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    Aviaq

    [21]Nov 21, 2005
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    FreakishChild wrote:
    Every character is a Mary Sue in one way or another. If you don't want to put up with someone's sue, don't bother reading it.


    Trust me, I'm not trying to be condescending.

    XD of course every character (heck even male characters) are sue/stus in a way.

    but I think if one wants to make an original character (in a big increasing ocean of OC's) it usually helps those who bother to read if out-of-place or O__O;;; tendencies were decreased by some level, so at least they fit in the universe (as someone once told me)

    I myself have made stus/sues and I've found it painful to find when my own characters are following overdone cliche's, and it helps to practice skills in making actual characters that don't make others feel "uhh...".

    I mean yeah, if one doesn't want to read it, fine. XD But if one person doens't bother to read it, doesn't mean others won't read it.

    of course, people may choose not to read this either. That's okay too.

    p.s. the name bank links come in handy and are asked for a lot...but I just realized a couple days ago that the dictionary server is starting to malfunction...o__o
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    FreakishChild

    [22]Nov 21, 2005
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    Aviaq wrote:
    FreakishChild wrote:
    Every character is a Mary Sue in one way or another. If you don't want to put up with someone's sue, don't bother reading it.


    XD of course every character (heck even male characters) are sue/stus in a way.

    but it usually helps those who bother to read if the 'sue-ness' was decreased by some level, so at least they fit in the universe *shrug*


    Ooooohhhhh lordy, don't I know it!!!

    Created a monster myself once. She had a developed personality, a limit to her unique powers, yet she was the forsaken-child/conan-character-temptress-love-at-first-sight/my-species-isn't-part-of-this-universe cliche. >_<

    If I EVER write a fanfic about the current time of Avatar, I'm NOT having any OCs hook up with canon characters!! Heck, if Zuko needs a girlfriend I'll throw Suki at him.
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    Aviaq

    [23]Nov 21, 2005
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    FreakishChild wrote:
    Aviaq wrote:
    FreakishChild wrote:
    Every character is a Mary Sue in one way or another. If you don't want to put up with someone's sue, don't bother reading it.


    XD of course every character (heck even male characters) are sue/stus in a way.

    but it usually helps those who bother to read if the 'sue-ness' was decreased by some level, so at least they fit in the universe *shrug*


    Ooooohhhhh lordy, don't I know it!!!

    Created a monster myself once. She had a developed personality, a limit to her unique powers, yet she was the forsaken-child/conan-character-temptress-love-at-first-sight/my-species-isn't-part-of-this-universe cliche. >_<

    If I EVER write a fanfic about the current time of Avatar, I'm NOT having any OCs hook up with canon characters!! Heck, if Zuko needs a girlfriend I'll throw Suki at him.


    LOL!

    It's a normal recurring tendency for everyone. I'm thinking the reason the tendencies and avatar created names that sound like they'd come off from a futuristic sci-fi channel/ my best friend's nickname appears is because well...

    we want to become part of the world.

    But yes...creating characters for the sake of making a canon character fall in love with them is becoming a little 'murh...'>_>;;;because its happening so much (like in the harry potter fandom and the everything else fandom) and I don't find it fair that ACTUAL characters that sorta get in the way of that get so much backlash.

    And the reason I think some people cannot help the urge to say something like "You're character is a bit...or you're character's name sounds strange for that" is because they themselves (like me XD) have made such 'monsters' and now realize how X_X it must have looked back then and they don't want people to be doing the same crazy things.

    Shall I be bashed for this? Yes.

    But it won't stop being true. And people will continue to read sues for curiosity even if they know they dont' want to.
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    goodgirl528

    [24]Nov 21, 2005
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    Bailey
    14
    5'0"
    80
    Water
    Water
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    psychodillo

    [25]Nov 21, 2005
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    NAME:the artist formerly known as felix da house kat
    AGE:102
    HEIGHT:3'11"
    WEIGHT:50
    TRIBE:the wooshwa clan
    BENDING POWER:fire AND earth
    HISTORY:after a career in rapping and music, the artist formerly known as felix da house kat took up bending as an alternative way to blow up people's cars, set their cats on fire, and otherwise vandalise and tick people off
    PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:very short. long beard and eyebrow hair. blue eyes and usually seen wearing a strange looking hat.
    LOVE INTERIORS:ummmmmmm.............
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    raven654456

    [26]Nov 26, 2005
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    Hey, maybe we should roleplay or something...
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    mahealani582

    [27]Nov 26, 2005
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    yxopjatenzc wrote:
    NAME
    NAME-Rai Ken
    AGE-18
    HEIGHT-6'
    WEIGHT-160
    TRIBE-Island Of Storms
    BENDING POWER-Electric
    HISTORY-Decendent of the air and water tribes father was aang and mother was katara they were banished by the bender lords 20 years after the war. The lords sent them to the island in hatred hope for them to die. Although the lord did not know on the island there was another ancient bender of electricity. Thought by the bender, him and his master seeks revenge after the lord benders kill all people all the island except for them sice they were meditating in the temple on the clouds. They start a new war for 50 years til the lord benders die. Rai does not age because of the water power of healing and creating ice from water controls his age.
    PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION-muscles and stone wash abs spiked short hair
    LOVE INTERIORS-no one til he meets someone
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    mahealani582

