to learn things about them and aplly the to his bending. Reif is a passive agressive person and will only get agressive when he has to protect someone or he is in dire need to attack.
Story: Reif comes from a small town in the Earthbending Nation. He spent most of his childhood peacefully. He would learn his bending each day and work on it very much. The day he set out was when he was only 9 when firebenders came to ransack his village and killed his parents.
I hope that is good I'll be back in a few days...
| Double09nhalf wrote: | ||
I for one think you did a very good job. Although i had a hard time understanding this sentence (Samei made a see through wall of ice that kept the water from coming near them.) Sometimes people think what they are writing instead of writing what they think (rap your mind around that one) Its okay, but in order to catch yourself reread what you write out loud. By the way do i sense another Rock Lee Fan |
and it means that she took some ocean water and made a wall of ice that could not be seen to keep the water from coming near the boy,so he wouldn't be scared
| kingearth wrote: |
| so is it way to late to join if so nvm... if not... Name: Reif Gender: Male Bending: Earth (can do a little sand and metal though) Special ability/attack: Reif prefers not to "attack" he prefers to use a strong defense instead. Many times he will use the Earthbending move that puts up a wall behind his attacker, moves them to that wall and binds there arms, legs and forehead. If neccesary he will make a staff of earth erupt from the ground and move it swiftly around at his target knocking them silly PErsonallity: Reif enjoys learning more about his culture and his bending. He watches other nations to learn things about them and aplly the to his bending. Reif is a passive agressive person and will only get agressive when he has to protect someone or he is in dire need to attack. Story: Reif comes from a small town in the Earthbending Nation. He spent most of his childhood peacefully. He would learn his bending each day and work on it very much. The day he set out was when he was only 9 when firebenders came to ransack his village and killed his parents. I hope that is good I'll be back in a few days... |
good,no god powers,but,if u could make a slightly larger history,that would be good.
P.S
I am not the charcter accepter here,but i just replied cause noone else was atm.
Well,just gonna make it up as I go along..
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Samei-Waterbending Assassin
Location-Small Ocean-side Villiage
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"I can't believe it" Nina sank down into the chair she was infront of."After all these years,I have been waiting for word on him,and he is dead.".She put her head in her hands,her jet black hair surrounded her face,as if to protect her from further sorrow.They had walked to Nina and Lee's house,under Samei's request."Samei took a seat across from her friend and reached out her hand."It's OK,if it helps any,I tried to avenge him.".Nina looked up.Her face had turn red and her eyes were puffy.
"What exactly did you do?".Samei looked down.She was suddenly ashamed of what she was about to say."I sunk one of thier ships to the bottom of the ocean.The ship's crew was the one who had killed master Tiyu."."Your waterbending has improved" she stood up and continued "Could you teach me the ways of waterbending and the sword?"Samei leaned back,shocked."What about Lee and Kiran?"."They could come,you could teach me and they could just come along..please.".Samei looked at her friends hopeful face,there was only one awnser.
She stood up and replied "Yes".Nina's eyes sparkled with excitement.She ran to tell her husband and son.Samei sunk into the chair and sighed.The window let the light touch her face,warming her.She looked around.The decor was appropriate.The walls had the design of water washing up on a beach.Seashells scattered on the beach,like little soldiers fighting to protect their land from the destructive waves.
A large thump startled her out of her examination.Lee came running down "Nina fainted!" he said frantically.Samei ran towards the steps.When she got to the bottom of the steps she paused.She saw what made Nina faint.Black ash filled the air,like little black snowflakes,they fell from the sky.There was only one explanation,Samei whispered "An attack.".
To be continued...
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Here is Nina's profile..
Name:Nina
Bending:Learning waterbending and sword fighting.
Personailty:Friendly and nurturing.
Hair:Jet Black,Long
Eyes:Light Blue
Story:Nina was born a day after Samei.They played togather,sometimes even had sleepovers.Samei once rescued her from dying.But,when the fire nation raids started,Nina and Samei where seprated.She grew up in the eart kingdom,and never got to come close to master her waterbending ability.Then,buy chance,Samei was on the same beach of the same villiage.They were reunited.Now,Nina has asked Samei to give her the training she never got to have.
| kingearth wrote: |
so is it way to late to join if so nvm... if not... Name: Reif Gender: Male Bending: Earth (can do a little sand and metal though) Special ability/attack: Reif prefers not to "attack" he prefers to use a strong defense instead. Many times he will use the Earthbending move that puts up a wall behind his attacker, moves them to that wall and binds there arms, legs and forehead. If neccesary he will make a staff of earth erupt from the ground and move it swiftly around at his target knocking them silly PErsonallity: Reif enjoys learning more about his culture and his bending. He watches other nations to learn things about them and aplly the to his bending. Reif is a passive agressive person and will only get agressive when he has to protect someone or he is in dire need to attack. Story: Reif comes from a small town in the Earthbending Nation. He spent most of his childhood peacefully. He would learn his bending each day and work on it very much. The day he set out was when he was only 9 when firebenders came to ransack his village and killed his parents. I hope that is good I'll be back in a few days... |
| -TheSecondSign- wrote: |
| Just checking in. Story is on hiatus, due to things I'm currently busy with. |
I'm almost done with my season only two more posts to the end of one and the beginning of another. Dafoose let me know when your finished.
| Dafoose wrote: | ||
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Kinda said what i said,just a little longer
So,yea,he just needs a bit of a longer history,right?
