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    SapphireStones

    [21]Aug 8, 2006
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    piranhapete wrote:
    I'm gonna take a crack at it!

    Arrows:

    I think I was happy,
    But I'm not so sure,
    But I know when they told
    Me I'm the one, I'm the cure,
    That everyone stopped caring
    About what I wanted,
    Maybe that was the lure,
    That led me to freedom,
    But my heart froze that night.
    Try as I might, though, I just can't feel pure.

    Because arrows on my head
    Just can't lead the way
    When I'm turning around
    When the past wants to stay
    When the world wants me to be
    Someone I'm not,
    When the battles kept going,
    When battles were fought,
    But I just cannot look back,
    I just gotta say,
    Just follow those arrows home.

    I knew she was the one,
    From the moment we'd sled,
    The way that she told me,
    The way that she said,
    That I can't turn around
    And look at things caused
    When I fled.
    Did I imagine?
    I thought that we kissed,
    But there's mist swirling thickly around in my head.

    Because arrows on my head
    Just can't lead the way
    When I'm turning around
    When the past wants to stay
    When she's just can't see,
    Because she's just so blind,
    It just gets deeper,
    But I can't rewind,
    But I just cannot look back,
    I just gotta say,
    Just follow those arrows home.

    I've flown to the poles across the world,
    To be the great savior, destroy the Fire Lord,
    It's not gonna get me to where I want to be,
    I'm just so distracted I just cannot not see,

    Because arrows on my head
    Just can't lead the way
    When I'm turning around
    When the past wants to stay
    When I'm thinking of me,
    Not what's best for the earth,
    I've been doomed to be selfless,
    Since my own birth,
    But I just cannot look back,
    I just gotta say,
    Just follow those arrows home.
    Everyone just might get what they want
    If I could
    Just follow those arrows home.

    The end. Oh dear.

    I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    It fits AND it has KATAANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    YAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    You guys are really GOOD.
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    piranhapete

    [22]Aug 8, 2006
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    Lol wow I didn't think it was that good...
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    SapphireStones

    [23]Aug 8, 2006
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    piranhapete wrote:
    Lol wow I didn't think it was that good...

    Aw, come on, you're supposed to KNOW it's good. You wrote it! I guess it's just a thing where the perosn's always harder on themselves thoguh, huh?

    But I really did enjoy it.
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    Colonel_Brian

    [24]Aug 8, 2006
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    SapphireStones wrote:
    piranhapete wrote:
    Lol wow I didn't think it was that good...
    Aw, come on, you're supposed to KNOW it's good. You wrote it! I guess it's just a thing where the perosn's always harder on themselves thoguh, huh? But I really did enjoy it.

    You're brilliant I love this song you made!! (Foams at mouth and passes out)

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    KittyEmber

    [25]Aug 8, 2006
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    piranhapete wrote:
    I'm gonna take a crack at it!

    Arrows:

    I think I was happy,
    But I'm not so sure,
    But I know when they told
    Me I'm the one, I'm the cure,
    That everyone stopped caring
    About what I wanted,
    Maybe that was the lure,
    That led me to freedom,
    But my heart froze that night.
    Try as I might, though, I just can't feel pure.

    Because arrows on my head
    Just can't lead the way
    When I'm turning around
    When the past wants to stay
    When the world wants me to be
    Someone I'm not,
    When the battles kept going,
    When battles were fought,
    But I just cannot look back,
    I just gotta say,
    Just follow those arrows home.

    I knew she was the one,
    From the moment we'd sled,
    The way that she told me,
    The way that she said,
    That I can't turn around
    And look at things caused
    When I fled.
    Did I imagine?
    I thought that we kissed,
    But there's mist swirling thickly around in my head.

    Because arrows on my head
    Just can't lead the way
    When I'm turning around
    When the past wants to stay
    When she's just can't see,
    Because she's just so blind,
    It just gets deeper,
    But I can't rewind,
    But I just cannot look back,
    I just gotta say,
    Just follow those arrows home.