    [28]Nov 27, 2005
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    mahealani582 wrote:
    yxopjatenzc wrote:
    NAME
    NAME-Rai Ken
    AGE-18
    HEIGHT-6'
    WEIGHT-160
    TRIBE-Island Of Storms
    BENDING POWER-Can destroy lands and nations with a flick of a stone the stone changes into an electric ball as big as the comets. Hidden power like aang(his fater).
    HISTORY-Decendent of the air and water tribes father was aang and mother was katara they were banished by the bender lords 20 years after the war. The lords sent them to the island in hatred hope for them to die. Although the lord did not know on the island there was another ancient bender of electricity. Thought by the bender, him and his master seeks revenge after the lord benders kill all people all the island except for them sice they were meditating in the temple on the clouds. They start a new war for 50 years til the lord benders die. Rai does not age because of the water power of healing and creating ice from water controls his age.
    PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION-muscles and stone wash abs spiked short hair. sword on his back a scimatar the kirins fang this also has lots of power. the kirin fang was formed when his master gave all his power to Rai, his soul was the soul of kirin the half horse half dragon.
    LOVE INTERIORS-he's very on the edge because he does not trust anyone at the moment
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    ShadoLord

    [29]Dec 10, 2005
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    A shadow Bender
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    orangewhoit

    [30]Dec 11, 2005
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    NAME: Hitsugi Ukitake
    AGE: 10
    HEIGHT: 4' 7"
    WEIGHT: 90 lbs
    TRIBE: Unknown
    BENDING POWER: Fire
    HISTORY: Hitsugi's Mother died when he was at the age of 2. His father was murdered by pirates at age 4. He was taken and raised by a man of the fire nation who found him after the pirate's raid on hitsugi's village.The fire nation man's name was Jong.He was a very kind and loving guardian to hitsugi, but times were troubling. The war between the fire nation has begun and fire lord sozen is forcing all firebenders to fight in the war. Not to long after the war, the fire nation man was sent off to fight. Hitsugi was left in the care of the man's mother. After being parted from his adopted father for over 3 years. News finally arrived of what happened to hitsugi's adopted father. He had died during a battle against the earth nation. Hitsugi was devastaged as this man was the only thing close to a family he had. Hitsugi had vowed to destroy the earth nation for what they have done. He found a fire bending master to teach him and began training fervorously everyday. By the time he was 9 he was a firebending master who had been in over 100 Agni Kai. He is said to be one of the youngest persons to ever master firebending. He joined the fire nation army and was assign to be a member of sozen's elite group of firebenders. On a stealth mission to destroy a massive earth kingdom stronghold. Hitsugi came across a member of the fire nation dressed and fighting among the earth benders. He was curious as to why the fire bender had betrayed the fire nation. After interrogating the man he was told by the fire bender that he was once a proud firebender of the firenation but was betrayled by the firenation an sent in as bait to for the earth nation so that the firenation could mount a large behind the lines attack against the earth nation. The man told of how he lost a someone who became a good comrade to him during the battle... a man named Jong... This tore up Hitsugi inside. He did not know what to think. In the midst of the sneak attack he took the firenation man and left. For the last five years Hitsugi has trained and fought with earth nation soldiers. He had killed many... all in the name of his adopted father. He was burned inside and felt as if he commited a most hanious of crimes. He felt betrayed and angry with not only himself but with the nation that he served. He vowed that he will make everything right and bring back the balance and peace to the world. As is the time before the war. He spent a year fighting against his the fire nation and won several battles with the earth nation troops. He disappered during one battle and was never heard from again. Some say he was killed and others say that he is still out there fighting the and trying to bring peace to the world.
    PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: Short, Thin, Muscular, Black Hair, and Dark Brown eyes.
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    mahealani582

    [31]Dec 17, 2005
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    wut does mary sue mean
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    newbiekidlex

    [32]Dec 17, 2005
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    I think Mary Sue means a fanfiction (character) that is very perfect. Like, a fanfiction based on a character that is really boring. It's hard to explain.

    Name: Chiloniaa (nickname "Chila")
    Age: 10
    Height: 4' 6"
    Weight: 61 lbs
    Nation/Tribe: Fire
    Bending Power: Fire
    History: Abandoned at birth, Chiloniaa was discovered unwrapped outside the home of Fire Lord Ozai. He was tempted to kill her, but Prince Zuko stopped his father. Disappointed, Ozai wanted to slash Zuko across the face, but in turn, Azula stopped him from that. So, Ozai made the decision to use Chiloniaa as a spy. After carelessly abusing her, starving her, and forcing her to do tasks, he sent Chiloniaa out at the age of five on a mission to find a lost Earth village. Wandering for five years, Chiloniaa finally found the Earth village, but the citizens were too busy blabbing about the Avatar. That's when Chila set her new goal: capture the Avatar and bring him to her guardian.
    Physical Appearance: Small, thin. Light frame. Narrow tannish face, tangled short black hair, clouded blue eyes. Chapped lips, bruised arms and legs, dirty fingernails.
    Love Interiors: None

    So, what again is the point of this?
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    Darth_Scarth

    [33]Dec 20, 2005
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    NAme: Yuki

    Age:16

    Height: 6"1'

    Weight: 115
    Tribe: Combination Tribe

    BEnding power: Earth and Fire

    History:Son of Justin Timberlake SEnior Senior Senior

    Physical Description: Look like Justin Timberlake.

