Avatar: The Last Airbender: Song for Avatar Boys!

Strix_Moonwing
[1]Jan 7, 2007
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Okay, this is a song that I??wrote out of pure boredom, while on a five hour car trip to visit relatives this weekend. I was watching some Avatar episodes on my portable DVD player and got inspired to writer it after watching Sokka's endless flirting. Sorry if it sounds alittle Redwall-ish, I was reading my favorite redwall book to find words that rhymed.
This song is basically centered about the Avatar boys...mainly Sokka! Hope you like it. Remember, this song was made purely for comedy!XD
"O I walked along one day in Spring,
In Ba Sing Se, I heard someone sing.
I saw a girl, so nice and sound.
That's when my heart began to pound!
There I criiiiiiiiieeeeddd,
'Oh dear earth maid, please come with me!
You've captured my heart, it can't be freed!
Pretty as pretty as any girl I'll meet,
May I part with a kiss, short and sweet?'
Well, those earthbender gals have hearts of stone,
She took one look at me and boot me to the road!
Throwing boulders at my wake,
Those earthbender gals I'll never date!
O into the Fire nation, I went at Summer's start,
There I met a girl that stole my heart.
With hair so black and eyes of flame,
And a temper that couldn't be tamed!
There I??criiiiieeeeddd,
'Oh, dear fire maid, please come with me!
You've captured my heart, it can't be freed!
Pretty as prettty as any girl I'll meet,
May I part with a kiss, short and sweet?
One look at at her, and I knew I was toast,
I ran away before my bottom was roast!
Though, I gave dating a firebender a turn,
I ended up with third degree burns!
During the Autumn fall, I climbed the mountains high,
Til I reached the temples in the sky.
There I met a monk so fair,
With arrows on her skin instead of hair!
There I criiiiieeeedddd,
'Oh dear air maid, please come with me!
You've captured my heart, it can't be freed!
Pretty as pretty as any girl I'll meet,
May I part with a kiss, short and sweet?'
Without a wave or kiss goodbye,
That girl blew me off the bloomin' mountain side!
I was caught in a tornado all that day,
Oh please, dear spirits, keep those air girls away!
To the north I went, as Winter came,
There my heart would never be the same.
With stars for eyes and a face like the moon,
That water tribe girl made my heart swoon!
There I criiiieeeeeddd,
'Oh dear water maid, please come with me!
You've captured my heart, it can't be freed!
Pretty as pretty as any girl I'll meet,
May I part with a kiss, short and sweet?'
Beware, dear lads, those waterbenders have hearts of ice,
She picked up her coat and beat me up twice!
First with a boomerang, then a water whip,
The first came back again, ain't that a trip?
Four nations, four seasons pass through time,
Four girls, four benders pass me by.
Four times broken, four times gained,
My poor young heart will never be the same!
So here I crrrrryyyyyyyyyy,
Oh, Summer, Winter, Fall, and Spring!
All year long, I'll sit and sing!
I'll flex my muscles and tidy up right,
And flirt with any girl that comes in sight!"
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ssknight123
[2]Jan 7, 2007
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That's a good song
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onceinabluemoon
[3]Jan 7, 2007
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lol That's genius Strix! I hope you're script for the Avatar movie is great like that!
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wibadgers
[4]Jan 7, 2007
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great job
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Chosen144
[5]Jan 7, 2007
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*claps* Haha that was great!
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ardron
[6]Jan 7, 2007
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How long did that take you? Pretty cool.
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Strix_Moonwing
[7]Jan 7, 2007
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ardron wrote:

How long did that take you? Pretty cool.

It took about half an hour to write. I'm glad you guys like it!
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woohoojiffylube
[8]Jan 7, 2007
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Nice. Kind of reminds me of Iroh.
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YamiNarutoBrief
[9]Jan 7, 2007
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not bad at all....it was really good.
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ravenfilange24
[10]Jan 7, 2007
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awesome!! maybe I'll write an avatar poem and post it here.
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C1991

[11]Jan 7, 2007

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Strix_Moonwing wrote:

Okay, this is a song that I??wrote out of pure boredom, while on a five hour car trip to visit relatives this weekend. I was watching some Avatar episodes on my portable DVD player and got inspired to writer it after watching Sokka's endless flirting. Sorry if it sounds alittle Redwall-ish, I was reading my favorite redwall book to find words that rhymed.

This song is basically centered about the Avatar boys...mainly Sokka! Hope you like it. Remember, this song was made purely for comedy!XD

"O I walked along one day in Spring,

In Ba Sing Se, I heard someone sing.

I saw a girl, so nice and sound.

That's when my heart began to pound!

There I criiiiiiiiieeeeddd,

'Oh dear earth maid, please come with me!

You've captured my heart, it can't be freed!

Pretty as pretty as any girl I'll meet,

May I part with a kiss, short and sweet?'

Well, those earthbender gals have hearts of stone,

She took one look at me and boot me to the road!

Throwing boulders at my wake,

Those earthbender gals I'll never date!

O into the Fire nation, I went at Summer's start,

There I met a girl that stole my heart.

