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    kataangalldaway

    [1]Dec 16, 2006
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    I know this is kinda lyk mental_teen's avatar bloopers, but these are what scenes on wut weh think could happen in this show... I give an example of wut kind ub stuff is wntd here... i already posted it in my blog already...

    follow-up on the "Cross-roads of Destiny"

    * It has been a night after Ba Sing Se has fallen to Azula's hands and the gaang and the Earth King (Basco is roaming around) are all sleeping except for Katara and Aang*

    Katara: *talks quietly* I can't sleep.

    Aang: Me neither.

    Katara: *gets up* Come, I want to show you something I found yesterday.

    Aang: Ok.

    *They both tiptoe away from the campsite and Aang follows Katara (Katara bringing a sleeping bag) to a river. Katara lays out an ice path for them to walk across. There is a waterfall at the beginning of the river??and a field full of flowers across the river. The sky is beautifully lit with the numerous amount of stars. Katara puts down the sleeping bag and they sit in the field of flowers.*

    Aang: This is beautiful! Well I mean...

    Katara: It's ok... it is beautiful. Look at the stars.

    *They look at the sky and see the??stars??form two people kissing (them) with wording underneath that says "Kataang"*

    Aang: I wonder what that means...

    Katara: *blushing* Aang? ... There's something I've been wanting to tell you for a long time.

    Aang: Ya....

    Katara: Well, I know you probably don't feel the same way as me but... do you remember when we were trapped in that cave?

    Aang: The cave of two lovers?

    Katara: Ya *blushing* that one. Well I realized there that I... well... like you more than just a friend... I, well ... *blushes again* love you... and I totaly understand if...

    *Aang goes up to her kisses her on the lips*

    Aang: Well, I have always loved you. *Katara smiles*

    *They kiss again.*

    Aang: I've been trying to tell you all this time. But anyway, I do have to tell you something about my trip to the Guru.

    Katara: Well what happened?

    Aang: Well there are seven chakras in your body that stop the energy from flowing in your body. And to master the Avatar State, you must open all the chakras so that the cozmic energy can flow with your body.

    Katara: Does this have any relevence to now?

    Aang: Yes... I was easily able to open all the chakras in my body except for the last one.

    Katara: And...

    Aang: I wasn't able to master the last chakra because I had to... well... give up my love for you.

    Katara: But I saw you! At the crystal place I saw you go into the Avatar State!

    Aang: To save you, I had to give up my love for you. But the strange thing is, ever since you brought me back to life, I feel that I am still able to control the Avatar State without letting go my love for you.

    Katara: Maybe by me returning your love it somehow open that chakra thing you were talking about...

    Aang: Something like that... *smiles and then yawns*

    Katara: Ya I'm tired too, let's go to sleep.

    *Katara gets into her sleeping bag and Aang huddles on the ground beside her.*

    Katara: Aang come here, we can share.

    *They both share the sleeping bag and go to sleep*

    k... now its your guyzez turn

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    xlA_V_A_T_A_Rlx

    [2]Dec 16, 2006
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    Sounds cool..I'll read them not make them.
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    kataangalldaway

    [3]Dec 16, 2006
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    ya i don't think im gonna b maken anymore... im jus going to b readen dem too...lol
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    andreitayehp

    [4]Dec 16, 2006
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    That was really growse!

    Ok here goes mine!

    Previously, on Avatar:

    Ursa: Azula! We don't speak that way!

    (Two old women watch Azula bend lightning)
    Old Woman: Almost perfect.
    Other Old Woman: Just one hair out of place.
    Azula (brushing a strand of hair back from her face): Almost isn't good enough!

    Young Zuko: Girls are crazy!

    Iroh: [in a letter] If the city is as magnificent as its wall, Ba-Sing-Se must be something to behold. I hope you all may see it someday, if we dont burn it to the ground first! *chuckles darkly*

    Ursa: [in reference to Azula] What is wrong with that child?

    Young Azula: [singing] Dad's going to kill you! [normal] Really, he is

    Ursa: Zuko, please, my love, listen to me. Everything I've done, I've done to protect you. Remember this Zuko, no matter how things may seem to change, never forget who you are.

