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    Dafoose

    [8681]Nov 24, 2008
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    Good Job. You're on fire, even for having these premade.
    That's how I did it before I started typing more per chapter.

    Well, if you insist, I will give you what I've typed so far for the first chapter.

    it's not much, because I haven't really thought about the next chapter completely.

    Kela Dasman; Waterbender, Day 128. The Lobby, Morning.

    The candy in the tray by the receptionist counter was waiting helplessly for Kela's next trick. He saw that there was a new group of people walking in through the door with traditional water tribe clothing. They talked loudly as they waited in line to see the receptionist. Instead of playing a trick on her to take some candy, he simply walked up and took one, and put it in his pocket. He thought about the glorious day he played a trick. 'Heh heh.' He thought. The receptionist was writing things down, as usual. Kela thought she was probably writing down her thoughts about innovations for the future and such. It didn't interest him any more.

    He meandered over to the glass window, which was frosted with snow. 'I can hardly tell that it's springtime around here.' He thought. He drew ying and yang on the inside of the window, along with a poor self-portrait of himself. Then he dozed off and sat in on the bench near the window inside the lobby. He daydreamed about drawing a beautiful picture on the window the next time he came in. But he peeked again at his own drawing and forgot about it. Then he just sat there in silence, waiting for the time to come for Mar to come back from a meeting with a healer. On occasion, Mar would see this healer to get some advice and lessons on healing the sick and wounded. This attribute would be much more useful on the journey, due to the fact healing powers were a dire necessity in a pinch like Evelet's three months ago.
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    There's a preview, I'm doing it little by little so that I don't overwhelm myself on the first chapter. It has to be a smooth opening, you know?

    Oh yeah, and I started watching Trigun. Awesome Anime.
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    Double09nhalf

    [8682]Nov 25, 2008
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    Dafoose wrote:
    Oh yeah, and I started watching Trigun. Awesome Anime.

    (whisper) the books are better

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    Dafoose

    [8683]Nov 25, 2008
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    They're always better, most of the time.
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    Double09nhalf

    [8684]Nov 27, 2008
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    Happy-Thanksgiving ... too much turkey???

    anywho fellow washouts and deserters (sigh) here's my next post

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    Siam- airbender

    Mrs. Yoji- earthbender

    ~~at the western airtemple-soon leaving-~~

    /////////////

    Siam ran to the edge of the cliff climbed down one of the vines. As she reached the temple level she swung herself to the ledge bending a cushion of air to break her fall as she continued running. Past the inner sanctum, past the hall of echoes Siam ran.

    He can't be dead, she thought.

    She wove her way through the hallways hoping to find the big wooden door to the nursery. She wished with all her might that she would smell the fresh hay and the even fresher dropping. But as the nursery came into sight she saw the thick door lying on its face and no smell drifted from the room. Siam stumbled forward as she approached the room as a heavy knot formed in her stomach. The sight she saw drove her dizzy with bewilderment.

    Where there had once been random animals from various parts of the four nations there now stood... nothing. The wooden tiled floor reflected all incoming light with a ghostly sheen. Other than the wall the only thing that caught her attention was the hairy wall. As she took a closer look she found the millions of strands of hay that had imbedded themselves into the granite wall.

    "If this is what happened to the straw then what happened to... Kempa?"

    "KEMPA," Siam screamed.

    "He is obliviously not here and shouting will not find him or bring him back!"

    Siam didn't need to turn around to see you it was and she didn't care to acknowledge either.

    "Am I to lose everything I hold close to in my heart? My father, mother, Mizuhiro, and now Kempa are lost."

    "Everything is not lost; only you are lost," someone whispered.

    Siam turned around to find no one there.

    "Over here."

    Walking out of the nursery, Siam made her way down the corridor until she came to the entry way to the echo chamber. The evening light casted long shadows into the chambers many rooms.

    Siam made a deep sigh and advanced inward when a loose pavement stone came up and tripped her.

    "And here I was thinking that air-benders were cautious people," said Mrs. Yoji as she and her bear popped out of a nearby wall.

    "Mrs. Yo..."