    I've flown to the poles across the world,
    To be the great savior, destroy the Fire Lord,
    It's not gonna get me to where I want to be,
    I'm just so distracted I just cannot not see,

    Because arrows on my head
    Just can't lead the way
    When I'm turning around
    When the past wants to stay
    When I'm thinking of me,
    Not what's best for the earth,
    I've been doomed to be selfless,
    Since my own birth,
    But I just cannot look back,
    I just gotta say,
    Just follow those arrows home.
    Everyone just might get what they want
    If I could
    Just follow those arrows home.

    The end. Oh dear.


    w00t! I luv Kataang! Funny story: I was just skimming before I actually read it, and I caught the word 'blind', so I just shouted "TOPH!"
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    GIVElove

    [26]Aug 8, 2006
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    Colonel_Brian wrote:

    SapphireStones wrote:
    piranhapete wrote:
    Lol wow I didn't think it was that good...
    Aw, come on, you're supposed to KNOW it's good. You wrote it! I guess it's just a thing where the perosn's always harder on themselves thoguh, huh? But I really did enjoy it.

    You're brilliant I love this song you made!! (Foams at mouth and passes out)


    joins him

    *foams at the mouth and passes out*
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    Colonel_Brian

    [27]Aug 8, 2006
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    Wow these are good I love this thread.
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    SapphireStones

    [28]Aug 8, 2006
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    Colonel_Brian wrote:
    Wow these are good I love this thread.

    Me too. We should try to keep it up here so that it doesn't fade off after a few days so that everyone can let out their Avatar writing skills. I'd love that!
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    Colonel_Brian

    [29]Aug 8, 2006
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    Now this is a good example of a thread.
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    SapphireStones

    [30]Aug 8, 2006
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    Uh, anymore ideas, guys? Anybody?
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    KittyEmber

    [31]Aug 8, 2006
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    SapphireStones wrote:
    Uh, anymore ideas, guys? Anybody?


    I will in, like, two days, tops. Promise!
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    pyroeagle7

    [32]Aug 9, 2006
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    Dammit, I'm sitting here reading these??trying to hold in my growing rage that I SUCK at writing, and everyone else is great,??which is why??I failed english, rage overflowing... *foams at mouth and passes out* Sorry lost the happy, but the happy's back! Back on topic, EVERYONE HERE IS SO GOOD, WRITE SOME MORE, WRITE SOME MORE!
    Edited on 08/09/2006 7:12am
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    Colonel_Brian

    [33]Aug 9, 2006
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    I can't write sogs there?? hard and it requires alot of tings I have but I can't do one.

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    piranhapete

    [34]Aug 9, 2006
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    I'm probably gonna get one donetoday... i was planning on doing one for each main elemental character... (Aang, Katara, Toph, Zuko)

    Katara's a bit hard to write about.

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    Colonel_Brian

    [35]Aug 9, 2006
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    piranhapete wrote:

    I'm probably gonna get one donetoday... i was planning on doing one for each main elemental character... (Aang, Katara, Toph, Zuko)

    Katara's a bit hard to write about.

    Well I can't wait for the results of thi.........song of yours.

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    piranhapete

    [36]Aug 9, 2006
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    Okay... here goes.

    Make-Believe

    I'm the one who's got her head on right,
    The one who never cries at night,
    The one who's never feels a pain,
    But my heart is an ark in a soul of pure rain,

    and

    I just don't know what to believe anymore,
    I've lost all emotions, what is a heart good for?
    My rocks are just crumbling, can't find one to hold,
    I'm a rock myself, but in me there's no gold.
    My mind is sent reeling,
    Don't know what I'm feeling,
    Do I grieve?
    Is it just make-believe?

    My father is fighting, my mother is gone,
    The group leans on me so I have to be strong,
    The courageous and rebel I've put far away,
    I'm the great lighthouse, but I'm not even at bay,

    'Cause

    I just don't know what to believe anymore,
    I've lost all emotions, what is a heart good for?
    One too many times I've been lifted, let down,
    Then soul just gets deafer, I can't hear a sound.
    My mind is sent reeling,
    Don't know what I'm feeling,
    Do I grieve?
    Is it just make-believe?