    Blue Dragon: (Speaking with Azula???s voice) It???s getting late. Are you planning to retire soon, my lord?
    Zuko: (Scarless and dressed as the Fire Lord) I???m not tired.
    Blue Dragon: Relax, Fire Lord Zuko. Just let go. Give in to it. Shut your eyes for a while.
    Red Dragon: (Speaking with Iroh???s voice) No, Fire Lord Zuko! Do not listen to the blue dragon. You should get out of here right now. Go! Before it???s too late!
    Blue Dragon: Sleep now, Fire Lord Zuko. Sleep... Just like Mother!

    Book 3: Fire

    Chapter One: Shadows From the Past.

    Four Years Ago...

    (we are taken to the royal palace, where a 12 years old Zuko is playing with a 10 years old Azula, while Ursa is smiling, happy, seeing the siblings so happy, suddenly, a letter from Iroh arrives), Ursa reads it, she looks terrified, so go inside, where Ozai is talking with a servant, she ask him to talk in private)

    -Ozai, dear, look this letter! We must send troops to help him!

    -no way! are you mad!

    -But he is your brither!

    -I don't care! by the way, have you relized how much potencial your daughter has? It's incredibly, after Zuko's, when she borned, I thought she was about to be even weakier than him!

    -Zuzu is not weak! (angry) and he has so much inner strenght, even more than you (she leaves him walks throught a corridor, a servant appears, he saiys two old ladies are tequesting an audience for Prince Ozai and Princess Ursa)

    In another room, in front of two little throne where Ozai and Ursa are sitted:

    crone 1: well, your majesties, we have come, because, as wise women we are, we have sensed...

    crone 2: a huge potential emanating from here, we believe is one of your two childs

    both crones: it's one of the biggest we have ever feel, if that potential is trained from now, it'll be quite usefull to win this war.

    Ursa takes Azula to the Royal academy, were she has a lot of problems with other kids.

    -Mom, I'm bored, where's Zuko?

    -I've alredy told you, dear, this place is just for girls, and your uncle has been in charge of his education.

    -But I'm bored! Everybody in here is so... vulgar (showing her tonge)

    (Ty lee arrives)

    -Hello, Princess Ursa! (kneels) My mother wanted to know you, she always says you are beautifull, and too goog to be with Prince Ozai, why? (she takes an angry Azula by the hand and pulls her toward a depressed looking girl, Mai, Ursa smiles)

    -Ok, let's hope Azula finally makes some friends, apart Zuzu.

    (While arriving to the palace, Zuko appears running toward her, smiling, then he hugs her, both smiling)

    -Zuzu!

    -Mom! I've missed you a lot, do you know when is Uncle gonna arrive?

    -(with a very sad face) Now, Zuzu, sorry, but he'll be glad to see you!

    (then we saw the two of them walking trought different places in the palace, it seems Zuko follows her whereever she goes, until Azula arrives with her two new friends, Mai gets blushed just at Zuko's sight, while Ursa, realising, smiles at her, then leaves them)

    -Hi! you are Prince Zuko? Right? I'm Ty Lee! And this is Mai.

    - (shocked by Ty Lee's happines) eh.. yeah! hi! (tries to leve them, but Ty Lee follows him, so Azula, and Mai, it seems she didn't wanted to be alone) What!

    -O! nothing, I just wondered... Do you wanna be my friend?

    -O... yea! sure, I suppose!, you name was?

    -Ty Lee! And she's Mai! Bye!

    ??(later, iun a corridor)

    -Mom, those girls were freak!

    -(smiling) Well, Zuzu.... (Ozai arrives)

    -Zuko, I need to speak with your mom. (Zuko leaves them)

    -Look! (he takes her where Azula is trainning in a special room with the two crones, she is doing the same movement she displayed in Azulon's war room, when finnishing)

    crone 1: You missed up a shot!

    crone 2: just for a little.

    (Azula starts again)

    Ozai: (in other room) See? She's amacing! I never tought I was able to feel proud of a kid1

    -What about Zuko? He is a very kind boy!

    -I'll never be proud of him!

    -(angry) why?

    (then we see Zuko's memories from Zuko Alone, in the same order, until that part when Ursa Takes Azula from Zuko's room)

    (in Azula's room (bigger than Zuko's))

    -Now, are you gonna tell me what did you REALLY??listened! Young girl!

    -You alredy heard it, mom, Grandfather wants to kill my brother!

    -I don't believe you, Azula, recently you have acted in a very strange form, I wanna know why are you bothering Zuko!

