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1st ever Avatar FanFiction chain-story.

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    ScoField27

    [1]Dec 23, 2006
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    Here are basic rules:

    1. This is a chain story, each poster will take turns adding a new chapter. A single writer may not post 2 chapters in a row.

    2. Mark all post as the next chapter (example: If someone posted chapter 3, mark your post as chapter 4, even if it is just 1 paragraph)

    3. Should two writers post at the same time,??the chapter that appeared 1st sticks.

    4. If??your chapter is not posted fast enough, it can become the NEXT chapter??IF it is not in direct conflict. (Example: Two writers post chapter 5 at same time, if writer B's chapter does not conflict with writer A's, then writer B's chapter can become chapter 6)

    5. No profanity, sexual situations, or 'bloopers'.

    I think that covers it, have fun and make a great story! I'll start.

    Prologue: Aang??lay by the small fire, crouching in pain.??He had made??a small cave his refuge from the harsh storm outside. It??was funny how- enjoyable a fire-nation rain fall was. The drops were??actually warm, and gave off??a sweet scent. But the rain had turned to hail and lightning illuminated the sky.

    The young Avatar felt??the??deep wound in his??side.??He was burnt terribly??threw-out the torso, and pain seemed to reach every inch of him. "How could this happen?" he??said to himself. He thought about all the events of the past month.??

    After rallying the??Earth Kingdom into re-taking Ba-Sing-Se,??the Earth King insisted the invasion of Black-Sun go on as scheduled, a move that proved disastrous.??The??army had a late-start and arrived in Fire territory the very day of the eclipse. The day passed with no advantage to either side, but the eclipse was short lived. By the end of the week the Fire-Nation had claimed a decisive victory.

    Aang sent Appa out to safety??with as??many solders as possible, Sokka was among them.??Aang had no idea??of the whereabouts of Toph and Katara.??The Avatar had escaped from Oazi himself. Never had the young boy encountered a more powerful bender.??Aang closed his eyes and tried to block out any memory of the fight or escape.

    The Avatar had not yet the power to stand, but??he vowed??that when he regained his strength, he would find his friends. He had to. And he would have to do it with the entire Fire-Nation after him.??????

    Edited on 12/23/2006 6:20pm
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    masterofaeons

    [2]Dec 23, 2006
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    Momo chittered at his side, nuzzling his master. Aang looked down and smiled weakly then gave the lemur a pat on the head.

    "Are you alright?" Aang asked. Momo replied by showing his tail to Aang and the Avatar noticed a slight crook at the end. Momo made a whimpering sound. Aang brushed the stiff hair on Momo's head. "Don't worry, Momo. They'll pay," Aang declared. He thrust his arms down and a slab of stone pushed him to an elevated seat. "They'll all pay." Aang motioned forward with his arms in a swimming motion and the granite chair began to roll forward.

    Momo realized that Aang's body was in motion and squealed in panic, then darted around his master's body until relaxing and perching on his shoulder. Aang moved to the cave exit and looked to the hail above. It still hadn't let up. Momo looked up at the dark skies with his big eyes.

    The avatar snarled at the sky and yelled out, "I don't have time for you! I need to do my job!" Aang inhaled as deeply as he could, summoning strength and held the air in his lungs. Extending his arms forcefully, the raindrops and hailstones froze in the air and stopped entirely. The monk lurched forward on the chair and crushed his arms together. Instantly the raindrops, hail and clouds all crushed together into a large frozen orb in the middle of the sky.

    Aang let the air escape his lungs and looked to the clear horizon. He panted and rolled his chair onwards. He pain at his side was burning now, but Aang had to ignore it.

    "No rest for the Avatar, eh Momo?" Aang tried to joke. Momo didn't get it.
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    Falcondude123

    [3]Dec 23, 2006
    • member since: 09/24/06
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    chapter 2-
    Toph was lost. There was no denying it. She had done her best to follow Katara's instructions, but sometimes being able to see vibrations just wasn't enough. Already she had managed to make her way up the hill that supported New Oazi, had managed to find the sewer and use rocks to propel herself up it, and had even managed to locate the entrance to the city streets and exit the smelly tunnels. But now she was wandering through the streets in the middle of the night, with no idea of where exactly she was or where she should go next.

