Spongecraft pilot review: A+
This was pretty good Terminoob! This show sounds interesting.
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Spongecraft pilot review: A+
This was pretty good Terminoob! This show sounds interesting.
Spongeclone review: A
I will have to admit, your show is getting better. However, don't always ask reviews because not every episode will be reviewed. Also, you might annoy people if you keep asking for reviews all the time. Anywyas, this was a good episode.
bob_ball wrote: |
Another multiple review session with bob_ball SpongeCraft - A+ As a former WoW addict, I must say the thought of this becoming a series is awesome! I have high hopes! The Great Train Robbery - A Excellent The_Cartoon, Nat the thief who knew? But I am wondering if we will ever see The M.C.C. again? The Algaes Always Greener - A Your series is indeed interesting SpongeSebastian. I would love to see an episode like MM & BB 3 from Man Ray's point of view....just putting it out there The Good, The Bad, The USP - B+ Loved the A plot, but the B plot about The Man selling Eel Scout Cookies was extremely random and not that great. Still, a great episode in general though Food World - B+ Its great to see the tables turn and have SpongeBob be the person stealing the formula, but the fact that it was all a set up kinda brought the episode down a bit. Still one of your better this season spongebobs1fan Duplication 3000/SpongeClone - C This episode would have gotten a C+ but you always constantly ask for reviews, hopefully this teaches you to not always ask for reviews. As for the episode itself, it just felt very gimicky. First, the plot didn't seem like it was warranted the two parts. Then the ending was very bland. Welcome back to the spin-off forums and please stop constantly asking for reviews. Jail Time - C It seemed like there was no clear point to this episode except for it to be a crossover with Underwater Idol. Seriously, the plot was there, but there was no clear ending. It just had Parla singing, Mikey saying that he didn't steal the jewels, and that's it. jjsthekid, you can definitely do better and I am expecting you to recover from this disappointing episode. Clamapoloza - D+ It seemed like you had a plot in there somewhere, but it got extremely confusing. I tried to reread it and still got lost. Then I noticed you had the whole episode in one giant sentence. Please fix this and the grade will probably raise. As for what I tried to read, you were just focusing on the minor details and not the major storyline in general. You just threw the plot in at the very end. |
Actually Bob Ball, the episode isn't finished yet. I am fine that you gave my episode a C, but there is going to be another part of the episode.
The Good, The Bad, The USP Review: A
This was good DC-Dude, but i think you could have explained what happened to The Man. But still, it was a good episode.
bob_ball wrote: |
Another multiple review session with bob_ball SpongeCraft - A+ As a former WoW addict, I must say the thought of this becoming a series is awesome! I have high hopes! The Great Train Robbery - A Excellent The_Cartoon, Nat the thief who knew? But I am wondering if we will ever see The M.C.C. again? The Algaes Always Greener - A Your series is indeed interesting SpongeSebastian. I would love to see an episode like MM & BB 3 from Man Ray's point of view....just putting it out there The Good, The Bad, The USP - B+ Loved the A plot, but the B plot about The Man selling Eel Scout Cookies was extremely random and not that great. Still, a great episode in general though Food World - B+ Its great to see the tables turn and have SpongeBob be the person stealing the formula, but the fact that it was all a set up kinda brought the episode down a bit. Still one of your better this season spongebobs1fan Duplication 3000/SpongeClone - C This episode would have gotten a C+ but you always constantly ask for reviews, hopefully this teaches you to not always ask for reviews. As for the episode itself, it just felt very gimicky. First, the plot didn't seem like it was warranted the two parts. Then the ending was very bland. Welcome back to the spin-off forums and please stop constantly asking for reviews. Jail Time - C It seemed like there was no clear point to this episode except for it to be a crossover with Underwater Idol. Seriously, the plot was there, but there was no clear ending. It just had Parla singing, Mikey saying that he didn't steal the jewels, and that's it. jjsthekid, you can definitely do better and I am expecting you to recover from this disappointing episode. Clamapoloza - D+ It seemed like you had a plot in there somewhere, but it got extremely confusing. I tried to reread it and still got lost. Then I noticed you had the whole episode in one giant sentence. Please fix this and the grade will probably raise. As for what I tried to read, you were just focusing on the minor details and not the major storyline in general. You just threw the plot in at the very end. |
what was wrong i go from my best episode to my worst episode what am i doing wrong? i just wanna have a great spin-off
BrennanNN wrote: | ||
what was wrong i go from my best episode to my worst episode what am i doing wrong? i just wanna have a great spin-off
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Blast Off Review: A
I will have to admit, this was a great episode of your show. Your show is getting better! Well, i enjoyed this episode.
Survivor Review: A+++++
Clapmaster, Season 3 of Spin-off action is great so far! I like seeing Daniel again, and i like Seeing DJ from my Scooter show.
Survivor Review - A+
great season premiere clap master and lulu a petty thief? YAY
well i will have another episode today guys of cheeks and bob
Survivor Day 1, 2, 3: TGTR (Too good to rate)
I gotta say, these episodes were amazing! I love the conflicts between Victoria and Cala and The Quickster and Sam! THE 4TH AND 5TH EPISODES WERE AMAZING, ALSO!
bob_ball wrote: |
The First 5 Episodes of Season 3 of Spin-off Action - A+++ Read the reviews of the other four previous reviews of these five episodes and that's pretty much exactly what I have to say. Fred's New Pet - A Sorry I was kinda harsh in my last review jjsthekid, but I had no clue that it was a multi-episode story arch. Still it was kinda poorly written though so my grade stays. Anyway this episode shows exactly what makes you a great spin-off creator which is a great episode (even though the plot was kinda simple) Good Ol Jimmy - A+++ This episode was awesome DC-Dude. I don't know which storyline was greater. The A part or the B part because they were both fantastic. When your show is finished, this will definitely in my opinion be one of the episodes I'll always remember The Day New Plats City Stood Still - C+ I'm also sorry about being harsh on your review, but you seriously need to work on your grammar, spelling, and sentence structure like The_Cartoon stated in his review of your episode before this one. I too am just trying to help because while you usually have good plot ideas, they get plagued by the three problems you have listed above. |
It is ok Bob Ball.
Anyways, here is a review.
Good Ol Jimmy Review: A+
DC-Dude, this was probably the best of the season so far. I enjoyed this episode alot.
BrennanNN wrote: | ||
what the hell i spell every word correctly and whats wong WITH MY DAMN GRAMMER AND SENTACING STRUCTER WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????????????? WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG |
just had sentences like this
so that's not really a sentence... That's not sentence structure, that's just putting a "tab" between thoughts, you don't use periods or commas... We aren't trying to be mean, it's just difficult to understand.