    -(crying) Why do you never believe me! Father told Grandfather he wanted to be heir to throne! instead of uncle! because lu ten's dead, and he had Zuko and I!, so he got mad, and said he wanted to betray uncle!, he said uncle has suffered too much!, he said Fahter had to feel the same way uncle, so he had to kill him! Mom, he'll kill Zuko! (hugs her while crying)

    (we see Ursa's face very angry, realising Zuko's knife was in Azula's bethroom.??she looks like the 14 years old Azula)

    We see her going to Azulon's bedroom, and raising up a knife, her face emotionless, then we see her siluete killing Azulon. She runs toward Zuko's room, but she is interrupte dby Azula, with her typical diabolic face.

    -I cannot believe you believed me!

    -What!

    (sudenly, two siluetes appears, they are as shor as Azula)

    (in a dark screen, we listen Ursa crying, no way, I'm not leaving him! (silence) ok, but don't dare hurt him! Crying)

    She write's a letter, in Zuko's room:

    Ursa: Zuko, please, my love, listen to me. Everything I've done, I've done to protect you. Remember this Zuko, no matter how things may seem to change, never forget who you are.

    (We see Iroh, reading Ursa's letter, somewhere in the palace, with a shocked face, we just see her last words. Please, make Zuko continues being the beautifull prince he always has been, I'll be waiting for him, this good Bye is not for ever... I hope)

    Present time: We see an "evil" Zuko, planning war strategies with Azula, until, Ty lee arrives, and hugs Zuko, followed by an emotionless, Mai, saying "hi!", and blushing after Zuko's Hello

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    kataangalldaway

    [5]Dec 16, 2006
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    andreitayehp wrote:

    That was really growse!

    Ok here goes mine!

    Previously, on Avatar:

    Ursa: Azula! We don't speak that way!

    (Two old women watch Azula bend lightning)
    Old Woman: Almost perfect.
    Other Old Woman: Just one hair out of place.
    Azula (brushing a strand of hair back from her face): Almost isn't good enough!

    Young Zuko: Girls are crazy!

    Iroh: [in a letter] If the city is as magnificent as its wall, Ba-Sing-Se must be something to behold. I hope you all may see it someday, if we dont burn it to the ground first! *chuckles darkly*

    Ursa: [in reference to Azula] What is wrong with that child?

    Young Azula: [singing] Dad's going to kill you! [normal] Really, he is

    Ursa: Zuko, please, my love, listen to me. Everything I've done, I've done to protect you. Remember this Zuko, no matter how things may seem to change, never forget who you are.

    Blue Dragon: (Speaking with Azula???s voice) It???s getting late. Are you planning to retire soon, my lord?
    Zuko: (Scarless and dressed as the Fire Lord) I???m not tired.
    Blue Dragon: Relax, Fire Lord Zuko. Just let go. Give in to it. Shut your eyes for a while.
    Red Dragon: (Speaking with Iroh???s voice) No, Fire Lord Zuko! Do not listen to the blue dragon. You should get out of here right now. Go! Before it???s too late!
    Blue Dragon: Sleep now, Fire Lord Zuko. Sleep... Just like Mother!

    Book 3: Fire

    Chapter One: Shadows From the Past.

    Four Years Ago...

    (we are taken to the royal palace, where a 12 years old Zuko is playing with a 10 years old Azula, while Ursa is smiling, happy, seeing the siblings so happy, suddenly, a letter from Iroh arrives), Ursa reads it, she looks terrified, so go inside, where Ozai is talking with a servant, she ask him to talk in private)

    -Ozai, dear, look this letter! We must send troops to help him!

    -no way! are you mad!

    -But he is your brither!

    -I don't care! by the way, have you relized how much potencial your daughter has? It's incredibly, after Zuko's, when she borned, I thought she was about to be even weakier than him!

    -Zuzu is not weak! (angry) and he has so much inner strenght, even more than you (she leaves him walks throught a corridor, a servant appears, he saiys two old ladies are tequesting an audience for Prince Ozai and Princess Ursa)

    In another room, in front of two little throne where Ozai and Ursa are sitted:

    crone 1: well, your majesties, we have come, because, as wise women we are, we have sensed...

    crone 2: a huge potential emanating from here, we believe is one of your two childs

    both crones: it's one of the biggest we have ever feel, if that potential is trained from now, it'll be quite usefull to win this war.