    Love: JAmie Spears
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    cavgurl07

    [34]Mar 9, 2006
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    Name:Suya
    Age:13
    Height:5'3''
    Bending Power:Air
    Appearance:Thin,tall,similar to Aang;except she has dark eyes and black hair
    This beautiful,free-spirited girl is Aang's cousin. After her home was destroyed,she has lived in a cave in an Earth Nation forest.Few people know who she is or where she came from. Although she is an Airbender,she has experimented with Earthbending.
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    bag2218

    [35]Mar 15, 2006
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    Name:Sora
    height:5'4
    weight:90lbs
    Age:10
    tribe:Fire(banished for studying water bending)
    bending:water and fire
    Gender:boy
    facts:Joins Aang on his quest to master the elements, Constantly runs into(and fights)his father,Zhoa, He's Zuco's half brother.
    Appearence:Balck spicky hair, Blue highlights, red shirt, black pants, blue eyes.

    Story: After his mother(and Zuco's) died, he spent his life in a deep depression. The only thing that cheered him up was learning how fun water bending was. One day his father(Zhoa) caught him studying water bending(commiting the biggest crime in the fire nation) He was banished from the fire tribe. No one int the other nations would accept him, he was alone for two years until Aang finds him. Now he is apart of Aangs group,(the only reason he joined was to find and defeat his father)
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    nate1606

    [36]Oct 21, 2006
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    NAME: Jarren

    AGE: 10

    GENDER: Male

    HEIGHT: 5.4

    WEIGHT: 95

    TRIBE: Earth

    BENDING POWER: Earth and Sand

    HISTORY: Was taken by some Bandits away from his town and was abandoned in a Dessert and found buy some sand benders and??was brought to there village and??he is there to this day.

    PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: Looks a lot like the Sand benders from??Episode: The Dessert.

    LOVE INTERIORS:??Likes a slave girl working for the leader of the of there village.
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    DesertMortician

    [37]Oct 21, 2006
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    NAME: Desert Mortician????
    AGE: 18
    HEIGHT: 6 feet
    WEIGHT: 170 pounds
    TRIBE: None
    BENDING POWER: bends all the elements, lightning included
    HISTORY: unknown, nothing is known about him other than he is dangerous and kills people if they upset him.
    PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: Tall, with black hair, all black clothes, and a black mask that he has never taken off in front of others.
    LOVE INTERIORS: None, hates everyone in general.
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    free2eatcookies

    [38]Oct 21, 2006
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    name:satana age:15
    height:5'5
    weight:120
    bending power:air bending
    history:shes the daughter of kataang.out of her siblings(theres 2 more) shes the oldest and has the most resposibilities.she was taught how to air bend at a young age
    physical description:looks alot like katara only her hair is darker and she likes wearing it down
    love intrest:no one yet
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    C1991

    [39]Oct 21, 2006
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    NAME: Gweh


    AGE: 15


    HEIGHT: 5' 10"


    WEIGHT: doesn't like 2 talk about it


    TRIBE: earth


    BENDING POWER: special crystal that he found in a giant geode that he keeps hiden


    HISTORY: keeps the FN from destroying his town (in a costume made of crystal so nobody knows it's him)


    PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:????medium-length??hair, kind stocky


    LOVE INTERIORS: Every??girl likes him cuz he's rich (shallow bums)

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    Lord-darkboy

    [40]Oct 22, 2006
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    name: Darkboy

    age: unknown

    gender: man

    height: 1m 85cm

    weight: 68 kg

    Tribe:neutral

    Bendingpower: All

    History:the birth of darkboy was the same as the very first avatar so that spirit got into two men and so darkboy had the ability to do the same as the avatar but he used it to create doom and destruction still now hes a hated man and he has alot to make good althought few ppl know the exact history of darkboy they all know his name 'darkboy the destructer' when the first avatar died he stayed alive wich was very weird for the commen people even darkboy couldn't get it when he had the age of 542 he started to wonder if he didn't lived forever when??he did??a good research in the old scrolls he founded a legend and there also stood in that he will die when the avatar dies in avatarstate worrying for his live darkboy became a watcher over all the avatars (in secret) he made the coinsidents that happend and mostly fought the traps that where ment for the avatar. now in these days he finally founded aang again and he always standed on a distand to watch and save his life many times

    physical Description: long tall man clothed in the four nation colers black hair witch never stand right and eyes that change with his emotions(blue: casual, red:angry, love:pink(lol), consermed:green, relaxed;brown and mad:black)

    love interiors: throug times darkboy had forgot the feeling of loving someone or something

    (srry for the bad spelling if you found any pls report them to me)

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