    No one was around except for the occasional fire solder patrols, just has katara had said it would be. The city was a ghost town. Toph continued down the street. It was dark outside, but to her it was always dark outside. She felt she had an advantage over her enemies at night, the one time she could see better than they could.

    Suddenly she stopped. Three solders, several hundred yards down the street, headed in her direction. Perhaps they could help her find what she was looking for. She started an earthbending glide towards them. If things got messy, which she assumed they probably would, she had a few methods of persuasion in her arsenal. She was getting closer to the guards now, and they could probably hear her by now.
    "You there!" one shouted, "Halt! Stop where you are!"

    A few minutes later she was on her way again, a smile on her face, with better directions guiding her now. Behind her she could hear a fire nation solder moaning from the upside-down position, held up between two walls by earthen structures.

    Soon she would reach her destination. Soon she would find the person she was looking for. The only other person who, in her mind, threatened her self-proclaimed postion as best earthbender in the world. The only person whom could help her and katara find Aang and Sokka. King Bumi, if he was still alive.
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    ScoField27

    [4]Dec 23, 2006
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    Chapter 3. The old man awoke with a startle. It was the middle of the night, and there was a awful storm- Or, at least the old man thought. He could no longer hear the chunks of hail pounding on his thin tin roof. Storm or not, it was no nite to have a visitor.

    The old man grumbled under his breathe as he lit a candle. All it took was one light to fully brighten his small cottage. He took the few steps from his bed to the front-door and opened it up to see the strangest visitor.

    The visitor was tall and hooded. The stranger was supported by a wooden cane, and had the stink of burning fabric. The old man could tell that the visitor had seen hard times when he saw the hooder's hand, the only un-covered part of the stranger, was painted with blood. "Sir- I am wounded and request to use your home to rest up for a time." The stranger, clearly a young man of about 17 by the sound of his voice spoke clearly, but awkwardly as if it was the 1st time he'd spoken with such respect and dignity. The old man stayed quiet for a moment then enter a fit of rage.

    ??"A time!?" He thundered, as he took a step towards the stranger. "And what would be a time! Blast Ends, I live all the way out here to avoid you beggars and scamers! Young man, get off my property!" Just as the old-timer finished the hooder responded with haste, loosing his un-natural respect.

    "Listen gramps, I only need to stay here until I make contact with a friend. And he's not far away." The hooder pointed to the frozen orb in the sky. "And unless you want my friend to put one of those over you--- I could REALLY use a place to stay." The old man stared at the orb. He didn't need to think twice.

    "I'm always open to the wary traveler!" He said, his voice a mix of fear and sarcasm. "Make yourself comfortable." The hooder quickly limped into the cottage and removed his cloak. The old man easily recognized him as a Water-Tribe Warrior, and easily recognized him as very hurt. Despite having to depend on a cane, and bleeding heavily from his left arm, the boy was all smiles.

    "I'm Sokka." The stranger said, out reaching his hand for a hand-shake. "My name is Rion." The old man said, as he accepted the hand-shake.

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    Falcondude123

    [5]Dec 23, 2006
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    This is soo cool that instead of just letting one person entertain us we can all entertain eachother by continuing the story!! Sweet!

