Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
-TheSecondSign- wrote: |
So you're allowed to make changes to your story. And I would rather not have anyone join in at least for awhile if I can do that. |
r3173mpt10n wrote: | ||
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By the way you might want to leave all that for the personal mail otherwise lots of people will be like WTF
Double09nhalf wrote: | ||||
By the way you might want to leave all that for the personal mail otherwise lots of people will be like WTF |
r3173mpt10n wrote: | ||
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No problem. I guess I'll start restarting now. I want to add more long term characters, so I'll delete my older posts and bring up their profiles.
-TheSecondSign- wrote: | ||||
No problem. I guess I'll start restarting now. I want to add more long term characters, so I'll delete my older posts and bring up their profiles. |
Um... you probably are/have/in the process of making the changes but really you don't have to
ultimately it your choice
Well no offense but I'd still like to restart. I'd like to remake my story on my own.
But I'd suggest changing his password and calling it a magical glitch.
-TheSecondSign- wrote: |
Well no offense but I'd still like to restart. I'd like to remake my story on my own.
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r3173mpt10n wrote: | ||
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OOookay your wierd-
but hey who isn't
i suggest changing his signature (if you know how to do that) and putting girl stuff in it (EX: barbie, carebare ect.)
Alright I deleted my original posts(Save my character), but I can't delete two of them for some dumb reason, so I'll try to do that later.
I'm going to start restarting now.
Greetings everyone! My comeback is official. I have read the posts I missed and I have caught up with most peoples stories. Dafoose, thanks alot for keeping my characters alive I'll start posting shortly...BTW sweet post vegnegun; Obsidian is an awesome character.
scorchingflame 'the flame that has been relit'
h3r01cdud3 wrote: |
Muahaha! I foudn the paper that he left with his account name and password. I'll erase the few posts he added and what not. Sound good? This is r3173mpt10n btw... |
Great.....
What now? I'm getting more and more confused.
Shouldn't there be an age limit to this thing? I mean, it takes a certain amount of knowledge to type legibly and sensibly, and a certain age where people know the difference between the time to post and the time not to post.
Double09nhalf, Where's that post? I want to see what others think of it as well.
Hey TLG, I'm just troubleshooting here, but has anything like this happened in the past?
Dafoose wrote: | ||
Great..... Double09nhalf, Where's that post? I want to see what others think of it as well. Hey TLG, I'm just troubleshooting here, but has anything like this happened in the past? |
Shh, don't spoil it
Actually i thought it was a little short(by my standards and yours ) and wanted to write more before posting.
since you read it i'd like your opinion.
confucioussayhi wrote: |
P.S. Eman, you've had writers block since I joined a year and some months ago. |
Alright...Here is the new character...I didn't put a lot of time in the history, so if you don't get it, I'll try and specify anything if you ask...
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Name: Genesis F??ng also known as the Fire Nation's "Grim Reaper".
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Height: 6'2"
Hair: Dark-blueish, gray hair that is slightly stuck up at the back and it also falls along the sides of his face.
Eye Color: Its natural color is crimson. It changes to neon red when entering combat. The eyes can't be turned on and off voluntarily. The name for these cold-blooded eyes is "M??ng Y??n", which literally translates to "Fate" or "Destiny".
Other Noticeable Features: He has a scar on his chest that looks like an "X" and also has a tattoo of a dragon on his back. He also has a tattoo on each forearm. On the left it says "Death", and on the right it says "Life" all in Traditional Chinese.
Occupation: Airbending prodigy, master of swords, and leader of a secret three man squad that hunts down targets for the Fire Nation called the Crusaders. The Crusaders are only known to the Fire Lord's most trusted admirals because they are the ones that made the team. The Fire Lord knows nothing of them. He is also a high ranking member of the Order of the White Lotus.