With hair so black and eyes of flame,

And a temper that couldn't be tamed!

There I??criiiiieeeeddd,

'Oh, dear fire maid, please come with me!

You've captured my heart, it can't be freed!

Pretty as prettty as any girl I'll meet,

May I part with a kiss, short and sweet?

One look at at her, and I knew I was toast,

I ran away before my bottom was roast!

Though, I gave dating a firebender a turn,

I ended up with third degree burns!

During the Autumn fall, I climbed the mountains high,

Til I reached the temples in the sky.

There I met a monk so fair,

With arrows on her skin instead of hair!

There I criiiiieeeedddd,

'Oh dear air maid, please come with me!

You've captured my heart, it can't be freed!

Pretty as pretty as any girl I'll meet,

May I part with a kiss, short and sweet?'

Without a wave or kiss goodbye,

That girl blew me off the bloomin' mountain side!

I was caught in a tornado all that day,

Oh please, dear spirits, keep those air girls away!

To the north I went, as Winter came,

There my heart would never be the same.

With stars for eyes and a face like the moon,

That water tribe girl made my heart swoon!

There I criiiieeeeeddd,

'Oh dear water maid, please come with me!

You've captured my heart, it can't be freed!

Pretty as pretty as any girl I'll meet,

May I part with a kiss, short and sweet?'

Beware, dear lads, those waterbenders have hearts of ice,

She picked up her coat and beat me up twice!

First with a boomerang, then a water whip,

The first came back again, ain't that a trip?

Four nations, four seasons pass through time,

Four girls, four benders pass me by.

Four times broken, four times gained,

My poor young heart will never be the same!

So here I crrrrryyyyyyyyyy,

Oh, Summer, Winter, Fall, and Spring!

All year long, I'll sit and sing!

I'll flex my muscles and tidy up right,

And flirt with any girl that comes in sight!"

I read Redwall books too

i just read Mossflower for like the 20th time..... which is that from?

you are truly a genius....

and I quoted the whole poem just to annoy you all

evil laugh.... cough

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Strix_Moonwing

[12]Jan 8, 2007

member since: 10/08/06
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C1991 wrote:

Strix_Moonwing wrote:

This song is basically centered about the Avatar boys...mainly Sokka! Hope you like it. Remember, this song was made purely for comedy!XD

"O I walked along one day in Spring,

In Ba Sing Se, I heard someone sing.

I saw a girl, so nice and sound.

That's when my heart began to pound!

There I criiiiiiiiieeeeddd,

'Oh dear earth maid, please come with me!

You've captured my heart, it can't be freed!

Pretty as pretty as any girl I'll meet,

May I part with a kiss, short and sweet?'

Well, those earthbender gals have hearts of stone,

She took one look at me and boot me to the road!

Throwing boulders at my wake,

Those earthbender gals I'll never date!

O into the Fire nation, I went at Summer's start,

There I met a girl that stole my heart.

With hair so black and eyes of flame,

And a temper that couldn't be tamed!

There I??criiiiieeeeddd,

'Oh, dear fire maid, please come with me!

You've captured my heart, it can't be freed!

Pretty as prettty as any girl I'll meet,

May I part with a kiss, short and sweet?

One look at at her, and I knew I was toast,

I ran away before my bottom was roast!

Though, I gave dating a firebender a turn,

I ended up with third degree burns!

During the Autumn fall, I climbed the mountains high,

Til I reached the temples in the sky.

There I met a monk so fair,

With arrows on her skin instead of hair!

There I criiiiieeeedddd,

'Oh dear air maid, please come with me!

You've captured my heart, it can't be freed!

Pretty as pretty as any girl I'll meet,

May I part with a kiss, short and sweet?'

Without a wave or kiss goodbye,

That girl blew me off the bloomin' mountain side!

I was caught in a tornado all that day,

Oh please, dear spirits, keep those air girls away!

To the north I went, as Winter came,

There my heart would never be the same.

With stars for eyes and a face like the moon,

That water tribe girl made my heart swoon!

There I criiiieeeeeddd,

'Oh dear water maid, please come with me!

You've captured my heart, it can't be freed!

Pretty as pretty as any girl I'll meet,

May I part with a kiss, short and sweet?'

Beware, dear lads, those waterbenders have hearts of ice,

She picked up her coat and beat me up twice!

First with a boomerang, then a water whip,

The first came back again, ain't that a trip?

Four nations, four seasons pass through time,

Four girls, four benders pass me by.

Four times broken, four times gained,

My poor young heart will never be the same!

So here I crrrrryyyyyyyyyy,

Oh, Summer, Winter, Fall, and Spring!

All year long, I'll sit and sing!

I'll flex my muscles and tidy up right,

And flirt with any girl that comes in sight!"

I read Redwall books too

i just read Mossflower for like the 20th time..... which is that from?

you are truly a genius....

and I quoted the whole poem just to annoy you all

evil laugh.... cough

I kinda based it off the fisherman otter song from "Triss" with the "Then they criiieeeeeddddd!" Hehehe, I just loved the cry part.

But the rest I did on my own.

I'm glad you like it!

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