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    clapmaster

    [761]Jul 8, 2009
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    Fred In Coralwood - B+

    I thought it was a great episode, but there probably could have been more happening. I'm also excited how you are going to crossover with my new show next and I'm wondering what you got in mind since I've only posted a few episodes so far.
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    jjsthekid

    [762]Jul 8, 2009
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    Squidward : Super Star ( So Far) Review: A+

    Pretty good show so far Clapmaster! I liked the crossover with Fred's road trip too. But i am wondering if we will see more new characters in the future? Oh well, it was still pretty good.

    Edited on 07/08/2009 3:18pm
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    clapmaster

    [763]Jul 8, 2009
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    Sabotage In Coralwood - F

    Dragiiin I've been enjoying your series, but this episode was completely uncalled for. It was extremely brutal and violent. We usually try to keep things G and PG rated over here. Please go back to making your series as enjoyable as it was before this episode.
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    jjsthekid

    [764]Jul 9, 2009
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    Here are some reviews by jjsthekid.

    The Fate Of The City Review: B+

    It was great, but the only problem was you needed more details. Your show is still great though.

    Shedding Light On The Situation Review: A+

    Pretty Good Terminoob! Your show just gets better and better. The ending was great, but i can't wait for the next part.

    Sabotage In Coralwood Review: C

    Sorry Dragiiin, but it is what Clapmaster said. We need to try and keep things G or PG over here. Plus, this really didn't seem like a crossover to me. They just tried to sabotage their show and thats it. Ok, it was a crossover but it felt like a strange crossover. The ending was a little rushed too.

    Edited on 07/09/2009 5:52am
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    jjsthekid

    [765]Jul 9, 2009
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    Very Gary's Pilot Review: B+

    Ok, before i say anything else, don't always ask for reviews because not every episode will be reviewed.

    Now, this was a good pilot. It reminds me of my old Gary spin-off. It needed more details, but it was still good.

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    SeaSpongez

    [766]Jul 9, 2009
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    jjsthekid wrote:

    Very Gary's Pilot Review: B+

    Ok, before i say anything else, don't always ask for reviews because not every episode will be reviewed.

    Now, this was a good pilot. It reminds me of my old Gary spin-off. It needed more details, but it was still good.

    I won't ask for anymore, it's just that was my first episode and I really wanted reviews for it.

    Thanks, I wanted to add more details, but honestly I like keeping it simple so people will be able to quickly read it, but I'll try to add a little more.
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    NathanJR94

    [767]Jul 9, 2009
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    Sabatoge in coralwood- F

    Sorry dragiiin, I enjoy your spin-off, but this episode was horrible. It was violent. Like clapmaster and jjsthekid said "keep it G or PG rated". Keep it G and PG rated, not R rated. Sorry dragiiin, but this was very offensive, and you can do a lot better than this.

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    jjsthekid

    [768]Jul 9, 2009
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    SeaSpongez wrote:
    jjsthekid wrote:

    Very Gary's Pilot Review: B+

    Ok, before i say anything else, don't always ask for reviews because not every episode will be reviewed.

    Now, this was a good pilot. It reminds me of my old Gary spin-off. It needed more details, but it was still good.
    I won't ask for anymore, it's just that was my first episode and I really wanted reviews for it. Thanks, I wanted to add more details, but honestly I like keeping it simple so people will be able to quickly read it, but I'll try to add a little more.

    That is ok, you are new to the spin-offs, so you didn't know that. But i felt like i needed to say that. Oh and welcome to the spongebob spin-offs.

    Patrick Shipped To Boating School Review: B+

    Interesting. I have a feeling this is going to be a funny episode when you post the full plot.

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    The_Cartoon

    [769]Jul 9, 2009
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    Very Gary Pilot - B

    You're a really good writer and the episode was really good. But wasn't this the exact plot of a That's So Raven episode?
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    that70sguy92

    [770]Jul 9, 2009
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    The_Cartoon wrote:
    Very Gary Pilot - B

    You're a really good writer and the episode was really good. But wasn't this the exact plot of a That's So Raven episode?
    I think it was. They were trying to impress someone and the three of them dressed up as members of a band, or something like that.
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    DC-Dude

    [771]Jul 10, 2009
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    ^ I remember that episode well, it was called Boyz N Commotion, I think.

    I would comment on Sabotage In Coralwood, but it got deleted from the Spin-Offs page. What exactly was so inappropriate? I mean, I write some stuff that's pretty mature, but what could've caused so much as an F? Just wondering.

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    clapmaster

    [772]Jul 10, 2009
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    ^ Well it was bloody and violent and it was about your characters getting assaulted and attacked by Generation Patrick characters. Let's just say it wasn't pretty

    Culinary Cook-off - A+++

    DC-Dude this was a brilliant crossover. And I'm not saying this because it was a crossover with my show, but just in general it was a great crossover.
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    SeaSpongez

    [773]Jul 10, 2009
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    that70sguy92 wrote:
    The_Cartoon wrote:
    Very Gary Pilot - B

    You're a really good writer and the episode was really good. But wasn't this the exact plot of a That's So Raven episode?
    I think it was. They were trying to impress someone and the three of them dressed up as members of a band, or something like that.

    Wow, I honestly never heard of that episode. I actually think my episode was based a little bit more on the Simpsons episode "Waverly Hills 90210". I don't think that one was my best, so the REAL first episode is today.
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    bob_ball

    [774]Jul 10, 2009
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    My Last Review Catch-up Before I Go And Finalize The Spinnys

    Very Gary - B+

    Very good for a first time user SeaSpongez. The plot may have been used before but it doesn't matter since all plots end up getting recycled anyway. Can't wait to read more!

