Avatar: The Last Airbender: If Zuko and Aang do finally get an episode where they are alone.

meninwhite
[1]Sep 10, 2006
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If they do have one where there not fighting and decided to finally talk.
My idea.
Aang: So how did that happen anyway?
Zuko: A gift from my father.
Aang shocked: Your own dad did that to you why?
Zukoquitly) A few years ago when I was??still a??fire nation??prince??I decided to attend one of the Fire Nation Military meetings, my uncle warned me it not to go but I went anyway, a Fire Nation general was planing to use a new recruit devision as a suiced mission without them knowing. I protested it, because of that I had to go through with an Agai Kai.
Aang: A fire duel.
Zuko:Right only it wasnt the general I had to face it was my father, I tried appologising but he insised I attack, when I refused he attacked me with no remorce after that I was banished.
Aang: The only way you could return is if you captured me?
Zuko: Thats right, but he grew impatiant and sent my sister after me. Ive almost lost all my loved one's my mom and almost my uncle.
Aang: I know how that feels.
Edited on 09/10/2006 1:42am
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FreakishChild
[2]Sep 10, 2006
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Like Zuko would tell ANYONE his life's story.
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cg_619
[3]Sep 10, 2006
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I wonder?? if zuko still wants the avatar??? Or if he just has given up by now??? how bout yall?
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Moviemaster2222
[4]Sep 10, 2006
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nah he still wants to capture him, in "The Chase" rather than work with the avatar to figh azula in the beginning he tried to fight azula and capture aang at the same time. needless to say he got the crap kicked out of him.
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piranhapete
[5]Sep 10, 2006
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It has a few nice touches to it, but you need to work on the punctiation/adverbs and how it affects what's being read.

Example:

Aang shocked: Your own dad did that to you why?

Zuko: (quitly) A few years ago when I was still a fire nation prince I decided to attend one of the Fire Nation Military meetings, my uncle warned me it not to go but I went anyway, a Fire Nation general was planing to use a new recruit devision as a suiced mission without them knowing. I protested it, because of that I had to go through with an Agai Kai.

If I wrote it, it would look more like:

Aang quietly: Why would he do that to you?

Zuko not particularly showing emotion: A few years ago when I was still a fire nation prince I decided to attend one of the Fire Nation Military meetings, my uncle warned me it not to go but I went anyway. A Fire Nation general was planing to use a new recruit division as a suicide mission without them knowing. I protested it, and I shouldn't have, and because of that I had to have an Agni Kai.

Mispellings are also making the dialogue less fluent.

Don't forget also that as well as making the characters say what you want them to say, you have to make them say what they would want to say.
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gilvatar
[6]Sep 10, 2006
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I don't think Zuko would open up to Aang that quickly. Aang might have to torture him with showtunes first
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starreh
[7]Sep 10, 2006
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Aang: So, how did you get that scar?
Zuko: FIRE PUUUNCH.
Aang: D: Ho sht
Zuko: lol pwnd.

THAT'S HOW IT WOULD HAPPEN. Dum dum.
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StaraeGhost9259
[8]Sep 10, 2006
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starreh wrote:

Aang: So, how did you get that scar?
Zuko: FIRE PUUUNCH.
Aang: D: Ho sht
Zuko: lol pwnd.

THAT'S HOW IT WOULD HAPPEN. Dum dum.

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ISpeakTheTruth
[9]Sep 12, 2006
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The fact that Zuko woud want to capture Aang doesn't even make sense anymore. Zuko's wanted by the entire FN nothing he can do will be able to change that.
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FreakishChild
[10]Sep 12, 2006
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ISpeakTheTruth wrote:

The fact that Zuko woud want to capture Aang doesn't even make sense anymore. Zuko's wanted by the entire FN nothing he can do will be able to change that.

