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    TheGreatAvatar

    [961]Dec 3, 2006
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    hey guys..if any1 has some xtra time..can some1 msg me and keep me updated on where everyone is in the rpg right now, and what theyre doing....thanks
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    Vampdude69

    [962]Dec 3, 2006
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    Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master


    Jax has been shot in the chest by a fireblast by Rin, and left behind

    Jax was lying on the ground and Willy Woo helped him up. He tried to stand, but immediatley fell back down. He told Willy Woo and Hevet to leave him and go after Rin, Ami and Fang. He laid there, and thought of all the pain Rin has caused him. A forbidden love, and a brand new scar on his chest. It was getting difficlut to breathe.

    Jax fell asleep, and had a terrible dream.

    "Hello Jax," a voice said.
    "Who's there?" Jax said.

    "I am all the anger that has been inside you. You need to use the anger Jax. You are more powerful, than you can imagine! With me, you can kill Scorch, and Rin will be yours!"

    "I can't. I won't!" Jax yelled.

    The black spirit swirled around him, and went inside him.
    "I can help you Jax," he said.

    Jax looked at the ground.
    "Help me kill Scorch. Help Rin love me," Jax said.

    The spirit controlled his mind. His clothes turned different.

    His clothes turned black with red stripes up the arm sides. His wound was healed. His swords were engraved with an insignia. His glider was given the same. His hair turned black. Jax's eye color also turned black. He smiled.

    Jax woke up. He stood up and put his swords in his sheath. He walked over to a tunnel. Willy Woo and Hevet were gone. He suddenly has a vision.

    The black spirit was in front of him.

    "Scorch, Rin, Fang and Ami are going to the Eastern Air Temple," he said.

    Jax smiled and said, "Good."

    Jax earthbended out of the room and to the surface.
    "Hmm, by getting rid of my anger, I can earthbend better," he said.

    "You haven't gotten rid of it, just embraced it," said the spirit.
    Jax smiled, and rode his glider out of Ba-Sing-Se.
    He looked down at his clothes, and they were black, with red stripes.

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [963]Dec 3, 2006
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    ok..so ill just start the first part of my story first..its gunna be a short one, where i wont be interacting with anyone else yet, cuz im not to active yet

    Yang(master airbender)
    -----------------------
    I was gliding towards the earthkingdom
    i just left a cave near the southern air temple
    where me and my relatives have een living all our lives ever since the day the fire nation attacked

    it wasnt long before i reached the earth kingdom
    i flew over many burnt down villages and ciies, but 1 city attracted me the most
    the city of omashu

    That city didnt looked damaged at all,
    but it was still under fire nation control

    I was thinking
    *did they surrender to the fn?*

    but i had to continue gliding

    i had to make it to ba sing se before the earth kingdom fell

    my family used to keep me updated about the things that were happenening
    such as what new city the fire nation just took over

    i was getting hungry,
    so i landed in a tiny village

    it was partially destroyed,
    with no fn soldiers guarding it,
    and a few earth kingdom ivilians roaming around

    it looked as if a huge fn force just went right through this village and didnt care about it

    I heard some civilians talking about the city of ba sing se
    I was heading towards ba sing se, so i decided to eavesdrop on them

    i heard them say
    "ba sing se has fallen to the fire nation"

    i thought in shock
    i had to get to ba sing se quick now

    i ran around the village,
    and found a run down resturaunt,
    where i scoured for food

    i found quite alot of food,
    i stuffed them in my pack and i went off to glide owards ba sing se, once again


    Edited on 12/03/2006 11:59am
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    ThatLostGuy