    Chapter 4-

    "Is that you, Bumi?!" Toph yelled through the metal door. Instantly she wished she could take back the words as the sound echoed down the hallways.
    "Who is that out there?" An old voice called back.
    "I'm a friend of the Avatar," she said a bit more quietly. "I'm here to get you out of here!"
    "Ah, a friend of my old friend Aang is it? What's your name young one?"
    "It's Toph."
    "Well, young Toph, Aang already knows I'm here and tried to free me once. But I told him about nuetral jen and how he would have to find a different person to teach him earthbending."
    "I know," she replied, "I taught him earthbending!"
    "Whaat? But you sound like little more than a child!"
    Toph growled under her breath. She pressed her hands against the cold metal door, and with a set jaw, clenched her fists into it, crumpling it up. She pushed the ruined barrier over into the cell to which it belonged. It made a loud clank upon hitting the floor. There was a cot, on which sat a very muscular old man wearing long, green shorts and long-sleeve shirt. He had a surprised frown on his face, but sat still.
    "I'm not a little kid," Toph breathed, "Now let's get out of here! Before the guards come! Hurry!" She rushed out of the cell and started down the long corridor. Bumi popped his head out of the cell.
    "Toph!" he called. "Did Aang send you?" "No!" she called back without turning around. "We need your help to find him! He's trapped somewhere in the fire nation!"
    "Well in that case," the old man replied, suddenly caught up with Toph, the two running side by side, "I guess it's time to release all the energy I've been saving!"
    Suddenly two armed fire nation guards jumped out from behind a corner. Bumi quickly snapped both of their spears and threw them against each wall. They toppled over cold. Toph smiled. They came to the end of the prison tunnels. A humungous metal door stood locked before them. Toph gripped the metal door and clinched with all of her bending power. The metal slowly warped at the edges. Finally the metal started falling backwards as if to squish both of them. Toph screamed a bit as she slid backwards. Suddenly the metal door stopped dead.
    "Allow ME!" said Bumi, who leaned into the iron and shoved with all of his might. The metal door went vertical again, then fell forwards out into the free dark of night.
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    ScoField27

    [6]Dec 23, 2006
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    BUMP!
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    Falcondude123

    [7]Dec 26, 2006
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    Chapter 6-

    Iroh laid in his cell in sadness. It had been years since he had seriously shed tears; the last time he remembered weeping was over his son when he had passed on at the seige of Ba Sing Se. Those days were over. Iroh's deep pain had passed with his son. But now he had lost another loved one, and not to the painful sting of death, but to something much worse. The painful sting of pride. He recalled all that had happened since that dreadful day when the avatar had escaped from Ba Sing Se unconscious. He had spent the next months in Ba Sing Se prison, in doubt and pain. No news of the world's last hope could reach his ears. As far as he had known, it was entirely possible the avatar was dead. Then he had managed to catch wind of the invasion of the fire nation, and it's horrible failure. He was happy his home land had survived the attack, but was dismayed that now, more than ever, the fire nation had control of the war.
    The avatar had been at the battle, but had not been heard or seen from since. This small amount of info was all that Iroh had been able to learn, piece by piece from captivity. A few weeks ago, it had been decided he would be returned to the fire nation as a traitor and disserter to the cause, most likely facing execution. He was currently in Omashu, or "New Ozai," as his captors triumphantly called it. Only for a few days was he to remain in this cell. Then he would again be moved, this time to a coastal city of the occupied earth kingdom. From there he would next be boarded onto a fire navy ship which would take him back to his home where he would die a hated and despised man. The doom looming over him could not dampen his naturally positive spirit, however. Only one thing could do that, the loss of a loved one. Just thinking about the horrible life of misery his nephew had chosen brought the same remorse to him that a wayward child's actions does to his parent. Iroh tried to remove his mind from his lost nephew, drying his tears with his sleeves. But there was little more for him to dwell on. He sat upon his bed silently within the New Ozai prison. Suddenly he heard footsteps, light footsteps, run by out in the main hall. He got up and walked to the small metal window. For several minutes he stood there peering out. Then he heard a great crunching and clanking sound followed by a deep thump. Suddenly he heard voices in the distance. There was running and crashing. He heard men shouting and then big bumping and crushing sounds. Iroh listened intently. It seemed there was a breakout happening. The two earth-benders who seemed to be escaping came running down the hall. "Wait!" Iroh yelled. The smaller one stopped at the sound of his voice. "What are you doing here!?" she demanded.
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    shybaby13

    [8]Dec 26, 2006
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    Katara woke up to find herself in a hospital. Her arm was burned and her head hurt. "Hello?" She called . A woman came. "Ahhh, Your awake!" "What am I doing here?" Asked Katara. "I found you in the street like that. I brought you here. I'm a nurse." "I don't remember any of this." "No wonder with the cut on your head" Said the woman.

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