    Do I imagine the way he looks me,
    I don't think I dare to pull him in from the sea,
    My mother told me to take care of what's dear,
    But now look where that got me, why can't I just hear,

    I just don't know what to believe anymore,
    I've lost all emotions, what is a heart good for?
    If love really is brightest in the dark,
    Then my heart could be healed, maybe he could leave a mark.
    My mind is sent reeling,
    Don't know what I'm feeling,
    Do I stall?
    Would I fall?
    Would he leave?
    Is it just make-believe?

    the end.... wow, it was REALLY weird to write a song about Katara.
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    Colonel_Brian

    [37]Aug 9, 2006
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    piranhapete wrote:
    Okay... here goes. Make-Believe I'm the one who's got her head on right, The one who never cries at night, The one who's never feels a pain, But my heart is an ark in a soul of pure rain, and I just don't know what to believe anymore, I've lost all emotions, what is a heart good for? My rocks are just crumbling, can't find one to hold, I'm a rock myself, but in me there's no gold. My mind is sent reeling, Don't know what I'm feeling, Do I grieve? Is it just make-believe? My father is fighting, my mother is gone, The group leans on me so I have to be strong, The courageous and rebel I've put far away, I'm the great lighthouse, but I'm not even at bay, 'Cause I just don't know what to believe anymore, I've lost all emotions, what is a heart good for? One too many times I've been lifted, let down, Then soul just gets deafer, I can't hear a sound. My mind is sent reeling, Don't know what I'm feeling, Do I grieve? Is it just make-believe? Do I imagine the way he looks me, I don't think I dare to pull him in from the sea, My mother told me to take care of what's dear, But now look where that got me, why can't I just hear, I just don't know what to believe anymore, I've lost all emotions, what is a heart good for? If love really is brightest in the dark, Then my heart could be healed, maybe he could leave a mark. My mind is sent reeling, Don't know what I'm feeling, Do I stall? Would I fall? Would he leave? Is it just make-believe? the end.... wow, it was REALLY weird to write a song about Katara.

    This is genious but I can't help but feel theres something mmissing from this song I don't know what it is but anyway this is good song nd I ike it very much.

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    Hoshie26

    [38]Aug 9, 2006
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    Ok.This is lame but it has been stuck in my head since I thought of it so here I go.

    (sing to the tune of the blind mice(in a sad way)??not about Toph and I know its lame)

    Ba Sing Sai

    Ba Sing Sai

    Will you crumble?

    Will you fall?

    Yes you will fall.(fn song)

    (en song but in a happy tune)

    Ba Sing Sai

    Ba Sing Sai

    Will you win?

    Will you defeat?

    Yes you will defeat!

    Hope you like the lame songs

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    piranhapete

    [39]Aug 9, 2006
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    Colonel_Brian wrote:

    piranhapete wrote:
    Okay... here goes. Make-Believe I'm the one who's got her head on right, The one who never cries at night, The one who's never feels a pain, But my heart is an ark in a soul of pure rain, and I just don't know what to believe anymore, I've lost all emotions, what is a heart good for? My rocks are just crumbling, can't find one to hold, I'm a rock myself, but in me there's no gold. My mind is sent reeling, Don't know what I'm feeling, Do I grieve? Is it just make-believe? My father is fighting, my mother is gone, The group leans on me so I have to be strong, The courageous and rebel I've put far away, I'm the great lighthouse, but I'm not even at bay, 'Cause I just don't know what to believe anymore, I've lost all emotions, what is a heart good for? One too many times I've been lifted, let down, Then soul just gets deafer, I can't hear a sound. My mind is sent reeling, Don't know what I'm feeling, Do I grieve? Is it just make-believe? Do I imagine the way he looks me, I don't think I dare to pull him in from the sea, My mother told me to take care of what's dear, But now look where that got me, why can't I just hear, I just don't know what to believe anymore, I've lost all emotions, what is a heart good for? If love really is brightest in the dark, Then my heart could be healed, maybe he could leave a mark. My mind is sent reeling, Don't know what I'm feeling, Do I stall? Would I fall? Would he leave? Is it just make-believe? the end.... wow, it was REALLY weird to write a song about Katara.

    This is genious but I can't help but feel theres something mmissing from this song I don't know what it is but anyway this is good song nd I ike it very much.



    It does kind of feel like it's missing something... lol oh well it's hard to fit in a whole story into a song
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    piranhapete

    [40]Aug 10, 2006
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    Hey, now! Let's not let this thread die!
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