    [964]Dec 3, 2006
    • member since: 08/23/06
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
    -
    Hevet and I were gathering valuable green crystals in a hidden room after Jax mysteriously disappeered. All of a sudden a girl jolted out from behind a patch of crystals and struck Hevet on to the floor. I looked at the girl and yelled, "Who are you? Why are you attacking my friend?" The girl was about to answer when 4 Fire Nation soldiers walked into the hidden crystal room and one of them yelled, "Intruders. There are intruders in Sector G3. Intruders!"
    -
    I created an Earth wall that covered the exit to the crystal room. The 4 soldiers were on the outside of the rock covered exit but I didn't know how long my rock wall would last. I looked back at the mysterious girl and she said, "These are my crystals! You get away from them!" I replied, "Please. There are so many crystals here. We can share." The girl began picking up a bunch of crystals but she soon couldn't carry any more. I continued, "See. Look you cannot carry any more. So just let us take waht we can get." The girl glared at me and created a massive boulder. Hevet stood up and said, "Wow. Willy she is an Earth Bender! And she makes bigger boulders than you do." The girl launched the boulder into a wall and made a hole to escape.
    -
    BOOM! The wall I created to keep the Fire Nation from entering the room exploded. The room filled with fire as I quickly picked up all the crystals as I could hold. Hevet soon did the same. We ran out of the hole that the mysterious girl made and we ran for it. Fireballs rocketed towards Hevet and I as were ran down many hallways. I turned around for a brief second and there were no longer 4 Fire Nation soldiers chasing me. There were at least 20 Fire Nation soldiers now.
    -
    Hevet and I rounded another corner and we borke open a door. We closed the door even though the lock was now broken. I made an "Rock Wall" and I sealed the exit. I heard voices coming from outside the room that said, "Intruders. We know you are in there. There is no way out. We have men around each possible exit. You are dead men unless you let us take you prisoner. It is your choice. Death or Prison?"
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    Rin-tori

    [965]Dec 3, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Scorch, Rin, Fang, and Ami just left for the Eastern Air Temple.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    After traveling for a few hours, they stopped at a small village to the east. They finally found an inn to stay at temporarily. Rin was exhausted and fell back on her bed. Seeing Scorch in the Pyro State again was scary. "I hope I never have to see him like that again." She thought to herself. It wasn't dark out yet.

    She found Ami and Scorch at a table in the lobby of the inn, planning their route.

    "Where's Fang?" Rin sat down next to Ami.

    "He's out shopping for supplies, or so I'm told." Ami said. "This is the road we're taking to the Eastern Air Temple. It goes through a valley that's mostly deserted, so we're going to have a long trip ahead of us."

    "Actually, I need to talk to you about something, Scorch." She said as Ami left to find Fang.

    "What?"

    "...it's about the Pyro state. Remember at the temple when you were fighting Jax? I know you only meant well, but for the people around you, seeing you out of control like that is scary. I'm afraid that you'll lose yourself in controlling Pyro, and I don't want to see that happen..." Her voice was cracking. "...b-but I understand that you want to be able to help us...and I think that's a good cause..." She wiped her eyes. "...but we're all worried about you." She stood up and walked away, silently.
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    vegnegun

    [966]Dec 3, 2006
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    Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Rin had just expressed herself about the Scorch State

    Scorch was worried about Rin. He wasn't aware that she felt so strongly against using Pyro. No, this needs to be done, thought Scorch, if I can't control Pyro, then there isn't anything to stop his terrible wraith upon this world. He sat there at the table alone, just starring at the map, looking at the long route. Even though the vally wasn't inhabited by man, this left Scorch to worry what??else could possible inhabit it. Scorch got up and went to Rin's room and knocked. He waited for a few seconds, and then she opened it. They both stood there silent, looking into each other's eyes. Scorch then pulled Rin in his chest and hugged her. She began to cry and Scorch just held onto her tighter.

    "Don't worry," he said, "I have to do this. Not for me, but for you."??

    Edited on 12/03/2006 4:22pm
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    Vampdude69

    [967]Dec 3, 2006
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    Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master


    Jax is on the trail of Rin, Scorch, Ami and Fang to the Eastern Air Temple

    Jax flew his glider towards the temple. He was very far away from it. Ahead, he could see a small village, and a pass. The pass stretched for thousands of miles.
    "They're in that pass," Jax said. He landed in the village.

    "Did a group of four pass through here?" Jax asked a man.
    "Yes, they just went into the pass," he replied.

    Jax smiled and gave the man his glider.

    "Watch this, and if anything happens to it, I'll kill you," Jax said.
    The man nodded.

    He walked to the openeing of the pass.
    "I think their little vacation is about to be cut short," he said.

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    Kathleen2006

    [968]Dec 3, 2006
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    Ami (Waterbender)

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Ami sat with Scorch planning our route through to their destination as Fang went for supplies. Rin walked over and pulled Scorch asside and she figured that this might take a while and didn't want to make any plans behind their backs

    She began to whisper sing an old lulluby that her mother had taught her as a child as she wated for them to come back, but she didn't even get to finish her song.