    "Dear, I know you want your flying bison back but getting yourself killed is a terrible justification. Now if you want Kempa back with your own hide intact then follow me and we shall retrieve him. Bostov, I want you to wait outside."

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    djdfire

    [8685]Nov 27, 2008
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    My crew is taking too long to post and I was goin to post but it telling me that I had a single word over 80 characters in length and I didn't know which word it was. Anyways, Happy Turkey Day

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    Double09nhalf

    [8686]Nov 27, 2008
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    djdfire wrote:

    My crew is taking too long to post and I was goin to post but it telling me that I had a single word over 80 characters in length and I didn't know which word it was. Anyways, Happy Turkey Day

    When you have a a word over even twenty characters then its probably a web-address to a picture or shortcut. either that or your sentences got mashed together- trying looking at it in preview cause its easier to find that way.

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    Dafoose

    [8687]Nov 27, 2008
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    Happy Turkey Genocide Day to all.

    And to all a good night.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [8688]Nov 28, 2008
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    LOL!!!
    Turkey Genocide!!!!

    *launches missile at turkey farm*
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    Double09nhalf

    [8689]Nov 28, 2008
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    LOL!!! Turkey Genocide!!!! *launches missile at turkey farm*

    lol, for christmas we should have an Avatar RPG genocide... oh, wait we already did that.

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    BaiMaoRieji

    [8690]Nov 29, 2008
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    I hate college with a passion that almost rivals that of my hatred for TLG. I couldn't post because I had 2 papers to write. I have finals as well, so don't expect me on here alot. I'll try to sneak a post by Wednesday.
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    Dafoose

    [8691]Nov 29, 2008
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    I hate college with a passion that almost rivals that of my hatred for TLG. I couldn't post because I had 2 papers to write. I have finals as well, so don't expect me on here alot. I'll try to sneak a post by Wednesday.

    All us young people have college problems too. I got finals as well. Good luck Bao.
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    confucioussayhi

    [8692]Dec 1, 2008
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    I'm not rushing him, since I understand he's pressed for time, I'm just letting everyone know that I'm not posting until after Chad finishes up his Bai Mao/Rieji reunion and kickstarts this party, then I'll post like a madman. Seriously, I have a four or five part finale depending on how I split it. You'll like it. I promise.

    So quit baaaaaaaaaawwing about nobody posting. TLG has no such limitations, whip his ass into shape.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [8693]Dec 1, 2008
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    WHAT!!!!
    I CAN KILL OFF UR CHARACTER FOR SAYING DAT
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    Double09nhalf

    [8694]Dec 1, 2008
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    WHAT!!!! I CAN KILL OFF UR CHARACTER FOR SAYING DAT

    ...Fine

    ...Cool

    ...And maybe i will pull an Indaina jones.

    Lastly, TLG, isn't that against the rules???

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    confucioussayhi

    [8695]Dec 2, 2008
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    Why yes, yes it is. Impeach! Recount! Veto!
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    Dafoose

    [8696]Dec 2, 2008
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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    Why yes, yes it is. Impeach! Recount! Veto!

    RECALL RECALL!!!
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    Dafoose

    [8697]Dec 7, 2008
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    Does anybody have any new stuff? Has anybody heard from Redoblante?
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    ThatLostGuy

    [8698]Dec 7, 2008
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    I saw Redo online the other night. He didnt say hi to me
    Anywho...

    +++++++++++++++

    WILLY WOO (Earth Bender)

    +++++++++++++

    I'm dead.
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    confucioussayhi

    [8699]Dec 8, 2008
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    I saw Redo online the other night. He didnt say hi to me
    Anywho...

    +++++++++++++++

    WILLY WOO (Earth Bender)

    +++++++++++++

    I'm dead.
    Post something. You have no excuses.
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    Double09nhalf

    [8700]Dec 8, 2008
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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    I saw Redo online the other night. He didnt say hi to me Anywho... +++++++++++++++ WILLY WOO (Earth Bender) +++++++++++++ I'm dead.
    Post something. You have no excuses.

    NO, NO, wait, wait just a minute. This is a good thing people. As long as TLG doesn't bring Googly goo (Willy Woo cousin on his mother's side {twice removed}) back to revenge his death, etc.

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