    Ursa takes Azula to the Royal academy, were she has a lot of problems with other kids.

    -Mom, I'm bored, where's Zuko?

    -I've alredy told you, dear, this place is just for girls, and your uncle has been in charge of his education.

    -But I'm bored! Everybody in here is so... vulgar (showing her tonge)

    (Ty lee arrives)

    -Hello, Princess Ursa! (kneels) My mother wanted to know you, she always says you are beautifull, and too goog to be with Prince Ozai, why? (she takes an angry Azula by the hand and pulls her toward a depressed looking girl, Mai, Ursa smiles)

    -Ok, let's hope Azula finally makes some friends, apart Zuzu.

    (While arriving to the palace, Zuko appears running toward her, smiling, then he hugs her, both smiling)

    -Zuzu!

    -Mom! I've missed you a lot, do you know when is Uncle gonna arrive?

    -(with a very sad face) Now, Zuzu, sorry, but he'll be glad to see you!

    (then we saw the two of them walking trought different places in the palace, it seems Zuko follows her whereever she goes, until Azula arrives with her two new friends, Mai gets blushed just at Zuko's sight, while Ursa, realising, smiles at her, then leaves them)

    -Hi! you are Prince Zuko? Right? I'm Ty Lee! And this is Mai.

    - (shocked by Ty Lee's happines) eh.. yeah! hi! (tries to leve them, but Ty Lee follows him, so Azula, and Mai, it seems she didn't wanted to be alone) What!

    -O! nothing, I just wondered... Do you wanna be my friend?

    -O... yea! sure, I suppose!, you name was?

    -Ty Lee! And she's Mai! Bye!

    ??(later, iun a corridor)

    -Mom, those girls were freak!

    -(smiling) Well, Zuzu.... (Ozai arrives)

    -Zuko, I need to speak with your mom. (Zuko leaves them)

    -Look! (he takes her where Azula is trainning in a special room with the two crones, she is doing the same movement she displayed in Azulon's war room, when finnishing)

    crone 1: You missed up a shot!

    crone 2: just for a little.

    (Azula starts again)

    Ozai: (in other room) See? She's amacing! I never tought I was able to feel proud of a kid1

    -What about Zuko? He is a very kind boy!

    -I'll never be proud of him!

    -(angry) why?

    (then we see Zuko's memories from Zuko Alone, in the same order, until that part when Ursa Takes Azula from Zuko's room)

    (in Azula's room (bigger than Zuko's))

    -Now, are you gonna tell me what did you REALLY??listened! Young girl!

    -You alredy heard it, mom, Grandfather wants to kill my brother!

    -I don't believe you, Azula, recently you have acted in a very strange form, I wanna know why are you bothering Zuko!

    -(crying) Why do you never believe me! Father told Grandfather he wanted to be heir to throne! instead of uncle! because lu ten's dead, and he had Zuko and I!, so he got mad, and said he wanted to betray uncle!, he said uncle has suffered too much!, he said Fahter had to feel the same way uncle, so he had to kill him! Mom, he'll kill Zuko! (hugs her while crying)

    (we see Ursa's face very angry, realising Zuko's knife was in Azula's bethroom.??she looks like the 14 years old Azula)

    We see her going to Azulon's bedroom, and raising up a knife, her face emotionless, then we see her siluete killing Azulon. She runs toward Zuko's room, but she is interrupte dby Azula, with her typical diabolic face.

    -I cannot believe you believed me!

    -What!

    (sudenly, two siluetes appears, they are as shor as Azula)

    (in a dark screen, we listen Ursa crying, no way, I'm not leaving him! (silence) ok, but don't dare hurt him! Crying)

    She write's a letter, in Zuko's room:

    Ursa: Zuko, please, my love, listen to me. Everything I've done, I've done to protect you. Remember this Zuko, no matter how things may seem to change, never forget who you are.