    "What were you singing?" Scorch asked

    "Just an old lulluby my mother sang to me as a girl" Ami replied halfheartedly

    "There is more to that than your willing to express, isn't there?"

    "Yes..." praying that he wouldn't start asking questions it was the anniversary of their death was in less than a week and it was the one day that she spoke to no one about... she was one of the few people who knew when that day was, but everyone saw that it effected her badly

    "Well, let's get back to planning shal we?"

    "Okay"

    (note: Ami can be very withdrawn when it comes to discussing her parents and how they died... she witnessed it and still has the nightmares, even though it has been nearly??ten years)

    Edited on 12/03/2006 5:43pm
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    ThatLostGuy

    [970]Dec 3, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
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    Hevet and I trapped ourselves in a small room with a rock wall. The room was surrounded by a lot of Fire Nation soldiers and one of the soldiers just said, "Its your choice, death or prison?" I looked at Hevet and he was exhausted. I said, "Well she would go to prison or face our death?"
    -
    Hevet looked around the room for any secret exits. There were no ways out. Hevet said, "Well we will fight to the end! You said it yourself Willy. We will kill all Fire Benders in our path or die trying!" -
    I stared at Hevet some more and I was speechless for a moment. I replied, "Hevet old buddy. I did say that I would go down trying at one point in my life. But, now my life has no meaning. I am a worthless man who has never won in a fight and I have accomplished nothing besides watching my parents and friends die before my eyes! I am worthless! If you can't be them, join them." Hevet looked confused and he responded, "No Willy! Please don't do it! You hate the Fire Nation, remember?"
    -
    I answered, "YES I REMEMBER! But I cannot beat them! They are too powerful for me! No one can beat the Fire Nation. IF YOU CANNOT BEAT THEM, JOIN THEM!!" All of a sudden the walls burst down a flames entered the room. I raised my arms above my head and I walked out of the room in front of at least fifty Fire Nation soldiers. I said, "My name is Willy Woo. I would like to join the Fire Nation!"
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    C1991

    [971]Dec 3, 2006
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    ??
    C1991 wrote:

    Name: Pain (somebody translate it to chinese for me)

    male

    Bending: Fire

    Nation: earth

    Bio: his mother was raped by a fire nation soldier during a raid. When he was found to be a firebender, the village kicked him out. he is a solitary traveler. He will firebend only in an extreme emergency, which usually gets him arrested or kicked out of whatever vllage he's in.

    more later. gotta run

    More:??

    Special Ability: Flaming Teleportation

    Age: 15

    Easily angered.

    Wears red and green, representing his two nations??

    I'm not gonna let him meet with??others yet.

    Gotta run (again)??

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    avatarforte

    [972]Dec 3, 2006
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    Fang-Airbender

    -Stopped at a village to resupply-

    The smell had been bugging me all day. It couldn't have been what I thought it was. But it fit. There was only one person who could be going to the eastern air temple besides us. The white fur I found when we reached the village supported his idea. But if my idea proved true, then they would soon meet someone who could teach us more than we could ever hope to learn on our own. I shook my head, focusing on the task at hand. I gathered up the suppiles and started back for the inn. Another scent came to me, one I recongized immediatatly. And again, more familar scents entered the air. "Oh no", I thought, speeding up. I landed back at the inn, just as the others were starting to relax. "We need to leave, NOW" I told them.

    "Come on Fang, we just got here. Can't we rest a little?" Rin said, relaxing on the bed. I bit my lip, calmed myself down. I didnt panic a lot, but this was a special situation.

    "No, we can't. We're gonna have some unwelcome company soon". Scorch was now payng attention, as was the girls.

    "Fire nation," Ami stated, I shook my head. "Then what?"

    "Rin, the earthbender who captured you a while back. And he's being followed. More unwelcome guests, one's we can't face at the moment. We have to get to that temple." Rin and Scorch knew the earthbender was ad enough, but they also knew that when I was serious like this, there was a good reason.

    "Are you sure? How long until they get here?" Scorch asked, already gathering our things.