Try telling that to ZUKO. We ALL know his head is thicker than Sokka's!
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JasonG2006
[11]Sep 12, 2006
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no offense but TOTALLY out of character
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Hoshie26
[12]Sep 12, 2006
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StaraeGhost9259 wrote:

starreh wrote:

Aang: So, how did you get that scar?
Zuko: FIRE PUUUNCH.
Aang: D: Ho sht
Zuko: lol pwnd.

THAT'S HOW IT WOULD HAPPEN. Dum dum.

Ditto.lol

WHAT IS PWN!?!

The whole idea is to crazy i didnt even read it.I mean i read the funny one.
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Hoshie26
[13]Sep 12, 2006
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ISpeakTheTruth wrote:

The fact that Zuko woud want to capture Aang doesn't even make sense anymore. Zuko's wanted by the entire FN nothing he can do will be able to change that.

...and the rest of the world...
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Hoshie26

[14]Sep 12, 2006

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FreakishChild wrote:

ISpeakTheTruth wrote:

The fact that Zuko woud want to capture Aang doesn't even make sense anymore. Zuko's wanted by the entire FN nothing he can do will be able to change that.

Try telling that to ZUKO. We ALL know his head is thicker than Sokka's!

Only sometimes.

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Eman5805
[15]Sep 12, 2006
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I'd say at some point both Aang n Zuko get taken down by Azula and her crew, and put into two seperate??cells directly next to each other, they both can hear each other but can't see each other.
Aang: I never thanked you for rescuing me from Zhao...
Zuko: Don't. I didn't do it for you.
Aang: I kinda figured that out when you put your swords to my neck. But, still if you hadn't shown up when you did I'd never have saved my friends.??Thank you, Zuko.
Zuko: ...
Aang: What do you think will happen?
Zuko: Azula will turn you over to my fath...the Fire Lord, and I'll...it doesn't matter what happens??to me. After years of searching for you, I've failed. I'm nothing now.
Edited on 09/12/2006 3:38pm
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Hoshie26

[16]Sep 12, 2006

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Eman5805 wrote:

I'd say at some point both Aang n Zuko get taken down by Azula and her crew, and put into two seperate??cells directly next to each other, they both can hear each other but can't see each other.

Aang: I never thanked you for rescuing me from Zhao...

Zuko: Don't. I didn't do it for you.

Aang: I kinda figured that out when you put your swords to my neck. But, still if you hadn't shown up when you did I'd never have saved my friends.??Thank you, Zuko.

Zuko: ...

Aang: What do you think will happen?

Zuko: Azula will turn you over to my fath...the Fire Lord, and I'll...it doesn't matter what happens??to me. After years of searching for you, I've failed. I'm nothing now.

It wont be THAT easy but I bet Aang will quickly learn in that seems very real.Thanks.Now i can see this happening.that

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Colonel_Brian
[17]Sep 12, 2006
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Well nice script but there'd be more dioulouge between that though.
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Eman5805

[18]Sep 12, 2006

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Hoshie26 wrote:

Eman5805 wrote:

I'd say at some point both Aang n Zuko get taken down by Azula and her crew, and put into two seperate??cells directly next to each other, they both can hear each other but can't see each other.

Aang: I never thanked you for rescuing me from Zhao...

Zuko: Don't. I didn't do it for you.

Aang: I kinda figured that out when you put your swords to my neck. But, still if you hadn't shown up when you did I'd never have saved my friends.??Thank you, Zuko.

Zuko: ...

Aang: What do you think will happen?

Zuko: Azula will turn you over to my fath...the Fire Lord, and I'll...it doesn't matter what happens??to me. After years of searching for you, I've failed. I'm nothing now.

It wont be THAT easy but I bet Aang will quickly learn in that seems very real.Thanks.Now i can see this happening.that

Yeah it wouldn't that easy...but that's just my scenario for if they were alone with each other and had the chance to just talk...its either this or trapped in an avalanche(rock slide) and have to work together to escape...and that's been?? done so much it's lost all meaning

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dumbTVnut
[19]Sep 12, 2006
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For some reason when I image Zuko and Aang alone I think of Michael Jackson.
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metalcurtainrod
[20]Sep 12, 2006
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