    (We see Iroh, reading Ursa's letter, somewhere in the palace, with a shocked face, we just see her last words. Please, make Zuko continues being the beautifull prince he always has been, I'll be waiting for him, this good Bye is not for ever... I hope)

    Present time: We see an "evil" Zuko, planning war strategies with Azula, until, Ty lee arrives, and hugs Zuko, followed by an emotionless, Mai, saying "hi!", and blushing after Zuko's Hello

    dayum... thatz sum pretty good stuff... i wuld rely lyk to see dat... neway refering bck to wen yo0h sed datz nasty... wer yo0h talkn bout the episode i wrote?? =/

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    andreitayehp

    [6]Dec 19, 2006
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    I hate Kataang, It would be too predictable

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    kataangalldaway

    [7]Dec 20, 2006
    • member since: 11/29/06
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    andreitayehp wrote:

    I hate Kataang, It would be too predictable

    ?? T_T .... that's so sad! even though it is predictable doesn't mean it is bad! but yo0h are free to have your own opinion

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    Vampdude69

    [8]Dec 22, 2006
    • member since: 09/25/06
    • level: 6
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    • posts: 1,173
    andreitayehp wrote:

    That was really growse!

    Ok here goes mine!

    Previously, on Avatar:

    Ursa: Azula! We don't speak that way!

    (Two old women watch Azula bend lightning)
    Old Woman: Almost perfect.
    Other Old Woman: Just one hair out of place.
    Azula (brushing a strand of hair back from her face): Almost isn't good enough!

    Young Zuko: Girls are crazy!

    Iroh: [in a letter] If the city is as magnificent as its wall, Ba-Sing-Se must be something to behold. I hope you all may see it someday, if we dont burn it to the ground first! *chuckles darkly*

    Ursa: [in reference to Azula] What is wrong with that child?

    Young Azula: [singing] Dad's going to kill you! [normal] Really, he is

    Ursa: Zuko, please, my love, listen to me. Everything I've done, I've done to protect you. Remember this Zuko, no matter how things may seem to change, never forget who you are.

    Blue Dragon: (Speaking with Azula???s voice) It???s getting late. Are you planning to retire soon, my lord?
    Zuko: (Scarless and dressed as the Fire Lord) I???m not tired.
    Blue Dragon: Relax, Fire Lord Zuko. Just let go. Give in to it. Shut your eyes for a while.
    Red Dragon: (Speaking with Iroh???s voice) No, Fire Lord Zuko! Do not listen to the blue dragon. You should get out of here right now. Go! Before it???s too late!
    Blue Dragon: Sleep now, Fire Lord Zuko. Sleep... Just like Mother!

    Book 3: Fire

    Chapter One: Shadows From the Past.

    Four Years Ago...

    (we are taken to the royal palace, where a 12 years old Zuko is playing with a 10 years old Azula, while Ursa is smiling, happy, seeing the siblings so happy, suddenly, a letter from Iroh arrives), Ursa reads it, she looks terrified, so go inside, where Ozai is talking with a servant, she ask him to talk in private)

    -Ozai, dear, look this letter! We must send troops to help him!

    -no way! are you mad!

    -But he is your brither!

    -I don't care! by the way, have you relized how much potencial your daughter has? It's incredibly, after Zuko's, when she borned, I thought she was about to be even weakier than him!

    -Zuzu is not weak! (angry) and he has so much inner strenght, even more than you (she leaves him walks throught a corridor, a servant appears, he saiys two old ladies are tequesting an audience for Prince Ozai and Princess Ursa)

    In another room, in front of two little throne where Ozai and Ursa are sitted:

    crone 1: well, your majesties, we have come, because, as wise women we are, we have sensed...

    crone 2: a huge potential emanating from here, we believe is one of your two childs

    both crones: it's one of the biggest we have ever feel, if that potential is trained from now, it'll be quite usefull to win this war.

    Ursa takes Azula to the Royal academy, were she has a lot of problems with other kids.

    -Mom, I'm bored, where's Zuko?

    -I've alredy told you, dear, this place is just for girls, and your uncle has been in charge of his education.

    -But I'm bored! Everybody in here is so... vulgar (showing her tonge)

    (Ty lee arrives)

    -Hello, Princess Ursa! (kneels) My mother wanted to know you, she always says you are beautifull, and too goog to be with Prince Ozai, why? (she takes an angry Azula by the hand and pulls her toward a depressed looking girl, Mai, Ursa smiles)

    -Ok, let's hope Azula finally makes some friends, apart Zuzu.

    (While arriving to the palace, Zuko appears running toward her, smiling, then he hugs her, both smiling)

    -Zuzu!

    -Mom! I've missed you a lot, do you know when is Uncle gonna arrive?