    "A day at most". Everyone was gathering our things now, so I packed as much as food as possible but not so much that it would limit speed. Soon enough, everything worth taking was gathered up and we were off. I told Ami to get on my back, since then I could go faster. She did as I asked and soon, we were speeding off for the temple. I hoped my nose hadn't lied on the other matter, for I felt we would need all the help we could get.

    (SORRY GUYS. I was at birthday party and my sister accidently turned to comp off then on. She didnt set me to away, so its not fault. Again, sorry, it really wasnt my fault this time)
    Edited on 12/03/2006 9:34pm
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    Lord-darkboy

    [973]Dec 4, 2006
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    darkboy "D" (fire, earth, water, air)


    had sent 4 men down to investigate the sound from the crystal caves and continued his patrol


    i just wanted to enter the next room when i heard 'intruders in sector G3'

    i went back to the crystal cave on easy and saw that around fifty man where standing for a rock wall

    'why aren't you destroying it' I asked

    ''we gaved them a choice to surrender or die' the captain answered

    'choices choices break that wall down NOW or i do it personally'i said angry

    'euh yes sir' he replied

    'MEN ATTACK THAT WALL'i yelled at them while putting my helmet on

    when the all was destroyed i saw willy woo coming out of it with his arms above his head

    "My name is Willy Woo. I would like to join the Fire Nation!" he said

    i couldn't help myself 'HAHAHAHAHAHA WILLY, WILLY WOO suprising isn't it how quickly the tides can turn'I said laughing to him

    'D, i've could have know you where fire nation, you wanted to betray me if i let you join our gang' he said angry at me

    'well technically seen your the betrayer, you where just the famous drip that spoiled the bucket, so i decided to go back to the fire nation there the only one who havn't betrayed me yet'i explained 'but for now'

    I walked to him and puched him right in the face

    'sweet revenge, TAKE HIM TO AZULA IF HE WANT TO JOIN HE CAN PROVE HIMSELF'i yelled at the soldiers

    'you 5 there check the room for any other man he can see azula too'i said 'i'll follow willy here and see he doesn't try anything funny'

    Edited on 12/04/2006 7:02am
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    Kathleen2006

    [974]Dec 4, 2006
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    Ami (waterbender)

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Ami knew by the way Fang spoke that we were in danger. They were close and we had to get there fast.

    'Could this get much worse?' Ami wondered then scolded herself as she knew that as she asked that question it would get worse.

    "Are you okay back there, Ami?" Fang asked

    "Yeah, I'm fine... just not used to going this fast" Ami lied

    "Don't worry, we won't be going long" Fang said

    Rin noted that Ami was hiding something deeper that she didn't want to say... only a girl would notice that Ami was really having no trouble adjusting to faster travel. Rin said nothing, she would confront Ami about it later.

    Everyone stopped.

    "We have to fly" Fang said as they came up to a river

    "No, they'll only spot us faster... let me" Ami said and got down "single file pls!"

    Ami began to bend the water around them (like Katara did while they travled the serpants pass). They got to the other side and continued at the faster pace until they figured it might be safe to rest

    Ami isolated herself from the rest of the team and Rin began to wonder exactly what was bothering her.

    "Ami, may I speak with you?" Rin asked

    "Sure, what about?" Ami replied

    "What was really bothering you earlier?"

    "Nothing, I'm just not used to going so quickly"

    "Ami, you're lying and we both know it"

    "Okay... you're right, I've been thinking about my parents a lot lately... the anniversary of their death is comming up in a few days..." Ami's voice trailed off as tears began to prick at her eyes "I still have the nighmares about that day almost ten years later"

    Rin was taken aback by??that statement...??Ami's pain went deeper than any of them could understand

    "The Fire Navy took out most of my village, one of their benders killed my parents... in front of me!" Ami explained

    "I'm afraid I don't understand, firebenders killed your parents but you're confiding in me?"

    "You're different from them... I can tell... I??always have??been a good judge of character" Ami grinned "sometimes??I miss the south poll and the people that raised me... but then??I think of why I left... to??help defeat the fire nation, so maybe I can get some closure"

    Rin sighed and left Ami to her thoughts Ami knew that??even if the fire lord was defeated she would never get her parents back and??probably never get over her nightmares... she could??only hope that it would ease the pain, but she knew that it wouldn't help, that no matter what she did, until she came to terms with everything she had experienced... she wouldn't truly get closure.??