    Culinary Cook-off - A+

    This crossover was indeed fantastic! I like how you incorporated the fact that both shows are taking place in Coralwood again, which both of you have incorporated in past spin-offs of yours (clappy-Plankton & The Patty Stealers, DC-Dude-Rock Star!). I won't be surprised if both of you crossover again.

    The Grand Olympics - A++++

    A great way to end Spin-off Action. I'm sorry that you lost your fun to make this show clapmaster. I did enjoy that you had IMO an underdog from the previous two seasons in Conner win it all.

    Squidward's Road Trip - A+

    I have been enjoying your new series clapmaster, but I want to mainly focus on this episode for review. It's like I was actually reading an episode of jjsthekid's Fred Road Trip. It seemed like you wrote the episode the way jjsthekid would. It was excellent! I even loved the brief cameo appearance of the Krusty Train.

    The Fate of the City - B (for now?)

    That's it? Usually you have a short plot and a long plot so I'm hoping that this is the short plot and the long plot get's posted soon because its an interesting idea.

    Shedding Light on the Situation - A+

    Grah, post the rest soon. Your series always amazes me terminoob. And this is another A+ added to your list of positive reviews for this show. And of course the cliffhanger was funny because its Mr Krabs and its his love for money so of course that was going to happen.

    The Fred Coralwood Trilogy - A

    Pretty great giant crossover jjsthekid. It was kind of dull at first in Part 1 with not much happening in the Adventures in Coralwood part, then it slightly improved during the Squidward: Superstar portion. But the final part made it A+ worthy as it catapaulted the overall grade into an A.

    High School Calamity - C+

    I did not get a chance to read your critically panned Coralwood crossover, but this episode was ok. First of all, one night stands are definitely not G or PG related either so there's a problem right there. And I don't understand why things have to be so violent on your show (for example Peyton and Franny dying in the spike factory). The things I did like though was that it was kinda different from usual high school based episodes but you've got to tone down on the violence and other R rated material (yet again I did not read the newest episode, but if what others are saying is true)
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    DC-Dude

    [775]Jul 11, 2009
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    clapmaster wrote:
    ^ Well it was bloody and violent and it was about your characters getting assaulted and attacked by Generation Patrick characters. Let's just say it wasn't pretty Culinary Cook-off - A+++ DC-Dude this was a brilliant crossover. And I'm not saying this because it was a crossover with my show, but just in general it was a great crossover.

    Just know, I'll be doing more crossovers in the future.

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    jjsthekid

    [776]Jul 11, 2009
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    Here are some more reviews by jjsthekid.

    Arrested Development Review: A+

    Pretty good way to start season 3 of The Krusty Train! It is about time That M.C.C member got arrested. I can't wait to see what will happen in this season.

    Girl Troubles Review: A+

    Good episode! You are getting better at your first spin-off. Pretty good episode too.

    The Spinnys Live! Review: A

    Pretty good Clapmaster, the only problem was we never saw if they got into the spinnys, but it was still great.

    Saturaited Fat Review: A-

    Pretty good Dragiiin! This was better then That Crossover with The Adventures in coralwood. Now this episode was good, but there were some problems. It was still great though.

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    clapmaster

    [777]Jul 11, 2009
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    ^^^^ Awesome!

    Girl Troubles - A

    A much better pilot in my opinion of Very Gary. Interesting that you choose Snella instead of being generic and having Snellie

    Arrested Development - A

    The_Cartoon I really like your idea of having new characters on the train to keep the plotlines fresh. I should have thought of that during the Krusty Cruise. Anyways I'm stoked to see Patrick on there and I can just picture Squidward now
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    jjsthekid

    [778]Jul 12, 2009
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    Here are more reviews by jjsthekid.

    The Fairly Odd Sponge Review: C+

    It was pretty good, but you need more details in your episode plots though. It was still good.

    No Pain no Game Review: A+

    Pretty Good JellyFishJammer. I was wondering when you were going to post new episodes.

    Horror- Scope Review: A+

    Another great episode from Spongecraft! This was awesome too.

    The Birthday Party Review: C+

    I am not trying to sound rude or anything, but i am going to be honest. It was great to see Squidward's Life again, but why did you stop doing The Adventures Of Fry Boy? Is it because i gave that a bad review? That is no reason to cancel a show NathanJR, just because you got a bad review. I have gotten bad reviews before, and i am fine. Now, the plot for this was good, but why did you start your show all over again though? But it was still good, but my main problem is why you started your show all over again. Also, there were some problems in this episode too.

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    YuseiFudou

    [779]Jul 12, 2009
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    jjsthekid wrote:

    Here are more reviews by jjsthekid.

    The Fairly Odd Sponge Review: C+

    It was pretty good, but you need more details in your episode plots though. It was still good.

    Thanks, man. I'm focusing on putting down my episode ideas and then expanding. Guess I got time to expand on the current 7 episodes before I make more.
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    NathanJR94

    [780]Jul 12, 2009
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    jjsthekid wrote:

    The Birthday Party Review: C+

    I am not trying to sound rude or anything, but i am going to be honest. It was great to see Squidward's Life again, but why did you stop doing The Adventures Of Fry Boy? Is it because i gave that a bad review? That is no reason to cancel a show NathanJR, just because you got a bad review. I have gotten bad reviews before, and i am fine. Now, the plot for this was good, but why did you start your show all over again though? But it was still good, but my main problem is why you started your show all over again. Also, there were some problems in this episode too.
    I am not quitting fry boy, it is just taking a break for my new spin-off.
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