    -(with a very sad face) Now, Zuzu, sorry, but he'll be glad to see you!

    (then we saw the two of them walking trought different places in the palace, it seems Zuko follows her whereever she goes, until Azula arrives with her two new friends, Mai gets blushed just at Zuko's sight, while Ursa, realising, smiles at her, then leaves them)

    -Hi! you are Prince Zuko? Right? I'm Ty Lee! And this is Mai.

    - (shocked by Ty Lee's happines) eh.. yeah! hi! (tries to leve them, but Ty Lee follows him, so Azula, and Mai, it seems she didn't wanted to be alone) What!

    -O! nothing, I just wondered... Do you wanna be my friend?

    -O... yea! sure, I suppose!, you name was?

    -Ty Lee! And she's Mai! Bye!

    ??(later, iun a corridor)

    -Mom, those girls were freak!

    -(smiling) Well, Zuzu.... (Ozai arrives)

    -Zuko, I need to speak with your mom. (Zuko leaves them)

    -Look! (he takes her where Azula is trainning in a special room with the two crones, she is doing the same movement she displayed in Azulon's war room, when finnishing)

    crone 1: You missed up a shot!

    crone 2: just for a little.

    (Azula starts again)

    Ozai: (in other room) See? She's amacing! I never tought I was able to feel proud of a kid1

    -What about Zuko? He is a very kind boy!

    -I'll never be proud of him!

    -(angry) why?

    (then we see Zuko's memories from Zuko Alone, in the same order, until that part when Ursa Takes Azula from Zuko's room)

    (in Azula's room (bigger than Zuko's))

    -Now, are you gonna tell me what did you REALLY??listened! Young girl!

    -You alredy heard it, mom, Grandfather wants to kill my brother!

    -I don't believe you, Azula, recently you have acted in a very strange form, I wanna know why are you bothering Zuko!

    -(crying) Why do you never believe me! Father told Grandfather he wanted to be heir to throne! instead of uncle! because lu ten's dead, and he had Zuko and I!, so he got mad, and said he wanted to betray uncle!, he said uncle has suffered too much!, he said Fahter had to feel the same way uncle, so he had to kill him! Mom, he'll kill Zuko! (hugs her while crying)

    (we see Ursa's face very angry, realising Zuko's knife was in Azula's bethroom.??she looks like the 14 years old Azula)

    We see her going to Azulon's bedroom, and raising up a knife, her face emotionless, then we see her siluete killing Azulon. She runs toward Zuko's room, but she is interrupte dby Azula, with her typical diabolic face.

    -I cannot believe you believed me!

    -What!

    (sudenly, two siluetes appears, they are as shor as Azula)

    (in a dark screen, we listen Ursa crying, no way, I'm not leaving him! (silence) ok, but don't dare hurt him! Crying)

    She write's a letter, in Zuko's room:

    Ursa: Zuko, please, my love, listen to me. Everything I've done, I've done to protect you. Remember this Zuko, no matter how things may seem to change, never forget who you are.

    (We see Iroh, reading Ursa's letter, somewhere in the palace, with a shocked face, we just see her last words. Please, make Zuko continues being the beautifull prince he always has been, I'll be waiting for him, this good Bye is not for ever... I hope)

    Present time: We see an "evil" Zuko, planning war strategies with Azula, until, Ty lee arrives, and hugs Zuko, followed by an emotionless, Mai, saying "hi!", and blushing after Zuko's Hello

    I liked that you made the "Previously on avatar" thing, and you actually put some time into it. GOOD JOB!

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    PrincessAura

    [9]Dec 22, 2006
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    I'm gonna give this a try but it won't be from any of the theories floating around. If I do it will be from the finale as it looked (what I mean is that it won't have some Iroh/Zuko or Azula doublecross and it won't have Aang just automatically back at full strength since we know he actually did die).
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    obsessedchic1

    [10]Dec 22, 2006
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    How long did it take you to write it?
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    andreitayehp

    [11]Dec 23, 2006
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    kataangalldaway wrote:
    andreitayehp wrote:

    I hate Kataang, It would be too predictable

    ?? T_T .... that's so sad! even though it is predictable doesn't mean it is bad! but yo0h are free to have your own opinion



    It's just that predictable means boring to me, and these show has been sucessful for being umpredictable...
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