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    djdfire

    [975]Dec 4, 2006
    • member since: 12/04/06
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    Here's mine

    Name: Ariel Zufalon

    Power: Able to bend every element though she's more comfortable bending water and fire.

    Appearance: 5ft. "7", brown eyes, long black hair, dark -skinned.

    Nation: Fire

    History: Ariel was born in the Fire Nation and recieved royal treatment because her family was highly favored by Fire Lord Azulon because of they're special abilities to bend every element.????Ariel was Zuko's closest friend and Azula's most competitive rival. She was always seen batteling Azula, Ty Lee, and Mai around the palace and she usually won beacuse of her advanced ability to learn how to bend fire at the age of two. After the Agni Kai between Zuko and his father, Ariel's mother was in aheated arguement with the Fire lord because the harsh penalty.??The two endend up fighting each other in the throne room, almost destroying the palace because of the magnitude of their powers being unleashed at full force. In the end??Ozai was able to reverse her lighting attack and??kill her with a blast of magma.??After witnessing her mother's??death, Ariel was banished from the Fire Nation because Ozai thought that she would become a spy against his kingdom for revenge.

    Her love for water bending came when she saw a master water bender kill dozens of fire benders. She then started an immense training routine where she lived in??the ocean for 5 years, concentrating on nothing but her water bending. After those 5 years she focused on earth bending and after mastering that??and airbending,??she met the gaang and started to travel with them and help teach Aang how to combine his attacks with diffirent elements.


    Ariel is a brilliant strategist and has an amazing ability to learn her opponent's moves in battle.??She also has been the first to create red lightning which is 15x's stonger than regular lightning and 20x's faster than regular lighting. Her choices of weapons are her fans which are almost indestructible and ultra razor sharp and her ancient swords that contain ancient and unknown magic properties.

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    Lord-darkboy

    [976]Dec 4, 2006
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    djdfire wrote:

    Here's mine

    Name: Ariel Zufalon

    Power: Able to bend every element though she's more comfortable bending water and fire.

    Appearance: 5ft. "7", brown eyes, long black hair, dark -skinned.

    Nation: Fire

    History: Ariel was born in the Fire Nation and recieved royal treatment because her family was highly favored by Fire Lord Azulon because of they're special abilities to bend every element.????Ariel was Zuko's closest friend and Azula's most competitive rival. She was always seen batteling Azula, Ty Lee, and Mai around the palace and she usually won beacuse of her advanced ability to learn how to bend fire at the age of two. After the Agni Kai between Zuko and his father, Ariel's mother was in aheated arguement with the Fire lord because the harsh penalty.??The two endend up fighting each other in the throne room, almost destroying the palace because of the magnitude of their powers being unleashed at full force. In the end??Ozai was able to reverse her lighting attack and??kill her with a blast of magma.??After witnessing her mother's??death, Ariel was banished from the Fire Nation because Ozai thought that she would become a spy against his kingdom for revenge.

    Her love for water bending came when she saw a master water bender kill dozens of fire benders. She then started an immense training routine where she lived in??the ocean for 5 years, concentrating on nothing but her water bending. After those 5 years she focused on earth bending and after mastering that??and airbending,??she met the gaang and started to travel with them and help teach Aang how to combine his attacks with diffirent elements.


    Ariel is a brilliant strategist and has an amazing ability to learn her opponent's moves in battle.??She also has been the first to create red lightning which is 15x's stonger than regular lightning and 20x's faster than regular lighting. Her choices of weapons are her fans which are almost indestructible and ultra razor sharp and her ancient swords that contain ancient and unknown magic properties.

    nice story BUT...

    1) did you pmed this to thatlostguy ???

