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Boomeraaaang
[1]May 28, 2008
member since: 05/09/08
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Okay, remember Sokka's Haiku Slam in "Tales of Ba Sing Se"?
Well here's your chance to show off YOUR Haiku skills.
Rules for Haiku
First line: 5 syllables
Second line: 7 syllables
Third line: 5 syllables
Obviously your poem should be about Avatar in some way, a character, an episode, whatever.
Okay, I'll start if off.
*ahem*

Toph, the Blind Bandit
She vanquishes all her foes
While she picks her nose!

Edited on 05/28/2008 3:48am
Edited 2 total times.
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Boomeraaaang
[2]May 28, 2008
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*clears throat*
Kataang is its name
The ship that will not set sail
Hey, Aang! Epic Fail!
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TheFungusyOne
[3]May 28, 2008
member since: 09/25/06
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Wide grin, glinting eyes
Mischievous smile aimed at you...
Joo Dee's behind you

lol, I suck at poetry in general, but I just couldn't resist XD
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tomtitan
[4]May 28, 2008
member since: 03/01/07
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Hey, y'know how I'm like incredibly awesome and whatnot?
Check this out:

Rooster, Ox, Rabbit
Monkey, Dragon, Tiger, Snake
Dog, Sheep, Horse, Rat

Sound familiar?
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tomtitan

[7]May 28, 2008

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thefacestealer wrote:

hm. good idea. i'm really not a good rhymer but...

its one good drink with lots of spunk,

but just make sure you don't get drunk.

A few brain cells might just come loose

if you drink some cactus juice.

Don't you know what a Haiku is?

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TheFungusyOne
[8]May 28, 2008
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tomtitan wrote:

Hey, y'know how I'm like incredibly awesome and whatnot? Check this out: Rooster, Ox, Rabbit Monkey, Dragon, Tiger, Snake Dog, Sheep, Horse, Rat Sound familiar?
XD clever. Except the last line's supposed to have five syllables
Edited on 05/28/2008 3:29am
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thefacestealer

[9]May 28, 2008

member since: 01/17/08
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tomtitan wrote:

thefacestealer wrote:

hm. good idea. i'm really not a good rhymer but...

its one good drink with lots of spunk,

but just make sure you don't get drunk.

A few brain cells might just come loose

if you drink some cactus juice.

Don't you know what a Haiku is?

no, i'm not japanese, but from what i see it looks like short verse poetry.

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TheFungusyOne

[10]May 28, 2008

member since: 09/25/06
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rank: Evil Bert
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thefacestealer wrote:

tomtitan wrote:

thefacestealer wrote:

hm. good idea. i'm really not a good rhymer but...

its one good drink with lots of spunk,

but just make sure you don't get drunk.

A few brain cells might just come loose

if you drink some cactus juice.

Don't you know what a Haiku is?

no, i'm not japanese, but from what i see it looks like short verse poetry.

Nah, it says in the first post (and in Avatar). Don't you remember?

"Five, seven then five,
Syllables has a haiku.
Remarkable oaf."

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tomtitan

[11]May 28, 2008

member since: 03/01/07
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thefacestealer wrote:

tomtitan wrote:

thefacestealer wrote:

hm. good idea. i'm really not a good rhymer but...

its one good drink with lots of spunk,

but just make sure you don't get drunk.

A few brain cells might just come loose

if you drink some cactus juice.

Don't you know what a Haiku is?

no, i'm not japanese, but from what i see it looks like short verse poetry.

I'm not Japanese either. A Haiku is a poem made of three lines that don't rhyme. The words in the first line have 5 syllables, the words in the second one have seven syllables and the words in the last one have five syllables altogether.

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thefacestealer

[12]May 28, 2008

member since: 01/17/08
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TheFungusyOne wrote:

thefacestealer wrote:

tomtitan wrote:

thefacestealer wrote:

hm. good idea. i'm really not a good rhymer but...

its one good drink with lots of spunk,

but just make sure you don't get drunk.

A few brain cells might just come loose

if you drink some cactus juice.

Don't you know what a Haiku is?

no, i'm not japanese, but from what i see it looks like short verse poetry.

Nah, it says in the first post (and in Avatar). Don't you remember?

"Five, seven then five,
Syllables has a haiku.
Remarkable oaf."

oh i guess i didn't see that, whoops.

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tomtitan
[13]May 28, 2008
member since: 03/01/07
level: 19
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tomtitan wrote:

Hey, y'know how I'm like incredibly awesome and whatnot?
Check this out:

Rooster, Ox, Rabbit
Monkey, Dragon, Tiger, Snake
Dog, Sheep, Horse, Rat, Pig

Sound familiar?

Lawl, forgot one. Sorry.
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Boomeraaaang
[14]May 28, 2008
member since: 05/09/08
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TheFungusyOne wrote:

Wide grin, glinting eyes Mischievous smile aimed at you... Joo Dee's behind you lol, I suck at poetry in general, but I just couldn't resist XD
Nice!
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TheFungusyOne

[15]May 28, 2008

member since: 09/25/06
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Boomeraaaang wrote:

TheFungusyOne wrote:

Wide grin, glinting eyes Mischievous smile aimed at you... Joo Dee's behind you

lol, I suck at poetry in general, but I just couldn't resist XD

Nice!

THanks

you too ^^

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elementavatar14

[16]May 28, 2008

member since: 03/28/07
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tomtitan wrote:

Hey, y'know how I'm like incredibly awesome and whatnot? Check this out: Rooster, Ox, Rabbit Monkey, Dragon, Tiger, Snake Dog, Sheep, Horse, Rat, Pig Sound familiar?

Lawl, forgot one. Sorry.

haha. i had to reread that last line like 6 times before i figured out that u actually messed up.

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SlargTheGnome
[17]May 28, 2008
member since: 05/06/08
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Boomeraaaang wrote:

*clears throat*
Kataang is its name
The ship that will not set sail
Hey, Aang! Epic Fail!

*punches out Boomeraaaang*
Oh right, a haiku. Ahem:
Sokka is so fine,
He's a hit with the ladies,
And that includes me!
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PsychoPass
[18]May 28, 2008
member since: 11/05/07
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My name is Sokka!
It's pronounced with an 'Okka.
Ladies, I rock ya.

I rule with my leet haxorx plagiarism skillz. \o/
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Miroku78
[19]May 28, 2008
member since: 11/06/05
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Oh Yes, a place for the Musical Avatard to show some skill.

The Prince Named Ozai
I caused your parents to die
Now you sit and cry
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xRamensx
[20]May 28, 2008
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Four nations as one
Is a thought not understood
Bald boy is the key
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