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    obsessedchic1

    [21]Dec 17, 2006
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    lol
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    confucioussayhi

    [22]Dec 17, 2006
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    obsessedchic1 wrote:
    lol
    WTF? These aren't funny stories! Why do you mock me?!?! JK. Did you like them?
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    obsessedchic1

    [23]Dec 17, 2006
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    yeah, they were good...too bad I can't write like that
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    confucioussayhi

    [24]Dec 17, 2006
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    obsessedchic1 wrote:
    yeah, they were good...too bad I can't write like that
    ThanksI got first place in my school's short story contest.
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    go_ugly_people

    [25]Dec 17, 2006
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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    obsessedchic1 wrote:
    yeah, they were good...too bad I can't write like that
    ThanksI got first place in my school's short story contest.


    nice
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    confucioussayhi

    [26]Dec 17, 2006
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    go_ugly_people wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    obsessedchic1 wrote:
    yeah, they were good...too bad I can't write like that
    ThanksI got first place in my school's short story contest.


    nice
    I know, right?
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    go_ugly_people

    [27]Dec 17, 2006
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    noone reads my blogs
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    obsessedchic1

    [28]Dec 17, 2006
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    I'll read them, but I never went to your blogs.
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    confucioussayhi

    [29]Dec 17, 2006
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    go_ugly_people wrote:
    noone reads my blogs
    I did.
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    confucioussayhi

    [30]Dec 17, 2006
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    White and nerdy!
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    go_ugly_people

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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    White and nerdy!


    lol
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    obsessedchic1

    [32]Dec 17, 2006
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    hahaha
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    obsessedchic1

    [33]Dec 17, 2006
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    I just read it
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    confucioussayhi

    [34]Dec 18, 2006
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    I'll post another two chapters today.
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    go_ugly_people

    [35]Dec 18, 2006
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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    I'll post another two chapters today.


    good
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    the_mental_teen

    [36]Dec 18, 2006
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    Pretty cool fanfic! If nick.com allowed violence like this your fanfic would probably be the most posted. Sadly, it isn't, so this is probably your best bet, or that adultfanfic place.
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    the_mental_teen

    [37]Dec 18, 2006
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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    go_ugly_people wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    obsessedchic1 wrote:
    yeah, they were good...too bad I can't write like that
    ThanksI got first place in my school's short story contest.


    nice
    I know, right?


    You had a short story contest, you had this, an Avatar one? AND WON?! No f***in' fair, I'm too scared to reveal MY fanfic in public, for I think it's stupid. It's on nick.com in the FF boards and it's called "The Outcast". It sucks but I do have some replyers.
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    the_mental_teen

    [38]Dec 18, 2006
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    the_mental_teen wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    go_ugly_people wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    obsessedchic1 wrote:
    yeah, they were good...too bad I can't write like that
    ThanksI got first place in my school's short story contest.


    nice
    I know, right?


    You had a short story contest, you had this, an Avatar one? AND WON?! No f***in' fair, I'm too scared to reveal MY fanfic in public, for I think it's stupid. It's on nick.com in the FF boards and it's called "The Outcast". It sucks but I do have some replyers.


    Also that the writer of it (me) isn't named "mental_teen". It's "nextavatar" in case you wanted to read it...
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    confucioussayhi

    [39]Dec 18, 2006
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    No it was a short story about an edgar allen poe remake.
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    confucioussayhi

    [40]Dec 18, 2006
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    Disclaimer-I don't own Avatar, yeah go ahead and rub it in.

    Pain. So heavy and full of pain that she could feel it. She could tell that Number 11 was in pain. Not physical pain, but emotional pain. She was no longer afraid of him, far from it,??she felt old urges that told her to help him. She didn't know why or how but she would. Her promise would be easier to??complete as the door to maximum slammed open and??a guard, dragging 11 behind him came in. The guard stopped at the girl's cell he unlocked the door and threw the freak in. It immediately stood up and rammed into the bars snarling and growling at the man. "Ha!" He said, "See how you like it in there!". The Animal-man's response was to slash at the bars with his hand. "Freak." came the guards snide remark as he walked away laughing.

    "So, whats up?" the girl asked. He growled. "You have a name?" she expected another growl or a roughly put together response, but what she heard was "My name was taken from me long ago." He said solemnly. She was genuinely surprised. "So, you're not always freaked out?" she asked. "No." came his simple response. "How'd you get in here?" "Why do you ask so many questions?" he replied. "I'm curious about the Animal-man. This psychotic, yet simultaneously??in complete control mystery." she said. "It's a long story." he said simply. "Lucky us. We've got nothing but time." she said with a smile.

    "No." he said firmly. "Ok," she said "one last question then.". "Fine." he said. "Who was that man in the stands?" His eyes widened. "Nobody." he said shakily. "There's the nerve." she thought. "He sounded like he knew you." "He must have been mistaken.". "You can't always hide. Sometimes it helps to let go." she said. His face softened at the caring in her voice. "Why do you care?" he said, less fierce this time. "I used to help people all the time. It hasn't been washed away by this place."she said. "Well," he said as a smile slowly creeped across his face "since we've got nothing but time."

    Yeah less action but big plot change! He's not always a man-killing freak! He has a??(somewhat)??nice side which you'll hear about in my next chapter.

    /\I've run out of clever things to say so here it is. OH! From the makers of Tex-lax! YEEEAAAAHAW!

    Edited on 12/18/2006 10:54am
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