    2) unfortunaly for you i'm the only one who may control all elements

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    djdfire

    [977]Dec 4, 2006
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    oops forgot to do that

    2) okay I'll change it so that she can only bend water and fire.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [978]Dec 4, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
    -
    I raised my arms above my head and I walked out of the room in front of at least fifty Fire Nation soldiers. I said, "My name is Willy Woo. I would like to join the Fire Nation!" I was then surprised that I saw D standing there. D said, "Hahahaha Willy Woo! Suprising isn't it how quickly the tides can turn!" I replied, "D, I knew you were Fire Nation just like I knew you would betray me! Thats why I didn't allow you on my team!" D replied, "Well technichally, you were the betrayer!" I was speechless. D then walked up to me and punched me in the face. I fell to the ground.
    -
    D said to the Fire Nation soldiers, "Sweet revenge, take him to Azula so we can see if he will prove himself to her. You five there, check the room for any other people (Hevet). If you find anyone then take them to Azula as well!" I was picked up by two Fire Nation guards and handcuffed. I yelled, "Wait! Yes, I am willing to join the Fire Nation. But my good friend Hevet is in that room right there and he is an old tired man. He does not want to fight you! Please, let him go free! Please! I will do anything! Just please, let him go free and safe!" -
    Hevet then walked out of the room with a tear on his face. He said, "No Willy. I will fight to the end. How could you do this. You hate the Fire Nation." I yelled, "JUST GO HEVET! I'M A CHANGED MAN NOW! If you cannot beat them, join them! Go Hevet. You are free! Now run!" Hevet slowly limped away and out of the palace. A tear came down my chin. D yelled, "Well what are you waiting for men! Take Willy to Azula!"
    -
    I was dragged into a room and the room was a wreck (Pyro destroyed room). There sitting on a throne was Azula. Azula said, "Willy Woo I presume. I just met your good friends Spike, Bulldozer, and Mayhem. You know that you are off the hook from them now, thanks to me. They were still hunting for you until I gave them a new target. You should kiss my feet for that you worthless bafoon!" I replied, "Yes. Thanks you Princess Azula!" She yelled, "Don't call me that! You aren't permitted to say my name you low-life!" I replied, "I'm sorry Princess. I did not mean to disgrace you. but, I would like to join the Fire Nation." -
    She replied, "Do you actually think you are Fire Nation material? I mean, your an Earth Bender! Well, I suppose I could put you on the front line." I replied, "The front line? Don't they usually die first in combat?" Azual replied, "Well you will be useful on the front line. You can make Rock Walls to guard my Fire Nation soldiers! And why would I care if you died or not? Well, here is your Fire Nation uniform. Put it on and then you will report to Commander Perry. Now go!"
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [979]Dec 4, 2006
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    djdfire wrote:

    Here's mine

    Name: Ariel Zufalon

    Power: Able to bend every element though she's more comfortable bending water and fire.

    Appearance: 5ft. "7", brown eyes, long black hair, dark -skinned.

    Nation: Fire

    History: Ariel was born in the Fire Nation and recieved royal treatment because her family was highly favored by Fire Lord Azulon because of they're special abilities to bend every element. Ariel was Zuko's closest friend and Azula's most competitive rival. She was always seen batteling Azula, Ty Lee, and Mai around the palace and she usually won beacuse of her advanced ability to learn how to bend fire at the age of two. After the Agni Kai between Zuko and his father, Ariel's mother was in aheated arguement with the Fire lord because the harsh penalty. The two endend up fighting each other in the throne room, almost destroying the palace because of the magnitude of their powers being unleashed at full force. In the end Ozai was able to reverse her lighting attack and kill her with a blast of magma. After witnessing her mother's death, Ariel was banished from the Fire Nation because Ozai thought that she would become a spy against his kingdom for revenge.

    Her love for water bending came when she saw a master water bender kill dozens of fire benders. She then started an immense training routine where she lived in the ocean for 5 years, concentrating on nothing but her water bending. After those 5 years she focused on earth bending and after mastering that and airbending, she met the gaang and started to travel with them and help teach Aang how to combine his attacks with diffirent elements.


    Ariel is a brilliant strategist and has an amazing ability to learn her opponent's moves in battle. She also has been the first to create red lightning which is 15x's stonger than regular lightning and 20x's faster than regular lighting. Her choices of weapons are her fans which are almost indestructible and ultra razor sharp and her ancient swords that contain ancient and unknown magic properties.



    and plus..no fake abilities like..red lightning...
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [980]Dec 4, 2006
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    djdfire wrote:
    oops forgot to do that

    2) okay I'll change it so that she can only bend water and fire.


    u can only bend 1 element...
    Edited on 12/04/2006 4:09pm
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