Special Moves: Silhouette is an ability where shadows of his movement appear behind him to make an illusion of quick feet and to catch the enemy off guard with multiple images of the fighter. Other than that, he uses basic Airbending techniques and much more advanced ones. He also combines them with fighting movements used by other element benders. He can combine Firebending forms with Airbending (He can fight like a Firebender, but instead of fire he uses air.).
Weapons: Unlike other Airbenders, he used a sword instead of a glider. Since he didn't master the art of flying completely, he decided to forget it and make a weapon that he could use and perfect. He hired an expert sword smith in the Earth Kingdom to create it for him. It was about five feet long but a little shorter, two-and-a-half inches wide, and was an inch thick. It was inscribed with the phrase "All that live must die, passing through nature to eternity." in Traditional Chinese, the hilt was custom made to look like a dragon made out of gold, the blade extended from the opening of the mouth, and the eyes were encrusted with rare, red crystals found in the old Ba Sing Se. It was dubbed "Shōu Gē Zhě", which means "Reaper" in Traditional Chinese.
Armor/Clothes: He wears a long, black, and short-sleeved coat that has its collars propped up, a black, short-sleeved shirt, a pair of long, black pants, a pair of black, leather gloves, a pair of black, leather boots with a thin sheet of metal on the toes, and a black sheathe on his waist. The sheathe doesn't point down but points horizontally across like a flat line.
Personality: He is very reserved, anti-social, and pessimistic. But he is strategic, a perfectionist, and a quick learner. In battle he shows no mercy to his enemies and is very ruthless, fierce, and uncaring. He can be very emotionless most of the times due to his troubling past. He believes that emotions are useless objects that interfere with everything. He also follows orders as they are told with 100% accuracy and success. He can be very deceiving at times and most people don't even know it.
History: He was born into a rich family, but was cared for in secret. His dad was an Airbender and his mother was just another person. They lived in a quiet and peaceful village hidden in a thick forest. He was just about two years old when his village was found and attacked by the Fire Nation. They wiped out the entire village and found him crying in one of the burning buildings.
A Firebender ran in and saved him and raised him like her own. When he turned five, she sent him to a Fire Nation School. He was caught Airbending and taken away. Instead of being killed, he was put into a training program with two other children in a secret facility underneath a school.
One was a male Earthbender named Giro (He has brown, spiky hair and has a scar across the bridge of his nose. He has green eyes and wears the same thing that Genesis wears.), and the other was a female Waterbender named Katsumi (She has long, black hair and has part of it coming down and covering he right eye. She has the most beautiful eyes and a charm that makes almost any man fall head over heels. She wears the same stuff that Genesis and Giro wears except instead of a long, black coat, she wears a short, sleeveless jacket.) . They were also five years old and taken away from other Fire Nation Schools across the Fire Nation cities. They lived there as if it were their home and trained and learned. They were kept from other people until they grew up and started to perfect their elements. Genesis perfected his long before the other two and had spent his time mastering the art of sword fighting.
He learned many things during his time in there until they decided it was time to put them into action. The Fire Nation admirals voted Genesis to be the leader and to name the three man group the Crusaders. They were designed specifically to take out targets in the name of the Fire Nation army. No one knew about them except for the admirals and a few other smart soldiers that helped build the team. Not even the Fire Lord had any knowledge of the secret hunting team.
The first mission was a failure because Genesis strayed from the mission to help out Katsumi who was accidentally captured by the enemy. He was severely punished and was whipped. Two strong lashes gave him his "X" shaped scar on his chest. From that day on, he decided to let go of emotions and put them aside. Their missions were always successful from that day on and were done with the utmost precision and accuracy. They were so good that they were believed to be just rumors and that the deaths were just random happenings. They roam about the public looking for their next target and just to look about the city.
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Shh, don't spoil it Actually i thought it was a little short(by my standards and yours ) and wanted to write more before posting. since you read it i'd like your opinion. |
I think that's great that you are expanding that story. It will open up the Avatar world and ideas even more. I'll give my real opinion after you post the whole thing.